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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 07:05, 12 December 2019 (UTC)

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Another for me. Gog the Mild (talk) 07:05, 12 December 2019 (UTC)

@Gog the Mild: Hi, just a friendly ping as this one doesn't appear to have moved for a couple of weeks. From Hill To Shore (talk) 17:30, 29 December 2019 (UTC)
Hi From Hill To Shore. Apologies for that. On it now. Mztourist, apologies for the delay. I have done a little copy editing, which you will want to check. Flag any issues up here.
Excellent. I have changed the source to that in commons.
  • "Lt. General Sak Sutsakhan" Could you give Lieutenant in full, and link lieutenant general.
  • "of the city for 3 days"; "Thai border arriving 4 days later": Numbers up to nine should be spelt out.
  • There is an almost complete absence of Khmer Rouge PoV. Did they not at least make official statements or issue proclamations?
    • None that I can locate, the Khmer Rouge were not known for their diligent record-keeping in this period. Mztourist (talk) 04:14, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
You don't say. I wondered if there was some triumphalist propaganda. Ah well, if there isn't, there isn't.
  • "Lacking the numbers necessary to openly control Cambodia, emptying Phnom Penh of those of its population who were indifferent or openly hostile to them was essential for securing Khmer Rouge control." That's a bit PoV. Possibly insert 'they felt that' or similar - assuming that the source supports this?
    • That's what Becker says Mztourist (talk) 04:14, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
Nice attribution.
  • The lead seems brief. Perhaps you could expand the last sentence a little and add a new paragraph based on the last paragraphs of "17 April" and on "Aftermath"?
Am I missing something?
That's fine. For some reason it wasn't showing before.
  • "Aftermath": "18 April" twice in two sentences doesn't flow well. Could one of them be tweaked?
  • "Also evicted were Princess Mam Manivan Phanivong, one of Sihanouk's wives, Khy-Taing Lim, the Minister of Finance, and Loeung Nal, the Minister of Health." Some semi colons to separate out the individuals would help this to flow.
  • "Aftermath": There are three single sentence paragraphs. Would it be possible to run at least some of them together?

Gog the Mild (talk) 22:09, 6 January 2020 (UTC)

  • Cites 3 and 9 need either ISBNs or OCLCs.
  • Cite 2: I think there should be a colon in the title.
  • Cite 7: the title should be in title case.
  • The infobox states "Start of the Cambodian Genocide", but this isn't covered in the main article.
    • While its not explicitly stated, the execution of captured FANK forces and captured Government officials as well as emptying the city, including those who wouldn't survive the trek to the countryside, was the start of the genocide. Mztourist (talk) 06:25, 7 January 2020 (UTC)

See my comments above re the lead and the infobox, and the three points on cites. I think that's all. A cracking article. Gog the Mild (talk) 04:42, 7 January 2020 (UTC)

Thanks, I did expand the lead, not sure what else there is to say there. Mztourist (talk) 06:25, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
Yep. See my comment above. It's fine.
  • Genocide. It is normal in an aftermath section to explicitly mention any long term consequences of what is described in the article. This aftermath effectively ends on 30 April. But the fall of Phnom Penh has a number of further consequences, which I think could do with mentioning, even if briefly. The start of the genocide is one, which I think would merit at least a short sentence. (Otherwise the article looks good to go to me.) Gog the Mild (talk) 17:11, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
Spot on. A nice, focused, well referenced, readable article. Well done. More than happy to promote it. Gog the Mild (talk) 11:09, 8 January 2020 (UTC)
Thanks Gog the Mild much appreciated, all relatively painless! Best regards Mztourist (talk) 11:38, 8 January 2020 (UTC)
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@Mztourist: Hi! About this edit I reverted it as there seems to be confusion about my edit. This is a navigational template that lists the major topics about Phnom Penh, something that is expected about a major historical event regarding the city.

I did not foresee opposition to the inclusion of a city-wide navigational template. WhisperToMe (talk) 07:08, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

@Mztourist:. I strongly disagree that this template is irrelevant and am confused at the rationale. As per WP:BRD I can revert once, especially when I believe there is confusion with the previous edit summary. Anyhow I would like to use Wikipedia:Request for comment. I really am confused about why this would be irrelevant and would like clarity. WhisperToMe (talk) 07:11, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
Firstly it doesn't work and secondly I have never seen such a navigational template added to a battle page before. What is the policy based reason why it should be included? Happy for you to open an RFC. regards Mztourist (talk) 07:14, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
@Mztourist:, please review this revision. Does it work here? What browser are you using? I am using Mozilla Firefox on Windows 10 and it works on my end. Now, second: this is not just "a battle" but a traumatic event for the city of Phnom Penh that led to its emptying out. By any definition it's a major part of the city's history and relevant to the city. Thirdly, there's more than just policies, but also practice. Great Chicago Fire includes Template:Chicago, and Great Fire of London includes Template:London history (from a featured article I must add). I'm not sure a policy reason is necessary at this point. WhisperToMe (talk) 07:19, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
I'm still not seeing what it actually does to this page or anywhere else, so I'm confused as to what purpose you think it serves. I certainly agree that it was a major event in the city's history and have linked this page onto the history of Phnom Penh, while its already linked on pages about the Khmer Rouge etc. What more does adding this template do? Mztourist (talk) 07:35, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
To link to other major topics about the same city for those who have an interest in learning more about Phnom Penh. I created such templates about other cities: Template:Asmara, Template:Dili, Template:Kigali, etc. If/when the area gets so many articles, sections can be split off into their own, such as Template:History of London. WhisperToMe (talk) 07:49, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
I really don't see the point, but have had enough of arguments lately. You can drop the RFC and add it in if you think its an improvement. Mztourist (talk) 07:52, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

===RFC: Citywide navigational template=== Should a navigational template about the city in general ([[:Template:Phnom Penh]]) be included in this article about a historical battle that took place in the city? [[User:WhisperToMe|WhisperToMe]] ([[User talk:WhisperToMe|talk]]) 07:32, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

As per the above. Thank you!WhisperToMe (talk) 12:46, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

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Proposed merge of Fall of Phnom Penh (1979) into Fall of Phnom Penh

The two articles compliment each other and one article to cover all aspects of the topic would suffice to satisfy the needs of a reader looking for information on the Fall of Phnom Penh. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 21:46, 26 January 2025 (UTC)

Absolutely not. Two separate events separated by 4 years with different combatants. Fall of Phnom Penh (1979) is an unnecessary fork of Cambodian–Vietnamese War with minimal detail of the actual capture of Phnom Penh. Mztourist (talk) 02:57, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
The content that wasn't copied unattributed from Cambodian–Vietnamese War was a copyvio of web sources. I've tagged for speedy deletion. --Paul_012 (talk) 00:36, 28 January 2025 (UTC)

Lede and MOS:REDUNDANCY

Pinging @Mztourist re this request: What would the difference be between "the fall of a city" and "its capture"? How is this phrasing different from the examples at the MOS page? Daniel Case (talk) 06:41, 14 July 2025 (UTC)

"Fall of Phnom Penh" is what this event is commonly known as. The wording just clarifies that Fall of Phnom Penh was its capture by the Khmer Rouge. Mztourist (talk) 06:45, 14 July 2025 (UTC)
How would anybody assume that "Fall of Phnom Penh" meant anything else? "Use the first sentence of the article to provide relevant information that is not already given by the title of the article."
WP:COMMONNAME is about what we call the article. It is by no means a mandate for inclusion of the title in the lede. Daniel Case (talk) 20:55, 14 July 2025 (UTC)
I suggest you open an RFC then. Mztourist (talk) 02:58, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
I think 3O would be sufficient. Are you OK with that? Daniel Case (talk) 17:08, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
No, RFC is binding consensus, 3O isn't. Mztourist (talk) 08:34, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
Alright then ... Daniel Case (talk) 05:26, 19 July 2025 (UTC)

RfC on lede wording

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


How should the lede be worded?

  1. "Phnom Penh, capital of the Khmer Republic (in present-day Cambodia), was captured by the Khmer Rouge on 17 April 1975, effectively ending the Cambodian Civil War".
  2. "The Fall of Phnom Penh was the capture of Phnom Penh, capital of the Khmer Republic (in present-day Cambodia), by the Khmer Rouge on 17 April 1975, effectively ending the Cambodian Civil War.

Daniel Case (talk) 20:56, 19 July 2025 (UTC)

See the talk page section above. Number 1 was what I changed it to a couple of weeks ago, since I believed number 2 goes against MOS:REDUNDANCY. When it was changed back as "reason not sufficient", I was told that WP:COMMONNAME was the governing policy here; when I pointed out that that applies to article titles, not lede language, I was told to open this RfC in order to get "binding consensus". So here we are. Daniel Case (talk) 21:04, 19 July 2025 (UTC)
I put the survey line below because there is a bit of a !vote and RFCBEFORE in the paragraph. I'll leave it to you to either move the above to the survey section or for you to put something else. Dw31415 (talk) 00:26, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
@Daniel Case, gentle reminder to add your !vote below the survey line. Some of above is RFCBEFORE and I didn't want to attempt to summarize your argument. Feel free to "Support #1 per" one of the other users or use your own words. Dw31415 (talk) 22:22, 23 November 2025 (UTC)

Survey (lede)

  • Is it "Fall" with a capital F or "fall"? If the former, then 2; if the latter, then 1. Some1 (talk) 01:22, 21 July 2025 (UTC)
    I don't think it's commonly capitalized. I also don't think that whether it's capitalized has anything to do with how we word a lede. What matters is that when a word in the title is self-explanatory, we don't devote the lede to reinventing the wheel for the reader's purported benefit.
    We have a fair amount of articles about, for instance, buildings or houses where the latter word is capitalized in the title. None of them do (or should say) something like "The X House is a historic house in ..."
    For a more direct parallel here, see the more recent Fall of the Assad regime, which begins: "On 8 December 2024, the Assad regime collapsed during a major offensive by opposition forces. I don't see any difference here. Daniel Case (talk) 02:08, 21 July 2025 (UTC)
    @Some1, I think you hit the nail on the head from an MOS perspective. If "Fall of Phnom Penh" is a proper noun, then "Fall ... was the fall" redundancy is consistent with the MOS. I don't think it is a proper noun which I think you lead you to #1. Would you please clarify your position?

    In 1995, more that 20 years after the fall of Saigon, the United States...-- NYTimes about the fall of Saigon

    Dw31415 (talk) 00:01, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
Support #1 reads more neutral and per Daniel Case 2 seems to violate MOS. IndrasBet (talk) 10:12, 15 August 2025 (UTC)
Support #2 as major contributor to this GA. Mztourist (talk) 03:42, 29 October 2025 (UTC)
That's not a valid reason for a stylistic choice. Daniel Case (talk) 15:37, 29 October 2025 (UTC)
I think the strongest argument for #2 is that historical events are proper nouns. These are exceptions to the redundancy rule. Oxford English Dictionary is mentioned specifically in MOS. Similarly the Battle of Gettysburg begins “The Battle of Gettysburg was a three day battle“ Dw31415 (talk) 04:32, 23 November 2025 (UTC)
That to me is another one that should be changed, and the fact that it hasn't yet been does not make it relevant to this discussion. It's in the same vein as my historic-house example from earlier.
That lede has a lot of problems beside that. It tells us this was a three-day battle, and then redundantly gives us the date range from which that information could easily be deduced. It doesn't tell us what country the battle took place in. Or, more importantly, what war.
It would be better like this (Cites omitted):
The Battle of Gettysburg, part of the American Civil War, was fought by the Union and Confederate armies in and near Gettysburg, Pennsylvania, United States, July 1–3, 1863.
Or even better if we were brave enough not to feel we had to force the title into the sentence:
From July 1 to July 3, 1863, the Union and Confederate armies fought a key battle of the American Civil War at Gettysburg, Pennsylvania, United States
See how that combines the first two sentences? Daniel Case (talk) 04:49, 23 November 2025 (UTC)
I think the relevant part is that MOS:REDUNDANT has an explicit exception for proper nouns. You haven’t addressed that. Are historical events proper nouns? Shouldn’t the title be included in bold then? Dw31415 (talk) 15:15, 23 November 2025 (UTC)
Sometimes they are; most "fall of"s are generally not, at least in every context. I have no problem with it being included in bold whether capitalized or not, as long as the sentence isn't too contorted.There is, as far as I can see, no blanket exception for proper nouns at REDUNDANCY, only the OED one, which has language specifically explaining that there's no way to get around reusing "dictionary", and shows how that works by qualifying it as the "principal historical dictionary" of English. And that exception is permissive, not mandatory. Daniel Case (talk) 02:10, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
User:Daniel Case stop WP:BLUDGEONING the process, you've commented enough. Mztourist (talk) 03:47, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
Excuse me, Dw was asking me questions in response to my response. That's not what BLUDGEON is about. Daniel Case (talk) 03:58, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
Look at how many times you've commented all over this RFC, that's BLUDGEONING. Mztourist (talk) 07:59, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
As this RFC was reopened and Users have been criticizing my almost month-old position above, I will spell it out in more detail. WP:MOSFIRST applies. "Fall of" has at least three slightly different meanings: (1) physical collapse of a structure e.g. the Fall of the Berlin Wall (both a structure and a system); (2) capture of a place (e.g. Singapore, Berlin, Phnom Penh, Saigon, Kabul etc.); (3) decline and collapse of a political system or empire (western Roman Empire, Assad Regime). MOSFIRST requires that the title is described. The only MOS:REDUNDANT wording in #2 is "Phnom Penh" which I regard as completely trivial, but as its apparently so offensive to some Users the wording can be changed to: "The Fall of Phnom Penh was the capture of the capital of the Khmer Republic (present-day Cambodia), by the Khmer Rouge on 17 April 1975, effectively ending the Cambodian Civil War." Fall of Phnom Penh is the WP:COMMONNAME for this event, though Fall is variously capitalized or uncapitalized. Mztourist (talk) 03:47, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
You give three definitions for Fall of (correct ones, imho) and point out what MOS:FIRST requires, but then follow that with a red herring about COMMONNAME, which while true is irrelevant, as COMMONNAME is about article titles, not the first sentence. MOS:FIRST requires a description of the topic identified by the title, but it does not require a definition of individual words in the title. Analyzing option #2 by stripping it down to its bare minimum of subject–copula–complement (plus required articles), we have: "The Fall was the capture." All this does is define the word fall, and that is not the role of the first sentence. If anything, the germanic-based noun fall (level A2, by some graded lexical corpuses) is much more likely to be understood by new English speakers than the Latinate capture (B2/C1; or see ngrams). So purely on a common sense basis, it makes little sense to define the simpler word in terms of the more advanced one. But even when a title word is rare or might need explanation, that is generally done via a link ("Mitochondrial replacement therapy ... is the replacement of mitochondria in one or more cells to prevent or ameliorate disease."), rather than defining title words in the first sentence. But the word Fall is a simple one and needs neither a link nor other explanation for readers to understand it. Mathglot (talk) 11:41, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
Support #2 since the similar formula applied in Fall of Angkor, Fall of Constantinople, Fall of Baghdad (1917), Fall of Singapore and many others. Leemyongpak (talk) 14:40, 29 October 2025 (UTC)
"Fall of Angkor", "Fall of Angkor" and "Fall of Singapore"'s ledes aren't a valid comparison since they give BOLDALTNAMES. "Fall of Baghdad (1917)" is actually just like #2. Daniel Case (talk) 15:36, 29 October 2025 (UTC)
some others: Fall of Tenochtitlan, Fall of Antwerp, Fall of Manerplaw Leemyongpak (talk) 01:47, 30 October 2025 (UTC)
All of those are actually closer to #1. Daniel Case (talk) 01:49, 30 October 2025 (UTC)
Let's see the fifth opinion. Leemyongpak (talk) 02:14, 30 October 2025 (UTC)
@Leemyongpak, the RfC was reopened. I just wanted to point out that your !vote reads a little bit like OTHERSTUFFEXISTS and maybe discounted by a future closer. The outcome of this RfC might be used as precedent on other pages, so I recommend that you consider editing your position to explain if it's your read of MOS:FIRST/MOS:REDUNDANT that #2 is consistent with MOS of if there is another reason for your !vote. Dw31415 (talk) 00:24, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
At first I chose #2 mostly based my feeling. Now I know it was backed by MOS:FIRST so I keep my vote as it was. Leemyongpak (talk) 06:36, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
  • Support #1: per MOS:REDUNDANT. Others have said it better than I so I’ll probably give a “per” after they respond here. Dw31415 (talk) 03:03, 22 November 2025 (UTC) Changed my vote below
  • Support #1. MOS:REDUNDANT is a guideline which is widely observed. Exceptions exist, but they need to be spelled out based on some policy or guideline consideration. Saying "reason provided not sufficient" is no justification for a revert; that is merely another way of saying, "I just don't like it", and that counts for exactly nothing in an Rfc. Given strong enough evidence explaining why MOS:REDUNDANT doesn't apply here, I would change my vote, but the burden is clearly on the #2 supporters to provide the evidence, and so far, it has not been forthcoming. That leaves #1 as the only possible choice here. Mathglot (talk) 05:29, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
    Clarification: by 'only possible choice', I meant given only the two options at the top. I don't exclude other possible formulations, and would be fine with other wording, for example, the one proposed at 11:18, 22 Nov. by Nurg. Mathglot (talk) 10:13, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
  • Support #1 as the simpler and sufficient solution unless the expression "fall of Phnom Penh" (whether with or without an initial capital letter) is widely used in reliable sources, in which case I would instead include it per #2. But that wide usage would have to be demonstrated first, and otherwise #1 seems entirely sufficient. Gawaon (talk) 08:19, 22 November 2025 (UTC) Even better, neither but instead the wording suggested by Srnec below or something close to it. Gawaon (talk) 09:19, 25 November 2025 (UTC)
  • Neither. #2 fails MOS:REDUNDANT. Also, I think it should be "the fall of Phnom Penh", not "the Fall of Phnom Penh", just as the article mentions "the fall of Neak Luong", and Fall of Saigon has "the fall of Saigon" and "the fall of Da Nang". So, the article title is descriptive, and thus the first sentence can be an exception to the preference for the page title being its subject. #1 has its own issues. It starts like it could be the start of the "Phnom Penh" article. Plus the sentence is in the passive voice. Both sentences are loaded with an overly long description of what Phnom Penh is. Given that the capital hasn't changed since its fall, it can be simplified. Neither sentence states explicitly whom the city was captured from, which is an odd omission. I assume from "in present-day Cambodia" that the border of the Khmer Republic was non-trivially smaller than the present border – is that right or wrong?
The main objective should be a well-written, natural-sounding sentence, not one written for WP's ticks, such as an awkward-sounding sentence with the page title as its subject.
Here's an alternative:
The Khmer Rouge captured Phnom Penh, the capital of Cambodia, from the Khmer Republic government on 17 April 1975, effectively ending the Cambodian Civil War.
That's just a suggestion. If someone can come up with a good sentence that has the page title as the subject, that would be fine. I've had a quick try and came close but wasn't fully satisfied with it. Nurg (talk) 11:18, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
This variant sounds good too. Gawaon (talk) 11:20, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
I generally like the construction Victor captured City for these articles since it eliminates passive voice. Possible alternative is Saigon fell to the NVA. Dw31415 (talk) 11:49, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
Neither of those constructions comply with TITLEABSENTBOLD. Daniel Case (talk) 04:30, 23 November 2025 (UTC)
Or “The Fall of Saigon marked the end of the Vietnam War.” (As an example) Dw31415 (talk) 16:27, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
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There is more than one option for resolving it. We can use a slightly different form of the article title and boldface it to cater to the preference for that format, in this manner:
Phnom Penh fell on 17 April 1975 when the Khmer Rouge captured it from the Khmer Republic government, effectively ending the Cambodian Civil War. The Khmer Rouge surrounded Phnom Penh, the capital of Cambodia and one of the last remaining strongholds of the Khmer Republic, at the beginning of April, making it totally dependent on aerial resupply through Pochentong Airport.
Nurg (talk) 21:08, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
Other than not conforming with TITLEABSENTBOLD, I have no problem with that either. Daniel Case (talk) 04:33, 23 November 2025 (UTC)
I was thinking of "the page title [...] may appear in a slightly different form" at MOS:LEADSENTENCE, and that "Phnom Penh fell" is "Fall of Phnom Penh" in a slightly different form, and therefore it is allowable to bold it. Nurg (talk) 08:22, 23 November 2025 (UTC)
It seems that MOS:FIRST is silent on the subject of whether "a slightly different form" can/should be bolded. I think a) that creates unnecessary confusion on readers' part and b) if you feel you have to use a slightly different form of the title for some reason, that's probably a sign that you shouldn't be using any variation of the title in the sentence. Daniel Case (talk) 22:49, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
@Nurg, would you please consider the proper noun MOS exception I mention above with the Oxford dictionary example in MOS? Dw31415 (talk) 15:32, 23 November 2025 (UTC)
I'm not sure exactly what you're asking. Like you, I am treating "fall of Phnom Penh" as not being a proper name. If it is a proper name, that makes a difference. Nurg (talk) 23:40, 23 November 2025 (UTC)
After a little googling, it seems like historical events names are proper nouns (like the Battle of Gettysburg), but what’s a good RS to answer that question? Dw31415 (talk) 03:37, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
Some historical events are referred to by proper names, some are not, and others are treated differently by different writers. Mztourist has since said "Fall is variously capitalized or uncapitalized", so this topic falls into that 3rd category. You're right to ask about reliable sources. I used to assume there was some set English grammar 'rule' (or 'rules') about proper names, but now I think that some cases vary and that at WP we go by the reliable sources. I don't know what the majority of good sources do in this case. (I do note that only a couple of the articles in Category:City captures use a capitalised proper name.) Nurg (talk) 10:50, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
  • Prefer #1, without prejudice to the possibility that there might be some still better wording. For historical events we should not strain to repeat the article title when it doesn't make for a natural sentence. --Trovatore (talk) 21:17, 23 November 2025 (UTC)
    • Possible alternative I think the clunkiness of option 2 comes from two things: First, insisting on calling an event by a fixed name, and then second, using a form of the verb "to be" to define it. As I see it this rarely leads to elegant wording for historical events. If it is desired to name the event rather than just describing it, we could say The fall of Phnom Penh occurred on 17 April 1975, when the Khmer Rouge captured Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh, effectively ending the Cambodian Civil War. The second occurrence of "Phnom Penh" in the above is optional; it's really just there to have a place to link the city article without using a pipe, but that could be done instead at the first later occurrence of the city name. --Trovatore (talk) 21:28, 23 November 2025 (UTC)
  • Support #1, as my all arguments here otherwise make clear and as other editors have said in support. Daniel Case (talk)
  • Oppose #2 on the basis of MOS:REDUNDANCY for reasons I have detailed elsewhere. While fall may have several meanings (per the argument of Mztourist), context in the lead establishes which meaning is being used. It is therefore not a justification to use synonyms to introduce redundancy/tautology into the first sentence. There are many options by which a better first sentenced might be crafted and a couple have been suggested. I would tend to prefer the following option (let's call it option 3) proposed by Nurg:
The Khmer Rouge captured Phnom Penh, the capital of Cambodia, from the Khmer Republic government on 17 April 1975, effectively ending the Cambodian Civil War.
I believe it conforms well with the guidance of MOS:FIRST: succinctly identifying the key points (who, what, when and why) in an active voice. Cinderella157 (talk) 09:06, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
This would, I think, ultimately be the best solution, per MOS:TITLEABSENTBOLD, as this is the most natural sentence, what I was doing with my original edit.
Now, if we had adopted a lede format like (at least in my experience; there may well be others that do this) the Polish Wikipedia, in which it would read something like this:

Fall of Phnom Penh — On April 17, 1975, the Khmer Rouge captured the capital of the Khmer Republic in present-day Cambodia, effectively ending the country's civil war.

That would make the boldface question moot. But we don't do this (I think the main reason they do it at plwiki is something cultural, like that being a customary format for encyclopedia articles in that language) and we are not likely to start anytime soon. Daniel Case (talk) 20:29, 25 November 2025 (UTC)
  • Neither, but lean towards use of boldface per Option 2. Why is there any boldface in the lead ever? I believe the idea is that the article text itself (what you edit in the edit window) should be like an encyclopedia entry entire of itself. These normally begin with the headword in bold. I agree that the redundancy can be jarring and not all descriptive titles benefit from being in the lead in bold, but surely there is a reason behind the use of boldface. "Sometimes a little redundancy is unavoidable." I would use a variation of Nurg's second proposal:
The fall of Phnom Penh to the Khmer Rouge took place on 17 April 1975, effectively ending the Cambodian Civil War. The Khmer Rouge surrounded Phnom Penh, the capital of Cambodia and one of the last remaining strongholds of the Khmer Republic government, at the beginning of April, making it totally dependent on aerial resupply through Pochentong Airport.
To me, this better aligns with the guidelines taken in total. Srnec (talk) 15:15, 24 November 2025 (UTC)
Yeah, something like that would be fine too. Gawaon (talk) 09:16, 25 November 2025 (UTC)
Not bad. I would use "occurred" rather than "took place", which is better used for pre-arranged events. I note Trovatore used "occurred" in his suggestion. Nurg (talk) 10:26, 25 November 2025 (UTC)
If going with something like this, then occurred is better than took place, but neither is needed, and I find briefer is better here. This becomes:
The fall of Phnom Penh to the Khmer Rouge on 17 April 1975 effectively ended the Cambodian Civil War.   . . .
Mathglot (talk) 21:36, 25 November 2025 (UTC)
I think this is losing too much substance from the first sentence. On a second look, the same goes for Srnec's suggestion, which looks more substantial, but only because it uses more words. But, pursuing the aim of being able to bold the title in the first sentence, I have a fresh idea, as follows. Nurg (talk) 00:36, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
I don't think it is. Compare these two:
What substance is it losing? As I see it, it merely says the same thing in fewer words. Mathglot (talk) 02:39, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
True. But neither sentence mentions the Khmer Republic government, which seems to me a fundamental element of the topic. Nurg (talk) 07:08, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
I quite agree, and that was uppermost in my mind after seeing your version. I didn't spend the time to think about how to incorporate it, but I should certainly support a version including it if you (or anyone) can manage a sentence that flows smoothly and doesn't seem too packed. Mathglot (talk) 07:33, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
How about this, if starting with the article title is deemed very important:
The fall of Phnom Penh on 17 April 1975 occurred when Khmer Rouge forces captured Phnom Penh, the capital of Cambodia, from the Khmer Republic government, effectively ending the Cambodian Civil War.
Nurg (talk) 19:50, 1 December 2025 (UTC)
That seems to revive the kind of awkward redundancy that started all this, but now instead of being focused on fall, it's focused on Phnom Penh. How is this better than live? Mathglot (talk) 20:04, 1 December 2025 (UTC)
It's better because it doesn't start with "The Fall of Phnom Penh was the capture of Phnom Penh". I'm not pushing it as my preferred wording, but it caters to those who want the sentence to start with the article title, but in a less awkward way. Nurg (talk) 00:29, 11 December 2025 (UTC)
  • New alternative – rename article. What about renaming the article Siege of Phnom Penh? Firstly, the main section of the article, headed "Offensive", covers the events from late March to 17 April 1975, not just the fall on that last day. Serendipitously, it is easier to start the first sentence with this title and do so in a natural-sounding way. Here is an example. I haven't tried to finesse the wording to the ultimate extent, but it shows the idea.
The siege of Phnom Penh took place from late March to mid April 1975, during the Cambodian Civil War, when the Khmer Rouge surrounded the capital of Cambodia, then held by the Khmer Republic government. The siege ended with the fall of Phnom Penh on 17 April 1975, which effectively ended the war.
Note to careful readers: I used "took place" rather than "occurred" in this case because the siege was a deliberate action by the Khmer Rouge, whereas the fall may or may not have occurred. Nurg (talk) 00:36, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
This is an Rfc about the first sentence. Your proposal may be related, but is different, and should be implemented as a WP:Requested move, if you wish to continue down that path. If you do, this Rfc should be immediately suspended, as it would be a waste of time for editors to continue discussing the form of a first sentence under the assumption that the topic is the "fall", when perhaps we may be talking about a "siege" if the move is successful. As a quick note, historians generally do not use the word siege for reasons that I believe would come out in the move discussion, but are out of scope here. Mathglot (talk) 02:49, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
Considering that such a move request would likely fail, as you hint, I see no reason why it should affect this open RfC. (If it were to succeed, that would be a different matter, of course.) Gawaon (talk) 04:24, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
Oh, I totally agree with you, Mathglot, that a firm proposal would go through a WP:Requested move. Apologies if my intent was not clear. I have made a suggestion, not a firm proposal. It's up for discussion. If there was strong support for it at the end of a discussion, someone (likely not me, to be frank) might initiate a WP:Requested move. Your comment that "historians generally do not use the word siege" is interesting feedback, although you don't elaborate. Looking at the list of all articles by title, it seems to me that we have many more articles starting with "Siege of" than starting with "Fall of", though that may be a grossly simplistic comparison, or I might be simply wrong about that. Nurg (talk) 07:08, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
The simple answer is that not all besieged cities fall into the hands of the enemy (though admittedly most do in modern times), and not all cities that fall to the enemy were besieged (very few were). But such questions should not be decided by what Wikipedia has to say about it. Regarding the use of the word siege, I was referring exclusively to the topic of this article; apologies for any confusion. Mathglot (talk) 07:52, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
I see. Is there a term other than 'siege' that is commonly used for what happened from late March to mid April 1975? I take it from the article that 'fall' is generally used for what happened on 17 April 1975 only. Nurg (talk) 10:25, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
The COMMONNAME of this event is the Fall of Phnom Penh, I have never heard of it being called the siege of Phnom Penh, nor seen RS that support that. Phnom Penh was effectively under siege since at least August 1973 when the US stopped bombing. Mztourist (talk) 11:34, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
It's not unheard of, but it is very much the minority. Mathglot (talk) 11:43, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
+1 It seems like military actions that get remembered historically as sieges get remembered that way because those actions last a certain amount of time ... I've been working a bit lately on Siege of Port Arthur, which lasted half a year before the city fell (not because of a battle, but because the Russian general surrendered), and of course there's Siege of Sarajevo, which lasted a few years (and did not end with the besieging army taking the city or indeed any significant battle).
I think we can best analogize Phnom Penh with the Alamo ... Santa Anna laid siege to it initially, the most advantageous move he could have made, but after 10 days and against the advice of his subordinates decided to go in, kick ass and take names because he wanted to show his political rivals that he was bold and decisive. No one refers to the "siege of the Alamo". Daniel Case (talk) 22:36, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
We have an article at siege of the Alamo. Srnec (talk) 02:16, 27 November 2025 (UTC)
Which has a hatnote distinguishing it from the article about the battle. If wanted we could have a separate article on the siege of Phnom Penh, just like that. Daniel Case (talk) 04:32, 27 November 2025 (UTC)
We could have a separate article on the siege but would we want to? This article has readable prose size of 3,600 words, which is quite modest, so no need to split on the basis of size. If we wanted an article named for the siege, it would be better to rename this one than split it. However, I note the comment of Mztourist (who knows more about the topic than me) about non-use of the term "siege of Phnom Penh". Nurg (talk) 06:21, 27 November 2025 (UTC)
Not quite non-use, but about 30 times less common, so pretty much. Mathglot (talk) 10:51, 28 November 2025 (UTC)
+1 Let's stick with discussing the lede here. Daniel Case (talk) 22:50, 26 November 2025 (UTC)
  • Weak Support #1: I prefer avoiding the redundancy but I do not think it is a MOS:REDUNDANT violation and wanted to change my !vote to reflect that. In my opinion, historical events are proper nouns. REDUNDANT has an explicit exception for this. I think this is an important clarification because of the implications for the many articles in this project, like Battle of Gettysburg
The Oxford English Dictionary is a dictionary of the English language.

consider:

The Oxford English Dictionary is the principal historical dictionary of the English language.

Thanks for reading the nuance I wanted to add Dw31415 (talk) 02:35, 5 December 2025 (UTC)

As noted at REDUNDANCY that exception exists because there's no easy and natural way to avoid reusing "dictionary" in that sentence even assuming (correctly) that enough people know what one is. Whereas it is very easy to simply give details about the fall of Phnom Penh without having to use a synonym for "fall". REDUNDANCY does not have "an explicit exception" for proper nouns; it only says "Sometimes a little redundancy is unavoidable" and notes that there's no way to avoid using the OED's proper name in the lede. "Try to rephrase whenever possible" is what's operative here. Daniel Case (talk) 07:37, 5 December 2025 (UTC)
We can just as easily rephrase to retain the title in boldface as to avoid it. My argument is that in the case of a title of this form, we should do that. Why? Dw31415 has pointed to it: because titles of this form (e.g., Battle of Gettysburg) are common as names that cannot be avoided. If we can figure out what to do in those cases it should not be a problem to do so here. Srnec (talk) 14:51, 10 December 2025 (UTC)
Dw31415, let me put something to the test here. The death of JFK is a historical event that occurred in 1963. If you think that all historical events have proper names, what do you think is the proper name for that one? Nurg (talk) 10:43, 5 December 2025 (UTC)
@Nurg, sorry for the late reply. I googled "JFK Assassination" and the top entries were not capitalized. I can't give you a good reason why that's different from Cuban Missile Crisis, The Great Depression, or Battle of the Buldge. Dw31415 (talk) 20:31, 23 December 2025 (UTC)
As I said earlier, "Some historical events are referred to by proper names, some are not, and others are treated differently by different writers." I suggest that the death of JFK is one of many, many historical events that are not usually referred to by a proper name. Nurg (talk) 01:49, 24 December 2025 (UTC)

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User:Dw31415 If there's no consensus, you don't close it as agreeing the requested change, you take it to the next level as per procedure. Mztourist (talk) 03:38, 18 November 2025 (UTC)

I would agree if there weren't policy or style to guide to a resolution. In this case, the closure can consider the that the votes for #1 are based in the style guide, while the votes for #2 are based on preference and a few examples (without considering other examples like the Fall of Saigon), rather than referencing the MOS. There was light participation in this RfC. I wonder if you might consider accepting the change and moving on with a lead sentence that isn't redundant, either (#1) or some other version. Otherwise the article is a very good article and an introductory sentence like #1 serves it well. Thoughts? Dw31415 (talk) 04:12, 18 November 2025 (UTC)
Issue must be elevated as there was no consensus as you explicitly acknowledged, meanwhile you should tell User:Daniel Case that the pre-dispute language remains until the issue is resolved per procedure. Mztourist (talk) 04:38, 18 November 2025 (UTC)
"No consensus" wasn't bolded here, which indicates to me that it is not to be considered the close. Dw's language here reinforces my reading of their close that policy trumps preferences expressed in an RfC, thus how things turned out really isn't relevant. The issue has been resolved. Daniel Case (talk) 05:14, 18 November 2025 (UTC)
There is no special policy-based meaning behind bolding or not bolding any words in a closing summary. Text formatting can be convenient for people who want to see the overall outcome at a glance, but the whole paragraph is the closing summary. WhatamIdoing (talk) 19:54, 18 November 2025 (UTC)
@Mztourist, @Daniel Case, I’ll revisit my closure tomorrow. Thank you both for your commitment to improving the page. Dw31415 (talk) 05:19, 18 November 2025 (UTC)
@Mztourist, @Daniel Case, I'd like another day to review. @Mztourist, is there any phrasing that you'd accept that avoids the duplication of "the fall...was the capture"? You are certainly entitled to pursue the all the process steps, but I wonder if there isn't a compromise that moves things forward without administrative burden. Again, this is such a good article, thanks everyone for your work on it. cc: @Leemyongpak Dw31415 (talk) 02:15, 19 November 2025 (UTC)
The existing language should be retained as it is commonly used in WP, e.g. Fall of Babylon, Fall of Constantinople and Fall of the Western Roman Empire. It is a GA and I don't see what purpose is served by arguing over this issue. Mztourist (talk) 06:32, 19 November 2025 (UTC)
There are so many things wrong with this argument:
  • "It is commonly used ..." See WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS.
  • Of the three articles you linked, Fall of Babylon actually is MOS-compliant in this regard, as it does, understanding that readers do not have cabbage for heads and can thus be expected to understand that the meaning of "Fall of ..." does not need to restated and just goes on to tell us when that happened and how. Fall of Constantinople has the same problem as this one, and I thank you for bringing it to the community's attention. Fall of the Western Roman Empire is a little subtler as it does not relate to a military defeat.
  • The article will remain a GA regardless of how the lede is worded. That is not the issue here. Recognition is not a commandment that the article be forever fixed in amber as it was when promoted. Many GAs, indeed some FAs, have benefited from work done well after they were recognized.
  • I actually agree that no purpose is served by arguing over this issue, either, since IMO the MOS is pretty clear about this, and the MOS generally requires consensus to deviate from where it is clear. This RfC did not gain that.
You know, looking over the other "Fall Of ..." articles, I am despite the above willing to offer compromise wording. It seems to me that you are most upset by my taking the bolded title out of the lede entirely. So, how about instead something like this:

The fall of Phnom Penh took place on 17 April 1975, when Khmer Rouge forces entered the capital of the Khmer Republic (in present-day Cambodia), effectively ending the Cambodian Civil War.

That keeps the boldfaced title in the lede, but gets the narrative going without unnecessarily reiterating it later in the sentence. Daniel Case (talk) 03:47, 20 November 2025 (UTC)
Per MOS:FIRST the existing wording is better. Mztourist (talk)
@Mztourist: Could you elaborate under which provision of that section it is "better"? Just saying this repeatedly does not make it so (And please in the future sign your responses in full so that the reply function can be enabled). Daniel Case (talk) 19:10, 20 November 2025 (UTC)
Daniel, I agree with you that keeping the boldfaced title in the first sentence seems like an improvement wrt MOS:FIRST, which says "If possible, the page title should be the subject of the first sentence". WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:21, 21 November 2025 (UTC)
@WhatamIdoing, MOS:REDUNDANCY is an exception to MOS:FIRST as Cinderella157 articulates better than I did.
From MOS:FIRST/MOS:REDUNDANCY
Iraq–Pakistan relations are the relations between Iraq and Pakistan.
Iraq and Pakistan established diplomatic relations in 1947.
There's an exception to the exception for proper nouns. As you suggested, I'll reopen the RfC and hopefully more eyes will find some consensus (potentially around updating the MOS to include some exception for synonyms in cases like "fall".
Note that I think you mixed Daniel and MZtourist's positions. Dw31415 (talk) 23:30, 21 November 2025 (UTC)
I have just read the page Sherman's March to the Sea. The first sentence is "Sherman's March to the Sea (also known as the Savannah campaign or simply Sherman's March) was a military campaign of the American Civil War..." so the approach I support isn't just found in "Fall of" pages. Mztourist (talk) 09:57, 19 November 2025 (UTC)
@Dw31415 If you support Daniel, just add a vote for him in the RfC. I have no problem with #1, but Change without consensus seems like a serious problem here. Leemyongpak (talk) 09:00, 19 November 2025 (UTC)
@Mztourist, @Daniel Case, I've updated my closure to be more clear that it doesn't support changing the first sentence. @Daniel Case, please change it back. FYI: There was additional discussion on my talk and at DfD on this question. Dw31415 (talk) 02:14, 20 November 2025 (UTC)
Thanks User:Dw31415. Mztourist (talk) 03:09, 20 November 2025 (UTC)
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