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Why is existence a solid system of existence?
Our objective. Aldoada (talk) 16:34, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- Existence 47.15.43.65 (talk) 03:32, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
Changes to the article
I was thinking about implementing changes to this article with the hope of moving it in the direction of GA status. In its current form, it has various problems. The lead is too short and states controversial opinions as facts. The body of the article contains maintenance tags and about half of the text is unsourced. The structure is confusing. It's not clear why there are two separate historical sections ("Historical conceptions" and "Modern approaches") rather than one. For some reason, they are separated by another section called "Predicative nature". It's not clear why the subsection "Semantics" is called "Semantics" and why it is a subsection of the section "Predicative nature".
Based on a short initial review of some reliable sources, I think it would make sense to have a separate section on the nature of existence (is it a property of individuals or not?) and another on what types of existence there are (possible vs actual vs necessary; concrete vs abstract; physical vs mental;...). Some of the current contents of the article could be reorganized to fit into these sections but many would have to be rewritten. It might also be helpful to have more information on the contrast between existence and non-existence as well as the contrast between existence and essence. The discussion of the role of existence in logic should probably be expanded. It should also mention free logic, which has a very different way of dealing with existence.
I was thinking about doing more in-depth research and preparing a draft to fix and implement the ideas pointed out here. I thought it might be a good idea to hear what others think on these issues since this is a difficult topic and preparing a draft could take quite a while. Phlsph7 (talk) 16:57, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
- Short update: I started a draft at User:Phlsph7/Existence to address the points discussed above. This draft is still in a rather early stage. It's not yet properly copy-edited, lacks a lead, and has maintenance tags. But it shows roughly the direction in which this is going. I put more focus on a thematic approach and rearranged the topics into different sections with history being only one of them. In the process, I had to rewrite many passages and add additional sources. Some topics were replaced by others. For example, it discusses the 3 marks of existence in general instead of just focusing on Anicca and Nagarjuna. It also includes many new ideas. I would be happy to hear some feedback and other editors are also welcome to make their own changes to the draft. It will still be quite a while before it is ready for mainspace. Phlsph7 (talk) 16:00, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
- I went ahead and published the draft. I tried to include most of the ideas from the previous version in this one. Some only survived in summarized form and a few without proper sources did not fit in. Please let me know if you think that some essential information was removed in the process so we can figure out a way to include it in the new version. Other feedback on on possible improvements is also welcome. There are still several minor issues. I intend to resolve them in the next few days. Phlsph7 (talk) 07:51, 1 September 2023 (UTC)
being
being and existence has a lot of differences
new article of being is needed 41.121.121.137 (talk) 15:38, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Reviewer: Of the universe (talk · contribs) 01:39, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Existence/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
I am planning to review this article. Of the universe (talk) 01:39, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
- I enjoyed reading this article! Very interesting and clear. Will begin the in-depth review soon. Of the universe (talk) 05:37, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Phlsph7, regarding the sentence: "Ontology is the philosophical discipline studying what existence is." I'm not sure whether this sentence means "Studying what existence is is within the scope of ontology." Or "Studying what existence is is a central focus of ontology." Or "Studying what existence is the central focus of ontology." Can you please clarify? Thanks, Of the universe (talk) 16:12, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
- That depends on whom you ask. Existence is one of the key concepts in ontology and some philosophers define ontology as the study of existence. Our formulation leaves it open so either interpretation of the sentence works. Phlsph7 (talk) 16:36, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Phlsph7 I see. I'm wondering whether a few sentences explaining the disagreement belongs in this article, or whether that's outside of the scope of Existence and just belongs in Ontology. Of the universe (talk) 17:30, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
- I'm not sure that the differences in how ontology is defined matter much. The standard definition of ontology is "the study of being" but many philosophers do not draw a strict distinction between being and existence. I reformulated the sentence so it does not imply that ontology is defined as the study of existence. This way, we avoid the problem of how exactly to define ontology, which is probably better left to the article ontology. Phlsph7 (talk) 17:48, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
- Looks good! Congrats! Of the universe (talk) 23:07, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
- I'm not sure that the differences in how ontology is defined matter much. The standard definition of ontology is "the study of being" but many philosophers do not draw a strict distinction between being and existence. I reformulated the sentence so it does not imply that ontology is defined as the study of existence. This way, we avoid the problem of how exactly to define ontology, which is probably better left to the article ontology. Phlsph7 (talk) 17:48, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Phlsph7 I see. I'm wondering whether a few sentences explaining the disagreement belongs in this article, or whether that's outside of the scope of Existence and just belongs in Ontology. Of the universe (talk) 17:30, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
- That depends on whom you ask. Existence is one of the key concepts in ontology and some philosophers define ontology as the study of existence. Our formulation leaves it open so either interpretation of the sentence works. Phlsph7 (talk) 16:36, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Phlsph7, regarding the sentence: "Ontology is the philosophical discipline studying what existence is." I'm not sure whether this sentence means "Studying what existence is is within the scope of ontology." Or "Studying what existence is is a central focus of ontology." Or "Studying what existence is the central focus of ontology." Can you please clarify? Thanks, Of the universe (talk) 16:12, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Overall, I enjoyed the article. Reading about different philosophical views on existence was thought-provoking, and I learned a lot.
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- The prose is great! The article is a pleasure to read. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling issues.
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- The lead nicely summarizes the context and the important points. The layout is good too. The tone is appropriate (complies with words to watch).
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
- C. It contains no original research:
- Passed citation spot check
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- Passed citation spot check
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- It covers contemporary philosophical views as well as historical views in different philosophical traditions from Eastern and Western philosophy. I especially enjoyed the logic section, and learning about (E!).
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- It stays focused, and is well-populated with links to other articles to learn more. (Unfortunately many of those articles are much worse quality haha)
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Many viewpoints on the nature of existence are addressed and explored. The article has no preference for which is correct, but also makes it clear how mainstream the different views are.
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- The picture of Pegasus is a nice touch.
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass! Congrats
- Pass or Fail:
