Wikipedia:Featured article review/Sasha (DJ)/archive1
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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 4:03, 18 December 2021 (UTC) .
Sasha (DJ)
- Notified: Wickethewok, Lazz_R, Coffeeandcrumbs, Ceoil, Outriggr, WP Biography, WP Electronic music, WP Wales, WP Rave, noticed in March
Review section
This 2007 promotion needs some work. Mild amounts of uncited text, and Sasha (DJ) discography reveals that Scene Delete, The emFire Collection: Mixed, Unmixed & Remixed, and several other albums, compliation albums, and EPs are not well documented in the text. The article also uses the user-generated Discogs, the dubious about.com (writers are not listed as okay at Wikipedia:WikiProject Albums/Sources/About.com Critics Table), and relies very heavily on Progressive-Sounds, which looks like one person's personal website. Hog Farm Talk 17:24, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
- I agree with the assessment above. Additionally, the article was hard to read at times (lack of connective words and overuse of short sentences) and I'm somewhat concerned it might be very outdated, seeing how there is no mention of his career after 2016 (ommitting him being featured on the cover of DJMag, performing at Coachella, and other highlights as can be seen mentioned here). A 5-year gap might be a bit too much to consider the article comprehensive. Santacruz ⁂ Please tag me! 23:32, 22 November 2021 (UTC)
- Move to FARC - no edits since FAR opened. Hog Farm Talk 16:02, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
- Move to FARC, not progressing. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 21:38, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
FARC section
- Issues raised in the review section include sourcing, prose and comprehensiveness. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:51, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
- Delist, zero progress on issues raised. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 14:02, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Delist, nothing happened. Hog Farm Talk 15:35, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Delist no progress (t · c) buidhe 20:43, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Delist no progress to address concerns. Z1720 (talk) 22:12, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
- Closing note: This removal candidate has been delisted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please leave the {{featured article review}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:03, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.