Hi Kansas Bear. I want to thank you for this edit regarding the plagiarism in Abbasid Caliphate. At the time of editing the article, I was not aware that citing a source word-by-word was plagiarism and would violate a policy/guideline/MOS, and since you did not link WP:PLAG or any page explaining that, I was confused by your post and did not respond. However, I gather that my lack of understanding of the matter was to blame; therefore I apologize for that.
Regarding the current version, the source states:
The most important feature of the architecture of early Baghdad was the celebrated round city, whose walls encircled the caliph’s official residence and the first great mosque. While it is impossible to cite any direct influence, there were a number of examples of round cities from pre-islamic Persia which may have provided inspiration. Ctesiphon was surrounded by oval ramparts, although this may have reflected the natural growth of the city rather than deliberate planning. Clearer parallels can be found in the Sasanian round cities at Dārābgerd and Fīrūzābād, which like Baghdad had four main gates, in Fārs, and at the very striking Parthian and Sasanian ritual center at Taḵt-e Solaymān in Media.
I find that two changes to the current version are much needed, paraphrasing the current statement from "The round plan reflects pre-Islamic Persian urban design" into something along the lines of "The round design was a crucial architectural element of the early metropolis, which may have been based on the layout of Ctesiphon and several cities in pre-Islamic Persia, however, no proof of direct influence exists", and placing the statement in the body section instead of the image caption. The reasons for that are the following:
- Correct source representation; since the source emphasizes in the beginning that there is no proof of direct influence.
- Neutrality and undue weight regarding placement; since the source makes it clear that this is a disputed theory, and not a fact. WP:STRUCTURE states: "It may also create an apparent hierarchy of fact where details in the main passage appear "true" and "undisputed", whereas other, segregated material is deemed "controversial", and therefore more likely to be false." WP:UNDUE states: "Undue weight can be given in several ways, including but not limited to depth of detail, quantity of text, prominence of placement, and juxtaposition of statements."
Again, I'm aware of the policy regarding edits on behalf of blocked users, but I find these changes "verifiable" and "productive" as the policy states, therefore I thought I'd inform you. Thanks you. Tarook97 (talk) 21:09, 28 February 2018 (UTC)