User talk:TheGentlestRaven
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Lloyd A. Carney (October 18)
This submission appears to read more like a résumé than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, that provide secondary analysis of the subject's life in context. In contrast, résumés will tend to list individual accomplishments and rely on self-published sources, which might unduly focus on positive events and fail to properly balance their weight. Please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies by using independent, reliable sources.
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Hello, TheGentlestRaven!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! – LuniZunie ツ(talk) 18:39, 18 October 2025 (UTC) |
Draft:Lloyd A. Carney
Hello, I'm Jay8g. An edit that you recently made to Draft:Lloyd A. Carney seemed to be generated using a large language model (an "AI chatbot" or other application using such technology). Text produced by these applications is usually unsuitable for an encyclopedia, and may contain factually inaccurate statements, fictitious citations, or other problems. You should instead read reliable sources and then summarize those in your own words. Your edit may have been reverted. If you want to practice editing, please use your sandbox. If you think a mistake was made, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Jay8g [V•T•E] 23:03, 27 October 2025 (UTC)
- Hi Jay8g,
- Thank you for reaching out and for taking the time to review my edit. I’m new to Wikipedia editing and appreciate your guidance.
- For context, I’m familiar with Lloyd Carney’s work and have been working to update his page to reflect more recent accomplishments and improve structure and flow. I submitted a first draft in July 2025, and another reviewer (LuniZunie) recently noted that my initial draft read too much like a résumé, so I’ve since revised it to improve the tone.
- To clarify, all research, writing, and verification of sources are my own. I did use an LLM to assist with formatting and syntax (mainly to ensure correct Wiki markup, which I have never used before) but I spent hours carefully reviewing and fact-checking every sentence and citation to avoid any fabricated or inaccurate material.
- If possible, could you share any specific parts of the draft that raised concerns about AI-generated text or factual accuracy? I’d really appreciate your feedback so I can make appropriate revisions and learn how to better meet Wikipedia’s content standards.
- Thank you again for your time and help.
- -TheGentlestRaven TheGentlestRaven (talk) 23:18, 27 October 2025 (UTC)