My name is Daniel and I work in marketing for Sitel. Recently, an IP address created a section called "News" with a sub-section called "Involvement in 2022 data breach at Okta". There was a security breach that attracted media attention, however TechCrunch explains Sitel's and Okta's conflicting perspectives, whereas Wikipedia's content relies exclusively on a citation to Okta's website. Additionally, creating a section and sub-section dedicated to the security breach, rather than a sentence in the History section, seems excessive.
I'd like to ask editors to consider removing the section cited to Okta's website and replace it with a 1-2 sentence summary of the TechCrunch piece at the end of the History section. In the alternate, I can take a stab at it and share a draft if preferred. DanSlavov (talk) 15:09, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
Pinging @North8000: and @John Broughton:, who have each helped with my COI requests in the past above. DanSlavov (talk) 10:23, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
- Well, the sourcing problems certainly couldn't get much worse......the whole thing is taken from and sourced to the website of one of the involved companies. I'm going to replace the section with a stub derived from the techcrunch article. Then somebody or we could build from there. North8000 (talk) 12:55, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
- I did that. It can be built from there. North8000 (talk) 13:26, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks @North8000:. Also, is it appropriate that the security breach have a dedicated section and sub-section? I see that WP:CRIT discourages dedicated sections for controversies and the manual of style discourages short sections. I didn’t know if you left it in a dedicated section/sub-section because you supported that formatting. DanSlavov (talk) 15:52, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
- I just left that aspect "as is". I didn't and don't have an opinion either way because I don't have enough knowledge to have such an opinion. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 19:14, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
- @North8000: @DanSlavov: I've edited the section, adding a May 2022 cite. I'm not fully convinced that the matter even deserves two sentences - I doubt it has any material impact on Sitel's finances or even their reputation in the business world. At minimum, it would be nice to expand the article so that this security incident is a smaller percentage of the total content, but I realize that news about private corporations tends to be sparse. -- John Broughton (♫♫) 18:44, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks for the ping. I don't have the perspective that would come from jumping in deeper on this, but it looks good to me. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 19:51, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
- @North8000: @John Broughton: I appreciate your help with this. I was thinking the "Ownership changes" section could be renamed to "Recent history" with the data breach being a paragraph under that, rather than the security breach having its own section. However, I wasn't entirely clear if you both supported or opposed my requested change to avoid having a dedicated section on the security breach? I wasn't complaining about the content itself anymore (North8000 already rewrote it) DanSlavov (talk) 17:21, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
My depth of involvement at this article/topic/ it's sources has been just enough to fix an obvious problem and to say that your ideas and proposed changes look OK with me, and those do look OK with me. I'm also happy to make those proposed changes when explicitly clearly defined. But I don't have the deeper involvement in the topic / sources to be intelligently making statements like "I think it should be this.......". Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 18:23, 20 April 2022 (UTC)