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I have a COI as an employee of Edelson PC, the subject of this article. I am requesting that independent editors review the following proposal with several important updates to the article.
1. In Notable Cases, after paragraph five, please add a new paragraph 6:
Edelson has litigated class action lawsuits related to online games known as “social casinos.” Three lawsuits settled in February 2021 for almost $200 million.[1][2]
Why? Substantial $200 million case settlements supported by reliable secondary sources.
2. In section Notable Cases, please insert new paragraph after paragraph 6, paragraph 7:
In April 2019, Edelson PC achieved a $925 million jury verdict against nutritional supplement maker Visalus for violations of the Telephone Consumer Protection Act. Edelson lawyers proved ViSalus made over 1.8 million unsolicited robocalls in violation of the TCPA, each garnering a $500 fine.[3][4][5] The verdict was upheld by a federal judge in August 2020.[6][7]
Why? This case is widely reported in major media outlets, supported by multiple WP: RS.
3. In the section Notable Cases, add paragraph seven, after paragraph six:
Edelson PC represented more than 1,000 wildfire victims against Pacific Gas & Electric following the 2018 Camp Fire (2018) in Paradise, California.[8] The litigation was resolved in December 2019 through a $13.5 billion settlement.[9]
4. In Notable Cases, please REMOVE the current final paragraph:
Edelson PC additionally represents governmental entities in a variety of privacy lawsuits. For example, Edelson PC brought a lawsuit on behalf of the City of Chicago and the Cook County State's Attorney's Office against Uber related to reports of a data breach.[10]
Additionally, Edelson PC filed a lawsuit on behalf of the Cook County State's Attorney's Office in the first filed government action against Facebook and Cambridge Analytica stemming from reports they allegedly shared and collected consumer data for purposes related to the 2016 US Presidential Election.[11]
Why? The first sentence is not a case, but plaintiffs. Second sentence is pending litigation is too speculative, with only a small amount of media coverage, and no outcome yet.
5. In the section called “Firm Culture”, please delete the paragraph
Edelson PC has drawn attention in the legal community by cultivating the feel of a startup. The dress code is casual and the Chicago offices have an indoor volleyball court, golf simulator, a ping pong table, a pool table and a large mural of MCs in the midst of a rap battle.[12] The firm has also adopted an unconventional training system of guided independence where everyone is expected to make their own decisions, take responsibility for moving cases forward, and contribute to case management and strategy.[13]
Even summer associates are given the respect and responsibility of an attorney.[14] Edelson's prank culture has featured elaborate jokes such as hiring an actor to play an unruly law student[15]
employing a polar bear as an attorney,[16]
and commissioning a musical parody of Hamilton written by Edelson PC lawyers[17]
And replace it with:
Edelson PC has drawn attention in the legal community by cultivating the feel of a startup. The firm has also adopted an unconventional training system of guided independence where everyone is expected to make their own decisions, take responsibility for moving cases forward, and contribute to case management and strategy.[18]
Why? Excessive detail and non-NPOV.
Thank you for your consideration. Mtd6596 (talk) 16:13, 21 April 2022 (UTC)
- Hi! Thank your for your well-sourced and nicely formatted request. Suggestions 1-3 are appropriate, you can proceed with adding them to the article. Please ensure that you transfer the citations correctly.
- I understand where you're coming from with suggestion 4, but the fact that Edelson regularly represents government entities is relevant, reported on, and well-sourced. I will instead change the section title to "Notable activities" to better reflect its contents.
- Suggestion 5 is not sufficiently argued; the detail is not excessive given the volume of reporting that has focussed on firm culture. WP:NPOV states that Wikipedia should reflect what has been reported by reliable sources neutrally, it does not mean that articles must be balanced or entirely neutral. For example, reporting (and focussing on) praise or criticism of an activity is legitimate when this reflects what has been published by reliable sources. WP:Undue weight applies when an article gives more weight to a particular opinion or point of view than is given by reliable sources; that is not the case here. Actualcpscm (talk) 13:10, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
@Heartmusic678: You were nice enough to review the last round of request edits regarding this firm. Since you already have knowledge about the firm. I thought you might be interested in the next round.Mtd6596 (talk) 16:23, 21 April 2022 (UTC)