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im trying to write a new article and it has been deleted for 2 times now althoughi changed it a lot the second time.can someone please tell me whats wrong with it?i dont seem to understand thanks :) here it is :

AOG offers games under different categories: Action, Adventure, Sports, Racing, Girls, and Strategy.

Currently  is offering 14 games on its Sign-Sign-On portal:

Newsha7 (talk) 10:05, 5 August 2014 (UTC)

Hi Newsha. Here's a quick review of the main issues.

An encyclopedic article should be about the company - it's history, significance and purpose. What you've got, above, is largely just a list of products and awards, which make the article seem highly promotional. :Wikipedia needs reliable, independent sources to support its content - of the references you've provided, only the arabnet.me one could be considered to meet those criteria. All of the rest are from AOG themselves, which makes them highly suspect (and also looks like further promotion. You've also included links to external sites throughout the text, which goes against Wikipedia's external links policy.

To make the article more suitable:

• Find more sources which talk about AOG (but which are not derived from AOG press releases or AOG themselves). This page gives you a quick overview of the sort of sources you need.
• Using these sources, write some more information about the organisation itself, not its products.
• Trim the list of products to include just the most notable releases.
• Remove all of the external links in the article except for references (which should be formatted [[User:Yunshui/References for beginners|like this)

Then submit the page to Articles for creation, and you should see it accepted. Yunshui ^雲_水 10:46, 5 August 2014 (UTC)

Hello Newsha7,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged ArabOnlineGames for deletion, because it seems to be promotional, rather than an encyclopedia article.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can contest this deletion, but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions.  SmileBlueJay97  talk  11:24, 6 August 2014 (UTC)

A tag has been placed on Arabonlinegames, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Click here to contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator, or if you have already done so, you can place a request here. Hell in a Bucket (talk) 08:31, 9 August 2014 (UTC)

A tag has been placed on ArabOnlineGames, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Click here to contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator, or if you have already done so, you can place a request here. Hell in a Bucket (talk) 08:10, 10 August 2014 (UTC)

I apoligize for the delayed response. The page is being deleted because it is not showing reliable sourcing to show how it is a notable business and appears to be advertising the service rather then report on a noteworthy subject for an encyclopedia. Just my observations. Hell in a Bucket (talk) 08:18, 10 August 2014 (UTC)