User talk:72.82.52.106

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Welcome to Wikipedia. The recent edit you made to the page Ashkenazi intelligence has been reverted, as it appears to be unconstructive. Use the sandbox for testing; if you believe the edit was constructive, please ensure that you provide an informative edit summary. You may also wish to read the introduction to editing. Thank you. Fastily (talk) 02:48, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

I think that para, which I am copy editting is very poorly written. Not even making a point for or against the theory (honest, officer), but "the fact that" is not Strunkian. And there is a huge amount of duplication within the para. I will make it better. I will go ahead and use a sandbox to rewrite the whole thing at once though. It is probably annoying to watch me fix it sentence by sentence. Please do not revert that without discussion though. Since I will have put work in, used the sandbox as you asked, and made it better...72.82.52.106 (talk) 02:54, 12 April 2009 (UTC)