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This article was very recently created by a new editor who got very active on articles about hedge funds and related firms in August, and then, just as suddenly, stopped editing. About this same time, a veteran editor (non unreasonably) templated it as needing improvement. This is where I come in: I've been asked by Winton Capital Management to get involved and see about making this a substantially better article. Hence I have this potential conflict of interest to acknowledge, and I'd like to seek consensus prior to making direct edits.

In the past several weeks I have put together a much-expanded version that I believe is a major improvement, not just in Winton's view, but highly consistent with Wikipedia's goals. The new draft is written with expert advice, scrupulously cited, and, I hope others will agree, not unduly promotional. Winton has done very well in its existence, but all claims thereto are verified with third-party sources. It is also written in British English, as is appropriate to the subject matter. You can find this alternative draft here: User:WWB Too/Winton Capital Management.

If there is anything in my draft which is a complete non-starter then I am open to discussing it, but if any editor who finds this note agrees this is an improvement on the current article, I'd prefer to see it copied over now and make any adjustments later. One more note: I plan to seek input at relevant WikiProjects and from previously involved editors, but if there is no objection after a week or so, I may just move it myself. Cheers, WWB Too (talk) 21:42, 12 October 2011 (UTC)

I left my comments on your draft on its talk page. It looks good, and applaud you for calling attention to the COI. When I templated this article, it was intended to improve references and verify notability, both of which happened quickly, so I removed the templates and did some WP:MOS cleanup. But your draft is much more thorough, and I would endorse it. Cmprince (talk) 00:16, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
Thanks very much. I made several changes based on your feedback, explained in some detail on the project talk page, and copied the draft over. Next I'll obtain and upload a logo for the infobox, and call it good. Cheers, WWB Too (talk) 14:18, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
You've done a nice job of organizing the material and citing sources. Over the next days, I'll review and make changes as needed. I look forward to working together to improve the article. Cheers! --KeithbobTalk 02:57, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
I'm going through and copy editing the article. I am noticing a tendency to embellish in a way that is not characteristic of an encyclopedia. In general though, the writing, research and organization are very good and neutrally written. Nice job! --KeithbobTalk 03:30, 24 October 2011 (UTC)


Style points

We should avoid the nickname "Winton" in the article. Instead we can say the entire name of the subject, or use the abbreviation WCM (established in the lead) or we can say "the company" or "the firm". I know "Winton" is used by some industry magazines etc. but we need a higher standard for this encyclopedia. Thanks for your help in making references to the subject uniform in the article.--KeithbobTalk 17:20, 25 October 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for your attention, Keithbob. I'm busy on other things at the moment, but I may have some time to weigh in up ahead, so I'll check in here again and with you when I have the opportunity. Cheers, WWB Too (talk) 13:34, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
      • Thanks WWB, a couple of other small points.
  • We should keep in mind the subject is WCM, not Harding. So its not really appropriate to say Harding did this, Harding did that. He did those things as an administrator of the firm, so we just say the company did this or that and leave Harding out of it, IMO. Its OK, of course, to say he is the founder, chairman etc and that he guides the company.
  • Also the lead could be expanded to to summarize the entire article a little better while staying away from details. Last point, we should be careful to not keep repeating facts about their reliance on data research and how many researchers etc.
    • I've tried to neutralize all of this that with my edits so far. Anyway, these are just comments to explain my edits. Overall its a very good article and on a good contribution to expanding the encyclopedia.
    • Though I haven't checked any of the sources, the article seems to be very well documented. I would caution though about over using a single source. I note that one source has been cited 18 times when there are 30 other sources to choose from. We should be careful not to give too much undue weight to one source as that can create some POV in the article.
  • Again, thanks for your contributions and hard work!  :-) Cheers! --KeithbobTalk 14:32, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

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