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Merry Christmas! And a heartfelt thanks
I just wanted to pop by and say thank yall for doing a much-needed task on Wikipedia. For me in particular, I put in a rushed request for Yule cat- and yall came through beautifully. So, thank you all, have merry Christmas, and a happy New Years. Sincerely, SilverTiger12 (talk) 21:54, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
- SilverTiger12, thanks for the kind message. Happy New Year! Wracking talk! 21:48, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
Stadio Olimpico
Hello, I'm an Italian wikipedian, and wrote the said article on en.wiki. I would like to have a native speaker to correct my English, how can I request help? -- Blackcat
23:55, 4 January 2024 (UTC)
Astroworld Festival crowd crush copyedit
I took on a copyedit request for this article, and I'm slightly regretting it. I'd love to continue working on it, but I'd like to request some help with it.
Largely, the article is just far too long, at over 10,000 words - and its length is especially present at the Timeline heading, which needs:
- Source review
- Massive cutdown of superflous text
- Simplification of detailed account of events - I'm having a hard time myself prioritsing what is/isn't important so would love to sound off about it with someone else
- General spellcheck etc
I'm going to remove the article from my tasklist in the January challenge, but would love it if someone would help me out with this :) EphemeralPerpetuals (they/them) (talk) 19:56, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
- EphemeralPerpetuals, you're certainly not the first (or last) of us copy editors to bite off more than you can chew!

- I recommend working on the backlog (as it looks like you're doing). I find that articles that have been tagged more recently are usually a bit easier to tackle.
- If an article seems too complicated or long, skip it. (If the copy edit tag seems insufficient/inaccurate as the article has bigger problems, you can also remove the copy edit tag and replace it with more relevant ones – see WP:OVERTAG). Also, as a note, while copy editors may have to check sources (e.g., to discern meaning), full source reviews are usually out of our purview. If an article seems to have sourcing issues, I usually add a relevant maintenance templates (I keep a list of several navboxes here: User:Wracking/helpful).
- Thanks for signing up for the drive and for your efforts thus far! Wracking talk! 21:47, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
- @EphemeralPerpetuals: Expect a 10,000 word article to take some time. If I can get through 1,000 words a day, I'm doing well.
- This article seems fairly readable. There are parts that could be clearer, such as "Pictures and videos shared on social media showed split metal detectors, rushing checkpoints, fans on top of cars...", where "split" should probably be "broken" and "fans" should precede "rushing checkpoints". It doesn't help that an apparent typo such as "turnt-up" (should read "turned-up"?) accurately reflects the wording in the source. For the moment, strive for making the text clear and don't worry too much about the amount of detail or the plethora of citations (I myself leave detail in, unless blatantly redundant or irrelevant). Dhtwiki (talk) 09:28, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Dhtwiki, see wikt:turnt
Wracking talk! 16:22, 3 January 2024 (UTC) - Thank you for the advice !! :) EphemeralPerpetuals (they/them) (talk) 17:11, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- @EphemeralPerpetuals I've noticed you were the one to take on my copyedit request, many thanks! I'd be glad to help a bit, as I understand your overwhelmed feelings (exactly how I felt before asking for assistance, lol). In terms of advice, I think the extreme details that feel far too intricate should be removed. For example, I don't think there's much reasoning for describing events only occurring minutes apart as separate under the 'Crush' subtitle, the fifth paragraph. Another thing, I think the extremely long paragraphs should be chopped up a bit to make them easier to read and not feel exhaustive. Again, much luck to you, and again, I'd be happy to help out a bit if needed. SonOfYoutubers (talk) 01:23, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Dhtwiki, see wikt:turnt
Hannah Lewi
Hello to all. I'm new to Wikipedia editing, and starting with assisting via copyediting. Is anyone willing to take a look at the Hannah Lewi page and let me know if there's anything I missed or should be watching out for when it comes to copy editing? Thanks for any assistance and excited to get more practice in. WW0CJ (talk) 03:00, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- One thing I just realized - would you guys keep the here with the mention of other architects? Not sure how applicable it is here...
- > Alongside Paul Walker, Julie Willis and Philip Goad, Lewi is a co-director of the Australian Centre for Architectural History, Urban and Cultural Heritage (ACAHUCH). She is renowned for her generosity towards other scholars and mentoring of new researchers. WW0CJ (talk) 04:59, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @WW0CJ:, welcome to the Guild. I can't comment on that particular article but you can find some links to copy-editing tips on our "How-to" page. I've also added a "welcome" to your talk page, it has links to pages about Wikipedia policies, guidelines and editing culture. I hope you find it useful. Cheers, Baffle☿gab 09:08, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- With regard to the quoted sentences, the first one is matter-or-fact and has a citation supporting it, but the second verges on MOS:PEACOCK and is unsupported, as well as having a "citation needed" template attached. Otherwise, the article seems in good shape. However, more could be done. The capitalization of "Chair" and "Vice-Chair" is questionable, per MOS:JOBTITLES. Among "Selected publications", journal article titles should be set off with double, not single, quotation marks. There are several citations that supply only bare URLs. Fixing those isn't usually considered copy editing per se, but it is generally helpful to have more information given, to help prevent WP:LINKROT. More terms could be linked to other Wikipedia articles, such as placemaking and architecture of Western Australia. Dhtwiki (talk) 09:31, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
Support
Hi,
I really want to let you all know that I am really interested in copy editing on Wii. I really want to do this but I am really silly and I just look at an article and don't know where to begin.
I have very bad self confidence issues and I think it's a double edged sword, because I want to use this as a way to get it better, but it's so bad that it's stopping me feeling good enough to contribute.
I would love a step by step guide to check for things on each page so I know what I'm looking for, where to start. A flowchart would be amazing.
I have read the guides that are linked on the copyedit page and the beginners guides and everything but I feel silly as I still feel overwhelmed MrBauer24 (talk) 23:06, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- @MrBauer24: One of the things that I do when starting a new article is look at spacing issues. Look for separating hatnotes, image specifications, and punctuation from following text. A lot of what we do here involves just making sure that the spacing is appropriate. While you're doing this, you are apt to spot gross errors in spelling or diction, without having to get too immersed in the article's subject matter. Another thing is to look over the references section and flesh out with templates citations that contain only URLs or are otherwise insufficiently informative, or correct citations that have been flagged for errors. Reading through the cited material while you're doing this, especially when it's online, will give you a handle on what the article is supposed to be saying, as well as making sure that the material exists for readers to consult. Apart from all that, pick shorter articles for copy editing, and those on subject matter you're familiar with. As far as Wikipedia's guidelines, there is indeed a lot to understand, and you shouldn't be surprised that you feel overwhelmed. Dhtwiki (talk) 01:51, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @MrBauer24:, welcome to the GOCE. I understand copy-editing can be overwhelming. I agree with Dhtwiki about taking short articles to begin with. below are a few tips to make copy-editing a little less stressful:
- Edit one section or sub-section at a time, this makes even huge articles less daunting.
- Work paragraph by paragraph, just fix the language as you go.
- Break up long paragraphs into shorter ones of seven or fewer lines. Break them after a citation if you can.
- Read each sentence (speaking it aloud might help) and think about what it is telling you. If you can, simplify the language by removing or replacing unnecessary words and phrases like "due to the fact that", "moreover", etc.
- Our step-by-step copy-editing guide should be enough to give you some ideas.
- Good luck and cheers, Baffle☿gab 20:35, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
- MrBauer24: This may seem a bit mean, but given the many punctuation errors in your message above, it may be best for you to work on some other aspect of Wikipedia aside from copy-editing. That said, some of the articles tagged for copy-editing are indeed short and of very low quality, and I expect that you could improve them. One tip I use a lot is to read a sentence aloud to see if it makes sense when I speak it; if not, I try to fix it accordingly. – Jonesey95 (talk) 02:02, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @MrBauer24:, welcome to the GOCE. I understand copy-editing can be overwhelming. I agree with Dhtwiki about taking short articles to begin with. below are a few tips to make copy-editing a little less stressful:
Need crosscheck on request article
Just finished a quick CE on Matooskie. Could anyone look over my edits and see if I should consider the CE finished? Zorblin (talk) 03:55, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
- Looks pretty good to me, and the article survived the GAR. You should add {{GOCE}} to the talk page (under the WikiProject banners), so other editors will know it's been copyedited. Thanks and all the best, Miniapolis 14:14, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
