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Waiting for 4 months to have a new article approved

Hello. I submitted a new article for review on July 6, 2018. It was initially reviewed and declined with recommendations for improvements. I made those improvements and resubmitted the article. I have confirmed that I did resubmit the article correctly. One of the Wikipedia editors did confirm that it meets the standard for notability and I believe it is written in a NPOV. Please review and advise me if the timeline for this review process is normal, or are there issues in play I am unaware of? Thank you very much. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Steve_Leder EllenSheehy (talk) 22:19, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

@EllenSheehy: Hello and welcome to the Teahouse. As there are thousands of drafts to review, and reviews are done by volunteers, it does take a long time to get through them. Please be patient- even though it is likely frustrating. 331dot (talk) 22:29, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Need help reviewing new article: Coffee flour

Hi there! I'm new to Wikipedia and I'm doing this for a uni assignment. I've just recently submitted an article titled "Coffee flour" out of the "requested articles" list. Because English is not my first language, I desperately need help with the article. It would be great if someone can kindly review my article, perhaps check the style, grammar, and structure of it. Thanks so much! Evkgoh (talk) 23:01, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi, Evkgoh. Welcome to the Teahouse. I've left you a few cookies (normal flour, I'm afraid), along with a few welcoming links. As I see you've also submitted this article to Peer Review, it probably needs little input from us here as well. That said, it's not a bad article for a newcomer, so well done. Maybe a bit promotional in places. I would like you to address your use of capitalisation, please. This is extremely important in this article (above many others) because you've written that "Coffee Flour" is the name of a company, and that "coffee flour" is the product it makes. So lose the caps when talking about the product. (like Hoover and hoover - vacuum cleaner manufacturer; any type of vacuum cleaner). See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Capital letters for guidance on use of capital letters here.
When you say "Many efforts have been made to handle the stink of mounds and honey water leftovers at the coffee mills, including catchment or composting, but the impact is small. It leads me to think you've done your best to avoid copyvios without actually considering what you're saying, or how the reader might perceive your sentences. "Perplexed" springs immediately to mind! One helpful trick when writing articles is to read them aloud to yourself. If you listen as you speak, or if you find yourself tripping yourself up as you try to read it, you know your sentences are not flowing quite as well as they ought. But please don't be put off; I think you've not done too badly at all. Oops, and I've just remembered you said that English isn't your first language, so actually you've done very well indeed. Try getting me to write in another language and the article would be deleted in no time at all, I can assure you! Hope this helps a bit. I'm off for a decaf coffee before going to bed! Nick Moyes (talk) 00:22, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

Help to improve Trinbagonian nationalism

Hello, I'm in the midst of a possible deletion on my page Trinbagonian nationalism. I would love to keep working on this page, and am hoping for help in improving it to follow the guidelines of Wikipedia. Any recommendations would be warmly received.--SammyJ1234 (talk) 22:56, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Hello, SammyJ1234 and welcome to the Teahouse. Yes, do please feel free to improve your article whilst it is up for discussion. In fact, I urge you to do it! Waiting until it's too late to improve it would be a great shame. Having your efforts potentially thrown out by a seven day discussion can seem terribly hurtful and off-putting to any editor. You have my sympathy. But if you can take it as a challenge and listen to the criticism that editors make, and respond to it quickly, you stand a very good chance of improving the article to a point where it doesn't get deleted. The key things coming out are that it is rather essay-like and not encyclopaedic enough in its style, and that you've not cited any/many sources that use the phrase "Trinbagonian nationalism". We normally strongly discourage editors from bringing deletion discussions to the Teahouse, or any other forum for that matter but I do feel sorry that your attempts to improve the article by seeking input at Peer Review has possibly led to someone spotting it and trying to stamp on it, rather like a scary insect. I hope you'll forgive me for interfering with a topic I know nothing about, but I believe it would be helpful to retitle the article. But whilst it's under discussion for deletion, that would be inappropriate. But for now I have created a Redirect to it from Nationalism in Trinidad and Tobago, and my recommendation will be to move it there after the decision is made to keep the article (which I am sure it will be). I do suggest you try to simplify some of the style of writing, add wikilinks to related topics and add more inline references. I'm surprised your article hasn't used some of the sources that come up whern you Google "Nationalism in Trinidad and Tobago" If you can get hold of a copy, "Race and Nationalism in Trinidad and Tobago: A study of Decolonization in A Multiracial Society by Selwyn D. Ryan" looks to be a seminal work on the topic. Regards from the UK, Nick Moyes (talk) 01:02, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

Jamai Raja (TV series)

According to Earwigs Copyvio, this article is a copyvio Thegooduser Let's Chat 🍁 01:21, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi Thegooduser - I'm pinging Diannaa who is my go-to admin on copyvio issues. I can't access the one sight which is 62%, but this might be a case of WP:MIRROR. Need better expertise to take a look. Onel5969 TT me 01:32, 25 October 2018 (UTC)
I was able to access the source website using the Wayback Machine. The Season 1 plot description was copied from the network's website back in 2015. I have replaced it using material from an earlier revision. Thank you for reporting this problem. — Diannaa 🍁 (talk) 03:13, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

Question about taking content from one page to create a new page

Hello, on Driving while black there is a section called Pretextual stop which is a redirect. I would like to take this paragraph out of this page and make it a separate page. A notice was given awhile back on the Talk page and nobody responded. So, is it OK if I just go ahead and do this? I'm new and don't want to step on anybody's toes! Seahawk01 (talk) 02:43, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi Seahawk01 - as per WP:SIZESPLIT, the rule of thumb is that an article should have info split out if it is over 50k. This link shows that this article sits at slightly over 40k, so should most likely not be split out. Contextually, it also seems to make sense to include it in the discussion of the article's main topic. Onel5969 TT me 11:29, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
Hi Onel5969 and thanks for the reply. Actually, I also rethought this...I would like to create a new page called Pretextual stop, leave the paragraph on Driving while black, and then under the heading on that page have a link to the new page. Also, I would like to remove the redirect for this topic. Will this be OK? Thanks for the advice! Seahawk01 (talk) 01:49, 25 October 2018 (UTC)
Hi Seahawk01 -If you can develop the topic beyond what is in the current section, then of course it would be okay. My point was that to simply remove the current short paragraph to create a separate article wouldn't meet WP:SPLIT. And I think that the topic goes beyond what is covered by Driving while black, since many of the instances of this have nothing to do with race. My suggestion would be to create a draft, and then when you have it developed enough, replace the redirect with your article. Or put a {{construction}} on the article as you work on it. Hope this helps. Onel5969 TT me 03:03, 25 October 2018 (UTC)
Hi Onel5969. Thanks again for your help. I probably won't get a draft together right away, but it is good to now have a game plan on how to approach the matter. Seahawk01 (talk) 03:41, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

Splitting an article

This is another stepping on toes question. On Wikipedia:Splitting it states that over 50 kB an article should be considered for splitting. I would like to work on Economic inequality, but it is huge! I think it is 202 kB. I just left a note on the Talk page that I would like to split it. On the Splitting page, it says I can be bold, but...I'm not that bold, yet. Do you think I should just split the page or try to notify some more people first? Seahawk01 (talk) 03:09, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

As an editor, my advice is "Yes, go ahead. The article needs splitting, and for two years has had a tag at the top saying so." As a fellow human, my advice is "No. It'll be far more work than you're expecting, and no-one will thank you for it." Maproom (talk) 07:18, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
Thanks Maproom for the practical advice! I contacted everyone who has edited the page in the past month and invited them to Talk:Economic_inequality to build consensus. Hopefully, someone else with take the leap and divide the page. Also, I contacted the following groups: WikiProject Capitalism, WikiProject Economics and WikiProject Libertarianism. Seahawk01 (talk) 01:36, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi again Maproom. I think we have a split in progress. All interested parties have been notified. A discussion has been started. I placed a new split notice at the top and two proposed splits in the article. I will wait until next week to go ahead with any editing. As a side note, I think, since this is such a hot button issue, it attracted lots of people offering a tremendous number of angles on causes and effects, which made it balloon to such huge proportions. I'm not sure if splitting it will tame this. On the other hand, it really should be a well-developed article as a point of reference for people. It needs a good editor watching over it (not me, of course). Seahawk01 (talk) 03:48, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

Gabe Mirkin

Hello, I'm new to Wikipedia and I just submitted my first article; however, it got denied. The reason was that the article sounded more like an advertisement. I wrote about Dr. Gabe Mirkin and I would like some help on how to look for reliable resources that Wikipedia will accept. Thank you!  Preceding unsigned comment added by Baladtheimpaler (talkcontribs) 2018-10-24T22:54:19 (UTC)

I've made a start on copy-editing the draft (I've covered the first four paragraphs), but there's a lot that still needs doing. All the direct external links will have to go. And the most important issue is that the draft cites no references. 28 sources are listed, and the better ones may be good enough to establish that Mirkin is notable; I haven't checked. But they need to be cited from within the article. Please read Help:Referencing for beginners. Maproom (talk) 07:39, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

i would like to find out the year all of Canada was declared an aerodrome

I just can't find the answer anywhere. I saw it on a tv show from 1990's in Canada. Thanks.  Preceding unsigned comment added by 108.60.189.65 (talkcontribs)

That's not really the function of this page, but to answer your question I think you're misunderstanding for the most part, all of Canada can be an aerodrome (my emphasis) in the AIM. It's not that all of Canada was declared one giant airport; it's that, under Canadian law, anyone preparing an aircraft landing site is legally considered to have created an aerodrome (so if you clear the junk out of your back yard so a helicopter can land, you've created an aerodrome), so it's theoretically possible to create an aerodrome anywhere on Canadian soil.  Iridescent 08:20, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

"ZORROSTIANISM"

I read in the article sited above that ZORROASTER, (The Founder of the Relion sited above) may have lived around the time of Jesus Christ. My question is: DID HE EVER MENTION CHRIST (CHRISTIANITY) OR HAVE ANY SCHOLARS OR ARCHEOLOGIST WRITTEN ANY MATERIAL CONNECTING THE TWO IN ANY WAY? Preceding unsigned comment added by 2606:A000:5151:BE00:1090:22F8:5C80:3BE1 (talkcontribs)

@2606:A000:5151:BE00:1090:22F8:5C80:3BE1:. You may want to ask this question at Wikipedia:Reference desk, which is designed to handle general knowledge questions like this. The Teahouse is really designed for new users who have questions on how to use Wikipedia. --Jayron32 17:50, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
...however, you read wrong. Our article about Zoroaster states that he lived around a millenium before JC (there is some disagreement as to when exactly, but it is pretty clear that it was before the 5th century BCE). If anything, Zoroastrianism influenced Christianity, not the other way around. TigraanClick here to contact me 09:42, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

Two pages with duplicate subject

In checking the wiki on Frederick Douglass, I discovered links to two different pages that refer to the same speech by different titles. The Speech is available online here: Frederick Douglass, Oration, Delivered in Corinthian Hall, Rochester, July 5th, 1852. Rochester: Lee, Mann &co., 1852. Frederick Douglass Project. University of Rochester. . It is titled "What to the Slave is the Fourth of July" in the print volumes of the Frederick Douglass papers, and was delivered on July 5, 1852. The two pages are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/What_to_the_Slave_Is_the_Fourth_of_July%3F and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Hypocrisy_of_American_Slavery. I think the former should be preferred and the latter deleted or converted to a disambiguation page but I'm not sure how to do it.  Preceding unsigned comment added by Zulick (talkcontribs) 19:54, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi unnamed editor (and I couldn't discern who added this from the article history). I think your best bet is to request a merge of the latter article into the former. I would also suggest that the verbiage in the first article's lead be changed to reflect that while some consider it untitled, that it is titled in the FD papers. Onel5969 TT me 21:47, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
Thanks for responding. How do I request a merge? Signature added! Meg Zulick 13:13, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

draft

Hello, I submitted a draft more that two months ago, and I understand that reviewing takes time. However, I am not able to find my draft in the Category:Pending AfC submissions, it is just not visible. Is there any possibility that my wikitext is lacking some code and how to fix that to make my draft visible for potential editor? I will be grateful for any advice.  Preceding unsigned comment added by Suresh D Sarada (talkcontribs)

Suresh D Sarada Hello, and welcome to the teahouse. Your draft is definitely in Category:Pending AfC submissions - the category is listed in the bottom of Draft:Skand_Bali, and you can see it in this list. Galobtter (pingó mió) 13:50, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

Editing username

I am a new user, I just created an account with Wikipedia and in need to change my user name. How can I do that?  Preceding unsigned comment added by Phaphama Marabela (talkcontribs) 14:04, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

@Phaphama Marabela: Per Wikipedia:Changing username, "Users who have made very few edits are encouraged to register a new account and discard the old one. You can even copy your old watchlist to your new account. See Wikipedia:Clean start for additional rules and details." —BarrelProof (talk) 14:10, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

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