Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Decline comments workshop

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This is a workshop for hashing out/deciding which, if any, of the decline reasons used at AFC should be kept, modified, or removed. In order to keep some semblance of order, here is the format of this page:

  • Vote "support" or "oppose" on as many decline reasons as you would like. Please only vote support if you think that the message should not be changed at all.
  • If voting "oppose", please give suggestions as to how you think the comment should be changed.
  • When 10+ users have voted on a decline reason:
    • If it receives more than 75% support it will be kept as-is.
    • If it receives less than 75% support a proposal will be put forth based on the given suggestions. A subsection will be made and voting will start over with the same format as above.
  • If after two weeks a particular comment has received less than 10 !votes the percentages will be calculated using the existing numbers.

Note this is only for hashing out new decline comments. Changes to the "declined" template itself is a conversation to be held elsewhere (likely WT:AFC).

Discussion About the Discussion

I don't think that this method of discussing the templates is likely to be helpful. I think that many of the reasons could use minor improvements. I also think that the first issue to be addressed is not the details of the decline reasons, but the text of the Declined template, which, as it is, is too saccharine and encouraging. I would prefer to focus on the general wording before getting into the details of the reasons. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:00, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

+1 Robert said it better than I could. We need to look at the whole template the user sees. Legacypac (talk) 00:03, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
I was saying a few months ago that I would like the option of specifying two or more reasons for a decline. I still think that would be appropriate, such as a notability reason and a tone reason. Robert McClenon (talk) 16:21, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
I believe the ability to decline for two reasons is being beta tested. Perhaps we need to add a new section to this workshop to discuss the surrounding decline context text and links. ~Kvng (talk) 20:42, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Robert McClenon, you are more than welcome to start a discussion about the decline template itself. This page is a workshop, not an RFC, and there is no deadline or obligation to comment. As I said above, I think we should discuss the decline template, but that's a one-2nd-level-header sort of discussion (i.e. it doesn't need it's own subpage). In other words, both template and comments need to be updated, but every time I asked what people wanted to change I got no reply so I figured I'd get something started.
As for the "two-declines" option, as mentioned it is being sandboxed for AFCH currently and the template can accept two decline notices at the moment (the second just needs to be manually added). Primefac (talk) 22:48, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
User:Primefac - Okay. Is the two-decline version functioning for ordinary AFC users, or only experimentally? How do I use or test it? Thank you. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:50, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
It's a change to the template itself. It's not live on AFCH at the moment (it's still in beta), but can easily be edited after AFCH adds the first decline notice. Primefac (talk) 12:59, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
User:Primefac - Okay. I will comment on the templates that we have. I think that some of the responses may give us more direction as to where to go from here. I will note that the comments include a mixture of reasoned critiques and comments that I consider to misunderstand the nature of new editors. I will explain. New editors, whether at AFC, at NPP, or anywhere else in Wikipedia, fall into three classes. The first is those who are here to contribute to the encyclopedia. The second is those who are here for self-serving reasons. The third is those who are completely clueless. There is some overlap. However, one of the major disconnects that I see is that some experienced editors think that most new editors are here to contribute to the encyclopedia, and that if they submit crud, it is because they need more handholding to learn to be good editors. Other experienced editors have a more cynical or more practical view, that not all new editors will develop with handholding, and crud just needs to go to a bit bucket. I don't see the second and third groups of new editors as benefiting from handholding. Anyway, thank you. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:50, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
100% agree. Some users can't understand what Robert lays out. Especially some of the outreach people who see their new volunteer editors, have zero experience at NPR/AFC, and just can't visualize that the VAST majority of new accounts are here for self serving purposes because that is not the workd they live in. I hesitate to even call these self serving accounts new editors as they are often quite experienced, just using a new throw away account.
We need two groups of templates - a go and a no go:
a) your submission ir unsuitable because... oh and please tag it for deletion to save us the effort. Don't encourage them to fix and resubmit.
b) your submission has some issues (shortage of refs, tone, etc) that can be improved. If the issues are not CSD worthy (copyvio or something else major) we should just give them the feedback and mainspace the page. The GF new user will benefit from working with other editors and hopefully will continue on other mainspace pages.
Notability is the biggest issue amd we can all judge that on most drafts quickly. Some pages are clearly notable on their face. Some pages are clearly not notable on their face. The edge cases we should search and decide. If it's borderline, accept and let NPR deal with it. The submit-decline-repeat can be significantly reduced if we tell the hopeless firmly NO and semd the likely good pages into mainspace. Legacypac (talk) 06:01, 26 March 2018 (UTC)
Legacypac, I object to this assumption you have that an individual reviewer will be able to know, by looking at a potentially unfinished draft, whether the submission will ever be acceptable. One of the criticisms of AfC is that a single reviewer can block potentially useful material and with it, useful new editors. We need more checks and balances, not less. Giving a reviewer an option to black-hole a submission is counter to the reform we are trying to make here at AfC. No one outside the project is asking us to dispense with bad submissions more efficiently. They're asking us to accept more of the promising submissions we receive and, to do this more quickly and to not WP:BITE while we're doing it. ~Kvng (talk) 14:18, 30 March 2018 (UTC)
Surely we can all identify hopeless. It is no different than NPR where individual reviewers PROD, redirect, CSD, AFD. There has long been the idea of merging the two processes. To make the process more efficient I propose quickly disposing of junk and quickly promoting the promising/notable (even if not perfect) We need less pages stuck in purgatory where the submitters either give up on the good or repeatedly resubmit the bad. Legacypac (talk) 16:49, 30 March 2018 (UTC)
No, like I said, I object and you telling me I can't is not a productive response. If you want AfC to work like NPR, you should join the call to close AfC. That's a much more efficient and sensible reform proposal than to take us through the contortions required to make AfC more like NPR. ~Kvng (talk) 20:18, 30 March 2018 (UTC)


Reviewing instructions

This process is incomplete if we are not also simultaneously looking at the reviewing instructions for each of the decline reasons. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 19:48, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

adv

This draft reads like an advertisement. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a platform for promotion or marketing. Drafts that are exclusively promotional may be deleted without notice.

Wikipedia articles must be written neutrally in a formal, impersonal, and dispassionate way. They should not read like a blog post, advertisement, or fan page. Rewrite the draft to remove:

Instead, only summarize in your own words a range of independent, reliable, published sources that discuss the subject.

If you have a conflict of interest (e.g. you are the subject, an employee, or a relative) or are being paid to edit, you must disclose this to comply with Wikipedia's Terms of Use.

Support

  • I'm surprised you're not getting more responses here. I'll try to knock off one or two a day until I've commented on all of them. For this one, the message says what needs to be said and my only suggestion is with respect to formatting. I suspect that many submitters don't actually click through to the blue-linked fine print. This problem might be addressed by unlinking the words and then adding the usual blue-linked shortcut. Using the second sentence as an example -- Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view (WP:NPOV), and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources (WP:RS), not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. Yes, it's a minor change, but it might encourage people to actually read the guidance. NewYorkActuary (talk) 17:18, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Strong Support - I think that the argument given by User:Kvng is a genuinely terrible argument (although every constructive editor is entitled to a few terrible arguments). I agree that achieving NPOV is not feasible for new authors with pet subjects, but that is all the more reason why their submissions need to be killed, not an argument to send spam to mainspace for improvement. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:00, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
  • support what Robert McClenon said. Mainspace is not a dumping ground for bad drafts! Rather, draftspace is the place to get things ready for mainspace. Please don't move promotional articles to mainspace. Jytdog (talk) 04:41, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

Oppose

  • I think this decline reason should be removed as an option. Most of it is talking about sourcing and notability anyway for which we have a different decline reason. Achieving NPOV is not feasible for new authors working on pet subjects. In many cases, the only way this is going to get improved through collaboration in mainspace. ~Kvng (talk) 18:15, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • At minimum, it needs a "tag for speedy deletion" option. MER-C 15:19, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
  • build in a CSD option. I've been going through the Category:AfC_submissions_declined_as_an_advertisement from the last 6 months and tagging them G11. There are still 1600+ undeleted. Nearly all are G11 eligible and finding a page to accept already tagged adv is almost impossible. We are letting the spam text and links live for 6 months in draft, which is still good link juice for the spammers. We should draw a distinction between "NPOV" which can be fixed and "Adv" which should be CSD'd. Legacypac (talk) 15:32, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Build in a CSD option instead. If it is bad enough to decline as an advert then it should be bad enough to delete as an advert. If it isn't that bad (minor issues) then it can be fixed up with a couple quick fixes that can be suggested to the user in a comment or it can be sent to main space with an NPOV tag. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:26, 26 March 2018 (UTC)
  • I ran a small test of a couple hundred pages where I CSD'd every page declined as an Adv from several random letters of the alphabet. I got a few declines (normally I get almost no CSD declines) and even was able to mainspace a handful I felt were actually notable and not spammy after an Admin declined to accept the CSD. Turns out AfC version of "Advertising" is somewhat stricter than G11 standards. A take a way is we need to be more careful in what we decline at AfC as Advertising. On the flip side, Admins agreed that almost all the pages we tagged as adverts were CSD G11 acceptable. So the other take a way is we need to be more aggressive at CSDing the actual advertising. If we remove the pages we quickly we remove the opportunity to resubmit and that helps reduce the backlog. It takes no more time to CSD G11 now as to G13 later. Legacypac (talk) 16:25, 28 March 2018 (UTC)
  • if it is not bad enough to CSD G11, decline on NPOV or just remove or replace the offending words. Legacypac (talk) 15:18, 7 April 2018 (UTC)

athlete

This draft's references do not show that the subject meets Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion for sports. The draft requires either:

or multiple published secondary sources that:

  • provide significant coverage: discuss the subject in detail, not just brief mentions or routine announcements;
  • are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
  • are independent: not connected to the subject, such as interviews, press releases, the subject's own website, or sponsored content.

Please add references that meet these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.

Support

  • I didn't know we had this. But it says what needs to be said and my only suggestion is the same one about formatting that I described above under "adv" (except for the small font links to the referencing guidelines -- those seem fine as is). NewYorkActuary (talk) 18:04, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • I'd like reviewers to do a search for sources first, and then suggest whether the topic is notable or not, but that's another issue that needs consensus to change. Probably worth having as a subject specific link is useful. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:29, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

Oppose

bio

This draft's references do not show that the person meets Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion for people. The draft requires multiple published secondary sources that:

  • provide significant coverage: discuss the person in detail, not brief mentions or interviews lacking independent analysis;
  • are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
  • are independent: not connected to the person, such as interviews, press releases, the subject's own website, or sponsored content.

Please add references that meet all three of these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.

Support

  • Support, but this should have two flavors, where improvement may be worth while, and where it is clear that there is no hope. I commonly use this one on the usual autobiographical social media profile. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:02, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
That would require a WP:BEFORE search, which isn't currently part of the AfC review guide. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:33, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

We need this for plausibly notable bios. We need a nnbio for evidently non-notable bios. Legacypac (talk) 05:29, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

Oppose

blank

This draft appears to be blank. If you have not written your text yet, please add your content before resubmitting. If you did write the text, it may be hidden by a formatting error. Please check the "Edit" tab to ensure your text is not inside a comment tag.

Support

Oppose

  • I've reviewed hundreds and hundreds of declined blank submissions. Hidden text is very very rare. Simplfy to address the more likely issue:

We're sorry, but we cannot publish blank submissions or pages with no context. To suggest a topic go to Wikipedia:Requested articles. If you submitted this in error or as a test please add G7 to the page to have it removed." Legacypac (talk) 20:26, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

  • I agree in principle with Legacypac's proposal to simplify. I would propose that the message simply stop at the end of the second sentence. Further instructions on seeking help and deletion are already present in the template frame surrounding this message. ~Kvng (talk) 18:22, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
On several of the decline reasons I'd like to encourage the user to evaluate and seek deletion themselves. Better than getting a notice its being deleted and a suble hint its going to be deleted soon. Legacypac (talk) 18:54, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
I assume you're talking about G13 notices. Those are not as WP:BITEy as what you're proposing here and therefore a superior way to handle this IMO. ~Kvng (talk) 19:23, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
Some go G13 but I try and clear them G2 sooner. That closes off REFUND suggestion for blank pages. A G2 is not BITEY it just clears the title for recreation properly. I'd prefer the blank submission be tagged G2 automatically with the decline. Legacypac (talk) 22:03, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
The problem with the wording is that assumes that the submitter provided a valid title but no text. That is much less common than just submitting with no title and no text. Because the idea that this is a Requested Article is so far off the mark, I treat these as test edits. As written, the decline rationale is just weird. Robert McClenon (talk) 22:12, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
I have seen hidden text. I would drop the second sentence, because blank submissions are very seldom really requests for an article about a topic, which is what the template assumes. In my experience, blank submissions are mistakes. It might help to say that their submission has no content. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:52, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

blp

The text of this submission has been removed. Wikipedia has a strict policy regarding biographies of living people. To protect subjects from harm, we remove content that is:

  • unverified: lacking citations from reliable sources and
  • potentially damaging: containing negative, sensitive, or libelous information that cannot be verified.

Your text is preserved in the page history tab. You may retrieve it only if you immediately add inline citations to reliable sources that support the material.

Support

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Discussion

  • Do we really require reviewers to promptly remove unsourced BLP drafts from draft space? ~Kvng (talk) 18:24, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Does this one need a {{db-g10}} option? MER-C 14:52, 7 April 2018 (UTC)

context

This draft provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject. Please see the guide to writing better articles for how to improve your writing.

Support

Oppose

  • Change the word "format" to "develop" Legacypac (talk) 15:38, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

corp

This draft's references do not show that the subject meets Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion for organizations and companies. The draft requires multiple published secondary sources that:

  • provide significant coverage: discuss the subject in detail, excluding routine coverage like product launches, staff appointments, or financial reports and listings in databases or listicles;
  • are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
  • are independent: not connected to the subject, such as press releases, the subject's own website, or sponsored content.

Please add references that meet all three of these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.

Support

  • Support, but the same options apply as to bio, submissions that may be capable of improvement and submissions that should be dropped. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:04, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Oppose

  • This is where multiple decline reasons are needed. This should be used quite frequently in combination with decline and deletion for advertising. MER-C 14:51, 7 April 2018 (UTC)

cv

This draft appears to contain copyrighted material which has been removed. Wikipedia strictly prohibits copyright violations. Assume all text is copyrighted unless released under a compatible license.

Users who continue to post copyrighted material may be blocked from editing Wikipedia.

Note to reviewers: do not leave copyright violations sitting in the page history. Please follow the cleanup instructions.

Administrators: if the page has been cleaned and you are seeing this notice, please change the cv to cv-cleaned in the {{AfC submission}} call.

Support

  • ~Kvng (talk) 18:28, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Obvious. But I don't know/ or think the note to reviewers is necessary. The script already has inbuilt means of directly requesting {{G12}}. –Ammarpad (talk) 04:20, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Delete the note and put a G12 tag in the script Legacypac (talk) 15:36, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

Oppose

dict

This draft appears to be a dictionary definition. Wikipedia is not a dictionary and we do not accept articles that are simply definitions of words, acronyms, or slang.

  • To improve the draft it must expand on the subject, such as discussing its history, cultural significance, or impact rather than just defining the word;
  • To create a dictionary entry you can contribute to our sister project Wiktionary. Please ensure the subject meets Wiktionary's inclusion criteria.

Support

Oppose

dup

This draft duplicates another submission currently submitted for review. To save time, we will review the other submission only. Any future edits or improvements should be made on that submission, not here.

Support

  • Necessary option. Some duplicate submissions were by the same editor who try to push from different angle so as to get alternative accepted if one get rejected, while in rare cases it is coincidence two people writing on similar thing. In either case we must review one at a time (preferably more developed, not the older). –Ammarpad (talk) 04:16, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
  • We need this even if not used very often. I'd like to see the page refirected to the other one by the script automatically. Let the script post the decline on the user's page and #REDIRECT:pagename on the draft. Legacypac (talk) 15:16, 7 April 2018 (UTC)

Oppose

essay

This draft reads like an essay or opinion piece. Wikipedia is not a place for original research or personal opinions. The draft should:

Instead, only summarize in your own words a range of independent, reliable, published sources that discuss the subject.

Support

Oppose

  • I think this decline reason should be removed as an option. Most of the legitimate declines using this should use #not instead. This reason is potentially abused by reviewers who do not like the writing style used in the submission. Style issues can be corrected though collaborative editing once the submission is in mainspace. ~Kvng (talk) 19:32, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Agree with Kvng. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:32, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

exists

This draft appears to be a duplicate of an existing article. Wikipedia does not permit multiple articles on the same topic.

  • If you are writing about a different subject with the same name, ask the reviewer to rename your draft to distinguish it.

Support

  • Necessary option and written succinctly. –Ammarpad (talk) 04:12, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Good Legacypac (talk) 15:37, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Could maybe use one more sentence suggesting that the user consider a marge, but it also works as is. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:37, 26 March 2018 (UTC)
  • No problems here. MER-C 20:10, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

Oppose

film

This draft's references do not show that the film meets Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion for films. The draft requires either:

or multiple published secondary sources that:

  • provide significant coverage: discuss the film in detail, not just brief mentions or routine announcements;
  • are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
  • are independent: not connected to the film, such as press releases, the studio's own website, or sponsored content.

Please add references that meet these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.

Support

Oppose

ilc

This draft lacks inline citations. Wikipedia's verifiability policy requires that all content be supported by reliable sources. We require inline citations (footnotes) to show which source supports which specific statement.

You must place an inline citation directly after:

  • quotations;
  • any material whose verifiability is likely to be challenged or is contentious;
  • any material about living people.

Please edit your draft to support your statements with inline citations. Learn how to create inline citations in the:

Support

Oppose

  • I think this decline reason should be removed as an option. Although there is a hard requirement for inline citations on contentious material in BLP submission, this reason is most frequently abused to decline submissions with non-standard reference formatting. Issues with BLP citations are already captured in #blp. The other issues we're nattering about here can be fixed once the submission is in mainspace. ~Kvng (talk) 19:18, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • If the topic is clearly notable and there is no hoaxes in it it should be mainspaced. This is a bad reason to decline - tagging with RefImprove is better. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Legacypac (talk • contribs)
  • I routinely scavenge category where articles declined for this reason are dumped and found that many are mainspace worthy. Either topic is notable or not, either enough minimum acceptable references are provided or not; but the near perfect arranging of references should be left to copy editors not newbies who struggle to fix up references. –Ammarpad (talk) 04:08, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Agree with Kvng, remove as an option. Seen this abused way too much. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:35, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

joke

This draft appears to be a joke or a hoax. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. We do not accept:

  • hoaxes: made-up stories presented as fact;
  • humor: content intended to be funny rather than informative.

Please use the sandbox to practice editing. Do not submit this draft for review until you have written an article intended for the encyclopedia.

Users who continue to create inappropriate pages may be blocked from editing Wikipedia.

Support

  • ~Kvng (talk) 19:12, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • I don't think this need any addition. Communication to newbie should be as succinct as possible. Suffice to say once you're told that your submission is not worthy of encyclopedia then definitely you will not get surprised if it is deleted. –Ammarpad (talk)
  • Support - There are two varieties of this, ones that should be taken quickly to G10 as attack pages or G3 as insults to Wikipedia, and those that aren't obviously speedy candidates but are obviously bad jokes, and should usually go to MFD. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:07, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Oppose

  • Add the words "and this page will be deleted soon." And then the reviewer should tag as G3 or even better the decline template should include a G3 tag. Legacypac (talk) 18:59, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Agreed, this one also needs to be accompanied with an appropriate CSD tag. MER-C 12:14, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

lang

This is the English Wikipedia and we can only accept articles written in the English language.

  • Please provide a high-quality English translation, avoiding machine translation tools (like Google Translate).
  • If you prefer to write in your own language, look for the Wikipedia project in your language.

If you prefer to write in your own language, look for the Wikipedia project in your language on the Wikipedia home page.

Support

Oppose

"English Wikipedia only publishes pages in English. Have you visited the Wikipedia home page? You can probably find a version of Wikipedia in your language to contribute to."

Keep it simple. Rarely does someone come back and translate the submission, and telling them to translate is not needed. Legacypac (talk) 19:07, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

mergeto

This draft does not have sufficient content to warrant a standalone article of its own, but it could be merged into the existing article on the same subject.

  • Edit the existing article to include your text and citations into an appropriate section.
  • If the article is protected and you cannot edit it, propose your changes on the article's Talk page.

Support

Oppose

  • Lack of content is not the only reason to suggest a merge. ~Kvng (talk) 19:10, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
The proposed article does merit an article of its own, but the content submitted here could be incorporated into an existing article. Since anyone can edit Wikipedia, you are welcome to add that information yourself. Thank you.

+1 Legacypac (talk) 15:42, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

music

This draft's references do not show that the subject meets Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion for music. The draft requires either:

or multiple published secondary sources that:

  • provide significant coverage: discuss the subject in detail, not just brief mentions or routine announcements;
  • are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
  • are independent: not connected to the subject, such as interviews, press releases, the subject's own website, or sponsored content.

Please add references that meet these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.

It is often easier to prove the notability of an album or artist than an individual song or band member. If the subject is not yet notable, consider improving a relevant existing article instead.

Support

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neo

This draft's references do not show that the neologism meets Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion. The draft requires multiple published secondary sources that:

  • provide significant coverage: discuss the term in detail, not just brief mentions or routine use;
  • are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
  • are independent: not connected to the subject, such as promoted or sponsored content.

Please add references that meet all three of these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.

Wikipedia is not a dictionary and we do not accept articles that are simply definitions of neologisms.

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news

This draft appears to be a news report or about a single event. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not an indiscriminate collection of information or a news service. We generally do not accept articles about:

Please add references published after the initial breaking news has passed that demonstrate the event's lasting significance. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.

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nn

This draft's references do not show that the subject meets Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion. The draft requires multiple published secondary sources that:

  • provide significant coverage: discuss the subject in detail, not just brief mentions or routine announcements;
  • are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
  • are independent: not connected to the subject, such as interviews, press releases, the subject's own website, or sponsored content.

Please add references that meet all three of these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.

Support

Support. We need some form of this when the submission doesn't meet notability but it doesn't fall into any of the classes. I use it for products, software (when web content isn't right), books. I would like to see products, software, and books split off. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:57, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Oppose

  • I assume these messages have been "improved" over time and I fear they now suffer from cumulative TL;DR and WP:OVERLINK issues. Here's a proposed cleanup: ~Kvng (talk) 21:20, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
This submission's references do not adequately demonstrate the subject's notability. Wikipedia notability policy requires significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the topic. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) so that there is clear evidence the subject is notable. If multiple reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.
  • I support this simplfied version. Legacypac (talk) 19:43, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Support the simplified version. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:40, 26 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Support the simplified version. MER-C 20:11, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

not

This draft is not suitable for Wikipedia. Wikipedia is not a general publishing platform. We do not accept:

  • essays or original research: personal views, advocacy, unpublished theories, or pre-prints;
  • resumes or personal profiles: CVs, social networking pages, or memorials;
  • directories or manuals: travel guides, catalogs, or how-to instructions;
  • creative writing: fanfiction, worldbuilding, myths, or things you have made up.

Read What Wikipedia is not to understand what content is excluded.

Support

Oppose

  • Comment - We need to rethink how this one is meant to be used. Is it meant to be used to just mean that a submission needs to be killed with fire, or is it used, as it implies, to mean that the submission is covered specifically by a paragraph in WP:NOT? Some editors think that this can be used to mean Do Not Resubmit regardless of what the crud is. I have always thought that it required a NOT paragraph, so that it didn't apply to the majority of crud submissions. Need to review how it is meant to be used. Robert McClenon (talk) 21:54, 24 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Get rid of this one, at last as written, immediately ready for abuse by reviewers, and unclear to the submitter exactly why it is being declined. Any reason at WP:NOT should have another decline rationale which applies. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:42, 26 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Needs major improvement. The "not social media" reasons should be broken out into a new decline reason for starters. MER-C 12:22, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

npov

This draft is not written from a neutral point of view. Wikipedia articles must be written neutrally in a formal, impersonal, and dispassionate way. They should not read like a blog post, advertisement, or fan page. Rewrite the draft to remove:

Instead, only summarize in your own words a range of independent, reliable, published sources that discuss the subject.

Support

  • Support - As noted above, the oppose argument is true but terrible. Submitters with pet topics should be discouraged, not encouraged, and we don't need to take their spam into mainspace for improvement. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:11, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Oppose

  • I think this decline reason should be removed as an option. Achieving NPOV is not feasible for new authors working on pet subjects. In many cases, the only way this is going to get improved through collaboration in mainspace. ~Kvng (talk) 18:38, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Either it is bad enough to CSD, or it can be sent to main and tagged with NPOV. No need for this one. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:44, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

plot

This draft appears to be a plot summary. Wikipedia does not host articles consisting of only plot summaries. Articles about fictional subjects must cover their real-world context supported by multiple published secondary sources that:

  • provide significant coverage: discuss the work in detail, not just brief mentions or routine announcements;
  • are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
  • are independent: not connected to the subject, such as press releases, the subject's own website, or sponsored content.

Please add references that meet all three of these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.

Support

Oppose

  • The summary at WP:FICT says, "Fictional elements are expected to follow the same notability guidelines as any other topic." This should be removed as a decline reason or the message should be conformed to include the additional information included in the other topic-specific notability decline messages.
  • Should be removed. Nebulous and unclear, another rationale will apply. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:45, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

prof

This draft's references do not show that the subject meets Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion for academics. The draft requires either:

or multiple published secondary sources that:

  • provide significant coverage: discuss the subject in detail, not just brief mentions or routine announcements;
  • are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
  • are independent: not connected to the subject, such as interviews, press releases, the subject's own website, or sponsored content.

Please add references that meet these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.

Support

Oppose

redirect

This is not the correct place to request new redirects. Please follow the instructions at Wikipedia:Article wizard/Redirects.

Support

Oppose

  • Just create the redirect. MER-C 12:20, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

test

This draft appears to be a test edit. Please use the sandbox to practice editing. Do not submit this draft for review until you have written an article intended for the encyclopedia.

Support

Oppose

  • Needs a "tag for G2 speedy deletion" option. MER-C 12:15, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

v

This draft is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Wikipedia's verifiability policy requires that all content be supported by reliable sources.

  • Reliable sources include: reputable newspapers, magazines, academic journals, and books from respected publishers.
  • Unacceptable sources include: personal blogs, social media, predatory publishers, most tabloids, and websites where anyone can contribute.

Replace any unreliable sources with high-quality sources. If you cannot find a reliable source for the material, it should be removed.

Support

Oppose

  • I think this decline reason should be removed as an option. WP:V issues are not a reason to reject a draft. ~Kvng (talk) 19:26, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Oppose but completely different reasons than the above. Verifiability issues fail to establish notability, and can be rejected as notability issues. No need to keep both this and the notability reasons. Robert McClenon (talk) 21:49, 24 March 2018 (UTC)
  • I've seen this used as a rationale to decline because of lack of inline refs despite good refs appearing in the submission at the end in a bibliography. No need to keep this and the notability one. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:47, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

van

This draft has been declined because it meets one of these criteria:

  • attack page: it is created primarily to disparage, threaten, or harass a subject;
  • negative biography: it contains unsourced, negative material about a living person;
  • vandalism: it contains jokes, hoaxes, nonsense, or gibberish.

Drafts that meet these criteria may be deleted without notice.

Users who continue to create inappropriate pages may be blocked from editing Wikipedia.

Support

  • Wording is fine to post to the user's talkpage. Build a CSD tag into the script. Many editors don't remember to CSD it. Legacypac (talk) 15:45, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Looks OK. I believe pages that merit this declining are rare as I hardly come across them, but incorporating the CSD module like G12 will be useful. I support that. –Ammarpad (talk) 16:27, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Build it as an auto CSD. — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 05:48, 26 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Fine, but needs a CSD tag. MER-C 20:11, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

Oppose

web

This draft's references do not show that the subject meets Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion for web content. The draft requires multiple published secondary sources that:

  • provide significant coverage: discuss the subject in detail, not just brief mentions or routine announcements;
  • are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
  • are independent: not connected to the subject, such as the subject's own website, or sponsored content.

Please add references that meet all three of these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.

Support

Oppose

Big picture comments

All of the above strikes me as an explosion of verbosity, bloat, and complexity, and ignoring the WP:TL;DR effect. Much of the comments are likely very useful, but they belong on a talk page, either the draft talk page or user talk page, and not in a coloured box, but made to look like human correspondence. The draft page header declined notice should be short, to the point, and liking to the talk page with the verbose explanation.

More importantly, one of the main options should be the short simple “Rejected” template, not explaining, but firmly rejecting, and suitable for all the random but obviously not suitable, though not speediable, submissions. —SmokeyJoe (talk) 23:36, 14 June 2018 (UTC)

That's exactly what this page is attempting to do - cut down on the verbiage and get things to the "short and sweet" point. Primefac (talk) 14:51, 15 June 2018 (UTC)
Hi Primefac. I’m happy for this thread to be moved elsewhere if you think elsewhere is better.
I’m thinking ... not concluding ... these template comments are repeating things stated at the individual notability sub guideline pages, and in the interest of short and sweet, better not to do that. —SmokeyJoe (talk) 22:25, 15 June 2018 (UTC)
  • For all notability related declines, I would link User:Joe Decker/IsThisNotable just before the (re)Submit button, and ask the author to acknowledge and point out the two best sources. Do this instead of replicating notability sub guideline text. —SmokeyJoe (talk) 11:08, 16 June 2018 (UTC)

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