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Editor Richhoncho and I seem to have reached an impasse on this style issue. This arose in the context of musician categories. Many musicians are commonly known by names other than their full legal names, and I think category descriptions ought to use these names. Richhoncho believes we need to show artists' legal names as well as their "stage" names, and he would have:

  • Songs written or co-written by Jewel Kilcher, professionally known as Jewel (singer).
  • Songs written or co-written by Chancelor Bennett, known professionally as Chance the Rapper.
  • Songs written or co-written by Ian Fraser Kilmister, professionally known as Lemmy.

I think these should instead be:

  • This category contains songs written or co-written by Jewel.
  • This category contains songs written or co-written by Chance the Rapper.
  • This category contains songs written or co-written by Lemmy.

In my view, WP:COMMONNAME implies that a person should be referred to by the name most commonly used in independent and reliable sources, which is almost always the same as the article's name (without a disambiguation parenthetical, obviously). I think a subject's full name, when it differs from her common name, should typically only be mentioned in that subject's biography.

As far as I know, that's what's done in article space: Ruth Bader Ginsburg was appointed to the Supreme Court by Bill Clinton, not William Jefferson Clinton. Jay Z discography talks about Jay Z, not Jay Z, the stage name of Shawn Corey Carter. Lady Gaga videography makes no mention of the fact that Lady Gaga's "real" name is Stefani Joanne Angelina Germanotta; if a full-length, featured article about an artist's discography doesn't need to mention her legal name, surely, a category description—something intended to be much shorter—ought to leave it out as well?

Thanks in advance for any input. Rebbing 22:40, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Additional question: Richhoncho has clarified that he thinks the disambiguation parenthetical needs to be in the descriptive prose, so we would have: "This category contains songs written by Jewel Kilcher, professionally known as Jewel (singer)." In my view, this is not acceptable, as Jewel Kilcher has never been known as "Jewel (singer)." A newspaper article would write about Jewel or Madonna, not "Jewel (singer)" or "Madonna (entertainer)." Rebbing 23:37, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Two suggestions, feel free to reject:
  • Songs written or co-written by Jewel Kilcher, professionally known as Jewel. Certainly no need for disambiguation as it's referring to the person not the article. If it was pointing to the article as reference, then you'd say something like "For more information, see Jewel (singer)."
  • Songs written or co-written by Jewel, credited as Jewel Kilcher. Focuses on "common name" but offers the additional information of full name under which writing credits are typically given but not always transparent on Wikipedia. --StarcheerspeaksnewslostwarsTalk to me 00:09, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
It has to be the first version, "Jewel" has never written a song, that's a marketing name for the singer/entertainer. Jewel Kilcher wrote the songs. The fact they are one and the same needs to be explained. I note I have not been piping properly and that gives me something to correct! NB I never said that it should not be piped. --Richhoncho (talk) 00:26, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
By the same argument, "Bill Clinton" never signed anything into law. Rebbing 00:33, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
What name is shown on the sheet music? It's normally at the top right of the first page of score. --Redrose64 (talk) 07:39, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
@Redrose64:. Because Jewel is such a common term I searched Lady Gaga and in every instance on official sheet music where the name of the author was given it was given as Stefani Germanotta. This is continued at her royalty collection agency, BMI]. This is standard practice, and as I understand it, a legal requirement that the author of a work is credited as such. If songs were only written and recorded by the singer/named artists there would be no need for WP to explain the different names. This is totally different to the "Bill Clinton" example being rolled out as an analogy. Cheers. --Richhoncho (talk) 09:05, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
OK, you're confirming what I had assumed. --Redrose64 (talk) 10:09, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
@Redrose64: While it's apparently common practice, I don't believe there's any legal requirement behind it. See 17 U.S.C. § 401(b)(3), which says that a copyright notice shall include "the name of the owner of copyright in the work, or an abbreviation by which the name can be recognized, or a generally known alternative designation of the owner," e.g.., a stage name. I looked through my sheet music, and I found three artists being credited under their stage names in the scores: Alicia Keys (Alicia Augello Cook), Ashlee Simpson (Ashley Nicolle Simpson Næss; Ashlee Simpson is explicitly identified as a stage name by her article), and Shakira (first name of Shakira Ripoll). Rebbing 12:41, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
I created the Alecia Keys and Ashlee Simpson songwriting categories and neither of them make reference to "other names" in any way, shape or form. It wasn't necessary. Mentioning those two categories in this discussion is missing the point of the discussion. Jay Z is often credited as Shawn Carter (or S. Carter) and it does not seem that ridiculous to make a mention in the article and the songwriting category (other categories are not relevant and never have been). You have confirmed immediately below this post that some kind of explanation is necessary where there is a discrepancy between credited name and stage name. I do not see what you are now arguing. That leaves us with a discussion with what the wording in the songwriting categories should be when there is notable divergence between birth name and stage name (I assume nobody is going to bring up Tony -v- Anthony etc). I say, quite correctly, that people write songs and not marketing names, in the example of Kilcher and Lady Gaga I have proven this, in the case of Shakira, you have proven that there are exceptions. Do I need to look at more examples to prove my point? --Richhoncho (talk) 13:58, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
You miss my point. You said above that it's standard practice for artists to be credited under their legal names and that this is a legal requirement. But, as I've shown, this is not the case: some artists are credited under their legal names, some under their stage names. Both are common; there is no legal requirement one way or another. Rebbing 15:08, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
The second version would be fine by me. I don't think the first option is unreasonable, but it seems to me to be inconsistent with how artists are referred to in articles about their songs. Rebbing 00:33, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
The descriptions (or notes, as they are often called) to categories should certainly contain any information necessary to avoid common confusions. I can't see any reason not to - frankly almost no-one ever looks at them anyway. You are not talking about the full legal name, but the form of their name they use in their credits, often different. "Songs written or co-written by Jewel, credited as Jewel Kilcher" is better - "Songs written or co-written by Jewel Kilcher, professionally known as Jewel" is no good, as she presumably uses both names "professionally", one as a stage name & the other for her copyrights & credits. Other wordings are possible. In such cases I'd personally be open to disambiguated category names. Johnbod (talk) 13:03, 28 May 2016 (UTC)

No, per WP:COMMONNAME. Yes, it seems complicated when we're dealing with artists, and artists formerly known as (RIP Prince). But are we really going to move Category:Joseph Stalin to Category:Joseph Jughashvili? Heck, if we went by birth names, we'd have to move the categories of nearly every Pope since Pope Saint Peter (Category:Peter the Apostle). Oh, wait, he was originally named Simon, even that doesn't work. o_O -- Kendrick7talk 15:54, 28 May 2016 (UTC) All the flowers that you planted, momma, in the back yard, just use common names, ooh ooh ooh ahhh

MOSBIO proposal needs more participation

Seeking more participation for my proposal at Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Biographies#A slight expansion of MOS:JR.

The proposal has been quiet for 10 days, stalemated around a relatively minor detail. To wit: After considering the recent changes to MOS:JR, which established a default of no comma in John Doe Jr., which of the following surname-first forms should be preferred: Doe, John Jr. or Doe, John, Jr.?

Your participation is needed. If you !vote, please first read all of the discussion, including that in the "Extended discussion" subsection. Mandruss  17:40, 28 May 2016 (UTC)

MoS RfC notice

Pointer to relevant discussion elsewhere.

Please participate in the discussion at Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Images#Proposed repeal of WP:NOETHNICGALLERIES. It is a proposal to vacate the previous consensus reached in the February 2016 RfC that resulted in the creation of the MOS:NOETHNICGALLERIES provision at MOS:IMAGES, and also relates thematically to Wikipedia:Village pump (policy)/Archive 127#RfC: Ethnicity in infoboxes (all of these discussions are ultimately about using infoboxes to identify individuals as members of particular ethnicities, and this relates also to MOS:IDENTITY).  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  17:09, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Request for Comment: Quotes and italics (at MoS:Comics)

Pointer to relevant discussion elsewhere.

This discussion seems to be going around in circles—it could use some input from editors outside of WP:COMICS. The discussion is regarding whether we should use italics or quotemarks for ongoing features. The discussion is a Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Comics#Request for Comment: Quotes and italics. Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 22:31, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

Question about template shortcuts

Should templates not be consistent and not be different from page to page?

I have a question: Why are there template shortcuts? E.g., is it okay if one page uses {{not to be confused with}}, another uses {{confuse}}, and another uses {{confused}}, all of which are the same template? Many templates have many shortcuts, and I think it is rather confusing and messy.

If I am going to add a template to a page, which name of the template do I use?
PapíDimmi (talk) 02:20, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

Why are there template shortcuts? Convenience; same reason there are page shortcuts, like WP:MOS. It’s much quicker and simpler to type {{cn}} or {{fact}} than {{Citation needed}}. You do have a point, though, that multiple in-use names for things can be confusing.
As for which name you should use… that’s the whole point of shortcuts: it doesn’t matter. They all mean the same thing. —67.14.236.50 (talk) 03:37, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
Shortcuts for Wikipedia namespace articles are merely redirects; they do not interfere with anything. The same templates are used with different names throughout articles, which makes it messy and confusing. Would it not be better if all templates in all articles were the same? Besides, readers can get confused by the shortcut and not understand what the template does when editing the source.
PapíDimmi (talk) 03:52, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
You are wrong: A template "shortcut" is in fact a redirect. --Izno (talk) 11:22, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
I am aware of that, but some articles use some shortcuts and other articles use other shortcuts. There is a rule that we should link to the actual article and not a redirect, but why is there not a rule that we should use the full name of the template?
PapíDimmi (talk) 21:07, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
There's no "rule" that we should link to the article title and not a redirect. There are often good reasons to link to a redirect; see WP:NOTBROKEN. Peter coxhead (talk) 22:04, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
@Peter coxhead: I thought that redirects serve as a way for people to find the correct article if they do not go to the exact link of the article. I have seen on many other wikis that linking to redirects is prohibited, therefore I thought that it was prohibited on Wikipedia as well. Since redirects might often change, I thought it was good practice to link to the actual article rather than a redirect to the article, as doing otherwise may lead to the link leading to a broken redirect. Still, I, personally, think that it is messy to use a bunch of different names for the same template, as well as linking to redirects as opposed to the actual name of the article.
PapíDimmi (talk) 22:28, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
I thought that redirects serve as a way for people to find the correct article if they do not go to the exact link of the article. Just so. And the “correct article” may change over time, with merges and splits and new articles. That’s one of the good reasons to intentionally link to a redirect (which may in fact redirect to a subsection of the appropriate article). As for broken redirects, it’s best practice to use tools like Special:WhatLinksHere to ensure that doesn’t happen.
But back to your original question. Basically, we have different names for some templates because editors have gotten used to using different names for them. You can of course feel free to recommend deletion for any you find unnecessary at WP:XfD. —67.14.236.50 (talk) 23:17, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
Often the templates were once different, but someone noticed that they performed the same task, and consolidated them. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:24, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
If an article links to an article and uses the correct title rather than a redirect, it will turn into a redirect if the article it links to is renamed, but if it links to a redirect page, it will turn into a broken redirect. Therefore, it is better to link to the actual article, is it not?
PapíDimmi (talk) 01:40, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
Not always, for the reasons explained above. When an article is moved, it's the responsibility of the mover to fix any double redirects. Peter coxhead (talk) 05:48, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

MOS RfC notice: Former names of transgender people, in the lead of bio articles

Pointer to relevant discussion elsewhere.

Please comment at Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Biographies#RfC: Allow inclusion of former names in lead section of biographies covering transgender and non-binary people. There are multiple proposals on the table to refine wording that emerged from Village Pump discussions on the matter last year.  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  04:49, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

Google whasname?

I know there is a google page that allows you to track word usage in sources through the years, and compare it to similar text usages (it's very handy when trying to resolve move discussions)... I have used it several times before... but not in a while... and now I can't remember what the hell it's actually called. Any help? Blueboar (talk) 20:45, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

https://books.google.com/ngrams EEng 20:46, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
That's it... Thanks (kicking myself for not remembering that). Blueboar (talk) 21:04, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
What does this have to do with the Manual of Style? (Also: /r/tipofmytongue.)
PapíDimmi (talk) 21:32, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
nothing directly... But indirectly, an n-gram search can often show how style has changed over time (or how it is in the process of changing today). Blueboar (talk) 22:51, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
Yes, but use with caution. You can very easily produce grossly misleading statistics with this thing (and anyone experienced with the tool will notice). The date ranges often need to be constrained to stick to modern usage (e.g. 1980s onward, sometimes even more recent, depending on the question at hand). When comparing lowercase vs. capitalized, tricks have to be used to prevent it giving results from Headings Capitalized in Title Case, e.g. by prefixing words like "a", "the" or "of", in lowercase, that would very frequently appear before the intended search term if used in running prose, and do multiple such tests to ensure the results are consistent and not flukes. And so on. We really need to write up a WP:NGRAMS page on how to use and not use this tool. It has other vagaries. E.g., it does not work at all on material containing commas (there doesn't even seem to be a way to escape-code them). Also, one can sometimes input not-terribly-rare constructions into it and get zero or near-zero results, yet get fair numbers of results for genuine rarities, showing that the data set is woefully incomplete and not always statistically significant. I'm not privy to exactly what the selection criteria have been for generating the corpora that it uses, but it appears to focus heavily on public domain works, which means it has a broad and high-quality data set for old material (early 1920s and older), but narrower and worse source data for newer material. Statistical significance can also be affected in two other ways: Raw frequency (it will draw you a graph that looks impressive but might be based on a grand total of two sources), and the default graph smoothing, which distorts the data more and more the fewer the sources are, and/or the more inconsistent it is. And so on. I would love to pick the brain of someone who worked significantly on that project at Google to find out what all the issues with it are. And the corpora have not been updated since 2012 (for some of them, and 2008 for others). All that said, it is good for things where two or more variants, without punctuation other than hyphens, are common (Muammar Qadaffi, Muammar Gadaffi, Muammar al Qadaffi, Muammar al Gadaffi, Muammar al-Qadaffi, etc.).  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  10:41, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
The n-grams ended in 2008, fading further back into the mists of history with each passing hour. I've asked before and nobody has answered, why did they stop then? There must have been a reason from google. It was a good tool but seems dated now. Randy Kryn 15:49, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
It's sure not a good tool for investigating recentisms. I wonder whether 2008 is enough for assessing how much (early) Wikipedia has affected usage in books. Dicklyon (talk) 22:35, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
Did someone spell Gaddafi? But Google never forgets..... does it? Martinevans123 (talk) 22:53, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

For example, should [[America]]'s (America's) or [[America|America's]] (America's) be used?

I have looked far and wide in the manual of style and its subpages, but I cannot find any information on this (there are so many policies).

Are there any rules on this?

I, personally, prefer the first example, as it is much more easy to write and read in the source editor; however, I guess the latter looks better when reading the article.
PapíDimmi (talk) 19:01, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

I'm sure this was discussed a few weeks ago, possibly on a user talk page - IIRC somebody was being pulled up for altering one form to the other. Don't recall which way they were going though. --Redrose64 (talk) 19:22, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
Well, we do need an answer. I guess there are no policies about this? There should be. This needs to be resolved! Bring justice to Wikipedia!
PapíDimmi (talk) 20:19, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
Keep looking. There was definitely a long, ridiculous discussion on this within the last six months or so. EEng 20:48, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
It is pretty strange that Wikipedia, which has so many policies that is is impossible to read them all, does not seem to have any information on this. It may have information on this in a policy article; however, I have read all policies about links, apostrophes, possessives, etc., and I have not found anything. Also, @EEng and @Redrose64, I have no idea where this “long discussion” took place. I would appreciate if someone could give me the link, if you find it (I cannot, though, as I have no clue about this discussion).
PapíDimmi (talk) 10:13, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
  • See WP:PIPE. This isn't a style matter, really, since it doesn't affect the output for readers, it's just a code efficiency issue. There's no practical difference between the two except for editors, and any experienced editor will compress [[America|America's]] down to [[America]]'s on sight. (That said, if you're using "America's" to mean "the United States'", you're making a mistake.  :-)  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  10:22, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
No, there's a difference -- look closely at the rendered output. I found the discussion I was thinking of -- Wikipedia_talk:Manual_of_Style/Linking/Archive_18#Saxon_genitive_and_piping -- and had forgotten that it was I, apparently, who put the final dismissive kabosh on it. (Any discussion that starts with someone fussing about the "Saxon genetive" can't lead to anything worthwhile.) My standard reasoning for why MOS should not opine on many things is at User:EEng#A_rolling_stone_gathers_no_MOS. EEng 12:54, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

Based on reviewing previous discussion, it appears that the "rule" is that the style should be consistent within an article; so if an article is inconsistent, changing some links to make it consistent is a good thing. But changing from one consistent style to another is frowned on, and is a waste of time at this point when different editors have different opinions of which is preferred and might be moving things in opposite directions. This is why having the MOS express a preference would be a good thing (and yes it is an MOS issue as it affects how the link renders). Dicklyon (talk) 15:10, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

Violently disagree. If we don't need a MOS rule on something, then we need to not have a MOS rule on that thing, because there's way too much MOSbloat as it is. And unless there's definite evidence that editors are wasting time litigating and relitigating this on multiple articles, then we don't need a rule. EEng 16:41, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

Ideally this should be fixed in the rendering engine. Has this ever been discussed? Is there a reason it can't easily be done? Pburka (talk) 19:24, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

WP:BIKESHEDDING. There's no such thing as something that can "easily be done" -- the system is much too complicated and there's too much at stake. Maybe it would have been better had a different decision been made 15 years ago (though not everyone agrees on that -- see the discussion I linked earlier) but it's too late now. It works the way it works, it's easy to get whichever form of output you want via one syntax or the other, there's no evidence this is causing a problem, and there are much much more important things we need from developers. This is a complete waste of time over something trivial. EEng 22:00, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
Bike shed?? "Don't go too fast, but I go pretty far.... " Martinevans123 (talk) 22:13, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
I had assumed that everyone would agree that linking partial words looks awkward and that we should prefer to link full words. However, after reading that discussion I'm reminded that there are more opinions around here than dreamt of in my philosophies. Pburka (talk) 23:26, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
Welcome to Wikipedia. EEng 23:59, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

In areas of minutiae that don't affect what readers see, I ask this question: Is the editing community spending a ton of time arguing about it? If so, I support a guideline just to put an end to the massive misuse of editor resources. If we are not spending tons of time on it, I tend to oppose a guideline per WP:CREEP. To my knowledge, this issue falls into the latter category, which is not to say that there will not always be local, many times heated skirmishes among lower-experience editors. Mandruss  00:12, 11 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, at the risk of repeating myself, I again offer my personal guidelines for when not to have a MOS rule -- User:EEng#A_rolling_stone_gathers_no_MOS. I note again, however, that this does affect what the reader sees (though in such a retiring way that apparently both you and McCandlish failed to see it.) EEng 01:14, 11 June 2016 (UTC)

Exclamation mark in proper name used as punctuation?

Our Wham! article mostly treats the name of the duo as though the "!" was not there (freely writing "Wham!'s" and so on), which I think is the right way to go, but then it includes the sentence

The Chinese opted for Wham!

Without a period after it, does this not look to anyone else like the exclamation mark is used to express surprise or some other emotion at the Chinese government's decision? Hijiri 88 (やや) 13:11, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

The exclamation mark is simply stylistic and shouldn't be included in running text. The Yahoo and Seven (1995 film) articles are a good examples of how to handle this. However, this opinion may be somewhat controversial, especially among music editors (see deadmau5). Pburka (talk) 14:52, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Trademarks. sroc 💬 05:20, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

Expand the wording in MOS:POPCULT

MOS:POPCULT currently states:

"these sections ["in popular culture" sections] are frequently just lists of appearances and mentions, many of them unencyclopedically trivial"

There is no further information of what separates significant coverage from trivial coverage. This is explained in Wikipedia:"In_popular_culture"_content#Good_and_bad_popular_culture_references:

(1) "Although some references may be plainly verified by primary sources, this does not demonstrate the significance of the reference."
(2) "a cultural references section [...] should be reserved for major, in-depth treatments of the subject that have had lasting significance"

I would very much like the first quote, and if possible the second quote, to be part of the policy. Otherwise, it's very hard to understand what "unencyclopedically trivial" means, and further elaboration is needed. There are very good contributors who have been contributing to Wikipedia for years who believe a primary source is a valid source for "in popular culture" material, and that minor, trivial coverage is valid. "In popular culture" mentions should have sources that show the significance of the reference, not just a verification that the reference exists, and adding (1) and (2) to the policy will greatly clarify this position. BrightRoundCircle (talk) 18:01, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

The proposer is currently trying to argue for this same interpretation in an AFD that is still open; posting this here simultaneously smacks of WP:FORUMSHOPPING and an attempt to legislate the AFD's end result due to their failure to gain a consensus for their interpretation in that discussion. postdlf (talk) 18:07, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
This is a global Wikipedia policy that applies to thousands of articles. That one specific article aside, what do you think about the policy? BrightRoundCircle (talk) 18:12, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
One of the items you cite is a vague guideline, and the other is a personal essay. Where are you getting global Wikipedia policy that applies to thousands of articles from?  Iridescent 18:14, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
How many articles do you think MOS:POPCULT applies to? BrightRoundCircle (talk) 18:18, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
Oh, sorry, it's a guideline, not a policy. Still applies to thousands of articles though. Is this the wrong place to discuss guidelines? BrightRoundCircle (talk) 18:20, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
Theoretically this page is for discussion of guidelines as well as policy, but realistically any change to the MOS which isn't discussed at WT:MOS is just going to be reverted. Changing the MOS would be a lot of work for minimal benefit; it's explicitly not policy for a reason, just "this is how we generally do things" guidance, and there's certainly no rule that any article is expected to follow the MOS nor is there ever likely to be one.  Iridescent 18:35, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
The MOS:POPCULT guideline (and not-guidelines (1) and (2) that I mentioned) are linked to WP:PRIMARY. I want to emphasize the following:
"Do not analyze, evaluate, interpret, or synthesize material found in a primary source yourself; instead, refer to reliable secondary sources that do so. Do not base an entire article on primary sources, and be cautious about basing large passages on them."
In particular, I'd like this policy (WP:PRIMARY) to be clarified in the guideline (MOS:POPCULT) the way it is clarified in the essay in sentences (1) and (2). For example, someone finds a song that contain the lyrics "dinosaur". They want to add this song to dinosaurs in popular culture. Judging by WP:PRIMARY, this is analysis or synthesis. Some Wikipedians would argue this: "the song contains the lyric "dinosaur", and songs are part of popular culture, therefore it is a reference to dinosaurs in popular culture, and it is adequate to use a primary source to add this information to the article." Adding this information to the article should require a secondary source that not only notes that the song exists and that it has lyrics about dinosaurs, but also that the song is significant to dinosaurs in popular culture in some way. This is what (1) and (2) clarify.
If this is the wrong place to discuss this, should it be discussed on WT:MOS? BrightRoundCircle (talk) 18:58, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
That would be a good place to discuss it, yes. --Izno (talk) 19:31, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
I have created a RfC on the topic. BrightRoundCircle (talk) 15:28, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

Tense shift?

I was just reading Grand Theft Auto (film), whose opening paragraph said before I made a slight tweak

It was Howard's feature film directorial debut and features himself as Sam Freeman and Nancy Morgan as Paula Powers in the leading roles

The sentence is overwritten anyway, but of concern here is the "It was ... and features". Obviously saying "It is Howard's feature film directorial debut" would not make sense now that Howard has directed other films, and the current wording is only a problem if one things really hard about it, but wouldn't "and featured" be better in this case?

Hijiri 88 (やや) 11:46, 8 June 2016 (UTC)

“Is” and “features” or “was” and “featured.” “Was” and “featured” makes no sense grammatically, as far as I am aware.
PapíDimmi (talk) 19:04, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
I think the tense change is OK in English. It would be more jarring in some other languages. But the debut is in the past, whereas the featuring is ongoing.
The worse problem is the misuse of "himself". Just "him" is correct; "himself" is an error. --Trovatore (talk) 19:23, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
Agreed with Trovatore. The tense change is an illusion. The "was" and the "features" refer to two different things. Comparable construction: "My dog died last year, and is buried behind my garden." If anyone thinks such a construction will be awkward, they can fork it into two sentences.  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  10:19, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
@Trovatore: I knew that was the worse problem. That was why I had already corrected it before posting here. I quoted the earlier version of the sentence to emphasize that I definitely wasn't imagining things with regard to the sentence being poorly constructed. But yeah, I can basically see what you and SMcCandlish are talking about. I guess I was just reminded of the Frasier episode where the title character read a limerick about himself in a bathroom stall "There once was a man, Frasier Crane, who says he can feel your pain". But the problem with that is really that the implication of the first part is that Frasier no longer "is", but the latter part is in the present tense. :P Hijiri 88 (やや) 13:23, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
I think a comma would be appropriate there. “It was …, and it features ….” Makes more sense to me than combining a historical event and a description in the same clause. (If anyone disagrees, please note that I edited the article accordingly.) —67.14.236.50 (talk) 22:49, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

There is currently an MOS-related RM discussion at TALK:Universal Grammar. Primergrey (talk) 23:45, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

Question about template:definition needed

Why does this inline maintenance tag wikilink to MoS? {{definition needed|date=June 2016}}

Looks like this[definition needed] when in use. How is this helpful? Ping me back. Cheers! {{u|Checkingfax}} {Talk} 23:42, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Style

I might not be spotting it anywhere in the MOS or at Wikipedia:Piped link, but which is preferred: [[Single-stock futures|SSF]]s or [[Single-stock futures|SSFs]] ? I never received a response at Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Linking. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 16:16, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

I think when you're already piping the link, the former is preferable (spell-checking, mostly). --Izno (talk) 17:28, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
@Izno: Can we note this in the MOS please? ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 18:15, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
Is there a reason you think that it is necessary? --Izno (talk) 18:43, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
The two forms render identically, so it's not an MOS issue at all, I think. Pburka (talk) 22:23, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
There are JavaScripts that change it to the latter when they do other Common Fixes. Cheers! {{u|Checkingfax}} {Talk} 23:48, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Comma Rules: I did not see on comma a rule on separating independent clauses.

John hit Bill, and Bill screamed. But not: John, and Bill screamed. And not: John jumped, and screamed. Compound subjects & predicates are not separated internally by a comma. Should these rules be added to the list? Also it appears that editors have the useless habit of setting off prepositional phrases with commas. Should there be a rule about not separating prepositional phrases with commas unless there is some other rule which demands it? (PeacePeace (talk) 20:46, 22 June 2016 (UTC))

We don't prescribe grammatical rules, these can vary like WP:ENGVAR. But I suggest that everybody should read Eats, Shoots & Leaves by Lynne Truss. --Redrose64 (talk) 23:26, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
That book looks like a fun read. Thanks for telling me about it. (PeacePeace (talk) 20:19, 23 June 2016 (UTC))

RfC: Title formatting (italics vs quotations) for recurring features


What formatting should be used for recurring features within other packages (TV shows, magazines, newspaper inserts)? Italics, quotemarks, captialization, other? Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 21:39, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Rationale

This came up at MOS:COMICS, and it turns out that it's an issue throughout Wikipedia. For example:

Some things to keep in mind:

  • Whether a feature occurs within another package or not is incidental, as such feature can and are repackaged:
    • TV segments can be lifted from their original shows and used as filler between other shows
    • The Japanese comics series Ranma ½ was a recurring feature in the comics magazine Weekly Shōnen Sunday in Japan, but the content was repackaged as an independent comic book in the US.

In the above cases, should we flip-flop between quotemarks and italics for identical content depending on publication format?

  • Context: this came up over a disagreement over the title formatting of the comic strip Little Annie Fanny.

Discussion

We should use italics for recurring features in all cases—the physical packaging should be irrelevant, as it is often treated so. Anything else is instruction creep and would bring up endless corner cases to argue about. There is no advantage to
  • The "CT opens an RFC" episode of "Curly Turkey's Endless Griping" in issue No. 45 of WikipediMOS
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  • The "CT opens an RFC" episode of Curly Turkey's Endless Griping in issue No. 45 of WikipediMOS
while in the latter, we don't have to keep in mind whether Curly Turkey's Endless Griping appears within or without something (the answer to which may be "both"). Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 21:39, 17 June 2016 (UTC)
  • There are already established practices, see MOS:TITLE and these are repeated at e.g. WP:WHO/MOS#General. --Redrose64 (talk) 22:44, 17 June 2016 (UTC)
    If it is, it's far from obvious. Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 23:22, 17 June 2016 (UTC)
    Redrose64: As we're having trouble seeing the answer, could you tell us? Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 00:00, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
    WP:MOS#Italics-Titles. --Redrose64 (talk) 07:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
    Redrose64: I can promise you I was familiar with that before I opened this RfC. I do not see a clear answer, and we continue to dispute it at MOS:COMICS. It would be helpful if you could give us your interpretation of how it applies to the above examples. Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 08:33, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
    The guideline is clear that a series is italicized and an episode is quotemarked. I suppose there are different possible interpretations:
  1. Like a series name, the name of a repeating feature names a whole series of contributions rather than an individual contribution on a particular day, so it should be treated like a series (i.e. italicized).
  2. Like an episode name, the name of a repeating feature names something hierarchically below a series, so it should be treated like an episode (i.e. quotemarked).
Formatting like a series (italicized) would have the advantage of allowing a consistent rule for formatting the name of a particular day's / issue's instance of the repeating feature (quotemarked).
--Boson (talk) 13:00, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Finally some recognition that the guidance isn't clear. Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 22:30, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Is a section in a newspaper ("Sports") a recurring feature? That, I believe, is always quote-marked. --Izno (talk) 00:09, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
    • I think a section in a newspaper is more akin to a chapter. A better newspaper analogy might be a syndicated column, as those typically appear in several papers and may be published in other formats. Examples might include Dear Abby, Savage Love, or "The Straight Dope" (each formatted here as they appear in their main articles). Pburka (talk) 00:04, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Block quotes

Hi SMcCandlish, that section has always been problematic because it's based on a narrow view of what a pull quote is and how it should be used (or, if you prefer, the section narrows itself to pull quotes). I see it violated all the time, including by me, so it can't be said to have consensus. That's why I removed "and variants" because it extended the section to unnamed templates that people might be using quite happily. SarahSV (talk) 21:51, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Tooltip needed/capitalization?

For "number" (No.), does it need to be written as No. as the example says in MOS:NUMBERSIGN or can it be written as No. as the preface of the section says? Also, does No. necessarily need to be capitalized if it does not begin a new sentence? As in "They were defeated by the no. 1 team in the country." Benhen1997 14:16, 25 June 2016 (UTC)

To answer the second part of the question, I take it to mean always "No. 1" not "no. 1". Primergrey (talk) 23:28, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Are editions of major works also major works?

If a video game has a “Game of the Year Edition,” or an album has a “Collector’s Edition,” or a movie has a “Director’s Cut” release, should the edition name be italicized as well (per MOS:T#Major works)? Is “Game of the Year Edition” considered a partial title, part of the name of the major work, for instance Uncharted 3: Drake’s Deception: Game of the Year Edition? (If so, should we also say “they released a Game of the Year Edition”?) A brief internal search shows italics (and even capitalization) inconsistently applied to such labels, at least in video game articles:

  • Call of Duty 2 does not italicize “Special Edition” or “Game of the Year Edition,” and doesn’t even capitalize “a collector’s edition” or “the mobile version”.
  • The Elder Scrolls III: Morrowind italicizes “Game of the Year Edition” both with the game title (with and without a preceding colon) and on its own, but not “Special Edition Soundtrack.”
  • Batman: Arkham Asylum has “Game of the Year edition” roman with a small E, but italicizes “a Collector’s Edition.”

One of the goals of the Manual of Style is to encourage consistency across WIkipedia. To that end, should MOS:T#Major works be edited to address this? What should it say? —67.14.236.50 (talk) 22:29, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

  • Here’s my own answer: Personally, I’d advise against treating any “edition” label as a part of the work title proper unless there isn’t any doubt that it is a separate creative work: the Payday 2 demo, Doom Game of the Year edition, but Dead Island Definitive Edition or Blade Runner: The Final Cut. Also, lone edition names should not be treated as proper names unless they’re being used non-generically to refer to a distinct creative work: the collector’s edition comes with a plush Cyberdemon, and a director’s cut was released the next year, but the Director’s Cut changes the whole tone of the film.
    I’m not going to push this position; I’ll be more than happy with any reasoned approach. —67.14.236.50 (talk) 23:10, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Does this need clarification? Titles are italicized and if the phrase is part of the title, it is similarly italicized. Usually it's best to avoid long awkward titles, in which case I would reference it as the "Game of the Year" edition (without italics). Depends how you're using the phrase. The above examples make sense prima facie, save for the Batman collector's edition example, which shouldn't be italicized. I am no longer watching this page—ping if you'd like a response czar 23:18, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
    @Czar: How is it determined what is or isn’t part of the work title? If a phrase is added on to the end of the title, does that become part of it regardless of whether the work is changed? —67.14.236.50 (talk) 23:27, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
    As with all titles, we follow the lead of our secondary sources. If they are italicizing "Game of the Year" as a subtitle, we do too. If there is confusion as to whether it's part of the title, local consensus on the talk page should figure it out, and WT:VG is a good subsequent forum. czar 23:45, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
    I think 67.14.236.50 said it absolutely correctly. Walter Görlitz (talk) 04:43, 3 June 2016 (UTC)
    @Walter Görlitz: Thanks! But are you referring to my proposed solution, or my reply to Czar? —67.14.236.50 (talk) 04:44, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
    Pretty much everything you wrote was spot on. Walter Görlitz (talk) 05:10, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Eliminate all coverage of video games by deleting the articles, because debates over trivia like titles of special editions and genres takes up huge amounts of editor time, including at ANI, for no reason. EEng 05:08, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
    @EEng: Frustrated joking aside, what do you think we could do for a genuine solution to that problem? —67.14.236.50 (talk) 01:35, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
    OK, I apologize for making light of an issue that's truly causing trouble for you. I don't have an answer. Sorry. EEng 02:45, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
    From your comment, I’d assumed it was causing trouble for you. But now I’m confused as to why you posted at all. —67.14.236.50 (talk) 05:16, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
    No direct problem for me, but I've seen huge amounts of time wasted dealing with genre and title warrior at ANI. EEng 20:49, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
  • If we don’t get more responses here, I’ll try making a bold edit to MOS:T#Major works in the next few days, something along the lines of my earlier suggestion. —67.14.236.50 (talk) 03:19, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
    RFCs customarily run for 30 days. Given the lack of response, that would indicate a "no consensus", and where dealing with a guideline, usually means "no consensus to enact a change". You should probably also advertise this RFC at WT:MOSITALICS and WT:Manual of Style/Titles. --Izno (talk) 11:00, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
    Good point; done. But as far as I’m aware, a lack of consensus also means it’s open to WP:BRD to attempt to find a consensus. —67.14.236.50 (talk) 00:00, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
    "No consensus" means that there is no change—do as we have been doing. It's not a license for a free-for-all. czar 04:48, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
    @Czar: No one said anything about a free-for-all, and that’s not what WP:BRD is, either. There hasn’t been enough discussion or activity about this to make any kind of final determination about consensus, other than that we don’t have one yet. And I want to emphasize that: We don’t have one yet. So let’s find one. How do you propose we do that? I’m open to suggestions. —67.14.236.50 (talk) 22:23, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
    As I said above, I don't think the MoS needs to be clarified—these cases are fine as currently presented (save for what appears to be a mistake in the Batman article, but writing a MoS statement to fix that would be taking a bulldozer to an anthill) czar 22:31, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
    Three articles formatting the same text three different ways (italicized or roman, capitalized or lowercase) doesn’t strike you as inconsistent? And you don’t think a bit of guidance on that would be beneficial? —67.14.236.50 (talk) 22:39, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
    Nope—editions are not consistently common nouns or proper nouns or independent creative works. For example, see the last paragraph of Saints Row IV#Release and downloadable content, which covers most of the scenarios. The main idea is to follow the sources, to use common/proper noun capitalization similar to how we use Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Biographies titles, and to italicize separate creative works. I can't see how standardizing would help here—it's more about how it's used in the sentence... czar 06:43, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
    @Czar: This is about clarifying what a separate creative work is. If we only followed the sources on such matters, we would have no need whatsoever for MOS:T, or for WP editors to distinguish between major works and minor works—we’d let the sources decide whether to put a given book title in quotes, or to italicize a song title. But I don’t think we do that, since MOS:T is still around. —67.14.236.50 (talk) 22:58, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

"Clarify" here looks a lot like "typify". You could do the same thing for books known as "second editions" or albums with "remastered" in their subtitles—it will wholly depend on what they're called in the sources and not on a top-down MoS solution. Also mind that our own manual of style is derived from other manuals of style and it's not like our conventions came apropos of nothing. I fear I'll be repeating myself if there is no new evidence to consider, so this is where I'll bow out czar 23:28, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

@Czar: Then I shall genuinely thank you for sharing your considered opinion, even if I disagree with parts of it. —67.14.236.50 (talk) 23:47, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

MOS:TV "overhaul" planned

Pointer to relevant discussion elsewhere.

Below is a copy of a notice, and my response to it, posted at WP:Village pump (policy). I think this should involve considerable input from MoS watchers in general, or all kinds of unintended effects could result, most likely WP:LOCALCONSENSUS-based forking of advice – on things like date formatting, WP:CRYSTAL treatment of future episodes/seasons, in-universe writing, etc. – from various sections in the main MoS, its subpages, and other guidelines. I doubt there would be any intent to do that, but we've seen it happen repeatedly before with regard to comics and several other media.

This is just a notice that members of the Television project are considering overhauling and rewriting our MOS, headed up by myself. Nothing is happening until August 2016, but there is a discussion regarding interest in the endeavor which you can find here, and add your signature if you would like to be a part of the effort. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 01:14, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the heads-up, but please note that MOS:TV is a Wikipedia guideline, not an owned page, a wikiproject advice essay, of WikiProject Television, so it's not appropriate to call it "[y]our MOS". It's part of the MoS. What it says affects a large number of articles that are not entirely within the scope of WikiProject Television, and it's important that it not start PoV-forking away from things like MOS:NUM, etc..  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  04:21, 30 June 2016 (UTC)

 — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  04:33, 30 June 2016 (UTC)

Moot

The Moot Hall, Keswick, a place for moot points to be duly mooted. There are lots of Moot Halls for mooting in England.

"see if a rewrite can make the issue moot" – is this an American usage? In English usage a moot point is a point that is or can be mooted – i.e. debatable, but the word is used as though it means the opposite on the MoS page. Best find another word if it means one thing on one side of the Atlantic and the reverse on the other. Tim riley talk 09:48, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Indeed. Martinevans123 (talk) 09:54, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
Good catch. I changed it to "see if a rewrite can settle the issue" which is what I think the American usage means; as noted above the original wording means "see if a rewrite can make the issue debatable" in British English, which doesn't make sense here. Peter coxhead (talk) 09:58, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
The revision is welcome. Even in Am Eng usage the sense was not clear. A moot point is something that is debatable, but doing so leads to no effective resolution. I.e., it is seen as an academic exercise or as a pasttime for those with nothing better to do. olderwiser 10:13, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
It's just a hill you don't want to die on. Martinevans123 (talk) 10:36, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
moot!... an anonymous imageboard cow
  • A lot of people think moot means irrelevant because of some intervening development. EEng 15:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
@Bkonrad: The term "pastime" has one "t", not two - it's a contraction of "pass time", something that passes the time in between real tasks. --Redrose64 (talk) 18:35, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
Thanks, I do know that. I was typing on my phone and the autocorrect changed it to something entirely different and in my haste to correct it I mispelled it myself. olderwiser 18:37, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
As if anyone would ever want to pass the time in between "real tasks". Martinevans123 (talk) 18:43, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
From American Heritage: "A debatable question, an issue open to argument; also, an irrelevant question, a matter of no importance." So we have two almost opposite meanings. I just avoid the word altogether as it just confuses half the audience I'm communicating to. --NeilN talk to me 22:58, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
FWIW now, this is not a US v UK distinction: the dual, and arguably contradictory, meanings apply in British English just as they appear to in US English. See here and here for online evidence. "Moot" can in fact refer to a point or debate that has become irrelevant or redundant because of some intervening event or revelation in the UK too. Kind of like this one. N-HH talk/edits 09:51, 2 July 2016 (UTC)
Well maybe, in terms of the dictionary. It's just that I've never heard it used in British English that way. Martinevans123 (talk) 16:14, 3 July 2016 (UTC)
Just as a follow-up, I looked in the OED too, whose more detailed entry does include that second meaning, but also suggests it is indeed primarily a North American usage. As for experience, I've always had the opposite, or maybe a half-way house: when I hear people use it, I assume they mean it's a point that, yes, is up for debate but with at least the possible implication that any debate would ultimately be academic and of no practical value. N-HH talk/edits 08:54, 5 July 2016 (UTC)

Requesting comments on requested move: ESports

Pointer to relevant discussion elsewhere; involves long-running capitalization vs. hyphenation disputes.

The present name of the article (on a general topic, professional video-gaming competition) coincides with a commercial trademark (in that market sector).

Over the last year, there have been 6 or so requested moves and other renaming discussions at what is presently Talk:ESports, most of them poorly attended, with mostly WP:ILIKEIT votes, mis-citations of policy where any was mentioned at all, and closure reasoning problems (while only one was an admin close), resulting in the name flipping around all over the place.

I've opened a multi-option, RfC-style requested move at:
     Talk:ESports#Broadly-announced and policy-grounded rename discussion

It presents four potential names, all with some rationale outlines provided.

Input is sought from the community to help arrive at a long-term stable name for this article, based on actual policy and guideline wording, and on treatment in reliable and independent sources (i.e. not blogs or "eSports" marketing).  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  15:38, 6 July 2016 (UTC)

Request for comments on English pluralization of uncommon non-English terms

Hello all- Looking for input in a discussion regarding the best way to pluralize the German word Stolperstein in that term's article; whether to simply add "s" or use the German plural form Stolpersteine. Discussion here: Talk:Stolperstein#Correct_plural. Thanks in advance for any helpful comments. Eric talk 18:35, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

American English and units

If an article uses American English, should it also use Imperial units?   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  21:24, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

@Dunkleosteus77: Short answer: no, because the U.S. has never used Imperial units.
Imperial units were introduced by the UK after American independence, to replace the King James units previously used, and which the U.S. continued to use, although they are now known as U.S. Customary Units. There are several differences, mainly concerning measures of capacity or volume - for instance, the Imperial system has 20 fluid ounces to the pint, U.S. customary has 16 - and the fluid ounce isn't the same size either (the U.S. fl. oz. is about 4% larger than the Imperial).
See MOS:UNITS. --Redrose64 (talk) 22:28, 3 July 2016 (UTC)
The article should include both American units and SI units in such a case, making use of the convert template to give both values. Even though it may be an article written in American English, that doesn't mean it should not be readily accessible to readers of other varieties of English. The primary units involved in any case should be those named in the cited source material. Rhialto (talk) 08:30, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
Not if it's a scientific article. And no, there's no more than a tendency for US English to be accompanied by US units (and date formats). Variety of English, date format, and US vs international units all have different criteria, I'm afraid. Slightly messy, but overall an excellent outcome years ago by en.WP editors, solving a complicated set of international circumstances. Tony (talk) 08:54, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
Rhialto, the choice of primary units should be consistent throughout the article and not based on the individual sources. {{Convert}} has a way of using the number from the source as its input but also allowing us to choose which number is displayed first using the |order= parameter. Broadly speaking, articles tied to a country should use the units of that country (eg New York should use imperial units and Volkswagen should use metric) and other articles can choose either but must be internally consistent.  Stepho  talk  09:18, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
@Stepho-wrs: New York should not use imperial units. It should use U.S. customary units, which are not the same as Imperial, see my comment above. --Redrose64 (talk) 09:36, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
You are quite correct. New York definitely should use US customary as the primary units. Apologies for my lapse.  Stepho  talk  13:14, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
Concur with Stepho-wrs (as corrected by Redrose64 :-); we have excellent templates for this. Also concur with Tony1: some vague national tie is not an excuse to go on a style rampage against the metric system, as there are contexts in which metric, not US customary, is used even in the US. Sometimes these are even micro-contexts within a larger context that otherwise avoids metric (e.g., pool cue tips are always measured in mm, even though all other cue sports measurements are in US customary in the US, and a mixture of Imperial and metric in the UK, etc.).  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  21:46, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

Outline in MOS

Is there any MOS guidelines at all about Outlines? At least one person has suggested that outlines aren't even articles at all so maybe it wouldn't be subject to the MOS at all. I made a suggestion at the Outlines project for various qualities of outlines but I soon realized that there may be no rules about how outlines should be organized (other than people's personal opinions) so I have no idea how would determine a "Featured outline" (if that exists). Wikipedia:Outlines is just an information page which seems odd. There have been a few discussions about outlines in which the following rules at least apply:

  1. Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Draft:Historical outline of France - there are no such things as "Historical" outlines as those are just prose and outlines should not have prose in them.
  2. There is a discrepancy about whether or not one can create outlines if the mainspace version does not exist. Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Wikipedia:WikiProject Outlines/Drafts/Outline of accounting law was almost all delete while Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Wikipedia:WikiProject Outlines/Drafts/Outline of forest hydrology seems to be going the opposite way.
  3. There is an ongoing debate about Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Wikipedia:WikiProject Outlines/Drafts/Outline of teaching since teaching redirects to education. Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Outlines/Drafts/Outline of biological engineering was a move based on the redirect for the mainspace version.

There was also an argument about the location of outline drafts at Wikipedia:WikiProject Outlines/Drafts/Outline of ancient history but that's not relevant to the MOS. Should we start one if it doesn't exist? -- Ricky81682 (talk) 09:10, 5 July 2016 (UTC)

I would assume that the guidance on stand-alone lists would apply, as the outline page makes it clear that that's what they are. Or am I missing a larger-scope? Primergrey (talk) 13:10, 5 July 2016 (UTC)
  • I'll look into the bigger outline questions; thanks for all those links. They are WP:SAL, and are categorized as articles. If someone wants to force them to somehow not be articles, that's a big RfC or something, and we'd have to create some kind of new categorization system for them, I guess, as with WP:Portals. Anyway, MoS isn't limited to articles, but applies to all reader-facing content, including portals, non-internal templates, the Main page, etc., except where specific variances have been agreed by site-wide consensus. E.g., the lists on the main page have their own special formatting. Another example is that if a particular citation style imported from outside Wikipedia (Harvard, Vancouver, Chicago/Turabian, MLA, MHRA, etc.), requires certain formatting for something, and is consistently used in a particular article, that something can be formatted that "special" way in the citations even if it's not MoS's way (the most common example being not using dots-and-spaces with human initials). [There hasn't been any real debate about that, of which I'm aware, in several years, though it was heated at the time, with a lot of "get rid of all cite styles but WP:CS1!" vs. "get rid of the MoS!" grand-standing and false-dichotomy.] — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  22:00, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

Starting a quotation with ellipsis

An edit of mine to remove an ellipsis at the start of a quotation was reverted. My original edit summary was "rm unnecessary leading ellipsis"; that of the revert was "Unnecessary change: the ellipsis shows the sentence is incomplete". Here's my opinion about ellipses:

  • They are ugly, and should be avoided unless they're necessary (or present in the original).
  • The fact that it's a quotation already implies it's an incomplete extract from the source, unless supporting text indicates that it's complete (or a paraphrase, etc.). Therefore, an ellipsis at the start of a quotation is never necessary (interpreting "never" with the usual pinch of salt).
  • Therefore, a leading ellipsis should always (modulo salt) be removed.

Relevant to this case, the "usual pinch of salt" (i.e. common sense) suggests a leading ellipse where it would be needed to indicate an incomplete sentence. In this case, the fact that the quotation begins with a lower case letter implies an incomplete sentence, so it's still not necessary.

I've reverted the revert, but in the meantime, what do others think of leading ellipses? Hairy Dude (talk) 19:23, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

MOS:ELLIPSIS does give an example that shows a leading ellipsis. Note that the use of   is recommended to prevent improper line breaks. Jay Jor (talk) 21:00, 3 July 2016 (UTC)
The ellipsis was correctly used to indicate that part of the sentence has been omitted (in this case, the leading "But"). I'm not familiar with any style guides which omit the leading ellipsis and instead recommend lower case letters to indicate incomplete sentences. Pburka (talk) 03:27, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
I agree. I think the use of an ellipsis in this case clearly indicates that the sentence quoted is incomplete, and avoids the oddness of a passage of text beginning with a lowercase letter. — SMUconlaw (talk) 09:40, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
The ellipsis should be retained. In fact, because the quotation forms a new sentence, the first letter should be capitalised (... [I]t has to be expressed ...). Even if this were not the case because the quotation already began with a capital letter (e.g., a proper noun), the ellipsis would provide the vital indication that the quotation does not begin at the start of the sentence. sroc 💬 22:53, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
I share your opinion on this, Hairy Dude, as you've outlined it. I think the ellipsis is quite unnecessary. I'd agree that the quote should begin with "[I]t", though. JG66 (talk) 23:11, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
(edit conflict)Capitalise it if you must, but please don't put those square brackets in. They denote a phrase, word or letter that is not present in the original quotation but which has been added by way of clarification, as in "... they [the Government] resolved to act". If all that has been done is to flip the case of a letter, there is no change in meaning, so there should be no need for clarification, and so no need for the brackets. --Redrose64 (talk) 23:16, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
"They are ugly" is a non-rationale; this is about accuracy not designerly asethetics. If the original is "I know my dog's foot is sore", this can be quoted entirely, or as "...my dog's foot is sore" (if not starting a new sentence), or "[M]y dog's foot is sore" (if starting a new sentence), or "...[M]y dog's foot is sore" (if starting a new sentence and it's important to stress that leading material has been elided, which it obviously is not in this case). If the letter case is changed, the square brackets are not optional, because its omission falsifies the quotation and misleads the reader. It is not true at all that the square brackets indicate only an insertion of additional material; they indicate any kind of editorial change, including often a shortening, e.g. of "My mean, cheap, bitter so-called superior has put me on a make-work project" -> "My [boss] has put me on a make-work project". Finally, the idea that "[t]he fact that it's a quotation already implies it's an incomplete extract from the source ... [means] an ellipsis at the start of a quotation is never necessary" is misparsing the contextual meaning of "incomplete" here. This interpretation could not possibly be correct, or the ellipsis convention would never have arisen in the first place, yet you will find it in all style guides. They only differ on the fine points, with some journalistic guides permitting the kinds changes Redrose64 advocates, and some high-academic ones being super-persnicketty and demanding square brackets around the ellipses themselves, which farther than MoS will go.  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  22:16, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

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