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Rhyme scheme patterns

A rhyme scheme is a pattern that appears in the lines of a poem, and generally letters are used to notate the pattern, for example "ABAB CDCD". Sometimes these sequences are very long, the longest I could find on Wikipedia being "abacabadabacabaeabacabadabacabafabacabadabacabaeabacabadabacaba". There is considerable variation in how this notation is capitalized and punctuated:

  • ABAB
  • "ABAB"
  • abab
  • "abab"
  • "A,B,A,B"
  • "AB AB"

In some cases, the main article says that the notation requires a specific capitalization. For example, "aBaBccDDeFFeGG" distinguishes masculine and feminine rhymes with lower vs. upper case. I think it would be nice, for human readability reasons, to settle on a consistent style for this notation. To me the sequences are nicely distinguished from sentence prose when they are either in quotes, all caps, or both. I'm open to whatever poetry-editing editors want to do, but for the sake of having a starting point for discussion, how about the below? I have asked for input from Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Poetry. -- Beland (talk) 22:00, 25 July 2018 (UTC)


Unless otherwise required by a specific notation, rhyme schemes should generally be written when appearing in prose:

  • In all capital letters
  • Enclosed in double quotation marks
  • Without italics
  • Using spaces to separate groups (not commas or other punctuation)

Example: This poem uses the "ABAB" rhyming pattern.


Why the quotation marks? What information do you think you are conveying by including this extra baggage in the notation? (Also, I suspect that when spaces are used it may often be because they are meaningful, e.g. to separate stanzas. And there are more styles currently in use than you list; e.g. a-b-a, b-c-b, c-d-c. —David Eppstein (talk) 23:28, 25 July 2018 (UTC)
I'm not attached to the quote marks for all-caps sequences. If you parse the sequences as proper nouns, they make sense without them. If you parse them as a sequence of symbols not part of the sentence but being quoted from somewhere else, I would think about them like MOS:WORDSASWORDS, where quote marks are one of the options (and prettier than italics, which I don't see often used for this purpose in poetry articles). If we were doing all-lowercase, then the sequences would blend in with sentences much more easily and I think there'd be a stronger argument for quote marks. Yes, the spaces are meaningful, though without a lot of research I'm not sure I could catalog all the ways people use them, so I tried to be generic. Do you think "stanzas" is a better word than "groups"? I did some searches for the style with dashes and didn't find attestation for that, but that may merely be a limitation or my own misuse of the search engines. I'm open to that or other styles as well if people like them better, though my personal opinion is that dashes just bulk up the string without adding clarity. -- Beland (talk) 19:45, 26 July 2018 (UTC)
  • Overprescription, micromanagement, MOSbloat. And you really are stirring too many pots at once. EEng 02:39, 26 July 2018 (UTC)
Pinging Phil wink who has put a lot of thinking and work into this issue. Also pointing out as of relevance: WP:POETRY#Scansion, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Shakespeare/Archive 5#Scansion and meter in the sonnets. --Xover (talk) 07:47, 26 July 2018 (UTC)
The linked discussions are beautiful examples of knowledgeable editors working out article content for themselves in a specific and important topic area. Why does MOS need to overbear that? EEng 10:18, 26 July 2018 (UTC)
Well, I'm asking those knowledgeable editors if we can agree on a single style for a given notation, rather than having different styles on different articles due to smaller discussions coming up with different answers. I'm not sure what you mean by the MOS overbearing; if there's a preferred style for something, this is the place to document it (either by explaining in detail or pointing to WikiProject guidelines). The point of project-wide consistency is to make article content easier to digest (e.g. when reading a bunch of different articles about rhyming poems) and to make the project look polished, professional, and credible. -- Beland (talk) 19:45, 26 July 2018 (UTC)
  • I strongly suspect that there are already-published norms about this sort of thing, "out there". If there's consensus among editors who work on poetry material a lot that there's a preferred way to do this (and I'd bet that David Eppstein's suspicion that spacing can be semantically meaningful is correct), maybe we could add something about it in a poetry and lyrics section at WP:Manual of Style/Writing about fiction. This above stuff seems pretty half-baked at this point, though. And scansion and rhyme schemes are not the same thing. The two scansion threads pointed out do seem consistent with each other, probably because WP:POETRY#Scansion is basically a de facto guideline. So, it could be the start of MOS:FIC section on poetry. PS: I agree that adding quotation marks around such markup is pointless.  Preceding unsigned comment added by SMcCandlish (talkcontribs) 16:40:00, 26 July 2018 (UTC)
  • As always:
A. It is an axiom of mine that something belongs in MOS only if (as a necessary, but not sufficient test) either:
  • 1. There is a manifest a priori need for project-wide consistency (e.g. "professional look" issues such as consistent typography, layout, etc. -- things which, if inconsistent, would be noticeably annoying, or confusing, to many readers); OR
  • 2. Editor time has, and continues to be, spent litigating the same issue over and over on numerous articles, either
  • (a) with generally the same result (so we might as well just memorialize that result, and save all the future arguing), or
  • (b) with different results in different cases, but with reason to believe the differences are arbitrary, and not worth all the arguing -- a final decision on one arbitrary choice, though an intrusion on the general principle that decisions on each article should be made on the Talk page of that article, is worth making in light of the large amount of editor time saved.
B. There's a further reason that disputes on multiple articles should be a gating requirement for adding anything to MOS: without actual situations to discuss, the debate devolves into the "Well, suppose an article says this..."type of hypothesizing -- no examples of which, quite possibly, will ever occur in the real life of real editing. An analogy: the US Supreme Court (like the highest courts of many nations) refuses to rule on an issue until multiple lower courts have ruled on that issue and been unable to agree. This not only reduces the highest court's workload, but helps ensure that the issue has been "thoroughly ventilated", from many points of view and in the context of a variety of fact situations, by the time the highest court takes it up. I think the same thinking should apply to any consideration of adding a provision to MOS.

I'd like to see, at the least, evidence for A1 or A2 before we even think about embarking on such a debate, because if MOS does not need to have a rule on something, then it needs to not have a rule on that thing. EEng 21:55, 26 July 2018 (UTC)

For A1, Rhyme scheme uses both lowercase-in-quotes and uppercase-no-quote styles in its prose, but mostly uses uppercase when explaining the different notations. I think this looks ugly and unprofessional because it is inconsistent, and the inconsistency continues when compared to other poetry pages, found by a moss scan:

-- Beland (talk) 02:23, 28 July 2018 (UTC)

I don't understand what that list is supposed to demonstrate. EEng 02:31, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
Yeah, is this supposed to indicate a consistent stylistic preference, or is this is just a partial list, of a style Beland is objecting to?  — SMcCandlish ¢ 😼  00:27, 31 July 2018 (UTC)
@EEng: This was just to demonstrate that different articles use inconsistent conventions, since you didn't want to make a rule unless there was "evidence" for a need for consistency. Is this what you were asking for? -- Beland (talk)
What are you talking about? All your examples use a single consistent format. EEng 22:40, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
@EEng: Well, as listed above, all the examples are inconsistent with the article rhyme scheme, which is internally inconsistent. And actually it's more complicated than that; the scan downcased all the contents for de-duplication purposes. (Sorry, I forgot it was doing that.) So for example Ballad of Eric actually uses "ababC". If you only read the article, it is a bit unclear why the "C" is capitalized, but rhyme scheme notes sometimes that is done to indicate verbatim repetition of an entire line. But in other cases capitalization is used to indicate gender, so it might help to be more explicit. Some further irregularities: Nachtlied (Reger) uses italics. Ottava rima is internally inconsistent, using both "abababcc" and "a-b-a-b-a-b-c-c". -- Beland (talk) 07:32, 7 August 2018 (UTC)
Beyond EEng's A1/A2/B prerequisites, we're also missing any evidence that Beland has surveyed professional best practices in writing rhyme schemes and has come to the proposal above as a condensation of those best practices, or has brought any subject expertise at all to bear on the issue. The comment above suggesting an unfamiliarity with the word "stanza" is not promising. —David Eppstein (talk) 02:00, 31 July 2018 (UTC)
WT:WikiProject Poetry has been notified of the discussion (by Beland). I've added more notices, to WT:MOSFICT, and to the talk pages of the songs, music, and classical music wikiprojects, to try to attract more participants.  — SMcCandlish ¢ 😼  12:41, 1 August 2018 (UTC)
@David Eppstein: I have not researched professional practices beyond a quick search for what seems to be most popular on other web sites that discuss rhyme schemes, and I have no interest in doing any further research. In general, I have no interest in reading poetry or reading about poetry, so I'll take the grade "not promising" with pride. I just happened to notice that Wikipedia uses this notation inconsistently, and I need some guidance from folks who do care about this stuff so I can correctly program my database scanner and advise other editors how to fix this type of problem. I chose my proposed style based on what looks good to me, as a mostly arbitrary starting point for discussion. If following a professional standard is important to you, feel free to cite one you want us to use. -- Beland (talk) 22:34, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
You are proud of your ignorance of professional practice, and you want to use that ignorance as the basis for making policy decisions here? Do you think that the professionals might somehow have failed to address issues of how to notate this kind of information? Or that the best practices of experts are something to be avoided? That being uninformed makes your aesthetic judgements purer? That as someone not even interested in the subject of poetry, you are going to recognize and address the informational needs that such a notation should provide? That seems an amazingly backwards and anti-intellectual position for a Wikipedia editor to take. —David Eppstein (talk) 22:40, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
You are proud of your ignorance of professional practice, and you want to use that ignorance as the basis for making policy decisions here?  Possibly he's a Trump cabinet secretary editing Wikipedia in his spare time. EEng 02:52, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
@David Eppstein: I am not arguing that ignorance gives me any greater insight into what style should be used; if anything, it gives me less. I'm just saying that as a non-poetry person, I don't really care which style is chosen, as long as we are consistent. I'm providing a default option if no one else cares either. It sounds like you want the style chosen to reflect professional practice of some kind; if so, whose practices do you want us to follow? -- Beland (talk) 23:46, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
I poked through List of style guides; the MHRA Style Guide for example does not address this issue at all. I don't know if MLA Style Manual does, but I couldn't download it for free. If you do a web search for "abab cdcd" you'll see both abab cdcd and ABAB CDCD used in about equal measure. I don't think this comes up often enough to have a generally accepted style for a general audience. If there's a particular journal or something you care to follow, I'm open to suggestions. -- Beland (talk) 00:36, 7 August 2018 (UTC)
If you think that general-purpose style guides were what I meant by the best practices of experts, then all I can say is that you're so ignorant that you don't even know you're ignorant. What I meant (as I thought would have been obvious) were the writings of literary scholars when writing about rhyme schemes. You know, the sort of writing that we should be using as references in our articles about rhyme schemes? Maybe we could find something like this in the sort of textbook that would be used for undergraduate-level poetry classes? As a random and probably too-technical example (not intended to be in any way definitive) this paper on Glück writes "lower case letters stand for masculine clausulae and upper case letters for feminine clausulae. X and x indicate respectively blank feminine and blank masculine clausulae." If we're going to write about style guides for rhyme schemes at all (something I'm still not convinced we need), these sorts of intricacies are something we need to understand, so that we don't end up writing a lobotomized style guide that can only be used for lobotomized articles. —David Eppstein (talk) 01:09, 7 August 2018 (UTC)
@David Eppstein: Well, there's no need to be insulting; I checked general-purpose style guides because they were easy to find and I'm trying to put in some effort to help get this discussion to some sort of resolution. I assumed you were talking about academic journals, which is why I asked if there were any in particular you wanted to argue in favor of. I don't read poetry journals because I hate poetry. Yes, rhyme scheme clearly documents that some notations use a mix of uppercase and lowercase letters. I read that, and I mentioned it in the preface to my proposal, and that's why I included in the proposal "Unless otherwise required by a specific notation". Maybe it wasn't clear what I was getting at? I expect there are a lot of different academic notations (and actually that article lists quite a few) but what Wikipedia seems to use most of the time is the dead-simple notation we used in high school freshman English class, which can be freely styled either in all-uppercase or all-lowercase. If you look at reference 5 on Summum Bonum (poem), you'll see that it uses all-lowercase with no spaces and no punctuation. But if you search Google Books for ababababcd as found in Christis Kirk on the Green you'll see that some academic authors use spaces and some don't. In general, I think the way Wikipedia deals with cases like this where there are heterogeneous external conventions is simply to declare a house style and adapt all content it's quoting to that style. We even do this for direct quotes to some degree: Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style#Typographic_conformity. We don't use single quote marks for articles about British things even though British sources almost always do, because that doesn't fit the house style. Because there are several different variants of this notation, some of which use capitalization and spacing in a meaningful way, an entirely different way to handle this would be to require articles to follow the convention for the particular subnotation listed at rhyme scheme. That would require making that master article internally consistent; for example, right now it uses both "abab" and ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH to describe traditional rhymes, which should be using the same subnotation. We could also just say something like "Unless differences between uppercase and lowercase letters are being used in a meaningful way, all letters should be uppercase" and "Unless spacing or punctuation is being used in a meaningful way (such as to separate stanzas), patterns should be written without spaces or dashes; spaces are preferred over dashes when indicating groups of lines." -- Beland (talk) 07:32, 7 August 2018 (UTC)
  • I need some guidance from folks who do care about this stuff so I can correctly program my database scanner and advise other editors how to fix this type of problem  How about if you just don't do that? That would save us all a huge amount of trouble. EEng 22:44, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
@EEng: Because that would leave an ugly inconsistency that makes articles harder to read. This should not be a lot of trouble; we just need to make an arbitrary choice between multiple available styles already in use. If this is taking a lot of work, maybe we're over-thinking it. -- Beland (talk) 23:46, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
We also need some way to resolve these cases so that we don't waste editor time examining the same ones over and over again because they keep getting detected as spelling errors. If we resolve them inconsistently, then it seems to me we're wasting the effort that was put into detecting them in the first place and manually resolving them. -- Beland (talk) 00:21, 7 August 2018 (UTC)
{sic} handles the spelling error thing. I'm still waiting for evidence there's any problem here MOS needs to solve. Several people here have expressed exasperation at your stirring so many pots. This project of yours to automate something or other -- is it going to beget an endless stream of these bids to regiment everything big and small? EEng 00:27, 7 August 2018 (UTC)
If we put {{sic}} on all of these before deciding on a style, then once we eventually do decide on a style, we'll have to go back and change half of them. That seems like a lot of wasted work in comparison to just deciding on the style sooner rather than later. If we happen to decide to capitalize them, we won't need {{sic}} at all, and we will also be able to ensure we haven't missed any. I'm sure we'll have more questions as we make progress fixing more known spelling problems. But it won't be endless; there shouldn't be any more style questions to decide than the staff of a print encyclopedia would have to decide, and the MoS and WikProjects have already decided a very large number of questions. I don't know why having two outstanding style rule questions on this page, for a project with 5.6 million articles would be unreasonable, especially as there are 10 other style question discussions also on this page. I don't expect all the same people to care enough about all possible questions, as different people are subject matter experts in different areas. As for "evidence", do you not consider the existing style inconsistencies I've pointed out as a problem that should be solved? -- Beland (talk) 00:53, 7 August 2018 (UTC)

Someone else is going to have to take over. This is hopeless. EEng 03:21, 7 August 2018 (UTC)

@David Eppstein: Did you have any thoughts on the alternatives raised in my comment from 07:32, 7 August 2018, above? -- Beland (talk) 17:52, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

You have made it clear that your proposals in this area are premature and ill-informed. My thoughts are that you should stop pushing this. Why don't you go try creating some actual content instead of approaching style issues for content that you have no experience editing and no input from the content creators on? —David Eppstein (talk) 18:00, 12 August 2018 (UTC)
OK, that felt like a personal attack and not discussion of the merits of the proposal or when a house style should or should not follow sources or any means by which the proposal could be matured. -- Beland (talk) 01:23, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
Just give it up, will you? None of us, including you, has the domain knowledge to even consider imposing some project-wide standard for this; and none of us, except you, thinks there's any need for it. You yourself notified the poetry project and there's been zero response. EEng 01:38, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
[edit conflict] Every time I or anyone else suggests that the whole idea of making this proposal might be premature and a bad idea, you either blow it off or make cosmetic changes and then ping everyone with a comment asking "how about now? do you like it now?". How clearly do I have to say this is a bad idea before you are convinced that I think it's a bad idea and that tweaking it won't make it anything other than still a bad idea? —David Eppstein (talk) 01:40, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
User:Beland, you may find WP:1AM to be helpful. --Guy Macon (talk) 02:49, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
@Beland:, I think a lot of times proposals get better results when the person making the proposal puts in the work to actually make it a good, well-researched proposal. Your strategy was to show up with a not-at-all-baked proposal and then try to get others to do the actual work of building it out. That's often going to be an uphill battle. The fact that other editors don't seem to be convinced that this is an issue worth putting in the MOS does not help at all. CapitalSasha ~ talk 03:03, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
I honestly don't think this sort of thing needs all that much work put into it, especially if no one has strong feelings about it. My main concern was running into a poetry editor community that had strong feelings and would revert unless we followed a already-favored style, or that had contradictory feelings we'd need to hash out, but that doesn't seem to exist. We don't need to specify an outcome for every conceivable circumstance, it's perfectly possible to say "here's what to do for the elementary school cases" but "use your judgment and consider sources for anything other than that". It doesn't seem very fair to me for folks also not part of a poetry-editing community to say "I think we need a much more complicated guideline that follows academic conventions" of which there are multiple, refuse to engage in discussion of which academic conventions we might want, and derail a much simpler guideline. If people don't want this to be part of the MoS, would they prefer it be handled at Wikipedia:WikiProject Poetry? Would they prefer I edited a hundred poetry articles, see if anyone objects, and then come back and summarize what I did? -- Beland (talk) 06:15, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

Well, I have a practical problem in front of me I'm trying to solve, which will require investing some work, regardless of the outcome of this discussion. David, you expressed a concern that any guideline Wikipedia puts out would need to follow academic sources. That's an actionable concern. First, it's a debatable question that has pros and cons that can be explored. We also started to look at potential sources to follow, which I think are inconsistent enough to say we can set our own style to some degree. We currently disagree about how to proceed; the only way I know how to come to consensus is to discuss arguments pro and con on their merits and compare opinions and try to find compromise. There are also alternatives to modifying the Manual of Style; for example, I could advise editors who are looking at these instances to check articles for sources and see if there is a particular style being used for a particular reason, and we could develop practices bottom-up rather than top-down. I was hoping to get at least local consensus before posting an RFC, but if neither of you wish to attempt to reach consensus among us, I can just go ahead and open that now and see what other editors have to say. -- Beland (talk) 03:09, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

Pardon me, what what "practical problem" do you "have" to solve? EEng 06:00, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
The problem I'm trying to (not "have to") solve is classifying these sequences as correctly or incorrectly spelled words, correctly or incorrectly styled rhyme schemes, or something else, and taking appropriate action. I've managed to find a way to separate them out algorithmically, and it turns out there are less than 300. I will take a look at the articles individually myself. -- Beland (talk) 15:34, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
Sorry I misquoted you. Classify them as "something else" and move on. You are getting a lot of people pretty goddam angry with your OCD cluelessness. If you insist on trying to bring 300 articles into line with your idea of a required consistency, I recommend you wait until July 4 of next year since the fireworks will be entertaining. EEng 02:33, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
Leaving things as they are creates several problems, including being unable to reliably search for what Wikipedia knows about a given rhyme scheme and poems that use it (e.g. searching for a-b-a-b won't find ABAB or A,B,A,B), and confusion for readers about what the notation means (as I've noticed on talk pages and external forums discussing poetry and Wikipedia articles about rhyme schemes). I think it would be insensitive to anyone with the condition to compare myself to someone diagnosed with obsessive–compulsive disorder, which has really seriously ruined some people's lives. I hope editors will find more joy than anger in collaboratively producing a more polished, professional, useful encyclopedia. -- Beland (talk) 07:12, 17 August 2018 (UTC)
FTR, I made rhyme scheme internally consistent based on the preferences expressed here so far, and added an explanation of the notation there so readers aren't confused by what it means. The explanation ended up being complicated by notations for internal rhyme and rhyming refrains (for which I imported superscript notation (Villanelle). There may be further evolution as I slowly sync up articles that link to rhyme scheme and essentially use it as a legend, or if any of the editors of those articles express preferences. If a stable style emerges, I'll follow up with WikiProject Poetry. Feel free to ping me from Talk:Rhyme scheme or whatever if you're following along. -- Beland (talk) 07:12, 17 August 2018 (UTC)
Don't call us, we'll call you. EEng 23:03, 17 August 2018 (UTC)

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