Talk:Political violence
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Mfekade1366, Michaelaelan. Peer reviewers: Jp-columbia, Adrià Ardèvol, Amannavani.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:30, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
Some General Comments
Hi Mfekade1366 and Michaelaelan, this is a signficant development over the previous version of the page, and it seems much more comprehensive, much better connected to the rest of Wikipedia, and better organized. Well done. I have some comments and critical assessments, that I hope you or a future Wikipedian will handle:
- The article is tagged as having an introduction that does not adequately or correctly summarize the contents. I think this tag predates your revision but the tag tag still rings true.
- For instance, it reads "any groups and individuals believe that their political systems will never respond to their demands. As a result, they believe that violence is not only justified but also necessary in order to achieve their political objectives." While true, it doesn't seem very representative of the varied theories or motivations. That is , it seems much too specific.
- Perhaps a better strategy would be to develop the definition more, and then describe the heterogeneity in types, theories, etc and why the page exists--as a guide to other pages and material.
- Types
- I added an explanation of what this section was trying to accomplish and why it was organized in that way
- The categories and categorization did not make a lot of sense to me. So I made some hasty changes. I still think this section needs more thought and deliberation.
- There are also several blank sections that I flagged for needing expansion
- This also doesn't strike me as a comprehensive listing of types of violence, especially under violence between non-state actors.
- I added some links to your classmates' pages. Ideally they would also have added a few lines here.
- The trends section is a nice addition
- The actors section is not especially helpful except as a list I suppose. Maybe it chould be integrated into the types section since it is organized by actor?
- The theories section is a big improvement. This is important to develop further, but it is a large and difficult task.
- The consequences section is a bit thin. More could be summarized and drawn from the Blattman and Miguel piece you cite.
Chrisblattman (talk) 18:37, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
Advice on For Future Edits
I've been working on this page for the semester and have some ideas on how to improve the page even further. Ideas will be posted soon! I worked on Trends, Theories, Consequences of political violence — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mfekade1366 (talk • contribs) 17:47, 9 May 2016 (UTC)
Word Choice
I am planning on adding a section that lists the "solutions' to political violence. I plan on including peacekeeping, Military operations other than war, etc. I know that "solution" is not the best word, but I am struggling to think of alternatives. Any help would be appreciated.
Thanks! Mfekade1366 (talk) 03:43, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
- It looks like this wasn't done yet, and so remains on the to do list?Chrisblattman (talk) 18:37, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
Quality article ?!
NPOV tag removed.
I removed the NPOV tag. First of all, there's no discussion of why this tag was even added to article, except for one vague comment about the article being "terrible". After reading through the article, I did not see any blindingly obvious examples of NPOV violations.
Is the article anti-American? Anti-Western? Anti-Conservative? Too focused on Western nations? Does it give undue weight to very recent history? What? I hate trying to guess the motivation of random editors who tag an article without explaining their reasoning. NinjaRobotPirate (talk) 21:21, 30 November 2012 (UTC)
State vs non-state violence
The lead summarizes political violence as violence used to achieve political goals. However, the body of the article primarily summarizes violence carried out by states or governments, such as police brutality, war, and counter-insurgancy. Political violence by non-state entities, such as terrorism, resistance movements, etc., is not mentioned. It seems like the article should either be moved to a different title (such as "State violence") or should be expanded to encompass all forms of political violence. 73.223.96.73 (talk) 19:37, 25 April 2015 (UTC)
- Actually it seems that the ideal solution would be to move the current body into a new article, perhaps State violence, with a lead like "State violence is violence carried out by a state or government for political purposes." The lead from this article would remain as a stub, with see also links to Monopoly on violence, Rebellion, Resistance movement, Terrorism, Violent non-state actor, etc. 73.223.96.73 (talk) 19:58, 25 April 2015 (UTC)
