Talk:Gabrielle Roth
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Recreated article
I have recreated this article with much more information. Frankly, anyone in the fields Gabrielle Roth is active in would be surprised that her notability would be questioned. Just the fact that she has three books published by non-vanity presses should be enough, but she is the founder of a recording studio, producer of over a dozen CDs and numerous videos (at least two of which have been reviewed by the New York Times), the founder of her own school of dance and movement and her own center for instruction in them, a world-wide lecturer and performer, and a faculty member of Omega, Kripalu and Esalen. She is well-known in the New Age movement, world music field, Neo-Pagan community, and other circles from indie music to theatre. I hope that the additional data I've added to the article will prevent further proposals of deletion. If not, at least don't delete it so quickly, so one of the many people familiar with her carreer may add to it. BTW, I have no connection at all with her, have never booked or spoken with her, and know her solely from her reputation and her works.Rosencomet 20:36, 2 November 2007 (UTC)
- Oh, and thanks to User:NawlinWiki, who deleted the article as it was, for posting the original text on my talk page so I could work on it some more.Rosencomet 20:42, 2 November 2007 (UTC)
Deletion prod
I have deleted the proposed deletion prod on this page, since I object to the deletion of this article. I believe it passes the criteria for notability and is not at all a vanity article. My reasons can be found in the text above placed when the article was recently deleted after a 5-day prod. I added more data including several reviews, interviews, etc. Rosencomet 21:54, 4 November 2007 (UTC)
- The user who prodded the article has a history of prodding notable articles so I don't think there is anything to discuss unless the prodder returns. —Viriditas | Talk 15:25, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
- I've removed the RFC tag as it seems this is handled. JodyB Roll, Tide, Roll 18:45, 8 November 2007 (UTC)
5Rhythms
Good to see this page recreated. However there is little mention of the five rhythms, which I guess is her most influential work. There was a 5Rhythms page which was deleted , apparently without discussion. The answers.com mirror shows what the page looked like. I'm thinking of taking this to WP:DRV which would go a lot easier if there was some newspaper articles or such like to show notability. I have found a couple of academic pubs
- Cook, S., Ledger, K., Scott, N. (2003) ‘Women’s experience of 5 Rhythms dance and the effects on their emotional wellbeing’ (Book) Pubs U.K. Advocacy Network, Sheffield
- Pract Midwife. 2007 Mar;10(3):20, 22-3. The ecstasy of spirit: five rhythms for healing. Henley-Einion A. University of the West of England.
--Salix alba (talk) 17:30, 21 December 2007 (UTC)
- Now on deletion review at Wikipedia:Deletion review#5Rhythms. --Salix alba (talk) 22:21, 21 December 2007 (UTC)
- Now recreated. 5Rhythms. --Salix alba (talk) 16:28, 22 December 2007 (UTC)
- Glad to see you working on this, Salix alba. I didn't mean to give 5 Rhythms short shrift. I figured a link to it was enough; but if you want to expand a section here for a better description with a direction to the full article, more power to you. (Heck, I'm just happy I was able to stop this one from being deleted.)Rosencomet (talk) 17:53, 22 December 2007 (UTC)
I have just suggested that the 5Rhythms article be deleted and simply redirect to the Gabrielle Roth article, which should certainly have an expanded section on 5Rhythms. I am not questioning the notability of the '5Rhythms' per se, but 5Rhythms.com does redirect to gabrielleroth.com and I think it would be pretty difficult to write a good separate article because of the lack of neutral sources available. The best article you could write would mostly draw from the 3 or 4 academic papers that have been written on the subject, if somebody wants to do that then they should. But the easiest thing to do would be to add a 5Rhythms section here. 4 years on there hasn't been much effort in getting the articles up to scratch. Maloot (talk) 12:44, 28 January 2012 (UTC)
Contested deletion
This page should not be speedily deleted because she is the creator of a large 5Rythmes movement with practitioners world wide and a fair amount of press coverage. eg NYT.--Salix (talk): 15:13, 8 March 2012 (UTC)
- I agree. The article has been suggested for deletion before, and every reason it has not been deleted still applies. She is notable as a performer, author, innovator in her field, and more.Rosencomet (talk) 13:38, 9 March 2012 (UTC)
- The truth of the matter is that the article is terribly poorly cited. This wouldn't happen if either of you would bother to improve the citations. Yworo (talk) 04:00, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
- Since she is a living person, the article will probably have to be stubbed by removal of all uncited information if citations are not promptly supplied. Especially the claims involving working with other living people. Each needs to be cited individually or removed (i.e. other artists she or her band have allegedly performed or worked with). Due to the lack of substantive sourcing and the claims made, the article appears rather promotional in tone. Yworo (talk) 04:25, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
- It's in a sad state. I'm looking for citations. Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:09, 16 March 2012 (UTC)
Musicians, Magazines, Directing
Improving the article
Death of Gabrielle Roth
Using the 'External links'
Personal life
GA Review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Gabrielle Roth/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 11:48, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you very much. I'm away from my desk just now so responses may be a bit slow, but I'll do my best! Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:41, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
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Happy to be challenged on any of my review comments. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:48, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Copyvio check
- I reviewed matches over 7% found using Earwig's Copyvio Detector. 40%+ matches with arielkarass.com and dans5rytmer.com appear to have used the Wikipedia article rather than vice versa. The Guardian match is an attributed quote. "five body rhythms: flowing, staccato, chaos, lyrical and stillness" is OK per WP:LIMITED IMO. No issues, although "a way to become conscious through dance" should probably be attributed in the text as a direct quote.
- Noted, attributed.
Images
- The fair use rationale for the Roth image looks appropriate. Manhattan Ensemble Theatre pic is relevant, and has a CC licence; caption and positioning are fine. Optionally, alt text could be added to the images. (MOS:ALT)
- Noted, alt text added.
Sources
- The Yoga Journal November/December 1990 reference could be more complete (Albert, Mimi "Teachings of an Urban Shaman", pp.70–73
- Done.
- Margaret Wagner reference is lacking details (e.g author, date, and – from the archive copy I'm seeing – the full title)
- Added.
- Awareness mag ref is missing the author.
- Added.
- What makes biblicalbards.org a suitable source?
- Removed.
- Jed Lipinski should appear as Lipinski, Jed
- Fixed.
For example, Nadine Fiume, Adam Barley, Gay Murphy, and Margaret Wagner Archived March 22, 2012, at the Wayback Machine teach the 5 Rhythms.
is a bit untidy with the archive link. The ref and that info may be redundant, actually.- Tidied.
- Simon (2010) is missing the source name.
- Added.
- Facebook is never an ideal source but in context here I think it's acceptable.
- Noted.
- There are a handful of refs not in CS1 format - I don't like this but it's not a blocker to a GA.
- Noted, I'll fix it soon.
- Spot check on
At 26, she was told that she needed surgery and wouldn't dance again and resigned herself to the prognosis.
- no issues.- Noted.
- Spot check on
During this time she visited the concentration camps memorials in Germany that she had studied during college
- no issues.- Noted.
- Spot check on
She trained for three years with Oscar Ichazo
- no issues. ("trained for three years with Oscar Ichazo" appears in the source but IMO WP:LIMITED applies)- Noted.
- Spot check on
Roth directed theatre productions of Savage Love, by Sam Shepard and Joseph Chaikin, at The Culture Project (Mercer Street, New York City
- source has the production's title as "Savage/Love"- Fixed.
- Spot chek on
"an old woman with frizzy dyed red hair, a funny accent, and a long thin stick" who would beat her whenever she made a mistake, initiating in Roth a severe inferiority complex
- no issues. ("severe inferiority complex" appears in the source, but IMO, again, is OK per WP:LIMITED)- Noted.
Text sections
Early life
- Typically the birth details would be included and cited here rather than in the lead.
entered a depression
- I don't have access to the La Cerra source, but this seems an unusual phrasing.- Reworded.
- Optionally, you could vary the openings of some of the sentences in the secong paragraph (I'm looking at She entered/She became/She found)
- Done.
Career
(Stockbridge, Massachusetts)
- maybe "in Stockbridge, Massachusetts" ? (Similarly for(Rhinebeck, New York)
and(Mercer Street, New York City)
- Done.
and has taught at the
- maybe "and taught at the"?- Fixed.
Roth wrote three books:
not supported by the following citation, but there is a list of three later in the articel so that's OK.- Noted.
Gabrielle Roth and the Mirrors
- italics aren't used for band names. (AFAIK.)- Fixed.
Roth performed and recorded as Gabrielle Roth and the Mirrors,
- supported by the source, but elsewhere it looks like other musicians were involved too, rather than these being all Roth's own work. (And the subheading is "With the Mirrors")- She formed and led the Mirrors. I've weaked the opening text. Please feel free to copy edit here.
The 5Rhythms have been the subject of academic study
- optionally, it might be interesting to add a bit more about these.- I think I'll attempt this after the GA, if that's OK.
Personal life/Works
- The link to Sweat Your Prayers: Movement as Spiritual Practice gives me a message "Book available to patrons with print disabilities". There is another copy on Internet Archive that doesn't have that restriction. Optionally, you could change the link.
- Changed link.
Infobox and lead
Spouse Robert Ansell
isn't mentioned in the body text and doesn't have a citation.- Added and cited.
- Lead is quite short, but acceptable given the length of the article. Optionally you could add something from the second para of Early life, or a bit more about what Roth was looking to achieve through her work.
- Noted.
General
- As you'll know from past reviews, I include some comments where everything is fine, for the record.
- Noted.
- I made the changes suggested by a couple of scripts.Feel free to revert anything that is objectionable.
- All fine, thanks for that!
I'm satisfied that the article meets the GA criteria so am passing it. Nice work, thanks. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:34, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
