Talk:Battle of Moon Sound
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Acronyms, Clarity
There are acronyms referring to either military ranks or divisions of ships in the article. It is difficult to understand them and the reader has no way of knowing what the letters in the acronyms stand for.
Also at the end of the article it references "The Imperial Navy" and then "The Navy" and it is not clear at all which navy they are talking about. -Tank 7 19:45, 01 August 2013 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tank 7 (talk • contribs)
merge?
How about a merge of Battle of Moon Sound into Operation Albion? --Yuriy Lapitskiy 21:20, 18 January 2007 (UTC)
- Probably, "No". Moon Sound battle is important enough because of "Slava" sinking. --Yuriy Lapitskiy 21:17, 25 January 2007 (UTC)
Tsesarevich vs. Grazhdanin in the Battle of Moon Sound
About "Tsesarevich was not Grazhdanin yet that time" I can say that AFAIK it was renamed AFTER October Revolution. --Yuriy Lapitskiy 20:48, 25 January 2007 (UTC)
Moon Sound or Moonsund?
I think that Moonsund is used more frequently. Even Wilkipedia's geography section refers to Saarema and adjacent islands as Moonsund archipelago. It's also known in German and Russian military histories as the battle of Moonsund. Vitoldus44 05:06, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
- It's really unimportant. "Sound" is easier for English-speaking reader. In Russian it will be "zoond". Just create redirect and add an alternative spelling to the top of the article. --Yuriy Lapitskiy 05:34, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
peer review
Good information leading into the article. I would suggest looking at your work though, I found a grammatical error in the sentence: Bolshevik’s leader was Vladimir Lenin, Which needs the word the in front of so that it flows and makes sense. If at all possible I would see if you could potentially add more details into the battle sequence. I am a war enthusiast so I would like to learn even more if possible. Gives great decision by decision action with the times they were executed showing that they are well informed with what they have read so far. Also use good citations keeping them to a minimum and not overusing them. Reference list is also uniform with the rest of the resources found a way to shrink the space taken up by excess sources. Allleague1 (talk) 21:16, 21 November 2012 (UTC)allleague1
Peer Review
Overall it is very well done and very interesting. I quite like that the description of the battle is done as a play by play. One thing I would say though is that there are a few grammatical mistakes throughout the article, such as in the sentence "Ji ust after midnight on October 18th, the S64 shaken by a mine detonation..." you may want to add a was between 'S64' and 'shaken', so I would recommend re-reading it. Also at the beginning of the description of the battle the author mentions that the Russians had changed their battle strategy, perhaps it could be said what was it before the change and why did they change it exactly.Michaela.constant (talk) 06:48, 23 November 2012 (UTC)









