Talk:Can't Stop the Feeling!

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• "Can't Stop the Feeling!" charted at number one in Argentina,... In all my editing experience, I have never seen a paragraph written in that way; it needs to be fixed one way or the other. I expected that to be straight prose and citations that discuss this chartings cited at the end as opposed to the word–by–word citation that really makes the paragraph unreadable and ugly somehow. I figured that this is telling us what the chart table far below already does, so yeah it needs to be fixed one way or the other.
  •  Done, used "Can't Stop the Feeling!" charted at number one on the single charts of Argentina,... instead.
• The video was covered in news media including The Washington Post, The Guardian, and Vogue, and garnered over 2 million views on Facebook.^{[125][126][127]} This does not look like an encyclopaedic detail; why not very briefly tell us what these media said as opposed to just saying it was covered?
  •  Working.
• Still on that, the claim that The video was covered... by The Guardian forexample does not appear verifiable since the source literally only said On Sunday, a 200-person flashmob appeared in New York City’s Union Square. Wearing brightly coloured suits and T-shirts with slogans like The Future is Female, they performed a carefully choreographed, five-minute tribute to Hillary Clinton, as Justin Timberlake’s Can’t Stop the Feeling played over loudspeaker. (emphasis mine), did I read this wrong? What video could this possibly be referring to?
  • The Hillary Clinton video, which the claim is sourced to.
• The critical reception is written oddly; for example The song received positive reviews from music critics. Writers from Billboard,[3] Rolling Stone,[14] Fuse[6] and USA Today[15] highlighted its attractiveness for the summer season. After that, Adelle Platon from Billboard is correctly represented, but you never discussed "Rolling Stone, Fuse and USA Today". I think the critical reception section could make good use of expansion.
  •  Working.
• Digital Spy considered it the 19th-best pop song of the year,[22] while Idolator named it the 20th-best song of the year,[23] for "feel-good" and "infectious." Here, I see [23] is cited after the comma which leaves "for "feel-good" and "infectious."" hanging without a citation, coupled with the fact that the grammar is wrong.
  • Fixed.
• Idolator and Digital Spy should probably be italicised.
  •  Done.
• "Accolades" and "Usage in other media" are list-like and read more as compilations than prose. The same issue I highlighted above appears here too. For example, in the first paragraph of the Accolades section, instead of writing it that way, I could write it this way: "Can't Stop the Feeling!" won the Grammy Award for Best Song Written for Visual Media and received two honors at the 2016 Hollywood Film and Music in Media Awards.[26][27][28] The track was also nominated for Best Original Song at the Academy Awards, Golden Globes, Critics' Choice Awards, Satellite Awards, and the Guild of Music Supervisors Awards.[31][32][33] This is not perfect, but it is a starter. This particular issue is prevalent throughout the article.
  •  Working.
• There are several instances where we have "abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz." instead of "abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz".
  • Fixed.
• The lead is serviceable, though it may benefit from mentioning the Grammy win and mentioning the Academy Award nomination. Those are among the song's most significant achievements.
  •  Working.
• The first video released, titled "First Listen", featured cast members from the DreamWorks Animation's Trolls,… This is grammatically wrong. It should be something like The first video, titled “First Listen”, featured cast members from DreamWorks Animation’s Trolls…
• Aversely, contributors for Time and Spin gave it unfavorable reviews… "Aversely" is awkward and unnatural here. Use "Conversely" or "By contrast".
• …which was great deal of fun This is missing "a".
• Another very minor issue appears in the credits Max Martin – writing, production, background vocals, keyboards, programming,, the trailing comma should be removed.
• The article repeatedly says the song reached number one on many "single charts". But the chart table appears to mix together official singles charts, airplay charts, digital song charts, radio charts, component charts, regional charts. For example, the article says the song reached number one on the Irish and Italian single charts, but in the chart table Ireland's official singles chart entry appears to peak at 3, Italy's official FIMI singles chart entry appears to peak at 7, The number-one Irish and Italian positions appear to be airplay charts. Hungary appears to have a radio number one but a singles peak of 2, Russia is listed through a radio chart, South Africa appears to be an airplay chart. This affects both the lead and "Commercial performance" section.

  Elsewhere, it charted at number one on the Argentine, Brazilian, Belgian, Canadian, Czech, Dutch, Ecuadorian, French, German, Hungarian, Icelandic, Irish, Israeli, Italian, Russian, Scottish, Slovakian, Slovenian, South African, Swedish, Swiss, and Venezuelan single charts. This should be revised to avoid implying all were official national singles charts. You could safely say It also topped national singles charts in several countries, including Canada, France, Germany, Sweden, and Switzerland, and reached number one on airplay or component charts in countries including Hungary, Ireland, Italy, Russia, Slovenia, and South Africa.

• Why does the Billboard chart citations (#182, #202, #224) have dates as "January 2, 2013" for a 2016 chart? That is weird and should be fixed.
• opening with 379,000 downloads in its first week is only discussed directly in the lead, it should be added to the "Commercial performance" section with a source or removed entirely.
• File:Justin Timberlake - Can't Stop the Feeling.png is valid fair use, File:Can't Stop the Feeling.ogg is valid fair use, File:Cant Stop the Feeling music video.png is valid fair use, File:Lady A - Charlotte 12-27-12-8.jpg is CC BY 2.0 which is okay.
  • Captions for images are okay. I recommended adding alt to the infobox image.
• The major stopper for this article is the chart synthesis that needs to be resolved. If the article takes many different chart types and summarises them as "single charts", that is a form of imprecise synthesis. Singles chart, airplay chart, digital songs chart, component chart, and radio chart should not be treated as interchangeable.