Talk:IOS 10
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Major issues
This page seems like somebody pasted an article from a website into Wikipedia. It has all sorts of opinions and needs to be revised urgently. --Nicolás Macri (talk) 23:15, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
- It reads like somebody pasted an article from a website into Wikipedia, because somebody pasted an article from a website into Wikipedia. I removed the text. Guy Harris (talk) 23:28, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
Multiple version numbers in the infobox?
There is currently a discussion of whether Template:Infobox OS should be used with multiple version numbers - for example, to list both a "software update" and "next major release" beta, or to list betas from more than one release stream. If you believe that multiple {stable, preview} releases should never appear in that infobox, or if you believe that they should appear under some or all circumstances where there's more than one beta of the OS in question available, you might want to comment there. (I have no strong belief either way; I'm OK with the main OS page listing only the "next major release" beta, but listing betas from multiple streams if they exist, but I'd also be OK with other choices.) Guy Harris (talk) 08:11, 11 July 2016 (UTC)
"Limited support" in Supported devices
Hi! I'm curious, why do edits about adding "Limited support" to devices in the Supported devices section get removed? I would think that's good information to have. If a device supports the OS, but not all advertised features of it, isn't that valuable information? LocalNet (talk) 19:20, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
"That" / "those" extensions
Hi. If you read the entire sentence, you'll notice the focus is on his opinion of the ability to use extensions rather than the extensions themselves. "Those" doesn't fit in the context if you read the whole sentence. LocalNet (talk) 10:27, 4 December 2016 (UTC)
- I.e., the reviewer liked the fact that extensions existed at all; he wasn't referring to any particular extensions. Guy Harris (talk) 18:37, 4 December 2016 (UTC)
B class
Hi @KAP03: What was the reason behind putting "No" on the B-class criteria for supporting materials? Are we missing anything notable? LocalNet (talk) 17:21, 5 February 2017 (UTC)
- The reason for putting "No" for supporting materials is that it has been marked as needing an image. -KAP03(Talk • Contributions) 17:59, 5 February 2017 (UTC)
- Oh, I didn't even see that the talk page actually states the reason. My bad. Does it need an image, though? We have an image of the operating system. Is it possible that was posted before an image was actually added? Just trying to figure out if have actually fulfilled that task. LocalNet (talk) 18:03, 5 February 2017 (UTC)
- [] is the very first version of this talk page edited on 12:27, June 13, 2016 (and it has the needs image tag). A few minutes earlier [] edited on 12:18, June 13, 2016 is the last version to not have an background image (some later versions have a now deleted background image). So it is possible that the needs image tag was posted after an image was already found. I will promote this article to B-class then. -KAP03(Talk • Contributions) 18:17, 5 February 2017 (UTC)
- Oh, I didn't even see that the talk page actually states the reason. My bad. Does it need an image, though? We have an image of the operating system. Is it possible that was posted before an image was actually added? Just trying to figure out if have actually fulfilled that task. LocalNet (talk) 18:03, 5 February 2017 (UTC)
App Store Categories section
AppleFS
Cleaning up some facts
Reviewer: PiGuy3 (talk · contribs) 03:38, 12 October 2017 (UTC)
GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:IOS 10/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Overall this is a well written article.
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- There are plenty of inline citations, the citations are reliable, and the support the article properly.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- This article covers all of the important facets of iOS 10
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- There may be a slight overemphasis on the positive parts of iOS 10
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- The article could benefit from a few additional images.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- This article meets all of the criteria.
- Pass/Fail:
