Hi @Jytdog:,
Is it the poor source that you dislike, or is it the attempt to improve the look and usefulness of the article? If I find a better source, since it is pretty undisputed that these are the key people and those are their jobs, will the information remain on the page? Also, why do you object to dividing the LONG paragraph into sub-sections, which adds a TOC, a nicer look, and improved readability? Just curious, as always. Frannyapplebaum2017 (talk) 07:07, 16 November 2017 (UTC) PS. Just found a justification for my use of less than stellar sources from time to time here [].
- Trying to justify the use of garbage sources for crassly commercial edits like this is a waste of everybody's time. We all have better stuff to do. Jytdog (talk) 14:43, 16 November 2017 (UTC)