Talk:Tianwan (Xu Shouhui)
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GA review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Tianwan (Xu Shouhui)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: Min968 (talk · contribs) 04:48, 28 February 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: Векочел (talk · contribs) 21:31, 18 July 2026 (UTC)
- GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, grammar, and understandability):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- a (prose, spelling, grammar, and understandability):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
- a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- "It was established in 1351 by Zou Pusheng, Peng Yingyu, and Xu Shouhui". Please give the Chinese characters for Zou Pusheng and Peng Yingyu.
- "A land registry revision announced in 1314". Does the source give any further details about this revision?
- In the early fourteenth century, Mongol rule began to show serious signs of strain. A cadastral survey of southern landowners, announced in 1314, sparked rebellion in Jiangxi under the self-declared king Cai Wujiu; essentially a tax revolt of the elite, Cai's uprising nonetheless attracted support from tenants and other commoners.
- "In the early 1320s, after floods and subsequent crop failures, a group of people who were labeled as bandits by the government began to move." I had trouble interpreting this sentence. Did these people launch a revolt?
- "By 1353, the Tianwan regime had already formed alliances with landowners who were involved in the administration of the country." Can you add some further detail about the alliances between the Tianwan and landowners? A few sentences will be fine.
- "Xu Shouhui then appointed his son as king in Changsha." Whose son was appointed, Xu's or Ni's?
- "By the spring of 1365, Zhu incorporated the Han territories into his own domain." What was the name of Zhu's state?
Векочел (talk) 22:26, 18 July 2026 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.