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Jonas Brothers

didn't the jonas brothers(who I hate by the way)cover this song, and if so shouldn't it be noted?

Bleurgh. I guess so. 195.194.74.210 (talk) 15:18, 1 December 2009 (UTC)

Redirect

Why does Hello/Goodbye redirect to some obscure punk album instead of the Beatle's song?

Band name discrepency

Just noticed a discrepancy while I was browsing, this page notes that hellogoodbye did not derive their name from this song, while the band's page states otherwise. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.61.44.6 (talk) 20:25, 8 January 2008 (UTC)

Questions

What instruments were used in hello goodbye?

Contradiction

There seems to be a contradiction between the RECORDING section and the PERSONNEL section. In the recording section it quotes McCartney asking Geoff Emerick (their long standing engineer) to "really whack up the echo", but in the Personnel section it mentions Ken Scott as the engineer. Now both sections could be right, and McCartney may be confusing engineers since Ken Scott did engineer many of the Beatles recordings. However, I would remove Ken Scott from the Personnel section since there is doubt. I've found "The Beatles Bible" to be very accurate, but in this case I'd still remove him. It's also possible that they both engineered the record by being present on different days. Thoughts? TomasMFC (talk) 00:14, 30 July 2011 (UTC) 76.89.150.86 (talk) 00:13, 30 July 2011 (UTC)

Across The Universe B-Side

In the text it is said, that "Across The Universe" was B-Side to the "Lady Madonna" Single, but i think that's not true as you can see in that article. Anyway, I can not find any following UK/US single including Across The Universe.

Anyone knows better?

If not, i think this fact should be deleted.

Greets —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 88.134.178.9 (talk) 15:42, 23 February 2007 (UTC).

Harrison's "The Inner Light" was the B-side of "Lady Madonna". According to the Lewisohn books, it was Lennon himself who vetoed "Across the Universe" as he could not get it right, and favoured "The Inner Light" for the single. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Jd204 (talkcontribs) 22:20, 29 October 2007 (UTC)

Jonas Brothers

they made a cover 4 this song —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.140.46.83 (talk) 06:32, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Requested move

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Hello, GoodbyeHello Goodbye — correct title per front cover of single and front and back cover of album, see here, here and herePEJL 16:10, 13 August 2007 (UTC)

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This article has been renamed from Hello, Goodbye to Hello Goodbye as the result of a move request. --Stemonitis 06:00, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

Cool

That's cool- I came across this by random article. -jj137TalkContribs 01:53, 24 September 2007 (UTC)

Musicians' Union miming ban

I think this reference should be deleted. I don't know why the BBC didn't use any of the promo films the Beatles made for this song (In fact I thought they did, but I suppose I could have seen whichever one I saw on some other show), but it wasn't anything to do with the miming ban. It didn't apply to promo films. Back then no one thought the idea would catch on in any kind of a big way... Deke42 (talk) 00:14, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

"three minutes of contradictions and meaningless juxtapositions"

This quotation has been recently removed for the following reason: A number of web-sites attribute this quotation to Lennon; however, none of these web-sites is considered to be a reliable secondary source (see WP:RS), and given the subject and the large number of books that are considered RS, it seems likely that if Lennon did say it, it should be possible to find a RS. Note that "The Beatles Diary: The Beatles years By Barry Miles, Keith Badman" comes close but doesn't use quotation marks, so it's not clear whose words they are. As soon as someone can find a RS we can put the quote back. 87.115.56.122 (talk) 18:18, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

I don't have access to the book you mentioned. What does it say, because we could probably use that instead. Deserted Cities 19:32, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
See the discussion here, it has a link to the book. I had originally used words from the book but now agree with JC that it's too dangerous.87.115.56.122 (talk) 19:43, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
Yea, I agree that could be an issue. Let's see what others think. Deserted Cities 19:47, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
And leave the quotation there in the mean-time? Surely incumbency doesn't override lack of WP:RS? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.115.56.122 (talk) 21:00, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
It won't hurt to leave it another day or two, but leaving it for an undetermined time doesn't make sense: if various editors here look for an RS for the quote and can't find it, then it should be deleted. I was unable to check the Google Books link that Rob/87.115.56.122 gave me because I have exhausted the free views allowed for that particular book. Based on what Rob said, however, I think we'd have to make it clear that it was Miles' description of Lennon's opinion. John Cardinal (talk) 00:40, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
Okay. Here is the text from Miles' book: "To John Lennon's disgust, his epic 'I Am The Walrus' was issued on the flipside of this commercial but rather inconsequential McCartney composition – three minutes of contradictions and meaningless juxtapositions, with a tune that was impossible to forget." The problem is that the phrases either side of "three minutes..." appear to be the author's words, but as for the phrase itself, it's very unclear. Let's hope someone has better luck with a source elsewhere. Rob. 87.115.56.122 (talk) 16:14, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

(Outdent) Thanks Rob. It's certainly not clear to me whose opinion it is. Miles is unlikely to be harsh about a song of Macca's, but who knows. I think we should take the material out of the article. There are multiple sources we can cite to say that Lennon didn't like the song and didn't like that 'I Am the Walrus' was a B-side. John Cardinal (talk) 22:29, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Fine by me. Will you do the honours? — Rob 87.115.56.122 (talk) 05:34, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Then why is it still there? There are no citations for it, and certainly attributes the quote to Lennon without ambiguity, which is NOT what I read in this discussion. Can someone remove it? Unless of course there's some credible source in which case it should be cited. 76.89.150.86 (talk) 23:56, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

removed again. 93.145.142.238 (talk) 11:42, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

Hello, Goodbye

Copied over from User_talk:John_Cardinal (by Wrapped in Grey (talk) 20:39, 11 September 2009 (UTC)) :

I don't think the picture sleeve is an authoritative source. Generally speaking, art departments make the sleeves and they may get it wrong. I changed the article because I figured if the article name didn't have a comma, then the article text ought not to. Figuring out the actual answer would take a little work, and the answer might be ambiguous. The best authority would be BMI, but I didn't look on there site. I'll take a look at that, but I may not get to it for a few days. In the meantime, maybe another editor will get worked up about it and we can challenge him or her to come up with reliable sources... John Cardinal (talk) 23:54, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
Challenge duly accepted; several primary sources for the song name:
The Capitol single and MMT album are in error (or use artistic licence). HTH, Rob. Wrapped in Grey (talk) 19:46, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
Given the above, I wouldn't protest a rename. I think the answer is more ambiguous than you, mostly because the MMT album and 1987 CD omit the comma everywhere and not just on the album sleeve artwork. Still, I'd vote in favor of the comma, if pressed, because of the Lewisohn discography (pp. 200-201) which is the closest to an official discography (for what it covers) as we have.

I have the German Magical Mystery Tour LP and the title "Hello Goodbye" does not have a comma. I am challenging the addition of the comma in the article. I may rename it myself. Steelbeard1 (talk) 02:48, 12 September 2009 (UTC)

Looking at labels and sleeves, some have commas, others don't. I think the definitive source is the Sony ATV Music web site as Sony ATV owns the song. Their listings at shows no comma. Steelbeard1 (talk) 03:34, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
In 1967, in both the UK and the US, the song was published as "Hello, Goodbye". Also, the comma is used throughout Lewisohn's book (which was a result of EMI's commission and is thus considered official). Labels and sleeves are frequently subject to mistakes and/or artistic licence, though note that the original release of the song (i.e. the UK single) has the name consistent with publishing. Links added to article on published sheet music. Holding off page move for now.—Wrapped in Grey (talk) 07:01, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
This is a tricky subject, as one could probably have it either way. Lewisohn shows the comma in his work; the sheet music from both the UK and US show it also. Sony/ATV does not show the comma; the single's picture sleeve and the front and back sides of the album cover does not show it either. I personally don't mind what way we have it, since this is one subject we probably won't get a unanimous consensus on. If we can get the definitive answer from Paul McCartney himself concerning this, that would be great! Best, --Discographer (talk) 07:22, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
Personally, I'm not too fussed which way round the article and the redirect are; the leader now mentions both variants and the Release section covers some (I don't think we need all the gory details) of the history.—Wrapped in Grey (talk) 08:11, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
Me neither, but if you're gonna move it, don't copy and paste. I think you'd need admin help. Deserted Cities 14:25, 12 September 2009 (UTC)

(outdent) Before further discussion on whether the page should be moved, I think we need to get consensus on whether the current content of the page is okay: AFAICT, we have four primary sources (Parlophone, Lewisohn, Northern Songs, Maclen) that include the comma, and none (Capitol etc. being secondary sources) that omit the comma—seems like no contest to me :) —Wrapped in Grey (talk) 14:46, 12 September 2009 (UTC)

Either way I am OK with either alternative; I tend to favor the comma because of Lewisohn, but Sony and BMI both show it without. Given that the article text will show both variations, and a redirect will cover whichever variation we don't choose, people will find it. John Cardinal (talk) 19:55, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
On second thoughts, if the page is not moved, the discrepancy between title and content is likely to cause problems in future; added formal request below. Wrapped in Grey (talk) 08:57, 13 September 2009 (UTC)

Requested move

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The result of the move request was page moved, per discussion below. GTBacchus(talk) 03:09, 22 September 2009 (UTC)

Hello GoodbyeHello, Goodbye All primary sources relating to the original publication of this song (1967 Parlophone single, 1967 Northern Songs & Maclen sheet music, 1988 Lewisohn book based on 1967 EMI documents) include the comma. Wrapped in Grey (talk) 08:57, 13 September 2009 (UTC)

  • Support per nom. Also, liner notes to 1 show covers featuring the comma. Deserted Cities (talk) 14:22, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
  • Support per nom. Same as above. --Discographer (talk) 20:53, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
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Cover

Why do we use the cover from Denmark? Wouldn't it be appropriate to use the US or UK version? I think this is good. Deserted Cities (talk) 05:43, 14 September 2009 (UTC)

I agree with you, Deserted Cities. Steelbeard1 said the exact same thing to me about the German covers. Every singles' and albums' covers (front and back) in the world, not just the UK and US, shows no comma in the title. Also, all the other (international) versions of Wikipedia do not show the comma either. This would confuse a lot of people if a comma were shown, especially those who just purchased the remastered series. Best, --Discographer (talk) 08:24, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
I don't know where you looked, but in the liner notes to 1, 3 of the 4 covers they show feature the comma (the other is in Japanese and unreadable to me). The track listing on the back also has the comma. Deserted Cities (talk) 14:09, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
A few things you might want to consider: the Capitol single uses a pic from the Penny Lane photo-shoot; the UK sleeve was pictureless until many years later; the UK & Danish sleeves use the same pics (which are contemporary with the single's original release) but not the same overall design. Maybe an argument for both a main an alternative sleeve. BTW, your link is to the reverse of the Capitol sleeve. Wrapped in Grey (talk) 13:03, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
Actually some of the ones in the liner notes to 1 are pretty cool. I'll look for those. Anyway, I suppose this is the front of the capitol sleeve. Deserted Cities (talk) 14:15, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
Found Norwegian and German. If the article gets moved, it may be more appropriate to use those because of the comma. Deserted Cities (talk) 14:21, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
Yes, that's the front of the Capitol sleeve, and yes, good idea re Norway/Germany sleeve. —Wrapped in Grey (talk) 17:02, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
Well, I suppose we should start re-inserting the comma again. My apologies to you, Wrapped in Grey, as you stand correct. Best, --Discographer (talk) 19:08, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
For consistency, we should wait until its moved. It should also be noted that the title sometimes does(n't) include the comma within the article. Deserted Cities (talk) 20:53, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
Yes, let's wait 'til it's moved. Wrapped in Grey (talk) 21:13, 16 September 2009 (UTC)

New citation request

German cover

Genre

Reviewer: SilkTork (talk · contribs) 00:16, 14 July 2015 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hello, Goodbye/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.


I'll start reading over the next few days and then begin to make comments. I am normally a slow reviewer - if that is likely to be a problem, please let me know as soon as possible. I tend to directly do copy-editing and minor improvements as I'm reading the article rather than list them here; if there is a lot of copy-editing to be done I may suggest getting a copy-editor (on the basis that a fresh set of eyes is helpful). Anything more significant than minor improvements I will raise here. I see the reviewer's role as collaborative and collegiate, so I welcome discussion regarding interpretation of the criteria. SilkTork ✔Tea time

I've already been reading through, and checking my Revolution In The Head. Looks good. I think this should be a fairly quick and straightforward review. SilkTork ✔Tea time 00:19, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
Hi SilkTork. I'm grateful you could take this one on (I've never forgotten the lesson you gave me on the correlation between a Lead section and the article body at the All Things Must Pass GA!). Anyway, enough of the flattery: do you happen to have any thoughts about whether we've got enough commentary now on the main promo clip to include a non-free image here – perhaps of the hula dancers around Ringo's drum kit, with a Sgt. Pepper uniform or two in the shot? Hardly a pressing issue; just thought I'd ask while it was on my mind. Thanks, JG66 (talk) 01:12, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
Yes, I think you do have enough commentary, and that such an image would in fact be useful and encyclopaedic. SilkTork ✔Tea time 01:18, 14 July 2015 (UTC)

Tick box

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose is clear and concise, without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:


Comments on GA criteria

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Query


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General comments

This is a well researched and well presented article. Very useful and informative. My only queries are:

  • Why is a US cover used to illustrate a release from a UK band? Copies of the UK cover are available: .
  • There has been some unwanted IP edits. These seem to be under control, though might semi-protection be appropriate here?
  • Is mention of the guitar auction in the Promotional films section relevant and appropriate?
  • The short citation method is awkward to use for readers (and reviewers!), and is inappropriate for a non-print medium. Some older established users have a preference for it so it remains as an option, though the more context-appropriate long citation method is the more commonly used style on Wikipedia as it allows readers to check citation details in one click with all the appropriate information in one line.

However, none of these queries are serious enough to delay listing, and are raised here for consideration as part of ongoing development. Well done. SilkTork ✔Tea time 01:11, 14 July 2015 (UTC)

  • Thank you SilkTork! I'm sorry I didn't comment earlier (I was dealing with another GA review) but I am glad to see the article pass. (Oh, and addressing some of the concerns above: from what I can find, the British release didn't have a pic sleeve [the one shown is Swedish]. Not that it really is a pressing issue anyway.) Beatleswhobeachboys (talk) 01:36, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
You're right. I misread my search result. From what I can gather, this was the UK sleeve. SilkTork ✔Tea time 02:21, 14 July 2015 (UTC)
Yes, that's the one. Funny how so many countries use picture sleeves besides Britain. Beatleswhobeachboys (talk) 00:03, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
SilkTork, big thanks from me also. And for your reply regarding the inclusion of an image from the promo clip – that's great.
Regarding the points you raise under General comments:
  • I don't really have any experience with requesting semi-protection for an article. I'd not noticed any great level of interference from IP users (then again, I've only been watching the article since June, or whenever it was that Beatleswhobeachboys nominated it first time around, at GA1). JG66 (talk) 02:38, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Yeah, the guitar-auction point. Although I have been known to overspend on guitars myself, it's not a point that interests me personally – which is probably why I hid half of what was there originally in an end note. I don't see its inclusion as inappropriate, let's say: the guitar sold for an awful lot of money, and it was only used in what I take to be the third promo for this song (aside from Harrison being photographed with it during a take of the "Walrus" segment in Mystery Tour), so there seems to be a good reason for including the detail. If I can access one of those books discussing the Beatles' equipment, hopefully I might come across something to add that will make our treatment a bit more respectable. JG66 (talk) 02:38, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
  • With your comment about citation style, are you saying that ideally the full publication details should appear each and every time? I can see your point about how a single click would then give readers everything in one hit, but with this article's 60 or 70 citations coming from books (a figure that I think is quite low, compared to other Beatles-related song and album articles), that would make for a frighteningly long Citations/References section, no? JG66 (talk) 02:38, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

Parlophone label image

Add UK side label as extra image for indefinite amount of time?

Why?

Promotional Film/Remaster?

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