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Unknown livery

Can anyone identify the livery for the unit on the right at Morecambe Promenade in 1988? I believe it's a 108 on the left and a 142 on the right. Happy to be put right. Lamberhurst (talk) 18:58, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
- It's a 144 on the right, could be a 143, but it looks like it is in Carmine and Cream livery of the WYPTE metro ( West Yorkshire). Unsure what the branding says though, that looks unusual,
and the lower orange stripe was non-standard. Regards. The joy of all things (talk) 20:13, 26 March 2022 (UTC)- There's an orange stripe on this one. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 20:17, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
- Yep: I have admitted being wrong on that! The joy of all things (talk) 20:19, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
- There's an orange stripe on this one. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 20:17, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) @Lamberhurst: Wrong, and wrong: it's definitely a Class 104 on the left, and Class 144 on the right. As to livery, the 104 is wearing normal BR blue of the period from 1966 onwards; the 144 looks like it might be in post-1986 West Yorkshire Metro livery, as here, although the logo doesn't look quite right. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 20:15, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
- The logo looks alright to me, they were simply stuck on and ended up collecting dirt above and below the wording. As per here. Black Kite (talk) 20:37, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
- Aye; now I am on the big screen, it looks like a Metrotrain brand..... The joy of all things (talk) 20:48, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
- Many thanks to all. Glad I had it checked out here. Lamberhurst (talk) 12:18, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
- The logo looks alright to me, they were simply stuck on and ended up collecting dirt above and below the wording. As per here. Black Kite (talk) 20:37, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
Railway station articles: Description sections
Hi everyone, as per Wikipedia:Be Bold, I have been through a number of articles and tried to remove the extremely vague description section on a significant number of pages. Some/most of these have been undone, so I wanted to look for any ideas as to:
- Whether they need sorting to remove the section (sorting all the information under specific headings) and
- How best to do this
I am fully aware of MOS:OVERSECTION but I just felt that perhaps it might be nicer to have it properly sorted (and yes, I probably do have OCD!) Any opinions on this welcome. Mattdaviesfsic (talk) 19:23, 1 April 2022 (UTC)
- @Mattdaviesfsic: Please provide examples, preferably using WP:DIFF links for the removals or the reverts. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 11:40, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
- Hi @Redrose64:, see here:
- etc etc. Of course, this is only for one page - I edited ~100 articles in such a way, from Penzance to Weymouth. Hope that helps? Mattdaviesfsic (talk) 13:02, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
- I see that you posted at User talk:Geof Sheppard#Umberleigh railway station regarding this. Was Geof Sheppard's reply not satisfactory? --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 16:49, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
- Hi @Redrose64:, I did originally, but also wondered if anyone else had perspectives on this, so brought the issue here as well. I'm not saying that his reply was not helpful etc, but just thought it would be helpful to bring it to light a bit? Don't want to keep changing things if no one agrees... Mattdaviesfsic (talk) 17:16, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
- No, I don't think we need to remove the 'Description' section. This is an encyclopaedia so, in my opinion, a the description is an important part of the article. We don't need a separate "Facilities" and "Location" sections for an unstaffed halt in rural Devon. I also don't think we want to lose "Station buildings" into the "History" section (as happened at Eggesford). A single section addressing all those points serves better than two or three single-sentence sections.
- I have been trying this year to find reliable citations for some of those same articles. Splitting the sections left some statements uncited again which I have fixed.Geof Sheppard (talk) 16:31, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
- Hi @Redrose64:, I did originally, but also wondered if anyone else had perspectives on this, so brought the issue here as well. I'm not saying that his reply was not helpful etc, but just thought it would be helpful to bring it to light a bit? Don't want to keep changing things if no one agrees... Mattdaviesfsic (talk) 17:16, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
- I see that you posted at User talk:Geof Sheppard#Umberleigh railway station regarding this. Was Geof Sheppard's reply not satisfactory? --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 16:49, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
Bridge=viaduct?
Various claims have been made about "the [|second|third] oldest operational railway [bridge|viaduct] in [the world|a country]", such as at Skerne Bridge, Bassaleg Viaduct and Carrollton Viaduct. Now the Skerne Bridge has two additional arches for pathways either side of the river arch; the Bassaleg Viaduct has four equal arches, two over a river and one each over a pathway and a road; the Carrollton Viaduct is a single arch over a river but there is an additional arch through the masonry-walled approach.
Am I therefore correct to disregard any distinction between bridges and viaducts, and treat them as a single class of structure? Or is there a useful, valid line to be drawn somewhere between a single (main) arch bridge, and a multi-(equal)-arch viaduct? --Verbarson talkedits 18:56, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
- A viaduct is a type of bridge. The Skerne Bridge would probably classify as a viaduct, just like the Royal Border Bridge does. See Viaduct. Difficultly north (talk) The artist formerly known as Simply south 21:38, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
- A viaduct is a minumum of three arches. Mjroots (talk) 06:20, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- Whose definition is that? Institution of Civil Engineers, Network Rail, OED? -- Verbarson talkedits 08:57, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- A viaduct is a minumum of three arches. Mjroots (talk) 06:20, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- According to HS2 "A viaduct is a type of bridge, made up of multiple spans and connecting two points of terrain." That's a reasonable match to the dictionary definition "a long bridge-like structure, typically a series of arches, carrying a road or railway across a valley or other low ground." and the Wikipedia definition "A viaduct is a specific type of bridge that consists of a series of arches, piers or columns supporting a long elevated railway or road. Typically a viaduct connects two points of roughly equal elevation, allowing direct overpass across a wide valley, road, river, or other low-lying terrain features and obstacles." Seems pretty clear to me. 10mmsocket (talk) 10:01, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- Given that the Carrollton Viaduct is a single arch (though there is also an arch through the approach embankment), whereas most of the Thames 'bridges' are multi-span, the distinction appears to defer more to custom and practice than to any definition.-- Verbarson talkedits 14:27, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- But that's the USA. Nothing about the USA is consistent or sensible. The is the UK railways wikiproject so we should restrict our geographical scope when looking for clarity. 10mmsocket (talk) 15:49, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- My original issue was international, so maybe there's no international agreement to be had. -- Verbarson talkedits 17:55, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- That shows the value of going back and re-reading the original question! 10mmsocket (talk) 18:05, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- My original issue was international, so maybe there's no international agreement to be had. -- Verbarson talkedits 17:55, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- But that's the USA. Nothing about the USA is consistent or sensible. The is the UK railways wikiproject so we should restrict our geographical scope when looking for clarity. 10mmsocket (talk) 15:49, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- In my experience, the term "viaduct" is usually (but with exceptions) applied to railway bridges and most commonly associated with the brick arch type which sprang up in the 19th century (the term being derived from the ancient aqueducts). But as there's no authority that determines what is a viaduct and what is a "mere" bridge, and these things are usually locally named, inconsistency is bound to creep in, especially over the course of 200 years. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 18:58, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- Given that the Carrollton Viaduct is a single arch (though there is also an arch through the approach embankment), whereas most of the Thames 'bridges' are multi-span, the distinction appears to defer more to custom and practice than to any definition.-- Verbarson talkedits 14:27, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
There are too many sections in far too many poorly written articles about UK rail lines
There is an individual who has never been hauled in over the way they have made an absolute pig's ear of so many articles about British railway companies and the lines they operated. There appears to have been no understanding about [], writing in a concise style, avoiding repetition, and sticking almost every paragraph under an obscure section header. You lot at the WikiProject UK Railways should have stopped this person from adding so much awful writing to so many articles. Just try reading them on a mobile, it's almost impossible to get to the point. Some have a section header for just one or two sentences. They're shocking. I've given up reading them. They're verbose, pompous, use out dated language and often show a lack of knowledge about the subject because there times when things contradict themselves or the chronology flip flops between different time periods. The sad thing is because no one stopped this individual they're managed to make so much crap it'll be a decade of work cleaning it all up. I'm so fed up with their drivel I've stopped reading British railway articles. They're that bad.146.200.202.126 (talk) 22:49, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
- Yeah I've also found some of these articles annoying to read and unencyclopedic due to all the headings. Couple of points though, 1) how can anyone sort this if you don't tell us the individual who is writing these articles 2) anyone can edit Wikipedia, why not help rewrite them? NemesisAT (talk) 23:14, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
- Who is the editor and what are the articles? Give us this then we can review and engage. Believe me I'm an editor who is not afraid of removing large amounts of unsourced content / original research from whole swathes of articles. For example, compare any UK fire service article now with their state about 18 months ago before I started editing them. The OR and trivia is long gone. I'm happy to help but only once I know who/what we're dealing with. 10mmsocket (talk) 07:12, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- This has come up before here where the editor in question was identified. There is an issue here but it's difficult to see how it can be dealt with easily. Lamberhurst (talk) 08:14, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- So just to be clear the exact same IP address made the exact same claim in February 2022. Nobody had the courtesy at the time to notify the author in question @Afterbrunel, about whom allegations were being made? Nothing was done by anyone at the time [presumably because nobody saw it as a pressing problem] and it seems nothing has changed in the meantime, and Afterbrunel continues to add properly sourced content to articles that is rarely if ever challenged? Am I correct? 10mmsocket (talk) 15:18, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- I'm not sure those articles are as issue-less as you seem to think. If nothing else, the section headers could use being made more encyclopedic (ex. Boddam branch line). There are also some tone/sounds-like-OR issues (ex.
Clearly the dominant reason for making the branch line was access to the hotel.
as well as some amount of details which might not be very appropriate for the scope of an encyclopedia (ex. the whole ofMiss Kate Campbell was appointed manager, at £100 a year, though Miss McKilliam was in overall charge, and a golf professional, Alex N Weir formerly of Arbroath, was appointed, at £70 a year. The opening day was 1 March 1899. The 3 ft 6 1⁄2 in gauge tramway opened in June. It operated on 500-volt DC current from the hotel's 33 kW generator, A laundry was built on the site; it also served the needs of the Palace Hotel, Aberdeen, as well as those of the GNoSR generally. The tariff for August and September was 15s per day on the first floor, 14s on the second floor, 12s on the third floor and 10s 6d on the fourth, inclusive of breakfast, lunch, afternoon tea and dinner; provision of a [coal] fire in the room cost extra. After five months of operation the results were described as "most encouraging" and the hotel committee decided to keep it open though the winter, at a reduced rate of £2 10s per week.
could probably be significantly trimmed if not entirely removed. RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 16:15, 25 April 2022 (UTC)- And then there are indeed some sections which are entirely unsourced, ex. Boddam_branch_line#The_line_today. That, like some more of the content, might be more appropriate for a railway enthusiast audience than for a general encyclopedia. RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 16:17, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- Discussing the state of a disused line today isn't exactly specialist railway enthusiast content, I think that it is of interest to a general audience and should be included. NemesisAT (talk) 16:46, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- The level of detail provided might or might not be excessive (as elsewhere in the article, see for example the long description about how much a room on each floor cost) is what I'm saying; and on top of the fact that section is entirely unsourced, certainly warrants a closer look. RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 17:30, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- I don't think it's unwarranted in the context. It sets the context of the nature of the hotel which the branch line was supposedly there to serve. G-13114 (talk) 17:50, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- Perhaps I could make a few comments.
- 1) In railway company history articles, one option would be to group topics and minimise the section headings. Inevitably this would lead to massive chronology problems, and in discussions elsewhere it has been stated by others that a chronological sequence is more "natural". That inevitably means that topics change frequently as the narrative progresses: in 1888 the Chairman resigned; in 1890 the XYZ branch line was opened; in 1891 there was a fatal train crash. These topics don't lend themselves to being grouped, except in the trivial case of making a heading: "The 1870s"; next heading: "The 1880s"; next heading: "The 1890s". Some editors have attempted this, but imho it doesn't work.
- 2) Unsourced sections: these are quite numerous, and are usually original research. Very often this is enthusiastic descriptions of what might be seen today, or rather ten years ago when someone went out and had a look. When I make a major edit on an article, I think it is bad manners to delete soemthing that someone else has written. Any reader can see that it is unsourced, and will understand it for what it is, and I usually move on.
- 3) The level of peripheral detail in the Boddam branch is quite simply based on what material is out there to use. The idea is to make an interesting article, and incorporating some level of entertainment is essential. The Boddam branch deserved an improved article, but there was precious little interesting material out there about the strict railway aspect of it. People who have written commercial books incorporate this kind of peripheral material for the same reason; Wikipedia isn't exempt from the need to be attractive to readers. Afterbrunel (talk) 20:46, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- I don't have much to say about the rest, but I'll reply to point no. 1: chronological ordering is not the only way to organise an article. In fact, most articles are not solely organised chronologically, but rather in broader sub-topics (which may, in turn, be themselves organised chronologically, or not). To take an unrelated example, World War I is divided into different sections, according to what is covered within. The sections about technology and war crimes are organised independently from the rest of the history, while remaining internally chronological. This is equally possible for railway articles. To take the GWR, which I already mention, the "History", "Geography" and "Operations" sections are all in their own order, without the need to mix them up. And grouping of content can often be done with more useful titles than simply temporal markers (as the GWR article shows). RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 21:02, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- The level of detail provided might or might not be excessive (as elsewhere in the article, see for example the long description about how much a room on each floor cost) is what I'm saying; and on top of the fact that section is entirely unsourced, certainly warrants a closer look. RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 17:30, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- Discussing the state of a disused line today isn't exactly specialist railway enthusiast content, I think that it is of interest to a general audience and should be included. NemesisAT (talk) 16:46, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- Any chance we can build up a hit of articles to work on? 10mmsocket (talk) 16:37, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- If we're solely interested in articles by this one editor, the whole list amounts to 924; and if you exclude those which are only redirects, or which are not about railways at all, the number is closer to 700; and not all of these will have had significant involvement to the point of bringing about the kind of slightly annoying issues identified above. RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 17:43, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- The content is mostly ok and well sourced. And the user has uploaded a lot of generally well made maps to illustrate the articles. He just seems to have a particular style of arranging the articles which some people find annoying. There's also an issue that maybe some of the content is duplicating that elsewhere. Maybe it could do with some work, but it's not really what I would consider a top priority, If others disagree than go right ahead and be bold. G-13114 (talk) 17:50, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- That particular style of arranging the articles is not helpful to the readers (as it lacks any organisation) and is also discouraged by MOS:OVERSECTION. An example of how things should be done is probably something like Great Western Railway, if that helps. RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 17:55, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- Very useful, thank you. Is there any formal guidance within this project on article layout (I'm being lazy - I haven't looked!!) 10mmsocket (talk) 17:58, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- I'd have hoped Wikipedia:WikiProject Trains/Style advice might be useful, but there's nothing there about layout specifically. Otherwise a look through the rest of Wikipedia:WikiProject_Trains#Good_articles is never a bad idea. I'll note that most of them include at least a "history" section, no matter what exactly they're about (Anglesey Central Railway; Staten Island Railway; Glasgow, Paisley, Kilmarnock and Ayr Railway), and some form of description of the route (under varied headings, from the obvious "Route" to stuff like "Branches and stations" or "Topography". Although there are other articles which
havehad the same "bad section headers" issue, ex. Grand Crimean Central Railway (although, to be entirely fair, that one might be due for a GAR in any case). RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 18:02, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- I'd have hoped Wikipedia:WikiProject Trains/Style advice might be useful, but there's nothing there about layout specifically. Otherwise a look through the rest of Wikipedia:WikiProject_Trains#Good_articles is never a bad idea. I'll note that most of them include at least a "history" section, no matter what exactly they're about (Anglesey Central Railway; Staten Island Railway; Glasgow, Paisley, Kilmarnock and Ayr Railway), and some form of description of the route (under varied headings, from the obvious "Route" to stuff like "Branches and stations" or "Topography". Although there are other articles which
- Very useful, thank you. Is there any formal guidance within this project on article layout (I'm being lazy - I haven't looked!!) 10mmsocket (talk) 17:58, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- That particular style of arranging the articles is not helpful to the readers (as it lacks any organisation) and is also discouraged by MOS:OVERSECTION. An example of how things should be done is probably something like Great Western Railway, if that helps. RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 17:55, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- The content is mostly ok and well sourced. And the user has uploaded a lot of generally well made maps to illustrate the articles. He just seems to have a particular style of arranging the articles which some people find annoying. There's also an issue that maybe some of the content is duplicating that elsewhere. Maybe it could do with some work, but it's not really what I would consider a top priority, If others disagree than go right ahead and be bold. G-13114 (talk) 17:50, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- If we're solely interested in articles by this one editor, the whole list amounts to 924; and if you exclude those which are only redirects, or which are not about railways at all, the number is closer to 700; and not all of these will have had significant involvement to the point of bringing about the kind of slightly annoying issues identified above. RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 17:43, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- And then there are indeed some sections which are entirely unsourced, ex. Boddam_branch_line#The_line_today. That, like some more of the content, might be more appropriate for a railway enthusiast audience than for a general encyclopedia. RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 16:17, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- I'm not sure those articles are as issue-less as you seem to think. If nothing else, the section headers could use being made more encyclopedic (ex. Boddam branch line). There are also some tone/sounds-like-OR issues (ex.
- So just to be clear the exact same IP address made the exact same claim in February 2022. Nobody had the courtesy at the time to notify the author in question @Afterbrunel, about whom allegations were being made? Nothing was done by anyone at the time [presumably because nobody saw it as a pressing problem] and it seems nothing has changed in the meantime, and Afterbrunel continues to add properly sourced content to articles that is rarely if ever challenged? Am I correct? 10mmsocket (talk) 15:18, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- This has come up before here where the editor in question was identified. There is an issue here but it's difficult to see how it can be dealt with easily. Lamberhurst (talk) 08:14, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- The important thing about sections isn't how many there are, it's what's in them: One train, one track, one section. SN54129 19:16, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- @Serial Number 54129: The point of sections, like chapter titles in a book, or headers in an academic paper, is organising the content so that readers can more easily make sense of it by giving a split-second overview of what is being covered. In that sense, while, yes, the number of sections isn't usually an issue, there are usually good reasons why appropriate subdivisions (as are indeed present at Signalling block system) should be used. And they also make finding specific information much easier. Compare this with the current state of that article. Cheers, RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 20:02, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
- I think it's important not to go overboard here. @Afterbrunel: has done some great work to improve many articles which were no more than stubs and has uploaded a good many useful images and maps. Writing articles about closed lines is not an easy subject, especially where - like with the Boddam branch - the sources are few and far between. Yes, there may be issues with article structure and notability and I would recommend that Afterbrunel look at some of our featured articles on closed lines such as the Brill Tramway and good articles like the Hawkhurst branch line for inspiration. Lamberhurst (talk) 10:06, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
- Have to agree that overall I've enjoyed reading historic railway articles on Wikipedia (and I suspect Afterbrunel was behind a lot of these). I was able to help a little with newspaper sources for the Boddam Branch closure (see Talk:Boddam branch line). NemesisAT (talk) 10:23, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you both for those kind words. Incidentally it is good to know that someone is actually reading these articles; there are times when I wonder if it is only me and some copy-editors who read them. May I trespass on your good offices to ask: -- the talk pages of many articles state that the article is somehow under the auspices of this or that project, in some cases three different projects on the same article. Are all of these projects active? I look in vain on their home pages for a list of "We have done this in the last three months". And in many cases they have awarded an article stub class, or recommended a map or something, when these enhancements have been done, and they don't seem to update their evaluations. As I am not a member of their task force, I can hardly do that myself.
- And finally I had a look at the Hawkhurst branch. May I draw your attention to the fact the section "Present-day scene / Remains" ends with a statement in the present tense, citing a book published in 2003. :-) Afterbrunel (talk) 06:45, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
- I think you can update anything you like. Memberships don't mean owt here. Rcsprinter123 (rhapsodise) 11:32, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
- Have to agree that overall I've enjoyed reading historic railway articles on Wikipedia (and I suspect Afterbrunel was behind a lot of these). I was able to help a little with newspaper sources for the Boddam Branch closure (see Talk:Boddam branch line). NemesisAT (talk) 10:23, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
- I think it's important not to go overboard here. @Afterbrunel: has done some great work to improve many articles which were no more than stubs and has uploaded a good many useful images and maps. Writing articles about closed lines is not an easy subject, especially where - like with the Boddam branch - the sources are few and far between. Yes, there may be issues with article structure and notability and I would recommend that Afterbrunel look at some of our featured articles on closed lines such as the Brill Tramway and good articles like the Hawkhurst branch line for inspiration. Lamberhurst (talk) 10:06, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
- @Serial Number 54129: The point of sections, like chapter titles in a book, or headers in an academic paper, is organising the content so that readers can more easily make sense of it by giving a split-second overview of what is being covered. In that sense, while, yes, the number of sections isn't usually an issue, there are usually good reasons why appropriate subdivisions (as are indeed present at Signalling block system) should be used. And they also make finding specific information much easier. Compare this with the current state of that article. Cheers, RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 20:02, 25 April 2022 (UTC)