Wikipedia:Copyright problems/2023 August 7
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7 August 2023
- Draft:Timeline of violent events relating to the Lebanese Civil War (1975–1977) (history · last edit · rewrite) from https://www.ictj.org/sites/default/files/ICTJ-Report-Lebanon-Mapping-2013-EN_0.pdf. — Diannaa (talk) 21:25, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
- The template was relocated out of process by the creator, exposing some problematic content. Checking content for ongoing issues. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 16:21, 29 September 2023 (UTC)
- Okay, let's see.
| Original | Draft |
|---|---|
| Clashes broke out between PLO fighters from the camps of Tel al-Zaatar and Jisral-Basha and the Kataeb in the area of Dekwaneh | Clashes broke out between Palestin Liberation Organisation fighters and Phalangists in the town of Dekwaneh |
| clashes spread to other areas, now between Christian militias and Shi’a Lebanese supported by Palestinian fighters in the Shi’apopulated areas such as Chiyah and Nabaa.2 | Clashes spread to other areas between Christian militias and Shi’a Lebanese who aligned with the PLO |
| Following the assassination of a Palestinian man in downtown Beirut, between 30 and 50 Christian civilians were summarily executed in the area of Bashura in West Beirut | Following the assassination of a Palestinian man in Beirut, around 50 Christian civilians were executed in the area of Bashura in West Beirut. |
| Five civilians were killed and 12 wounded in the crossfire on the Chiyah- Ain al-Remmaneh front line in Greater Beirut. A mortar shell fell on a house in Furn al-Chebbak, killing one person and injuring four. When the neighbors gathered to help, another shell fell, killing five (including a woman and a child,) and wounding 14. | Five civilians were killed and twelve wounded during clashes in the Beirut suburbs of Chiyah and Ain al-Remmaneh.[6] A shell fell on a house in Furn el-Chebak killing 1 person and injuring 4 others. Another shell fell on the house as people gathered to assist the residents of the building killing 5 more and injuring 14. |
| The Saint George Hospital was hit, and so was the Armenian club of the Tashnag Party, where around 10 people were killed. | The Saint George Hospital was hut by RPGs and so was the headquarters of the Armenian Tashnag Party where around 10 people were killed. |
| : The Christian-populated village of Qa’a in northern Beqaa, which had been under siege since July 1 by neighboring Muslim Shi’a tribesmen and As-Sa`iqa,46 was attacked and seven civilians killed.47 This triggered the beginning of the Christian displacement from northern Beqaa. | The Christian-populated village of Qaa in the Baalbek district was attacked killing seven civilians.[7] This triggered a mass exodus of Christians in the Northern Beqaa. |
| Three people were killed and nine injured in Hawsh al-Umara | Three people were killed and nine injured in Hawsh al-Umara |
- Note that "On the same day, 5 people were killed in a crossfire in Dekwaneh and al-Fanar." is factually contradicted by the source, perhaps as an effort to paraphrase.
- This close paraphrasing and in some places verbatim copying is persistent, although there are some good efforts at paraphrase. Given the out of process removal of the tag, I see no choice but to delete the draft. No changes were made to problematic content after the removal of the tag. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 16:43, 29 September 2023 (UTC)