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Tsuneari Fukuda
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I plan to take this article to GAN. While I don't normally bother with peer review, I confess that I am overly familiar with this subject matter. As some of the content of this article is a bit abstract or perhaps arcane, I believe that the quality of this article could be much improved with feedback from an uninvolved party. I should be most happy to receive any commentary that one is willing to provide. Thank you in advance for your co-operation. Yours, &c. RGloucester — ☎ 04:33, 27 November 2025 (UTC)
- @RGloucester: Comments after a quick skim: I think this article is ready for a GAN. I suggest splitting up some of the larger paragraphs: usually I recommend 4-6 sentences per paragraph. Z1720 (talk) 17:18, 30 November 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review. I of course intend to take the article to GAN, but if you have any other commentary, I should be glad to hear it. Any gaps that you'd like filled, anything incomprehensible? I shall take a look at sorting the paragraphs. Yours, &c. RGloucester — ☎ 11:09, 1 December 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720: Any further comments? If not, I'm of a mind to ask for another reviewer... Yours, &c. RGloucester — ☎ 01:39, 29 December 2025 (UTC)
- @RGloucester: Any editor can comment on a PR at any time, so any editor interested can comment below. I won't be commenting further, but if you are looking for additional comments I suggest posting on the Wikiprojects attached to this article, or open a GAN. Z1720 (talk) 02:16, 29 December 2025 (UTC)
- I guess the PR process really is moribund...Yours, &c. RGloucester — ☎ 04:04, 29 December 2025 (UTC)
- @RGloucester: Editors like you reviewing articles can change that. Z1720 (talk) 04:22, 29 December 2025 (UTC)