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Wine and mortality

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House wine listed at Redirects for discussion

False information on "Map showing the word for wine in European languages"

Lead section

Fantasy viking winemaker in the Americas

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Less Wine

Etymology

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Misleading and selective sources

GA review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Wine/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Ligaturama (talk · contribs) 10:44, 12 July 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 10:11, 9 August 2025 (UTC)

Comments

  • Lead is ok on production but needs to cover the social and consumption aspects of wine.
    • Done, kept it very brief.
  • History: is quite a long chapter. Given that History of wine is a main-linked subsidiary article, the chapter should not be longer than the lead section of that article (but fully cited). Unfortunately that article's lead doesn't summarize its article text very well (it's a bit heavy on Judaism, and light on other civilisations, for instance) so we could do with a better but brief summary both there and here.
    • "the chapter should not be longer than the lead section of [ History of wine ]" - is that an actual policy? One of the difficulties of this article is that so many of its sections have full articles covering their topics, and I was tempted to make this one purely a Template:Main link, but thought that was a cop-out (although I'd be very happy to do that if it's legit, couldn't find any policy on this). Obviously it's a huge topic; I'm sure I can strip out a few sentences, but some of it is relevant elsewhere (e.g. the invention of the wine bottle, and phylloxera), and I felt it would be incomplete without at least something from each century. History of wine needs a lot of work, and its own lead should probably be longer, but I think updating it is out of scope for this GA nomination. Ligaturama (talk) 14:59, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
      • Updating the other article is always beyond the GA criteria; my point is that if you are making a summary of that article to go with the "main" link in "summary style", you might as well copy your summary over there at no extra cost. (Conversely, if the section is not a summary of that article, the "main article" claim is false.) It's certainly hard to see why a summary here would be longer than a summary over there. A main link on its own is indeed a copout and not desirable; it makes some sense for a list of alumni, for instance, but not a lot for a history. The length thing is covered by the GACR requirements for coverage, for balance, and for not going into excessive detail (in any particular section): it just provides a simple guideline for roughly what to aim at.
        • Copied and trimmed
          • OK. Since the text is not a summary of the other article, I've tweaked the link to be 'further' not 'main', as explained above.
            • Thank you for fixing the refs on History of Wine, I can't believe I neglected to do that. Sheer incompetence on my part.
  • Styles: ok, though the weight given to "Orange" seems a bit undue. Most of the section feels like an expansion of the very meagre table; it might be clearer to expand and cite the table (with a bit of text and refs in each table cell), to beef up the text before the table slightly, and to do without all the text after the table. The mention of regions does not belong in this section, for instance (that's Production).
    • Done; I've shifted most of the content into the table and put some stuff in footnotes to keep it short. Orange wine only gets two sentences which I don't think is too much, it's been experiencing a dramatic increase in popularity over the past decade.[citation needed]
  • Production: ok. I find the "Containers" subsection a bit overweight; why not trim it a bit as it's only marginally on-topic really, both for the section and indeed for the article.
    • Done
  • Classification: ok. The Swiss bit may need updating as 2022 has been and gone.
    • I really struggled to find anything on Switzerland, they only export 1-2% of their produce. I've updated it with the only relevant thing I could find.
  • Consumption: ok. Some copyediting would help, e.g. "not just ... as well": in fact that sentence could be cut down to "Wine is useful in cooking." as we don't need to repeat the stuff about value as a drink, we've said that already.
    • Done
  • Storage: need not be a whole chapter, suggest demote to subsection of Consumption.
    • Done
  • Collecting: this section is just one aspect (qua, a subsection) of wine's social and cultural significance, which (barring religion) is almost absent from this article.
    • Moved
  • Religious significance: this section is plainly WP:UNDUE at nearly 700 words. It should not be longer than, say, 'Collecting'. The Judaism section is perhaps the most obviously overdone, close to WP:COATRACK but all of it feels overweight. See next item for suggested treatment.
    • Trimmed
Wine selling advertisement and prices, "Ad Cucumas" shop, ancient Roman painting in Herculaneum
'Still Life with Bottles, Wine, and Cheese' by John F. Francis, 1857, ... there are plenty of other wine paintings from different periods
  • The missing In society chapter can certainly cover collecting, but it needs also to mention wine as a social lubricant, the whole Wine, women and song thing - why not summarize that article and use some of its sources - wine in art (a small gallery of famous paintings would be apposite here), wine in poetry (e.g. Keats's "Ode to a Nightingale" ("O for a beaker full of the warm South...")), wine in music (e.g. Haydn's The Seasons, complete with a setting of James Thomson's riotous lines to wine in his poem "Autumn"), in literature (Canterbury Tales, "Good wine is a good familiar creature, if used well." Othello (Act 2, Scene 3), Oscar Wilde, Ernest Hemingway ...), wine bars, cultures like France and Italy where wine is/was expected at meals, etc. I suggest that you make both 'Collecting' and 'In religion' subsections of 'In society', i.e. we'll get a structure like
    • In society
      • Wine bars
      • In restaurants
      • In European culture (esp. France, Italy)
      • 'Wine, women, and song'
      • In music
      • Collecting
      • In art
      • In poetry
      • In literature
      • In religion
    • All those subsections should be brief and of roughly similar length.
      • I believe these are now all done. Couldn't find much on music but I've incorporated it into the arts section.
        • More could be said, but the mentions will do for GA.

Images

  • All the images are on Commons and are plausibly licensed. Several of them seem to include materials that may be under trademark; only one, the Margaux bottle, actually declares that in its Licensing section, so it might be wise to do the same for the other images that seem likely to need it.
    • Done
  • The images are in the main apposite and helpful. The lead image (and its caption) is the dullest; a better selection of samples in glasses (Rosé? Sparkling? Dessert?) would make the infobox more informative, more representative of the article text, and less pedestrian. This could be done with a group of images of the same size using the infobox parameter | static_image_name = {{multiple images | border = infobox | perrow= 2/2/2 | total_width=260px | image1 = abc.jpg | caption1 = ABC | image2= | caption2= ... etc}}, it doesn't require a single image.
    • Done; I agree that the original image was dull (I've replaced it with an extremely similar image), but it definitely meets MOS:IMAGEREL, as do the additions. Images of wine can be only so exciting, and most of the wine images on Commons are pretty rubbish.

Sources

  • A suitable mix of books, journal articles, and news items.
  • Spot-checks: [5] ok, [36] ok, [46] doesn't mention reduction or attribute it to alternative closures?, [56] dead link, [72] ok, [102] ok.
    • Fixed these

Summary

  • This article is of a mature vintage, but is lacking most of what would be expected in terms of wine's impact on culture and society. Accordingly this part of the article will need substantial work, incorporating some existing materials. Detailed suggestions for this are given above. The lead will need to be extended to cover the new chapter. When this is done I will conduct a second pass review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:37, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
    Thank you for your review, I'll aim to address its points over the next few days. To discuss any specific points, or to keep track of what I've done, I'll put a new comment on this top-level review so things don't get mixed up. Ligaturama (talk) 14:57, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
    Thanks for the thoughts, but please, don't do that. Could we please have each reply/discussion under the comment that it applies to, rather than down here in one massive undiscussable lump. I'll move the reply paragraphs to where they apply now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:29, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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