Talk:Lifting the Veil of Ignorance
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GA review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Lifting the Veil of Ignorance/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: JJonahJackalope (talk · contribs) 17:55, 27 March 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 23:05, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
Looks interesting! I will review this within a week or two. Also, I love your username, ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 23:05, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
- Copyvio check
No concerns here.
- Prose
- Unlink principal and chairman as most readers will know what these are (also per MOS:OVERLINK).
- Done. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- I think "two committees were established to oversee the monument's creation" should be somehow combined with the next sentence, given that both are short, closely related and are cited to the same source anyhow.
- Done. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- "Robert Robinson Taylor (an architect and faculty member at Tuskegee)" > I would do "Robert Robinson Taylor—an architect and faculty member at Tuskegee" as the same sentence has already used parentheses numerous times.
- Done. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- "and while he had hoped for select" > I think you mean "and while he had hoped to select". Also:
- Yeah, seems like I made an error here. Fixed it. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- State here that Keck is white (or whatever his ethnicity is).
- Keck's ethnicity is already given in the previous section, in the sentence that includes "Meanwhile, the New York committee consisted of White Americans, including sculptor Charles Keck and..."
- Thanks for clearing that up! I must be blind. ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 10:09, 28 April 2026 (UTC)
- Keck's ethnicity is already given in the previous section, in the sentence that includes "Meanwhile, the New York committee consisted of White Americans, including sculptor Charles Keck and..."
- "has area measurements of" > should be "has an area measurement of" as those two numbers comprise one area measurement.
- Done. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- Optional, but I would instead do "African American male who is seated nude on an anvil, covered only by pieces of drapery that rest on his lap and other parts of his body." But also:
- Done. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- "and other parts of his body" – is there a reason that these parts of his body are not stated?
- I don't think there was a specific reason I chose this phrasing and I am open to suggestions if it sounds weird or unclear. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- "Per Daugherty" > change to "According to Daugherty".
- Done. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- Spotcheck
Looks good on the refs I randomly selected and checked.
- Thank you for the fun read! Also, sorry for the wait. I have now left my comments above and have placed this article on hold to allow for you to make any improvements. Please ping me once you are finished so that I can know when to take another look. But also, feel free to ask any questions or refute any of my proposed changes! ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 07:22, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- @LunaEatsTuna:, just wanted to reach out to let you know that I've made some edits to the article to address the points you made in the review here. Thanks again for initiating this review and if you have any further questions, comments, or concerns, please reach out. Regards, -JJonahJackalope (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- Great work on the changes—it looks perfect now! I am happy to pass this article for GA status. Congrats! ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 10:12, 28 April 2026 (UTC)
- @LunaEatsTuna:, just wanted to reach out to let you know that I've made some edits to the article to address the points you made in the review here. Thanks again for initiating this review and if you have any further questions, comments, or concerns, please reach out. Regards, -JJonahJackalope (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
Short lead
@JJonahJackalope and LunaEatsTuna: Is there any way the lead of the article can be expanded? It's particularly short for a Good Article, and leaves out a fair amount of interesting and notable details from the body, specifically any information from the Analysis section. Cheers! Johnson524 16:47, 28 April 2026 (UTC)
- @Johnson524: Thanks for the suggestion! I just expanded the lead fairly significantly, feel free to let me know what you think! Regards, JJonahJackalope (talk) 00:13, 29 April 2026 (UTC)
- @JJonahJackalope: A most valuable expansion! Thank you so much for taking the time to do this, it looks excellent now 😀 Cheers! Johnson524 04:40, 29 April 2026 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. Track your hook after promotion. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Dclemens1971 (talk) 16:50, 27 May 2026 (UTC)
- ... that nearly 100,000 people donated money towards the creation of a statue of Booker T. Washington (pictured)?
- ALT1: ... that art historian Ellen Daughterty has drawn comparisons between a statue of Booker T. Washington (pictured) and statues of American presidents Abraham Lincoln and George Washington? Source: Daugherty 2010, pp. 63, 65.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/One Riot, One Ranger
JJonahJackalope (talk) 00:35, 29 April 2026 (UTC).
principally as to the alt 0 hook. Newness requirement satisfied by GA promotion on 28 April -- very nice work! Article is also long enough, well written, neutral and well sourced. An Earwig check doesn't reveal any problems. The alt0 hook is interesting, short enough, and supported by inline citation and page 52 of the dedication booklet. (My only suggestion would be to replace "100,000 people" with "100,000 African Americans" which detail I find more intriguing.) The alt1 hook looks ok, though I'm not able to read page 65 of the referenced article .. and I find it less intriguing (who is Daughery and why is her comparison so interesting?). QPQ completed. Cbl62 (talk) 20:02, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
