User talk:Kellyflips
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Hi my name is Kelly and I am looking forward to working on articles having to do with Achievement Gap in the United States, Anti-Racism in mathematics teaching, Multicultural Education, and Progressive Education. Kellyflips (talk) 01:24, 11 February 2013 (UTC)
I like where you are heading but these are still pretty well-developed pages (except for anti-racism in math teaching). Let's talk in class to narrow to a specific contribution you can make. Ajungle (talk) 17:52, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
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Hey Kelly! I looked over the page you have been working on and I have a few suggestions for you. I like the organization and format you have for your page. It would be helpful however if the introductory section was a little more clear or specific about what the issue was. I could glean there was some social issue associated with it, but I didn't really get a grasp on what the subject or issue was. Could there be a few sentences that clarify what the problem is and who it affects? Interculturalcomm.student.7069 (talk) 18:48, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for your suggestions! I've added a few paragraphs explaining some of the things you mentioned :) Kellyflips (talk) 00:29, 29 April 2013 (UTC)