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Neutrality concerns (Billy Strachan)

I am currently reviewing the article Billy Strachan which has been nominated by The History Wizard of Cambridge. I hadn't really looked at the sourcing side of the article yet because I tend to do that towards the end of my reviews. The nominator has recently been the subject of this discussion on the administrators noticeboard about the neutrality of their editing. I have now been told that some of the main sources in the article are non-neutral. It would be helpful to have some advice on what to do here. Llewee (talk) 11:01, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

See also Talk:David Ivon Jones/GA1, and I have lodged source-to-text integrity and paraphrasing/copyvio concerns also at Talk:Billy Strachan. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 12:03, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
Additionally, Trevor Carter will need a GAR if the issues aren't corrected (POV as well as the same sourcing issues and puffery). SandyGeorgia (Talk) 12:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
And see also the FAC for Strachan where many of the sources were deemed unreliable. Hog Farm Talk 15:55, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
And see the ANI for BLP vios now as well. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:01, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
I've learned to always do the source checks first. If there's something that isn't immediately apparent but can bring the review to a halt, it's almost certainly going to be found there. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 16:30, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
If only that had happened at most of WP:DCGAR, where AGF took over after a certain number of GAs. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 17:09, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
Yeah, got to say the best (in terms of learning for me) GA review I had was my first. I'm not saying that the others were bad - they were good also - it's just that having a microscope run over your sources and how you used them was a really useful experience that wasn't repeated to the same degree in the subsequent GA reviews. Hopefully that's because my use of sourcing was better in the latter articles! FOARP (talk) 08:04, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
This is something I've given a lot of thought to the last few weeks, having reviewed ~30 articles for the drive. I've both learned and taught a lot about Wikipedia best practices through the GAN and FAC processes. I've started to make a point of going into a little more detail when explaining corrections if the nominator has no previous GAs. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 16:24, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

@FOARP and Thebiguglyalien: FYI,

SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:28, 27 August 2023 (UTC)

Proposed wording change to WP:CITE

As a result of a recent conversation at a FAC, I have proposed a wording change to WP:CITE. Please comment there if interested. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 19:07, 27 August 2023 (UTC)

The change to CITE has been made. I have now suggested a corresponding change to the close paraphrasing essay, here. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:50, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

Close paraphrasing in a GA review from a prolific nominator

I found some minor close paraphrasing in Talk:William L. Keleher/GA1 (not enough to quickfail the review on its own but there were other more serious issues that led me to quickfail it). As the nominator has 45 approved GAs and multiple ongoing nominations, further attention may be warranted. —David Eppstein (talk) 23:40, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

Could you post the comparison? It would be easier for commenting if we could see it side by side. PMC (talk) 00:54, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
Source : Father Keleher was born January 27, 1906, in Woburn, Massachusetts. After attending Boston College High School, he graduated from the College of the Holy Cross and entered the Society of Jesus in 1926. He was ordained a priest in June 1937. Before his appointment as president he served as assistant to the Jesuit Provincial and as director of Jesuit novices.
Our article as reviewed: Keleher was born on January 27, 1906, in Woburn, Massachusetts. He studied at Boston College High School and then the College of the Holy Cross. Keleher entered the Society of Jesus in 1926. He was ordained a priest in June 1937. He then became the assistant to the Jesuit provincinal superior. On November 1, 1942, he was made the province's master of novices.
Source : Father Keleher was later professor, administrator and trustee at Holy Cross College. He was also associated with the Jesuit retreat house in North Andover, Mass. Three brothers and a sister survive.
Our article as reviewed: Keleher was a professor, administrator, and trustee at the College of the Holy Cross. He also was worked at Campion Hall, the Jesuit retreat center in North Andover, Massachusetts. ... Three brothers and one sister were alive at the time of his death.
David Eppstein (talk) 01:37, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
That doesn't look good to me. (t · c) buidhe 01:38, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
It's not the best look, but a lot of it is basic biographical fact that's hard to restate. PMC (talk) 01:55, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
Which is why I put it at the level of not serious enough to be the main cause of a quickfail. But it's a lot of text to be so similar. —David Eppstein (talk) 03:43, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
Close paraphrasing is the right term to use. It may be simple biographical fact but wording and sentence structure needs to be changed from the source more substantially than this. — Bilorv (talk) 22:11, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

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