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RfC: Ritter's sex offenses convictions
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How should Ritter's sexual offences be described in the lead section?
- 1.
he is a convicted child sex offender
(or variants) - 2.
In 2011, Ritter was convicted of several criminal offenses after engaging in sexually explicit online activity with a police officer posing as a 15 year-old girl
(or some variation thereof).
Where in the lead should this sentence be placed?
- A. In the first few sentences of the lead
- B. At the end of the lead
- C. Omitted from the lead entirely
Hemiauchenia (talk) 15:59, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
Responses
- 2B I think this is mos reasonable position. It's prominent enough that it's not worthy of being excluded from the lead entirely, but at the same time it's not worth mentioning in the very first opening sentences. Providing clarity that Ritter's offenses were not with an actual child was
the consensus ofa major viewpoint expressed the BLPN discussion and I think is the most reasonable position. Hemiauchenia (talk) 15:59, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- That was not the consenus of the BLPN discussion, that discussion remains lacking in consensus. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 17:53, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- 2B Provides the necessary context and does not give it undue prominence. Burrobert (talk) 16:04, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- 2B, per my comments at WP:BLPN#Scott Ritter Biography - Noncompliance with MOS and BLP Guidelines. It gives key context and level/severity of offense (2 rather than 1) and due weight vs the more "notability-related" aspects of the subject (2 rather than 1 and B rather than A). Strong oppose C given this aspect is given a whole top-level section of the article and WP:LEDE is designed to summarize the main content of the whole article rather than just focus on notability. DMacks (talk) 16:31, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- 2B is better but it still looks like someone trying to excuse Ritter's actions/play them down. If we're intending to give key context then we have to mention 2001. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 17:50, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- (Summoned by bot) 2B per both previous responses in this RfC, and the seemingly numerous discussions around this topic already both here and on other noticeboards. 2 is the most reasonable option per MOS:CONVICTEDFELON, and the location, B, is best because it is not a primary claim to his notability, and as such shouldn't be mentioned at the very start of the lede. Though I will note, the way it currently appears in the article should be changed to where there is no paragraph break between the sentence to be inserted and the rest of the lede.
Additionally I don't think there should be anything else discussed in the lede besides the sentence inserted; additional context can be discussed in the body of the article, as the lede is meant to summarize the article, and not purely provide content not found in the body. SmittenGalaxy | talk! 20:50, 16 January 2025 (UTC) - 2B as it would comply with MOS:CRIMINAL as well as what appears to be the consensus forming on BLPN. I agree with the reasoning in SmittenGalaxy's vote above. – notwally (talk) 22:08, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- 2B - It was originally suggested by the BLPN thread OP. I made it as short and accurate as possible. It doesn't belong in the first paragraph of the lede. JFHJr (㊟) 03:48, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- 2B as per Wikipedia:CONVICTEDFELON and Wikipedia:CRIMINAL. I agree with Galaxy's arguments. It isn't the root of his notability, and the lead is only meant to be summarized. All Tomorrows No Yesterdays (Ughhh.... What did I do wrong this time?) 16:28, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- And yes, I was ''summoned'' by Yapperbot All Tomorrows No Yesterdays (Ughhh.... What did I do wrong this time?) 16:29, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- 2B (Summoned by bot) per arguments of SmittenGalaxy,
GalaxyAll Tomorrows and othersit is not a primary claim to his notability, and as such shouldn't be mentioned at the very start of the lede
. Except in the most extreme instances, we don't write articles about people who are offenders (sex offenders or other kinds), we write articles about notable individuals who (sometimes) commit offences. Pincrete (talk) 14:29, 21 January 2025 (UTC)- did you mean to say my name twice @Pincrete SmittenGalaxy | talk! 18:44, 21 January 2025 (UTC)
- 2B sounds good to me, as does DMacks' suggestion in the discussion section. ser! (chat to me - see my edits) 14:47, 21 January 2025 (UTC)
- 2B, assuming the legal issues have equal importance to the subject's life as the other elements in the lead. If not, then
C. Manuductive (talk) 10:56, 22 January 2025 (UTC) - 2B per most of the above. -Ad Orientem (talk) 03:35, 23 January 2025 (UTC)
- 1B. 2B is not bad, but it was not just a single incident in 2011, as the text implies. There were multiple incidents over a period of 10 years. My very best wishes (talk) 01:13, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- My very best wishes, do you know if there were any other convictions or only the one conviction? – notwally (talk) 23:22, 28 January 2025 (UTC)
- Apparently, he was convicted only one time, although on several counts. In 2001, he only received a warning . I mostly read about him in such context. My very best wishes (talk) 22:12, 29 January 2025 (UTC)
I think Kyiv Post is not reliable for Ritter’s US legal issues given that he is apparently supporting the Kremlin Manuductive (talk) 22:48, 29 January 2025 (UTC)- Yes, sure, and he was also investigated by the FBI : This month, F.B.I. agents searched the homes of two prominent figures with connections to Russian state media: Scott Ritter, a former United Nations weapons inspector and critic of American foreign policy, and Dimitri K. Simes, an adviser to former President Donald J. Trump’s first presidential campaign in 2016.". But the FBI ride apparently did not result in anything. My very best wishes (talk) 02:47, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
- Apparently, he was convicted only one time, although on several counts. In 2001, he only received a warning . I mostly read about him in such context. My very best wishes (talk) 22:12, 29 January 2025 (UTC)
- 2B because it doesn't make sense to include it twice and it can be fleshed out better in the second paragraph. It should remain in the short description though. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 15:20, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- In no way does it belong in the short description, for the same reasons it isn't in the first sentence. -- Nat Gertler (talk) 15:34, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- The main reason for not including it in the first sentence is that we can't give enough context without blowing due weight out... There is no expectation of context or explanation in the short description. "American weapons inspector and writer (born 1961)" is inferior to "American weapons inspector, writer, and convicted sex offender" because that removes the ambiguity without including the year which is preferable. The subject is notable for threee things which means that there should be three things in the short. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 15:40, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- There is expectation of weight, as per WP:Short description, BLP concerns still apply. The main goal is to disambiguate. Subject's notability is built around his work, his criminality was only covered in that context and would not have received much attention without it, and it is unneeded to include it to separate him from some other Scott Ritter of a similar job. -- Nat Gertler (talk) 15:52, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- What legitimate BLP concerns still apply? If the point is that it is unneeded to "separate him from some other Scott Ritter of a similar job" then why do we have DOB in it? I'm getting most of what you're saying, but besides for the unexplained BLP concern all of that applies to more than what you removed. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 16:13, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- I agree with Nat Gertler that the criminal conviction is not why the article subject is notable. – notwally (talk) 17:58, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- There is expectation of weight, as per WP:Short description, BLP concerns still apply. The main goal is to disambiguate. Subject's notability is built around his work, his criminality was only covered in that context and would not have received much attention without it, and it is unneeded to include it to separate him from some other Scott Ritter of a similar job. -- Nat Gertler (talk) 15:52, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- The main reason for not including it in the first sentence is that we can't give enough context without blowing due weight out... There is no expectation of context or explanation in the short description. "American weapons inspector and writer (born 1961)" is inferior to "American weapons inspector, writer, and convicted sex offender" because that removes the ambiguity without including the year which is preferable. The subject is notable for threee things which means that there should be three things in the short. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 15:40, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- Noting for closer that Horse Eye's Back already voted for 2B above to avoid having their opinion counted twice (although at this point the discussion is pretty much WP:SNOW). – notwally (talk) 17:58, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- No I didn't, I offered comment above but there is no vote in there. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 18:04, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- That's not how it looks to me, and I doubt it would look that way to any closer, who could easily not even notice that the same person was voting twice. In any case, I am not interested in your asinine wikilawyering. You should have simply left your vote under your prior comment or struck the prior comment. Creating more difficulties for closers is not helpful to the project. – notwally (talk) 18:14, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- There no bold and no vote at all, I say that one of the three options is better than the others but that I still have reservations about it... Thats not a vote and it shouldn't create any difficulties for the closer, its a short enough discussion. It should be obvious that I have now made a vote having had my reservations assuaged. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 18:17, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- This is a request for comment. You can wikilawyer all you want about the word "vote". You left a comment expressing your opinion and favoring 2B. Then you went and left another comment doing the same thing. So you left two comments supporting the same position. That is not appropriate, and no amount of wikilawyering is going to change that. Try taking some accountability and actually fixing the issues you create. – notwally (talk) 18:46, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- Favoring and supporting aren't the same thing in this context. I am sorry that my edit confused you, but I highly doubt it would have confused a closer into making the wrong close on this RfC. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 18:55, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- "Favoring and supporting aren't the same thing" is nonsense wikilawyering. Try actually taking accountability and actually fixing the issues you create. – notwally (talk) 18:57, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- They aren't, that isn't wikilawyering... For example My very best wishes favors both 1B and 2B but only formally supported 2B. The general way that you indicate formal support to a closer is through bold text and/or unambigous statements... That first comment has neither. I have apologized for confusing you, what more would you like? Horse Eye's Back (talk) 19:01, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- "Favoring and supporting aren't the same thing" is nonsense wikilawyering. Try actually taking accountability and actually fixing the issues you create. – notwally (talk) 18:57, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- Favoring and supporting aren't the same thing in this context. I am sorry that my edit confused you, but I highly doubt it would have confused a closer into making the wrong close on this RfC. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 18:55, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- This is a request for comment. You can wikilawyer all you want about the word "vote". You left a comment expressing your opinion and favoring 2B. Then you went and left another comment doing the same thing. So you left two comments supporting the same position. That is not appropriate, and no amount of wikilawyering is going to change that. Try taking some accountability and actually fixing the issues you create. – notwally (talk) 18:46, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- There no bold and no vote at all, I say that one of the three options is better than the others but that I still have reservations about it... Thats not a vote and it shouldn't create any difficulties for the closer, its a short enough discussion. It should be obvious that I have now made a vote having had my reservations assuaged. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 18:17, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- That's not how it looks to me, and I doubt it would look that way to any closer, who could easily not even notice that the same person was voting twice. In any case, I am not interested in your asinine wikilawyering. You should have simply left your vote under your prior comment or struck the prior comment. Creating more difficulties for closers is not helpful to the project. – notwally (talk) 18:14, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- No I didn't, I offered comment above but there is no vote in there. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 18:04, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
- In no way does it belong in the short description, for the same reasons it isn't in the first sentence. -- Nat Gertler (talk) 15:34, 4 April 2025 (UTC)
Discussion
Please discuss here rather than in the responses section. Hemiauchenia (talk) 15:59, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- Pinging previous discussion participants @Burrobert:, @Nomoskedasticity: @Skynxnex:, @Mabate23:, @Hatman31: @Lardlegwarmers:, @Ser!:, @Luganchanka:, @Notwally:, @Horse Eye's Back:, @NatGertler:, @JFHJr:, @Springee:, @DMacks:. Hemiauchenia (talk) 16:06, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- Apologies for pinging Burrobert after they had already voted. Hemiauchenia (talk) 16:08, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- I feel there is a real issue with stating that Ritter was 'engaging in sexually explicit online activity with a police officer posing as a 15-year-old girl', as this makes it sound like some sort of role play, and effectively downplays what Ritter was convicted of. In 2001 Ritter was charged in New York with trying to set up a meeting with an undercover police officer posing as a 16-year-old girl. In 2011 he was then convicted of engaging in sexual activity with what he thought was a 15-year-old girl online, Ritter masturbated and ejaculated on camera, all the time believing he was chatting with a 15-year-old. https://www.bbc.com/news/world-us-canada-13089135 Luganchanka (talk) 16:37, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- Inserting unsourced claims about what he "believed", despite the sources not only not saying that but specifically citing the subject as saying it was not the case, is such a severe WP:BLP matter that it should be removed from this discussion, even beyond it being kept from the article. If you would like a site to document your assumptions, having your own blog is sitll a viable practice (although not as popular as it once was.) Indeed, the very source you link to here says something very akin to the statement you're arguing against ("had a sexually graphic online chat in 2009 with an undercover police officer posing as a 15-year-old girl named Emily.") and specifically sites the denial ("Ritter's lawyer said his client did not think he was speaking with a minor.") -- Nat Gertler (talk) 16:57, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- I think readers will reasonably understand that "posing" in a context like this does not refer to roleplay but instead where one party was playing a part in an attempt to trick the other party. Would you say the wording Pranknet or Undercover (2019 TV series) or Prostitution in the Maldives or Konon Molody or Eddie Sayers or probably the majority of our 7000+ article which use the phrase "posing as" are problems as well since readers might get confused and think this refers to some sort of role-play? Nil Einne (talk) 04:51, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- Whatever Ritter's lawyer said, and I remind you Nat Gertler that you yourself previously spoke out against including statements of opinion, rather than facts, Scott Ritter was convicted of a sexual offence against a minor. He wasn't convicted of having sex chat with a police officer, he was convicted of having a sexually explicit chat with a minor. And it wasn't his first conviction, because Scott Ritter has a track record of sexual offences against minors. We need to stick to facts here, and call things as they are, and Scott Ritter is what he is. https://www.nbcnews.com/id/wbna45049386
As for your opinions on the merits of blog / blogging etc, that is really neither here nor there, we are here on Wikipedia, and we must stick to the principles of Wikipedia, which is sticking to verified, substantiated facts. It is a fact that Scott Ritter is a multiple sex offender, with all the offences relating to children.
Luganchanka (talk) 18:33, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- May I draw attention to the definitive account of Ritter's online behavior, and conviction - https://casetext.com/case/ritter-v-tuttle
"Unfazed by "Emily's" age, Ritter asked "Emily," "you want to see it finish?" Ritter then turned on the webcam and ejaculated in front of the camera for "Emily." Detective Venneman then notified Ritter of his undercover status and the undercover operation and directed Ritter to call the police station."
Luganchanka (talk) 18:42, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
The public internet search yielded news articles reporting that, in April 2011, Ritter communicated online in a chat room with an undercover police officer posing as a 14-year-old female and arranged to meet the "girl" at a local business in Albany. Ritter arrived at the designated location and was questioned by the authorities; however, he was released without any charges being filed. Two months later, Ritter was again caught in the same kind of sex sting after he tried to lure what he thought was a 16-year-old female to a fast food restaurant. Ritter was subsequently charged, but the Albany District Attorney placed the case on hold.
https://casetext.com/case/ritter-v-tuttle
Luganchanka (talk) 18:50, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- That magistrate's opinion is a court document, which is problematic to use in this article under WP:BLPPRIMARY. -- Nat Gertler (talk) 19:12, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- If that is indeed the case, and it is far from convincing that it is, then it is our job as good Wikipedia editors to find secondary sources which reference Ritter's sexual offences, and not whitewash them.Luganchanka (talk) 19:23, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- We have sufficient secondary sources. If they don't say the thing that you want to say, then we go with what the sources say anyway, within the limits of our policies and guidelines. -- Nat Gertler (talk) 19:28, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- If that is indeed the case, and it is far from convincing that it is, then it is our job as good Wikipedia editors to find secondary sources which reference Ritter's sexual offences, and not whitewash them.Luganchanka (talk) 19:23, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- It is important to note, and for Wikipedia to note, that Ritter has a string of sexual offence convictions involving children, and going back to 2001 -
This is not the first time Ritter has been in such trouble. According to reports, Ritter was charged in a June 2001 Internet sex sting in New York, but that case was dismissed.
He had been charged with attempted child endangerment after using an online chat room to meet another cop he thought was a 16-year-old girl at a Burger King restaurant.
- Luganchanka (talk) 06:27, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- We cover that in the article. Not everything gets in the intro. --Nat Gertler (talk) 06:32, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- Exactly what NatGertler said. This is not a request for comment on body content, just lede content. Step back and ask yourself whether this career-ending scandal belongs in front of the lede. If you said yes, you fall afoul of overwhelming consensus by editors acquainted with the intricacies of WP:BLP and WP:MOS. Luganchanka's apparently not-so-deep familiarity with policies or even the topical scope of discussion make it difficult to have a productive RfC. If someone is interested in inserting primary sources at this stage of engagement, there's a WP:CIR problem. I hope it's soon resolved individually, and this is best shown by dropping the stick. Just stopping. Cheers. JFHJr (㊟) 22:50, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- Theres nothing wrong with having a different opinion, disagreeing with a consensus isn't the same thing as falling afoul of it. There also is not yet a consensus here so you're going off half cocked. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 22:55, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- Seems to be a pretty clear consensus forming if it is not there already. – notwally (talk) 22:58, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- That seems to miss the point entirely. Consensus or not saying yes doesn't fall afoul of consensus. That would be some sort of weird thought crime standard, you are more than welcome to challenge or disagree with consensus, that isn't the same thing as editing against consensus. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 23:04, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- And that seems to miss the point that multiple other editors have repeatedly disagreed with Luganchanka in multiple discussions, and at a certain point, they need to WP:DROPTHESTICK. – notwally (talk) 23:11, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- I did not challenge that point, I support it... There was a discussion of Luganchanka's conduct a little while ago which ended before I could suggest expanding the topic ban under discussion to American politics broadly construed. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 19:58, 18 January 2025 (UTC)
- And that seems to miss the point that multiple other editors have repeatedly disagreed with Luganchanka in multiple discussions, and at a certain point, they need to WP:DROPTHESTICK. – notwally (talk) 23:11, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- That seems to miss the point entirely. Consensus or not saying yes doesn't fall afoul of consensus. That would be some sort of weird thought crime standard, you are more than welcome to challenge or disagree with consensus, that isn't the same thing as editing against consensus. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 23:04, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate that you see NO consensus until it's perhaps closed. But I don't ignore how the discussion is faring. Maybe you can notify me once I'm fully-cocked. I don't intend to invest much more time in this RfC. JFHJr (㊟) 23:15, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- Seems to be a pretty clear consensus forming if it is not there already. – notwally (talk) 22:58, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- Theres nothing wrong with having a different opinion, disagreeing with a consensus isn't the same thing as falling afoul of it. There also is not yet a consensus here so you're going off half cocked. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 22:55, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- Conviction ≠ arrest ≠ dismissed charge. 2601:340:8200:800:C4E4:AD79:95E2:252B (talk) 01:20, 18 January 2025 (UTC)
- How about "In 2011, Ritter was convicted of criminal offenses
afterfor engaging in sexually explicit online communications with a police officer posing as a minor." JFHJr (㊟) 22:30, 17 January 2025 (UTC)- I would suggest "arising from his engaging" rather than "after engaging"; this is causation, not merely correlation. -- Nat Gertler (talk) 23:11, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- How about just "for engaging" instead? Less buried verbs. Short, succinct. And it unambiguously states causation. JFHJr (㊟) 23:52, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- Shorter: "In 2011, Ritter was convicted of criminal offenses for having sexually explicit online communications with a police officer posing as a minor."? JFHJr (㊟) 00:31, 18 January 2025 (UTC)
- @Hemiauchenia, @NatGertler, @Notwally, @SmittenGalaxy, @All Tomorrows No Yesterdays, @DMacks, @Burrobert, @Nil Einne, @Horse Eye's Back: What do you think of the text immediately above, to appear at or near the end of the last paragraph of the lede? My idea is to make it short and accurate and reflect the body prose, without excessive verbiage. Cheers! JFHJr (㊟) 17:57, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
- Seems reasonable (but I have not been and do not plan to follow this level of editorial work closely). For this option, it would be clearer "In 2011, Ritter was convicted of criminal offenses for having sexually explicit online communications with a police officer who was posing as a minor." (otherwise ambiguous whether it was officer or Ritter was doing the posing). DMacks (talk) 18:10, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
- Tha's fine be me. -- Nat Gertler (talk) 18:45, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
- I think the prior suggestion "after engaging in" was preferable and probably technically more correct. I don't think anyone is going to be confused and think the prior wording does not imply causation. But I also don't really care either way and support using whichever everyone else prefers. I think the "who was" addition is helpful. – notwally (talk) 18:59, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
- Tha's fine be me. -- Nat Gertler (talk) 18:45, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
- Sounds fine, as long as whatever is chosen to insert is close enough to the consensus on the original sentence. I'm not excessively picky about the details on what exactly it says. SmittenGalaxy | talk! 21:42, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
- Seems reasonable (but I have not been and do not plan to follow this level of editorial work closely). For this option, it would be clearer "In 2011, Ritter was convicted of criminal offenses for having sexually explicit online communications with a police officer who was posing as a minor." (otherwise ambiguous whether it was officer or Ritter was doing the posing). DMacks (talk) 18:10, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
- @Hemiauchenia, @NatGertler, @Notwally, @SmittenGalaxy, @All Tomorrows No Yesterdays, @DMacks, @Burrobert, @Nil Einne, @Horse Eye's Back: What do you think of the text immediately above, to appear at or near the end of the last paragraph of the lede? My idea is to make it short and accurate and reflect the body prose, without excessive verbiage. Cheers! JFHJr (㊟) 17:57, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
- Shorter: "In 2011, Ritter was convicted of criminal offenses for having sexually explicit online communications with a police officer posing as a minor."? JFHJr (㊟) 00:31, 18 January 2025 (UTC)
- How about just "for engaging" instead? Less buried verbs. Short, succinct. And it unambiguously states causation. JFHJr (㊟) 23:52, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- I would suggest "arising from his engaging" rather than "after engaging"; this is causation, not merely correlation. -- Nat Gertler (talk) 23:11, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- The wording from the RfC or something close to it is fine with me. Burrobert (talk) 06:02, 20 January 2025 (UTC)
Attempted close
Maunuductive attempted to make some sort of pointy close which I have reverted. The reverted close text reads: "There is no need to continue this discussion as no new, valid arguments have been made in quite some time. The consensus is for 2B. The consensus language entails that the criminal issues in this person's bio are not notable in and of themselves and per Wikipedia:BLPCRIMINAL no labels (e.g., "offender"), templates, categories, infobox data, etc. should be inserted suggesting otherwise." Horse Eye's Back (talk) 16:27, 6 April 2025 (UTC)





