Talk:Civil resistance
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Reference or make article about this one book
I see you are a new editor. If "civil resistance" is a term used widely by various movement please reference it with WP:Reliable sources. Otherwise it is all WP:Original research which can be removed. Or the article merged into a similar one like nonviolent resistance. Do not remove the tag until the whole article is properly sourced.
If you can't or don't find references the best thing to do with this article - besides delete it - is to move it to being about the contents of this one book. Thanks. CarolMooreDC (talk) 03:42, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
- I put back the tag. You can only use material that actually mentions "civil resistance" and not put in material that is about something you consider to be civil resistance. I'll give you all a couple days to show those refs which do not have links or quotations to prove your point actually do so. Per this policy: WP:Proveit. Otherwise it is WP:original research.
- Also, per Wikipedia_talk:Non-free_content that quote from the book is WAY too long - assuming it is a quote. If it is a summary it is still way too long. You can rewrite it by saying SO and SO makes these points in their introduction and then maybe 7 or 8 summary sentences. We'll see how rewrite goes.
- From a quick look at books google and news google it looks like a phrase used by just a few individuals in WP:Reliable sources and should be portray as such.
- I removed external links and bibliography that does not use term "Civil resistance" according to wikipedia policy. This is because wikipedia is not a forum for people who want to change common terminology by making it look like those using other terminology share their views when they do not use the same terminology. Please be aware of this issue in your editing. Thanks. :CarolMooreDC (talk) 02:23, 18 February 2011 (UTC)
Dear Carol,
Thank you for your messages. I appreciate both Wikipedia's rigorous policies that you mention, and also your specific concerns. The heart of the latter is that you have worries about the term 'civil resistance', believing that other terms, such as 'non-violent resistance' (which certainly has value and is a term I often use), are better as overall categories.
Can I just indicate some main lines of my response? They derive from my experience of working on this subject on and off for nearly 50 years, with a number of publications that I didn't put in the bibliography because I believe that one should be restrained in these matters.
1. Your deletions and changes caught me part-way through the amendment process, and some of the issues you raise were in any case planned for attention in further revisions today.
2. The article is about both the phenomenon of civil resistance and the term.
3. The term 'civil resistance' has along genealogy and is used widely - including in some of the references and bibliography items that you deleted. I can add to the references on this, as well as restoring any deleted items that do refer to it.
4. Your apparent requirement that each and every reference must specifically mention 'civil resistance' by name is problematic. Much organizing, reporting, and writing of many actions does not specifically mention 'non-violent resistance', 'civil resistance' or other such terms, yet the actions concerned are properly included in articles and books on non-violent resistance, civil resistance and related topics, whether in Wikipedia or elsewhere. Therefore there are some other references that I inserted in this article that should properly be restored.
5. As to the 4-para definition, it is the product of very extensive consultation, with all the contributors to Civil Resistance and Power Politics and many others besides, including many activists who attended the 2007 conference at Oxford. There is a serious case for leaving it intact. Indeed, this web page was started by an individual (I don't know who it was) precisely around the original version this definition.
In conclusion, can I suggest that, as you indicate, I revise the article further in the next few days, bearing in mind the points you make? Then one possibility might be that, rather than have a deletion process, which comes across as more authoritarian than I am sure you intend, perhaps as a first step you could indicate your thoughts on the talk page. Regards, Aberdonian99 (talk) 11:24, 18 February 2011 (UTC)
- No. 4: It's not my requirement all refs actually refer to the term used by WP:Reliable sources, but Wikipedias. When I first started editing it annoyed me, but over time I realized it's the best way to avoid bringing in people's original theories and fighting about them. If a term is notable it will be used. Just do the research to find actual uses. So putting back books that do not use the term as references. It does now occur that Biblio subsection about other books about nonviolent action appropriate. I'll show you.
- No. 5: Is the summary a quote of what people wrote elsewhere that needs separate referencing? If the people you mentioned are trying to use wikipedia to promote their particular view of "civil resistance," that of course would be against Wikipedia policies. See Wikipedia not means of promotion. A four paragraph summary of any one source generally is WP:undue (or an indication it needs its own article). The best thing to do is create a section on the philosophy of civil resistance, using a number of sources.
- No. 6: When a term that in the past only has been used here and there suddenly is being promoted by a number of people, obviously the reasons become of interest so I'm hoping a source that will make that explicit will be found. CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:11, 18 February 2011 (UTC)
Dear Carol,
Thanks for this note. I've just been on a bicycle ride to clear my mind! I think I can see a way forward that may be OK.
4: I will also refer to more literature that uses the specific term "civil resistance". As many of these items are articles or short papers I incline to do that in footnotes rather than in the bibliography. And thank you for the idea of a biblio subsection of other books: that will enable me to reinstate such works as Gene Sharp's. I would also like to reinstate Semelin's new book even though it is only in French. (Is there a policy against foreign language works?)
5: I will think hard re yr helpful suggestion re "Philosophy of Civil Resistance". I won't rush into it without a clear plan.
6: I will include a short para near the beginning on the relation between key terms. This para will also respond to the important points that have arisen in the general discussion of terminology in the whole field of nonviolent resistance etc.
7: External links. I intend to reinstate the Einstein Institution under 'external links'. Also I'm uneasy about the distinction there between academic sites and activist sites. Some, such as Einstein, straddle that divide. I wonder if we need any subdivision when the list is (deliberately) quite short. I'll leave you to think over that one.
Thanks again for all your thoughts on this.Aberdonian99 (talk) 17:52, 18 February 2011 (UTC)
- Re: External links. See WP:External links. There probably is a better way to divide it. Sometimes personal web sites can be problematic, unless they really are experts which yours seem to be; activist sites can be more problematic - i.e., people can come along and make a big deal about deleting them. Sometimes breaking it up helps avoid that. But see how you read that policy. CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:47, 19 February 2011 (UTC)