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Algorithmic amplification


I have enjoyed developing this article and would like a peer review with a focus on FAC preparation. Looking forward to your comments.

Thanks, Metalicat (talk) 22:35, 31 March 2026 (UTC)

RoySmith

I ran Citation verifier on this. The results are attached below. I have not done a deep dive into this, but I suggest you take a look at all the entries noted "partial" or "not supported" to see if there are any actual problems there. RoySmith (talk) 21:00, 12 April 2026 (UTC)

  • Most of the images are impossible to read at the default display size. On my desktop, they're fine when clicked on so they are displayed at a larger size, but on my phone, they're not comprehensible at all. See MOS:TEXTASIMAGES.
  • Amy Adler has argued that from 2007 onwards I don't know if there's a specific MOS section that talks about this, but it's conventional to introduce people with a short description of who they are, to help the reader put the person's comments in the proper context, i.e. "Law professor Amy Adler".
  • algorithm amplified emotionally charged, out-group hostile political content What does out-group" mean?
  • Algorithmic ranking structures visibility around engagement and audience retention The first time I read this, I interpreted "structures" as a noun, leading to much confusion over the rest of the sentence. Perhaps rephrase this?
  • You have a few places where entire paragraphs are cited to clusters of 3, 4 or even 5 references. I'm not a fan of that since it makes it difficult for a reader to figure out what facts came from which sources. I recommend breaking those up and providing more targeted citations.
  • These concerns have informed legislative activity. KOSA KOSA was first mentioned a long time ago, it might be worth re-introducing it here.
  • In the United Kingdom, Ofcom published ... Tell the reader what Ofcom is.
  • The DSA ... requires very large online platforms to assess What is a "very large online platform"?
  • The Act's categorisation framework I think it's OK to say "The Act" in the same paragraph where you defined it, in a new paragraph, I'd spell it out the first time.
  • China was the first country to enact legislation specifically targeting algorithmic recommendation systems. Be careful of "first" claims. They often turn out to be wrong, despite a RS which says so. I prefer to hedge a little with "believed to be first", "claimed to be first", etc.
  • Jian Xu has argued Another person who needs introducing.

Overall, I think this is pretty good. The prose is well-written and the sources look solid. My biggest complaint is the images, which really do need to be improved.


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Thanks for the review RoySmith. I’m away working at the moment, but will get on this when I’m back next week. Metalicat (talk) 10:26, 14 April 2026 (UTC)

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