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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 16:20, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

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Infobox and lede

"connecting" → "which connects"
- Reworded. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:34, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Reference needed for date of birth if not mentioned in the body
- Added a ref. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:34, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

Early life and high school career

Comma after "Middletown, Delaware" per MOS:GEOCOMMA
- Ok. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:54, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Add link to Boys & Girls Clubs of America
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:54, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
The link used in the first reference currently goes to a 911 briefing, try this link
- Good catch. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:54, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Link "junior" to Junior (education) and mention what year was his junior year
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:54, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Spell out and link Delaware Interscholastic Athletic Association for DIAA
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:54, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Link "senior" to Senior (education)
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:54, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Awkward space needs removed in "All- State"
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:54, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Pipe "four-star recruit" to College recruiting
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:54, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Additionally link shooting guard, Point (basketball), and Rebound (basketball)
- Also linked assists and steals. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 00:54, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

College career

Pipe "labrum" to glenoid labrum or write it out entirely
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:57, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Link Assist (basketball) and Steal (basketball)
- Already linked. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:57, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
"game winning three-pointer" → "game-winning three-pointer"
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:57, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Spell out and link 2019 NCAA Division I Men's Basketball Tournament
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:57, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
"junior due to playing behind" → "junior, with his playing time limited by competition with"
- He wasn't really competing against them, as they were on the same team, but I did reword it. Feel free to change if you think it could be phrased better. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:57, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
It should be made explicit that his junior season was halted due to the COVID-19 pandemic, with a link to Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on sports. I'm working on an example of that right now in the college career section of Tyrese Maxey
- Added a sentence. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:57, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Did he enroll in a graduate program for that fifth year, or is he still an undergraduate?
- He is in a graduate program. I know he earned his degree in business, so it could be an MBA program but I am not certain. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:57, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
"surpassed the 1,000 point threshold" → "passed 1,000 career collegiate points"
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:57, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
When did he return from the groin injury?
- December 4, clarified. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:57, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

National team career

Who did the USA beat in the bronze medal match?
- Domican Republic, clarified. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:18, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

Career statistics

Good

Personal life

Where was he participating in the protests?
- Clarified it was in Delaware. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:18, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
"connects" → "which connects"
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:18, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
What year did he graduate from Seton Hall?
- Clarified it was in 2021. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:18, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

References

Incorrect link noted above
- Already addressed. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:18, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
In [3] and [5], "Appoquinimink School District" currently utilizes the "publisher" parameter when it should be "via" – the former implies that the School District publishes The News Journal, while the latter says that the article was reprinted by the district
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:18, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Per MOS:ALLCAPS, the all-caps portion of the headline in [5] should be changed to title case
- Made lowercase. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:18, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
Anything from The News Journal and Asbury Park Press needs a parameter added for "|url-access=limited", meaning that you get limited free articles
- Done. Will have to start using it. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:18, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

General comments

Image is properly licensed and relevant
No stability concerns in the revision history
Copyvio score looks good

Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Please feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished! — Ghost River 17:27, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

@GhostRiver: I have addressed your concerns. Let me know if there are more issues, and feel free to make some minor edits if necessary. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 02:18, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

I've made a few additional grammatical changes of my own and will now be passing this. Good job! — Ghost River 18:58, 2 March 2022 (UTC)