User talk:Bget023

Hello, Bget023, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:08, 30 September 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for trying to expand the article Adelheid Herrmann, but your teacher should have told you that all content added to Wikipedia must be supported by references to reliable sources, and that this is enforced even more carefully for articles about living people. I have undone ("reverted") your edit. If you have sources, please add the information again with references. Thanks. PamD 22:40, 8 October 2025 (UTC)

Please also take more care to write in clear English and to check your work. The sentence "Herrmann also recent research is the fiscal pathways initiative which is a collaborative program that is focusing on the Alaskan and indigenous communities in the Bristol Bay region." is just not good enough for this precious international encyclopedia. Another small point is that quote marks and apostrophes must be "straight", not "curly" or "slanted". Thanks. PamD 23:30, 8 October 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for catching this @PamD.

@Bget023, If you need a refresher on how to add citations, please consult this training module. Remember all information that is added to Wikipedia needs to have an inline citation to a reliable source. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:07, 11 October 2025 (UTC)

Your article looks very well balanced. I saw that you added sentencing trends and disparities which looks well written. I will say that there were few citations added and I think it would have been stronger if you found other sources other than the article used. Backing up the percentages with another source could also strengthen the statistics, Overall I do think it was written well. Paytonz (talk) 22:26, 24 October 2025 (UTC)

Hello paytonz, I appreciate your thoughtful and considerate peer review that you provided. You have made good suggestions about the importance of adding more citations from credible sources. Indeed, adding more citation will improve the reliability and credibility of the disparities in the murder cases under the Washington state law. Your thoughtful feedback will be taken into consideration. Thank you. Bget023 (talk) 17:31, 30 October 2025 (UTC)