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I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Teachings of Prem Rawat's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

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  • From Techniques of Knowledge: Hunt, Stephen J. Alternative Religions: A Sociological Introduction (2003), pp.116-7, Ashgate Publishing, Ltd. ISBN 0-7546-3410-8".
    The major focus of Maharaji is on stillness, peace, and contentment within the individual, and his 'Knowledge' consists of the techniques to obtain them. Knowledge, roughly translated, means the happiness of the true self-understanding. Each individual should seek to comprehend his or her true self. In turn, this brings a sense of well-being, joy, and harmony as one comes in contact with one's "own nature." The Knowledge includes four meditation procedures: Light, Music, Nectar and Word. The process of reaching the true self within can only be achieved by the individual, but with the guidance and help of a teacher. Hence, the movement seems to embrace aspects of world-rejection and world-affirmation. The tens of thousands of followers in the West do not see themselves as members of a religion, but the adherents of a system of teachings that extol the goal of enjoying life to the full."
  • From Prem Rawat: Hunt (2003)

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT 00:42, 20 September 2009 (UTC)

Cleaning up the lead

This sentence (2nd last of lead) is a repeat of the first sentence of the lead and should be removed - "The core of Rawat's teachings is that the human need for fulfillment can be satisfied by turning inward to discover a constant source of joy within.[1] And the last sentence does not accurately reflect the article and should be removed - "Rawat has been criticized for a lack of intellectual content in his public discourses".[2][3][4]Momento (talk) 01:50, 14 June 2010 (UTC)

The latter sentence is well-sourced and thoroughly discussed. It is required for NPOV and removing it would be a serious violation of policy. This topic is under probation.   Will Beback  talk  02:01, 14 June 2010 (UTC)
Actually the article says- "His first western discourses were criticized by some religious scholars as evangelical and lacking in substance and for stressing direct experience over intellect or religious dogma".[5][6] And it is surely beyond doubt that the second last sentence of the lead is a copy of the first.Momento (talk) 02:15, 14 June 2010 (UTC)
Let's discuss one thing at a time.   Will Beback  talk  02:25, 14 June 2010 (UTC)

In checking the history, I see that, probably due to conflicting edits, the "intellectual content" was accidentally deleted by me from the body of the article. I've corrected that error.   Will Beback  talk  02:31, 14 June 2010 (UTC)

I've had a look at the sources you cite, Melton and Schnabel and can't find anything about Rawat's talking. If Kent is the only source it should be removed from the lead and his full quote included in the article.Momento (talk) 06:20, 14 June 2010 (UTC)
What are you talking about?   Will Beback  talk  06:34, 14 June 2010 (UTC)
Surely it's clear. You have used Melton and Schnabel as sources for your edit and I can't see anything in their material that refers to Rawat's talking.Momento (talk) 06:39, 14 June 2010 (UTC)
First, I reinstated material that you added, which I accidentally deleted as part of another edit a few minutes later. Second, we've discussed this material a few dozen times. I don't want to be rude, but I really think you need to review the past discussions rather than bringing up everything all over again as if the past never occurred. It's all in the archives.   Will Beback  talk  07:15, 14 June 2010 (UTC)
The past is long gone. Please provide sources for this - "Rawat has been criticized for a lack of intellectual content in his public discourses".[2][3][4] or I will delete it from the article and the lead..Momento (talk) 11:56, 14 June 2010 (UTC)
What are you talking about, it's cited right in the article, with page numbers of a reference even! If you remove this without a better cause, I will revert immediately. FYI, there's also an additional reference from Downton which no one's bothered to include, probably because it's unnecessary to add more to a common criticism of Rawat. -- Maelefique (talk) 19:24, 14 June 2010 (UTC)
Have you checked the sources? Only Melton says "The teachings of the Mission, particularly the public discourses of Maharaj Ji, were condemned as lacking in substance". There's nothing in Schnabel and Kent also says " I listened incredulously as my companions spoke glowingly about the message that they had just received. In fact, they were so moved by the guru's words that they made tentative plans to return the next day to pay homage to him by kissing his feet. I was flabbergasted, stunned." Barret says "The experience is an individual, subjective experience rather than a body of dogma, and in its Divine Light days the movement was sometime criticized for this stressing of emotional experience over intellect. Hunt says "For Elan Vital, the emphasis is on individual, subjective experience, rather than on a body of dogma." So why do we only have the criticism of Rawat's talks in the lead and none of the context? And none of the praise? Momento (talk) 20:56, 14 June 2010 (UTC)
As you know because you've quoted it before, Schnabel wrote what can be translated as :
  • The intelligent, ever-changing Bhagwan who gives daily performances is not more a charismatic leader than the pampered materialistic and intellectually quite unremarkable Maharaj Ji.
So we have sources that say the teaching is "intellectually quite unremarkable", that they "were condemned as lacking in substance", they were criticized for stressing "emotional experience over intellect", they "emphasized formal structure without substantive content", and that his parables are "banal". There is a source that says "The real problem, from this humble observer's perspective, was one of content, or should we say, lack of content. They didn't have much to say, and they said it over and over again. [..] He's ... far from eloquent, and ... you hear repetitive, empty aphorisms." So there are plenty of sources to support that simple summary.   Will Beback  talk  23:27, 14 June 2010 (UTC)
There are three sources cited for the lead sentence. Schnabel in comparing Rawat to Bhagwan disqualifies him as a source for the sentence, since compared to a midget Rawat is tall but we can't say "Schnabel says Rawat is tall". The fact that Kent describes that his companions "spoke glowingly about the message that they had just received. In fact, they were so moved by the guru's words" means that must also be included in any quote of his. And Melton only talks about "as lacking in substance". Of the two sources quoted in the article Hummel says "1975 in Orlando/Florida, he spoke in a language similar to American evangelical campaigners". And Kranenborg doesn't mention Rawat talking. Not one says "Rawat has been criticized for a lack of intellectual content in his public discourses". And please don't confuse what "they said" , the lead sentence clearly says "Rawat has been criticized for a lack of intellectual content in his public discourses". The only source of any value is Melton for "lacking in substance"and one source is not suitable for a place in the lead.Momento (talk) 08:13, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
I just quoted material from six different sources. It sounds like you're discounting a scholarly source (Schnabel) simply because you think he should not compare Rawat to Osho. We've been over this material over and over.   Will Beback  talk  08:41, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
Unfortunately not one of your sources say "Rawat has been criticized for a lack of intellectual content in his public discourses". The closest is Melton's "lacking in substance" and if that's all there is, it shouldn't be in the lead. Perhaps you know of some other sources.Momento (talk) 09:22, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
Momento, your arguments are specious and circular; and as Will points out, the material has been discussed beyond all reasonble limits. Unless you have new material to bring to the discussion you simply are not going to achieve any concensus for change - the fact that you don't like what is currently in the article is not a basis for further discussion.--Nik Wright2 (talk) 10:51, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
If any of our sources had the exact same phrase then we'd be plagiarizing them. It's a fair summary of the half-dozen sources.   Will Beback  talk  11:06, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
Back at the Rawat article there are seven sources that describe Rawat with exactly the same word - "charismatic" and you are trying to stop that from being in the lead. Here you can't find one source that links "Rawat" with "intellectual content" and yet you insist that it should be in the lead. "Intellectual" comes from something the DLM was criticised for ( Divine Light... the movement was sometime criticized for this stressing of emotional experience over intellect). As WP:SYN says "Do not combine material from multiple sources to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by any of the sources. If one reliable source says A, and another reliable source says B, do not join A and B together to imply a conclusion C that is not mentioned by either of the sources". Momento (talk) 11:47, 15 June 2010 (UTC)

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