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International Churches of Christ
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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm looking for guidance on improvements which can be made to the article prior to nominating for GA. Note: I'd listed it for peer review previously; however, that timed out.
Thanks, TarnishedPathtalk 01:50, 26 April 2026 (UTC)
Comments by AdaCiccone
I'd like to comment on several things:
- Some contents in the lead go into more detail than it really should, like topics about criticism and lawsuit. Surely those two definitely belong there but should be in a more compressed/summarized form rather than detailed. Also, the lead should summarize the entire article, which I don't think it's doing that now.
- Some paragraphs feel very stacked and detailed and some of them sit next to short ones. Per GA criterion 3b, the article should stay focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail. Try to summarize some of the stacked ones while also enlarging the small ones. But in doing so, remember that it shouldn't be only about size alone.
- Some sections feel empty visually. My suggestion would be to add at least one visual item (could be anything) for each section but this isn't obligatory though.
- I think the History section should be about first and foremost about the church itself from the beginning to today. The legal issues should be a separate section, which then should be linked to History by adding a brief summary there.
That's all for now. Maybe I'll add some more in the future. AdaCiccone (talk) 03:27, 27 April 2026 (UTC)