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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 06:48, 8 March 2016 (UTC)

Page: Schistosoma mansoni

Article History

A good amount of revisions seem to focus on syntactic edits and adding in missing citations. Recently seems to be focused on edits of the ‘Genome’ section.

Talk Page

Of the four items on the talk page, three of them are from 2007.

Rating

Most of the article is very legible, and easy to understand. Morphological characteristics and life cycle aspects of the parasite are easy to understand. While I might say that the article is ‘good,’ the amount of time between citations, and the absence of citations from even full paragraphs makes me a bit suspect of the page, and a good number need to be added before it can be more definitively a ‘good’ Wiki article.

What Needs to be Added:

Citations, obviously. A section on general physiology of the parasite, how it maintains homeostasis, water absorption, digestion, energy use, etc. More description on the ‘Treatment’ section on how these drugs affect the physiology of the trematode.

PencilNick (talk) 01:40, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Physiological Edit

Added statement to the Spiracles article regarding their activity affecting respiratory rates of insects. PencilNick (talk) 03:23, 4 April 2016 (UTC)

Bibliography for Edits

Kasschau, Margaret R. et al. (1995). “Influence of pH and temperature on hemolysis by adult Schistosoma mansoni membranes.” Journal of Experimental Zoology 271(4): 315-322.

Wilmer, Pat, Graham Stone, and Ian Johnston (2005). Environmental Physiology of Animals. United Kingdom: Blackwell Publishing. pp. 677-692.

Ressurreicao, Margarida et al. (2015). “Sensory Protein Kinase Signaling in Schistosoma mansoni Cercariae: Host Location and Invasion.” Journal of Infectious Diseases 212(11): 1787-1797.

Patocka, Nicholas et al. (Jan 2014). “Serotonin Signaling in Schistosoma mansoni: A Serotonin-Activated G Protein-Coupled Receptor Controls Parasite Movement.” PLoS Pathogens 10(1): e1003878.

Mendonca-Silva, DL et al. (2006). “Role of calcium influx through voltage-operated calcium channels and of calcium mobilization in the physiology of Schistosoma mansoni muscle contractions.” Parasitology 133(1): 67-74.

PencilNick (talk) 05:25, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Shistosoma mansoni Page Edits (Draft)

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