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Can you help me?

Hi...you accepted one of my previous drafts n Jawahar lal Darda. My other drafts are not working. I also asked at Tea house...Can you please guide me and help me with this? Sunisineast (talk) 16:00, 7 November 2021 (UTC)

Hi Sunisineast, Jawahar Lal Darda was a defacto notability because of WP:NPOL. Others might take time to evaluate. Will try to look at them in coming days. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 21:09, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
Hello Sunisineast, I tried to find your conversation at teahouse and I mostly agree with the feedback you got there.
  • Egmore court complex - can use a complete rewrite.
  • Draft:Gerhard Rach - Right feedback, you need to strengthen it with more information that is beyond the hockey team of India. But Olympic coaches are usually notable.
  • Draft:K Shridhar Rao - Looks okay to me. Can use some rewriting so that it reads more cohesive.
  • Draft:P Krishna Bhat - again, rewrite a bit to make it read more cohesive.
  • Draft:Nangal Wildlife Sanctuary - you can get rid of lot of generic content like Wetlands function as flood barriers and sources of groundwater recharge. They also act as natural water purifiers, and are called the kidneys of the Earth due to their role in alleviation water qualit
  • Draft:Edmond Fernandes - I think it can still be improved for WP:NPOV. Weed out whatever is even close to promotional. In DGG's words, if it works for their web page, it doesn't work for wiki. Might be notable under WP:AUTHOR. Doesn't seem to satisfy WP:ACADEMIC. Also, this was tried to be created in past. How do you know this person? Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 23:59, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

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I ping back


Hi Nomadicghumakkad, I added sources and highlights that address the points you made, do let me know if they're okay. article can be found on https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jaya_Misra — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sreste (talk • contribs) 18:09, 7 November 2021 (UTC)

I redid the draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Eduard_Gr%C3%B6ller hope that is ok now. Thank you for feedback! Nanuqnuq (talk) 09:16, 18 October 2021 (UTC)

This is better but not there yet. I will try to spend some time on it in coming days, Nanuqnuq. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 13:35, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
This is much appreciated, but if you just point out what's missing, I'll take care of it. Worst case I'll delete the sentences :D Nanuqnuq (talk) 12:45, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
For example: and some of his former Ph.D. students have already established successful research groups in the field of visualization themselves. He is married and the father of two children., Promotio Sub Auspiciis Praesidentis Rei Publicae, for the excellent passing of the doctoral studies. Recipient of the Würdigungspreis des Bundesministers für Wissenschaft und Forschung (1993).

Fellow of the Eurographics (Association) (2009) . Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 22:25, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

Alright, thank you. There is just a Problem with 'Würdigungspreis des Bundesministeriums für Wissenschaft und Forschung', they say on their homepage due to the number of yearly recipients they don't offer a list of receivers for readability sake. I guess i need to delete this one then? However, I linked his PhD works now too...every thing else that is unclear can be deleted for now, I thinkNanuqnuq (talk) 09:09, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
Nanuqnuq , I am fixing it. Quick question - is this machine translated from German? Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 14:11, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
Nomadicghumakkad thank you! Yes, the whole part is machine translated. I left it as a comment at the bottom line, because I thought that might be relevant. Nanuqnuq (talk) 07:19, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I don't think that's allowed; but let me check at tea house. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 15:35, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
I hope it is - the references were quite some hours of work -.- If not I can translate the text myself as well, but there are not many 'fillwords' so finding a different sentence syntax will be quite ...uhm ... brain wrecking ^^ Nanuqnuq (talk) 11:17, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I posted at Tea house but no response. But yes, will be good to translate the text please. For what you can't translate, leave it in German and we will see what to do with it. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 13:57, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
Uff, OK, I'll see when I have time for it, guess in about 2 weeks or so. But thank you for your extensive help so far! Nanuqnuq (talk) 15:28, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
No problem, I am here. And I am happy you are doing this difficult work. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 19:06, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

References representing the company

"Hello! I am writing regarding the Wikipedia page that was rejected (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:ConnectPay) due to references not showing a significant coverage and being not independent of the subject. As this might be a misunderstanding related to the origin of those sources I wanted to clarify that sources used to reference the fact of the company and its presence with the brief description of its services are both independent from the company itself – Rekvizitai.lt is he directory of Lithuanian companies (https://rekvizitai.vz.lt/en/about/) and provides various data from independent national and governmental sources to provide most relevant information about the company; And the second source – Bank of Lithuania references to the main details of the company as a supervised financial market participant as well as the required documents and information regarding the company and its license. As at this point we want to show the information about the most basic and fundamental fact about the company and its foundation and the listed sources are the primary, legal and independent references confirming that, the question is what could be additional references supplementing the ones that are already stating main facts objectively and independently?" Looking farward to hearing from you! Best regards!— Preceding unsigned comment added by 85.206.130.194 (talk) 07:59, 10 November 2021 (UTC)

Hey, please see WP:RS. What you have given are not reliable sources. Also read about WP:COI. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 02:00, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

Dear Nomadicghumakkad, thank you for your response. After reviewing the links you mentioned above, it is still unclear why the sources provided are considered unreliable. Is it possible to get a more detailed explanation on this subject? Kind Regards. No.19.04. (talk) 10:29, 12 November 2021 (UTC)

Follow up for more information on declined AfC submission for Draft:Asopa Films

Hi Nomadicghumakkad, I see that you declined the AfC submission for Draft:Asopa Films citing issues with formal tone, neutral point of view and potentially sources. Can you please elaborate on the reasons for the rejection, particularly as related to these cited issues. As with all of my articles, I made a conscious effort to maintain a neutral, fact-reporting POV and tone throughout the article, so I was both surprised and a bit confused to see the article rejected, especially for these issues. Thanks! Wiki Page Polisher (talk) 15:12, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

@Wiki Page Polisher (talk page stalker) I am also an AFC reviewer, so forgive me, both of you, if I make a comment or two.
You have a prime example of WP:CITEKILL in the lead paragraph. Instead we need one excellent reference per fact asserted. If you are sure it is beneficial, two, and at an absolute maximum, three. A fact you assert, once verified in a reliable source, is verified. More is gilding the lily. Please choose the very best in each case of multiple referencing for a single point and either drop or repurpose the remainder.
I would look at the rest of your referencing. More references are by no means better. You have at least one other Citekill issue
I can see some magazine article tone here. One example is "It was during this period that Asopa became strongly drawn to film direction and production, and embarked on his own storytelling projects." I'd like you to look at a "dull-but-worthy" tone for your writing, please. Sometimes we stand too close to our work to spot it when we do not quite hit the target.
I would have declined it, mentioning tone, but majoring on the Citekill, something that is almost at the level of WP:BOMBARD. It's very hard to review a draft with a welter of referencers, the more so when we know that some will be removed or repurposed.
I hope this helps you both. FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 17:28, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
@Wiki Page Polisher You need to be aware that those who are paid for their work here are expected to know all this as a matter of course. Your editing standard should be far higher than this, and you should be creating work that is so correctly crafted that a review is always an acceptance. The faults I have outlined above scream paid editing at me, and unacceptable paid editing at that. Please learn the trade you hope to be paid for. FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 17:39, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
Thanks FiddleTimtrent for jumping in and helping out. This seems resolved now I guess! Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 17:10, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Vishwananda

Hi Nomadicghumakkad, I made a major rehaul of the draft, that addresses the points you generally mention on your user page. I hope it will now meet your requirements. If not, please be more specific in your critics. Thank you. --hanumanॐ^ 10:17, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I don't think this person is notable. Might be helpful to discuss WP:THREE. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 17:11, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

Srinivas Devamsam


Hi Nomadicghumakkad, I had done removed all IMdb links in the following page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Srinivas_Devamsam. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AsusVicky (talk • contribs) 12:03, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for doing that. Can you also help me with WP:THREE? Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 01:30, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Artur Mkhitaryan

Hello, I want that the whole world gets to know about Ukrainian persons. Artur Mkhitaryan is a significant figure involved in the development of Kyiv, the capital of Ukraine. His project received the highest award at the International Property Awards[1]. In 2020, he proposed the renovation of the industrial area of Kyiv. The entrepreneur is also actively involved in the charity of the Ukrainian Foundation "Tabletochki". I think that the article with his name should be on English Wikipedia. Also, I translated the text of this article from Ukraine Wikipedia [2], my native Wiki where I have a big contribution. --Alexandr14 (talk) 09:05, 5 November 2021 (UTC)

Hey Alexandr14, the way it is written, it can not be accepted. Please read our guidelines on WP:NPOV. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 01:22, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
Nomadicghumakkad, I have read the guidelines and again corrected the article. Could you please tell me what else I need to correct?--Alexandr14 (talk) 14:31, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
Before we get into WP:NPOV, let's discuss notability. Can you help me get WP:THREE? Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 19:07, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
  1. https://aughtmag.com/en/video-interview-artur-mkhitaryan/ - latest video interview (English subtitles available)
  2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jO9aqzLPrwY&t=3s&ab_channel=%D0%90%D1%80%D1%82%D1%83%D1%80%D0%9C%D1%85%D0%B8%D1%82%D0%B0%D1%80%D1%8F%D0%BD - video about his projects and their impact on the Kyiv economy (English subtitles can be generated in the video settings).
  3. https://shotam.info/ukrainskyy-biznes-zibrav-ponad-22-mln-hrn-na-vidnovlennia-kostelu-sviatoho-mykolaia-pislia-pozhezhi/ - latest charity, UAH 1m to rebuild a burnt-out St. Nicholas Roman Catholic Church in Kyiv. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alexandr14 (talk • contribs) 11:52, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
Hey, thanks for sharing these. It is difficult to evaluate non-english sources but at the outset, interviews are not considered independent sources. Youtube is not a reliable source. The third one doesn't seem to be a WP:RS either. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 01:31, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
Hey, excuse me for the long response, here are 3 articles on the best Ukrainian media about his activities:
  1. https://tsn.ua/ru/groshi/kievskiy-zhk-priznali-luchshim-v-mire-proektom-mnogoetazhnogo-zhilogo-zdaniya-1723839.html
  2. https://biz.liga.net/all/all/press-release/ukrainskiy-jk-taryan-towers-priznan-luchshim-vysotnym-jilym-kompleksom-v-mire
  3. https://www.epravda.com.ua/rus/publications/2021/02/24/671326/
Dear Nomadicghumakkad, could you check links above.--Alexandr14 (talk) 12:05, 21 December 2021 (UTC)

Request on 20:42:10, 14 November 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Vishakhuk

This is with regard to the warning on the page 'This article reads like a press release or a news article and is largely based on routine coverage or sensationalism.'


I have added a few more citations on the basis of the disclaimer on the top of the page. However, the disclaimer remains. Can you suggest ways to add citations or other actions that can be taken to avoid the message appearing on the Wikipedia page?

Vishakhuk (talk) 20:42, 14 November 2021 (UTC)

It's not about the citations but how you have written it. I made some corrections to give you an example. You can follow the same pattern and improve it. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 01:34, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

Draft:YMCA Queensland Youth Parliament

Hi

Can you please further explian why Draft:YMCA Queensland Youth Parliament was rejected?

You said there was a lack of reliable sources, however there were a number of sources from places like the Courier Mail (a major state-wide newspaper) and the ABC (Australia's national public broadcaster)? I would have thought these were reliable.

I'd appreciate more info.

Cheers Tomorrow and tomorrow (talk) 23:54, 14 November 2021 (UTC)

Hey Tomorrow and tomorrow, this is always a problem. VER template gives that automated message. What I meant was that there are portions unsourced that need to have citations. Please provide those. Also, that doesn't mean it has been identified as a notable subject. We will evaluate that once it has all the sources. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 01:36, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
Hey Nomadicghumakkad (talk), I understand. Can you please point out the sections that you think need more sourcing? Tomorrow and tomorrow (talk) 22:33, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

For example,

Executive Queensland Youth Parliament is run by a YMCA appointed Coordinator and a team of volunteers called the Executive. The Executive includes portfolio mentors, media officers, a Parliamentary team and the Youth Governor.

The current Youth Governor is His Excellency Benjamin Crowley and the current coordinator is Daniel Patava.

Other programs Queensland Youth Parliament's Executive runs other programs alongside the Youth Parliament to promote political and civic engagement in young Queenslanders.

This includes the Your Voice Heard Blog featuring blog posts and opinion pieces from Youth Members and other young Queenslanders, and various summits and forums. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 02:08, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

looking in, -- Tomorrow and tomorrow, it is extremely unlikely that this article will lbe considered notable in WP. Almost all articles or organizations of this type have been deleted on the grounds that the references are not substantial enough to show notability. DGG ( talk )

Draft:MYR Group Inc.

I don't understand why my MYR Group Inc. page was deleted. First off, you stated it was advertising--I cited all sources and don't particularly understand why you feel the page was advertising. Second, I commented late last night that I would go through the page and make edits this morning and you have since deleted the page without giving me an opportunity to address it. Please explain why you felt it was advertising and why you did not give me an opportunity to correct whatever you thought was wrong with it. MYR Group Inc. is a publicly-traded corporation in the United States and needs to have a Wikipedia page.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Aschlic1 (talk • contribs) 15:11, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

Hey Aschlic1, Speedy is done in hopeless cases which it was. If the page had some saving grace, it is declined speedy. Many pages I mark for speedy are not deleted. What you can do is this - ping the deleting admin and ask them to refund the draft and improve it. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 01:32, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

Request on 22:36:14, 19 November 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Saritasanghvi

The comment left on my article says that the subject work is temporal in nature and hence does not qualify the notability criteria. However other artists like Bassi and Zakir Khan have similar work and still have a wikipedia page.

Saritasanghvi (talk) 22:36, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

Hey Saritasanghvi , WP:OTHER discourages us to refer to other pages. Let me rephrase, as per WP:GNG Harsh Gujral doesn't pass notability guidelines. Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 01:35, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Ansuman Bhagat

hello dear user, can you please help and explain this article review

What I mean to know is - these books the subject has written - do they have any independent book reviews? Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 01:37, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

Yes, there are many articles related to this, whose link I send you. see according to you

  1. https://www.amarujala.com/kavya/ansuman-bhagat-makes-omg-books-of-records-for-book-your-own-thought
  2. https://www.jagran.com/jharkhand/jamshedpur-former-chief-minister-raghubar-das-also-praised-the-book-your-own-thought-by-jamshedpur-young-writer-anshuman-bhagat-21358514.html
  3. https://www.jagran.com/jharkhand/jamshedpur-jharkhand-former-chief-minister-raghubar-das-also-praised-the-book-your-own-thought-by-jamshedpur-young-writer-anshuman-bhagat-21357813.html
  4. https://www.jagran.com/jharkhand/jamshedpur-this-book-of-anshuman-bhagat-which-is-making-a-boom-in-the-country-and-abroad-is-also-awarded-by-omg-book-of-records-21690294.html
  5. https://www.livehindustan.com/jharkhand/jamshedpur/story-second-book-of-anshuman-bhagat-published-3570909.html
  6. https://www.pravakta.com/author-ansuman-bhagat-books-are-popular-among-the-youth/
  7. https://www.bhaskar.com/jharkhand/jamshedpur/news/city-youth-writer-anshuman-releases-yer-on-a-lot-of-thought-book-in-bistupur-032722-3859323.html
  8. https://www.ansumanbhagat.com/books
  9. https://zeenews.india.com/hindi/entertainment/ansuman-bhagats-book-is-giving-message-of-positivity-in-the-era-of-corona-epidemic/912813


— Preceding Krishnarthiindia comment added by Krishnarthiindia (talk • contribs) 05:57, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

Hey Krishnarthiindia , these are all announcements! None of them seem to be a review! Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 01:31, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

Dear, you can check this one

  1. https://www.jagran.com/jharkhand/jamshedpur-ansuman-bhagats-fourth-book-ek-safar-mein-is-based-on-the-bollywood-tv-industry-22221130.html
  2. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Krishnarthiindia (talk • contribs) 03:49, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

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