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Savannah River Plant

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Nominator(s): Hawkeye7 (talk)

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I am nominating this article for A-Class review because it was originally part of Savannah River Site but was split in two. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 00:32, 17 February 2026 (UTC)

Support Comments by A.Cython

A very interesting article about a group of facilities to produce materials relevant to nuclear weapons, etc. Overall, it is well-written and sourced. My comments are mostly minor/cosmetic and note that I am not an expert. I also assume it is ok to skip the GA review process.

Lead

  • I feel it is not reflective of the content, for example, the neutrino experiment, space exploration, and the environmental activities are not mentioned.
    checkY Lead has been expanded. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:51, 12 April 2026 (UTC)
    Thanks the lead looks great! A.Cython(talk) 00:30, 13 April 2026 (UTC)

Prose

  • did not want it too isolated → did not want it to be too isolated
    checkY Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • on expensive water purification → on the cost of expensive water purification
    checkY Really cosmetic now, but changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • A announcement was → An announcement was
    checkY Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • secure access to the water supply, and provide flexibility → secured access to the water supply, and provided flexibility
    checkY Changed as suggested to match tense. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • were not fixed → finalized (?)
    checkY "Fixed" is probably what the source says, so changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • Decision were taken → "Decision was taken" or "Decisions were taken"
    checkY Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • to an interim measure → to be an interim measure
    checkY Added missing word. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • ceased mid-1988 → ceased in mid-1988
    checkY Added missing word. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • operate at Savannah River Plant → operate at the Savannah River Plant
    checkY Added missing word. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • low power → low-power
    checkY Hyphenated. I note that 30 Watts is not converted to Imperial, as metric is used in US customary for electricity. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • was begun in June → was begun in June
    checkY Re-worded. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • level to be raised → level was raised
    Keeping this one. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • To meet the objections → To address the objections
    checkY Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • Final concentration was done → The final concentration was done
    Keeping this one as is. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • really existed or not → existed
    checkY Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • heavy-water reactor key advantage → heavy-water reactor's key advantage
    checkY Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • Savannah River Projec to → Savannah River Project to
    checkY Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • five year intervals → five-year intervals
    checkY Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • River Plantby → River Plant by (add space)
    checkY Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • If you do not use an acronym then you do not need to define it, e.g., NPR, EPA, SREL, SRARP, ERDA
    checkY Artefacts of the article split. Removed. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
    • Also, is there a reason why AEC is defined twice?
    checkY No. Removed. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
  • Is there a reason why in "Open to the public" the answer is in boldface, i.e, No?
    checkY Just the way it was when I found it. Unboldened. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)

Consistency

  • At the lead you say use ceased in 1988. but at the infobox In use 1951–1989. So which was the final year? Note the status says active, which confuses the reader. Perhaps expanding the lead would help the reader to read the infobox better.

Wikilinks

Note

  • [Optional] I am not aware of restrictions against mixed reference style system, but my limited understanding is that at higher levels it is appreciated to have a clean and consistent reference style. A.Cython(talk) 20:27, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
    What sort of inconsistency so we have? Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:16, 10 April 2026 (UTC)
    Under the section references, the citations of books, whose information is located under "Sources", is mixed with the citation information of reports and papers (e.g., 156, 157, 158), meaning that reference information is located at two different sections. A different way to see this is by asking whether there reports and papers should be under "Sources", are they considered sources? In my mind, a fully segregated information helps with the organization of the article's bibliography and eventually to the curious reader. I suppose this is more of my personal opinion so please ignore this if not relevant. A.Cython(talk) 22:18, 10 April 2026 (UTC)

Drive-by comment - as this is a clear candidate for using American English, shouldn't it be "aluminum" not "aluminium"? Hog Farm Talk 20:30, 17 April 2026 (UTC)

WP:ALUMINIUM: For articles about chemistry-related topics, Wikipedia follows the spellings recommended by the International Union of Pure and Applied Chemistry (IUPAC): aluminium not aluminum, sulfur not sulphur, caesium not cesium. These spellings should be used in all chemistry-related articles on English Wikipedia, even if they conflict with the national spelling variety otherwise used in the article. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:28, 17 April 2026 (UTC)

Support by Dumelow

Just started and only read the first section so far, will continue when I can - Dumelow (talk) 07:17, 11 June 2026 (UTC)

  • "In response to the detonation of Soviet Union's first atomic bomb on 29 August 1949"
    Missing "the"
    checkY Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:03, 11 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "An increase in plutonium production required more reactors. There were concerns about the vulnerability of the Hanford Site to Soviet bombers, but considerations of cost led to the idea of a second plutonium production site being rejected in 1947 and 1948."
    Were more reactors built at Hanford then? Otherwise leads the reader to question if or how plutonium production was increased
    H and DR Reactors were authorized at Hanford; they started production in 1949 and 1950 respectively. In the meantime plutonium production was by restarting B Reactor. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:03, 11 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "By using heavy water as a moderator, they could be fueled with natural rather than enriched uranium"
    Might be worth mentioning why this would be advantageous, presumably on cost and availability grounds?
    Yes, it much cheaper and more readily available, and the heavy water reactor makes more efficient use of it. Unfortunately, I am having trouble sourcing that. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:03, 11 June 2026 (UTC)
    However the cheaper fuel (at today's prices slightly enriched uranium is ten times as expensive as natural uranium but it would have been more so then) was offset by the high cost of heavy water. Uranium was (incorrectly) thought to be scarce in the 1950s, and a heavy water reactor made more efficient use of it. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The AEC's director of production, Walter J. Williams, suggested that what was required was a new production site, a new site office, and a new contractor. For the new contractor, the AEC Commissioners turned to DuPont"
    Might be worth stating who the existing contractor at Hanford was either earlier or in the next paragraph
    General Electric? Why? Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:03, 11 June 2026 (UTC)
    Just thought if we are mentioning "a new contractor" it would be worth knowing who they were switching from, but nothing major if you don't agree
    checkY Added that GE took over the management of the Hanford Site. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "DuPont appointed Charles H. Topping to head its site selection effort"
    Topping is mentioned only here, he has no article. Is he worth mentioning at all?
    checkY Some editors don';t like it when I say "DuPont employed a version of the criteria that it had used for chemical plants." Changed. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "In September, as a result of the outbreak of the Korean War in June, the AEC increased the number of reactors to five, with the possibility of a sixth, power-generating, reactor."
    Presumably there was a worry that the production of nuclear weapons would need to be increased from the original plan?
    Well yes, but at the same time there was the hydrogen bomb program's demand for large amounts of tritium, which could only be produced in reactors at the expense of plutonium. At the time there was no working thermonuclear design. The Teller-Ulam design ultimately adopted did not require such large amounts of tritium. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "Each production reactor would have a separation plant, so this meant twelve facilities, of which would occupy about 1 square mile (2.6 km2)"
    There's an "each" missing after the second comma, I think?
    You've previously said five reactors "with the possibility of a sixth, power-generating, reactor". Given two separation plants per production reactor would the sixth reactor also have been used for production?
    checkY Yes. In fact, this occurs today. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The separation plants had to be at least 1 mile (1.6 km) apart and the reactors at least 2 miles (3.2 km) from any other plant. The whole area had to be surrounded by a 5.5 miles (8.9 km) exclusion zone from which any inhabitants would have to be removed"
    might be worth stating why this was needed
    checkY Added "for safety and security". Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "twenty-nine copies of the findings of the site survey were produced, and presented to the AEC Site Review Committee on 20 November.[31][32] The Site Survey Committee had been established by the AEC in August to review DuPont's findings"
    Site Review or Site Survey committee?
    checkY Site Review Committee. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • Is the number of copies of the survey produced important enough to mention
    checkY Probably not. Deleted. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "the towns of Jackson and Snelling were saved, but Dunbarton and Ellenton remained within the boundary"
    Consistency; you've previously described these as villages
    Changed to "small towns". Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "the property was condemned in the Federal district Court. The money was deposited with the court, and the owner could ask for up to 80 to 90 percent as credit against the final award. Property that was required immediately was obtained under a Federal declaration of taking"
    If these are not proper names I am not sure why "Federal" is capitalised
    checkY De-capitalised. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "While black and white neighborhoods were intermingled in the old town, the new was built along modern lines, with strict racial segregation, black and white communities being divided by the highway"
    "modern lines" doesn't read right here to me, "then modern" is more accurate but a bit clunky, perhaps there is another wording that works
    checkY Deleted "along modern lines". Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • " Strom Thurmond, a former governor of South Carolina who had run against Truman in 1948, was a partner in the Aiken law firm of Thurman, Lybrand and Simons"
    is the law firm name right? I would have expected "Thurmond, Lybrand and Simons".
    checkY Oops. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The site eventually encompassed 310 square miles (800 km2)"
    All previous areas have been quoted in acres or hectares, using the same units or providing an additional conversion here might be helpful.
    There are 100 hectares to the square km. Anyone can multiply that in their head. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "even before startup R Reactor was found to be capable of 700 MW, and in upgrades later years would permit the reactors to be run at up to 2,000 MW."
    Should this be "... and upgrades in later years..."
    checkY Yes. Changed to "upgrades in". Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "computerised" is presumably spelt with a z in American English?
    checkY Yes. Well spotted. (So complicated - why isn't "compromised" spelt with a z?) Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "the 33rd AAA Battalion departed, the 425th and 478 were disbanded, and further military construction was cancelled."
    Missing "th" after 478
    checkY Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The Army presence at the Savannah River Plant ended in 1960"
    if the AA units disbanded in 1957, do we know what personnel remained until 1960?
    checkY Re-worded to make it clear that the 75-mm guns remained until 1959. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)
  • Capital F needed on "US Air force"
    checkY Capitalised. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:07, 12 June 2026 (UTC)

Read down to "Cold War era operations"

Changes look good to me, continuing:

  • "The Savannah River Plant, as SRS was known until 1 April 1989"
    I think this is a relic of the article split, you've not mentioned the SRS previously. Perhaps the eight later mentions should also be SRP?
    checkY Yes, a relic of the split. Changed to SRP. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 June 2026 (UTC)
  • I don't think much of the information about the plant in the first paragraph of "Nuclear weapon program" needs restating. You've already covered the construction of the same.
    checkY Removed most of this - the rest merged into the Construction section. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 June 2026 (UTC)
  • You've previously said there were six separation plants, each at least a mile apart from the others but here you mention only two? Were they rationalised later?
    checkY Only 200-F and 200-H were built. Added a bit about this. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "Construction of the first reactor at the Savannah River Plant, R Reactor, commenced June 1951, and was completed in July 1953, twenty-five months later"
    Was this the first reactor or the first production reactor, as you have previously mentioned test reactors?
    checkY Yes. Clarified. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 June 2026 (UTC)
    I don't think we need to tell the readers that July 1953 is 25 months after June 1951
    I wanted to emphasise how quickly the reactors were built, in contrast to what happens today. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "R Reactor became operational in December 1953; the Savannah River Plant reactors required a longer period of testing and tweaking before becoming fully operational"
    What are they being compared to here? Presumably the Hanford reactors?
    checkY Yes. Re-worded to make this clearer. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The allowed C Reactor's power level to be raised to 2575 MW in 1960, and then to 2915 MW in 1967"
    Typo on "the" for "this"?
    checkY Yes. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The operation of these reactors had become increasingly complex owing to the extensive manual oversight required to control various nuclear fuel types and to monitor targets irradiated at increasing high specific powers in 600 fuel positions"
    Should "increasing" be "increasingly"? But perhaps could be reworded to avoid repetition
    checkY Yes. Re-worded to avoid repetition. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The first mainframe computers installed in any of the productions reactors were the General Electric GE-412"
    Surplus s on "production"
    checkY Deleted. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 June 2026 (UTC)
  • By the end of 1964, this system was scanning more signals than any computer in the United States"
    Reads better to me as "any other computer" as this computer was also in the US
    checkY Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 June 2026 (UTC)

Read down to "Détente"

Continuing on:

  • "R Reactor had already sprung some leaks."
    Do we know what was leaking?
    checkY Heavy water. I thought it was obvious but clarified. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "there was an unexpected power surge from 500 MW to 925 MW within 2.5 minutes. This was one of the three worst reactor incidents at the SRP."
    Worst by what measure? You don't mention what actual effect the surge had.
    Um, the power surged from 500 MW to 925 MW in 2.5 minutes and everybody started thinking of scramming. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "By 1972, all the Hanford production reactors and reprocessing activities had been shut down and N Reactor converted to maximize electricity production.[88][76] The nuclear weapons production complex was reduced to just 4 production reactors: P, K, and C reactors at Savannah River Plant, able to keep pace with demand by operating at high power levels, and N reactor at Hanford."
  • I found this confusing. You say all production reactors at Hanford has been shut down but then include N Reactor there in a list of four remaining production reactors.
    checkY Because I know the story from reading about and working on the article on the Hanford Site. Clarified that N Reactor was a dual-purpose rector. A pity there are so few Americans on Wikipedia; the article on the Washington Public Power Supply System could use a lot of work. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The last of the heavy water production units at the Savannah River Plant was closed in 1982"
    Presumably they imported heavy water from somewhere else for the reactors?
    From Canada mostly. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The effort had a budget of $214 million (equivalent to $836 million in 2025) and a workforce of 800 for the renovation effort."
    Should be able to reword this to avoid repetition of "effort"
    checkY Reworded. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "a series of lawsuits from individuals and organizations concerning the discharge of hot water into Steel Creek and 14 curies (520 GBq) of caesium-137 from Steel Creek into the Savannah River."
    You've only previously said cooling water was discharged into the ponds or the river, so I think it would be helpful to establish how Steel Creek fits into this. Presumably this was a new discharge for the reactivated reactor? Might be as simple as putting "proposed" before "discharge"?
    checkY Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "In March 1987, power level limits were instituted on K, L and P Reactors due to problems with the emergency core cooling system and the increased risk of loss-of-coolant accident"
    Missing "a" before "loss-of-coolant"?
    checkY Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The August 1988 incident during the P reactor's startup attracted media attention,[100] triggered Congressional hearings, and spurred the decision to implement much-needed nuclear safety improvements, enhance operator qualifications, and bolster management oversight before restarting any of the production reactors"
    Not sure if "the" is needed before "P reactor"
    checkY Deleted. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • Our article doesn't capitalise "congressional", there's another one in the next sentence too
    checkY Take your word for it that congress is not a proper noun. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "the "very significant leak" of water from the C Reactor in May 1965 when 2,100 US gallons (7,900 L) of heavy water was spilt on the floor;"
    I don't think you need to say "of water" if you later say "of heavy water"
    checkY Reworded. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • Link needed for Westinghouse at first mention
    checkY Linked. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • There is incosnsitency in if you capitalise "reactor" when naming them, eg. you have "K reactor" and "K Reactor"
    checkY capitalised. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "During the war, the Manhattan Project's P-9 Project had produced heavy water at three DuPont munitions plants: the Morgantown Ordnance Works, near Morgantown, West Virginia; at the Wabash River Ordnance Works, near Dana, Indiana, and the Alabama Ordnance Works, near Sylacauga, Alabama."
    Remove the "at" before "the Wabash" as it's not used on the other two
    checkY Deleted. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "Girdler and, as a DuPont subcontractor, worked through the problems associated with the new process."
    Is a name missing after Girlder or is the "and" superfluous?
    checkY "And" is superfluous. Deleted. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "In addition to the GS units, the plant had twelve distillation towers for the second step, and electrolysis building for the final step"
    Missing "an" before "electrolysis"
    checkY Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "In 1956, the market price of heavy water was $28 per pound (equivalent to $332 in 2025) of $14,000 per drum (equivalent to $166,000 in 2025)"
    Probably needs conversions for pound and drum (if known)
    Should "of $14,000" be "or $14,000"?
    checkY Yes. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:07, 18 June 2026 (UTC)

Read down to "Neutrino discovery", will continue when I can

  • Just spotted that there is a mix of use of "US" and "U.S."
    checkY Set to "U.S." Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "Early research concerned cobalt-60, which was not only a heat source, but could also be used food irradiation."
    Missing word before "food"
    checkY Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "Plutonium-238 was produced by the irradiation on neptunium-237, a byproduct of the irradiation of uranium in the reactors."
    Should "on" be "of"?
    checkY Yes. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "pressed plutonium oxide, plutonium-molybdenum cermet, or plutonium metal"
    cermet could use a link, I think
    checkY Linked. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "the production of iridium-encapsulated 100-watt PPO spheres for Multi-Hundred Watt RTGs started in 1978"
    You don't link or define RTGs until the next paragraph
    checkY Defined. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
    Do we know what these RTGs were used for?
    checkY Yes, it says this further down. Moved the third paragraph up. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "Between August 1969 and November 1970, an effort was made gram-scale amounts of californium-252 in K Reactor to develop a market development for Cf-252 neutron source applications.
    Missing some words before "gram-scale", I think?
    checkY Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "Twenty-one targets were processed in 1972–1973 at ORNL to recover about 4 grams of plutonium-244, "heavy curium" (i.e., curium rich in curium-246 and curium-248) and about 2.1 grams, but an incident occurred in November 1970 when an antimony-beryllium control rod melted"
    The ORNL abbreviation hasn't been introduced
    checkY Another artefact of the split. Defined. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
    Either the 2.1 grams should refer to the curium or another product is missing from the list
    Californium. Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The DOE distribution center for californium-252 for transitioned from the SRP to the ORNL in the late 1980s."
    Suplus "for"?
    checkY Deleted. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The case of Roger D. Wensil, a pipe-fitter, worked for the B.F. Shaw Co., a subcontractor at Savannah River Plant, stands as a significant milestone in the evolution of whistleblower protection in the U.S. nuclear sector."
    Missing "who" before "worked"?
  • checkY Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:50, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "In 1950, once the contract formally awarded, DuPont integrated Ruth Patrick and her team from the Academy of Natural Sciences of Philadelphia (ANSP) into the Savannah River Project to study the river's biological diversity prior to the operation of the planned SRP reactors, which were anticipated to elevate the river's water temperature.";
    Missing "was" before formally
    checkY Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "water as hot as 45 °C (113 °F) was discharged into Steel Creak"
    Typo on "Creek"
    checkY Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "Odum began working on the site in 1951, with three graduate students, each from a different university."
    You've only mentioned two universities before, did a third become involved?
    Source says "each was from a different university". But looking each one up, it looks like Bill Cross and Leslie Davenport were from the University of Georgia, and Edward Kuenzler was from the University of Florida. So not sure. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The United States Forest Service was brought in August 1951 to manage and protect the forests that occupied 67 percent of the Savannah River Plant reservation at that time."
    Should be "was brought in in August 1951" or start the sentence with "In August 1951, ..."
    checkY Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "The Forest Service also maintained a wildlife and botany conservation programs."
    Surplus "a"
    checkY Deleted. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "their numbers on site grew from four in 1970 to 120 in 2002."
    I think the MOS would want this to be "4" for comparative numbers.
    checkY Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:48, 18 June 2026 (UTC)

Completed main text, I will have a quick look over the lead, captions, infobox when I can - Dumelow (talk) 10:45, 18 June 2026 (UTC)


  • In the lead there is a typo of "proxinmity"
    checkY So there is. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:38, 19 June 2026 (UTC)
  • I don't think "Nuclear Materials Production and Processing Facilities" should be capitalised in the infobox
    checkY De-capitalised. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:38, 19 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "H Canyon under construction (left) and as finished (right)"
    Three images are presented here, the centre and right of which both look to be in the completed state.
    checkY Tweaked caption. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:38, 19 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "there is no record of any threat of air attack." is stated in a caption but not explicitly supported in the article. I know it is hard to cite a negative but is there anything to support this? The existence of the air defence zones suggests there was at least some level of threat determined.
    It is the original DOE caption. Sourced. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:38, 19 June 2026 (UTC)
  • D area is mentioned in captions but not the article. I had assumed these facilities were connected to D Reactor but the dates don't tie up, is it something else?
    "A second GS facility was therefore authorized in January 1951, to be built in the 400-D area at the SRP... In addition to the GS units, the plant had twelve distillation towers for the second step, and an electrolysis building for the final step. The facility had its own pumping station to bring river water and a power station to supply electricity and steam that could burn up to 350 short tons (320 t) of coal per hour." Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:38, 19 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "A pellet of Plutonium-238": the element shouldn't be capitalised
    checkY De-capitalised. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:38, 19 June 2026 (UTC)
  • I find the first two captions in "Environmental monitoring" overly wordy. Parts repeat things covered in the main text while other statements (eg " it was the largest mechanized planting program in the United States, with 400,000 trees planted per day during the first two years. The 100 millionth pine seedling was planted in 1968 and roughly one million seedlings have been planted every year since") are novel and uncited
    checkY Sourced to the caption. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:38, 19 June 2026 (UTC)
  • "SRNL Senior Scientist Wendy Kuhne collects plant samples along Tinker Creek." & "SRNL postdoc Maria Kriz works on structural characterization of materials using X-Rays"
    I don't think is is that useful to have the names here, unless they are likely to be notable, but horses for courses.
    "postdoc" should be expanded to "post-doctoral researcher"
    checkY Expanded and linked. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:38, 19 June 2026 (UTC)

That's everything from me on the text. Responses look good so far and I can see no problem supporting this once the last responses are made - Dumelow (talk) 07:10, 19 June 2026 (UTC)

Supporting, you might consider citing the original caption for the air defence caption, but nothing major - Dumelow (talk) 12:20, 19 June 2026 (UTC)

Image review

  • File:Apollo_12_Second_Look-_Midday_on_the_Ocean_of_Storms_(LROC70_-_AS12-46-6943_pluto).png: the source has an all-rights-reserved notice. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:31, 18 August 2026 (UTC)
Totally screwed up. Not an LROC image at all. Replaced with the proper source, caption and date. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 04:12, 18 August 2026 (UTC)

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