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Questions about revisions made to Wiki page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thomas_A._Rando

Hello! Thank you for your recent edits made to the page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thomas_A._Rando ! I have a few questions in regards to some of the edits that were made on the page. I notice some things in the research section were removed (specifically in the cellular aging & rejuvenation and muscular dystrophy sections. Can you help me to understand why there was so much removed from those areas and not the first? If you could also help me to understand what I need to do in order for that information to be added back without being deleted? There were also some awards that were removed from the awards section, I went through the ones that were removed but couldn't see why some were removed and others were note (at first I thought it was the citation issue, but I saw that in fact there was one that was cited and removed). If you could clarify if they just need citations, that would be so helpful, thank you! Lastly, I wanted to ask about the areas that say "citation needed". I am unsure how to cite certain areas that have this noted, for example the sentence that reads, "Rando was born in Brooklyn, New York, and spent most of his childhood in the Lewiston/Auburn area and the rural area of Casco, Maine.". How can this be cited? Thank you so much in advance for reviewing this. Jessica Washington (talk) 05:38, 28 July 2020 (UTC)

Jessica Washington I am not prepared to help you, you appear to be an undeclared paid editor. Theroadislong (talk) 07:06, 28 July 2020 (UTC)

New page

hi, Many thanks for your message. I've now added references and publications from external websites. I hope this is OK! many thanks for your help! kind regards D. MezziFrance (talk) 12:54, 28 July 2020 (UTC)

The sources of your draft Draft:Michel Loreau all appear to be written by him, NOT about him which is what we require. Wikipedia has essentially no interest in anything said or published by him. It is only interested in what people who have no connection with him have chosen to publish about him: the article should be limited to a summary of what such independent sources have said about him. Theroadislong (talk) 13:04, 28 July 2020 (UTC)

references

hi again, great, i've added a few more references which are from external sources. hopefully this will be good! thank you so much! MezziFrance (talk) 13:10, 28 July 2020 (UTC)

I'm still not seeing any independent sources that discuss him in depth, which is what we need. Theroadislong (talk) 13:15, 28 July 2020 (UTC)

Mike Peden Wiki Page

Hi Theroadislong, thanks for giving me the information required. I hope this is sufficient. I'm trying to update this Wiki page about myself but I don't know how to do this. I've tried a few times but I seem to keep getting it wrong. I have attached reliable independent sources for your information. I hope I have attached them correctly? Thanks for all your help. Kind regards Mike. Preceding unsigned comment added by Edinburgh360 (talkcontribs) Edinburgh360 (talk contribs) has made few or no other edits outside this topic.

Mike Peden

Mike Peden (born 8 March 1960) is a British Music Producer/Remixer/Composer best-known for his work with the Lighthouse Family. He has been behind some of the most successful and inventive dance pop music throughout the 1990s.

BOIGRAPHY Born in Edinburgh, Scotland, Peden began his career in 1986 as a bass player and member of The Chimes. With over 25 years experience in the entertainment business, Mike went on to become one of Europe’s foremost and in demand music producers. Between 1989 and 1997, he produced the debut album for The Chimes (The Chimes) and ex Massive Attack vocalist Shara Nelson’s debut album (What Silence Knows) which was Brit Award and Mercury Prize nominated. He produced the Lighthouse Family’s debut album (Ocean Drive). In 1998 Mike’s career took him to Jive Records UK and then to Warner Records as a Senior A&R Executive Director. Peden continued to work steadily as a music producer and A&R executive into the 2000's. His other work includes producing for Daryl Hall’s solo studio album (Soul Alone) released on Epic Records, The Lighthouse Family second studio album (Postcards from Heaven) released on Polydor Records and Lucie Silvas debut studio album (Breath In) on Mercury Records.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ocean_Drive_(album) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Postcards_from_Heaven https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Breathe_In_(Lucie_Silvas_album) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Chimes_(Scottish_band) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Soul_Alone https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/What_Silence_Knows https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shara_Nelson https://books.google.com/books?id=LA8EAAAAMBAJ&pg=PA43&dq=Mike+Peden+A%26R+director&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwj1nq_2xPPqAhVyTd8KHcoPBqEQ6AEwAHoECAAQAg#v=onepage&q=Mike%20Peden%20A%26R%20director&f=false https://worldradiohistory.com/hd2/IDX-UK/Music/Archive-Music-Media-IDX/IDX/90s/99/MM-1999-12-04-OCR-Page-0004.pdf

I'm afraid that Wikipedia is NOT a reliable source. Theroadislong (talk) 06:50, 30 July 2020 (UTC)

mike Peden Wiki Page

Does this help you? If Wiki ins't I reliable source which now makes sense, you can see why I'm asking for help. It's not great having a page written about myself that I can't correct and update. https://www.allmusic.com/album/ocean-drive-mw0000025688/credits


https://www.allmusic.com/album/postcards-from-heaven-mw0000042394/credits


https://www.allmusic.com/album/what-silence-knows-mw0000110607/credits

https://worldradiohistory.com/UK/Music-and-Media/90s/1993/MM-1993-10-02.pdf

https://page.auctions.yahoo.co.jp/jp/auction/r221347572

http://uk-charts.com/showperson.asp?name=Mike+Peden

https://www.whosampled.com/Michael-Peden/

https://genius.com/artists/Mike-peden

https://www.femalefirst.co.uk/music/musicnews/Lucie+Silvas-649.html Preceding unsigned comment added by Edinburgh360 (talkcontribs)

This all belongs on the article talk page not here, the links you have posted all mention you, but articles require sources which contain in depth coverage of you. You can ask for changes on the articles talk page, in the form of change x to y with a source to support it, or suggest content with a specific source but you can't just re-write it. Content like you suggest "Mike went on to become one of Europe’s foremost and in demand music producers" is entirely inappropriate for an encyclopeida article which need to be neutral in tone. Theroadislong (talk) 16:07, 30 July 2020 (UTC)

Andreas Sundén

Thanks for giving advices! I have edit the article and added more references. /Andreas  Preceding unsigned comment added by Andreassunden (talkcontribs) 07:44, 31 July 2020 (UTC)

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