Talk:Liquid fluoride thorium reactor
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Safety
This otherwise excellent section refers to "Pu239, a toxic transuranic element". For a start, it should say "toxic transuranic isotope" But by what criterion is Pu239 more toxic than U233? If this refers to its chemical toxicity, how is that different from all the other actinoids, thorium and uranium in particular? Presumably we are referring to the radiotoxicity and long life of the particular isotope. But Pu239 is long lived precisely because its rate of radioactive emission per atomic nucleus, is slow! Admittedly, U233 is only one third as radioactive as Pu239, but that's because it's longer lived. The advantage of the continuous breeder reactor is that neither the radioactivity nor the long life matters, because the reactor consumes the product. Plutonium-239 breeding is perhaps inferior to the LFTR scheme, but let's not feed the idiotically false popular belief that plutonium is more toxic than anything else.
The article states that protactinium separation is part of the LFTR design. This allows the newly created Pa-233 to escape further neutron capture and decay undisturbed to U-233; this permits a breeding ration > 1. A weapons proliferation concern is that such separated U-233 may be used for a weapon. Most LFTR advocates I know (Hargraves, Moir, LeBlanc,...) prefer a design with no Pa separation and a breeding ration ~1.0, not presenting the risk of U-233 separation and ensuring that any U-233 is contaminated with U-232 whose decay chain emits 2 MeV gamma rays too hazardous for weapons workers. So, could somebody revise the article to illustrate this? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Robert Hargraves (talk • contribs) 22:36, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
- I'll try to change the impression by discussing the trade-offs. I wrote some of the original text and I may be responsible. Ray Van De Walker 07:24, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Some oder designs used separation of Pa to work with a low fissile inventory. An alternative to Pa separation is using a larger fissile inventory - something like 2 to 3 times the inventory has the same effect as reprocessing every 10 days. Many newer designs go that way, since this reduces proliferation concerns, and one can do reprocessing at a much lower rate, thus saving a lot on the reprocessing capacity.--Ulrich67 (talk) 16:07, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
I am in strong agreement with Robert Hargraves, but I'd go a little further. "Transuranic" seems to me irrelevant, and the Wikipedia reference gives no help to its relevance under ==Safety==, because it deals with the longest lived isotopes of the transuranic elements. I have a suspicion that the LFTR enthusiasts think that it means a danger not associated with the "naturalness" of uranium, which is humbug. The IFR fast breeder reactor design has most of the virtues of the LFTR with respest to the water moderated thermal designs. I have read that it is even unbothered by the neutron-poisoning krypton and xenon isotopes. I discount the fear of sodium's reactivity, thinking that tritium fluoride is an equal risk. But the difficulty of replacing all coal burning as quickly as possible with breeder reactors turns out to revolve around each initial reactor-load's required fissile content. The thermal spectrum of the LTFR seems therefore capable of being the key to making that small, and therefore reducing the enrichment process for the first startups. But the actual experimental data seem all over the place, and there is the question of the neutron economy of U-235 or Pu-239 relative to U-233 in such startup loads.DaveyHume (talk) 21:35, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
Sources for LFTR?
Which sources actually use the term "liquid fluoride thorium reactor"? --JWB (talk) 18:37, 22 August 2008 (UTC)
- Here is one from EPRI: Technology Assessment of a Molten Salt Reactor Design -- The Liquid Fluoride Thorium Reactor (LFTR) Strayserpent (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 01:14, 1 November 2015 (UTC)
I am new to this and may have put things out of place. The first two items under 'External Links' are good sources for the actual word LFTR. The first two links in 'References' are the technical background but may not use the term. Also I noticed the last external link may not be appropriate or maybe that is Wikipedia's redirection to sponsor books in the nuclear field. (JAJAB (talk) 14:37, 29 August 2008 (UTC))
If it's simply a synonym, this should be a redirect to the MSR article rather than a separate article. The Energy From Thorium link refers to the original Oak Ridge project as liquid-fluoride reactor, so there's no evidence this term is a new one applying to new work and differentiating it from the older work. --JWB (talk) 18:20, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
That is where this all started from. I have gotten many complaints that LFTR was a link to MSR and then it was never mentioned in the article at all - which did not make sense. Also the MSR article is far to large and complicated. It is trying to span too broad an area as it is. The different salt combinations have separate pages to cover their properties. By the same token, Navy ships are given a page as well as the ship class. As far as the technical work, I was told just today by another researcher the important difference LFTR will make over the MSR. I also asked a few of the other nuclear developers to add to this article. Are you in the nuclear field or have technical background in this area? (JAJAB (talk) 04:36, 30 August 2008 (UTC))
Whether this is a separate article or not, if this is a distinct molten salt reactor design, it should have a subsection in the MSR article, with link to the separate article with more detail if one exists. If the description is short, it can fit in the MSR article.
The MSR article is 34k, which is slightly below the WP:Article size suggested limit. If we start breaking it up, the policy mandated method is WP:Summary style which has a main article with summaries, linking to detail articles with more detail.
So far the only one of the four references and three links in this article that uses the term "Liquid Fluoride Thorium Reactor" as a primary description is the Naval Postgraduate School link, which is about a single student project. Kirk Sorensen's site mentions the term but seems to use it interchangeably with MSR.
If you can add substantial information from references that use LFTR as a separate term and explain why MSR is not applicable, then this should be a separate article with that information. Right now almost all the material is about MSRs, using the term MSR, and also using liquid fluorides and thorium fuel, but not using the term LFTR much less defining it as separate. --JWB (talk) 22:44, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
- JWP, this is the issue: more and more LFTR is becoming THE term to use for the...Liquid Fluoride version of the MSR. I know we went though this before when the previous LFTR article was merged with the MSR article. But now, if you do a google search for LFTR, you will find dozens and dozens of references. You are going to have to get used to this term as THE specific sub-genre of the MSR. I didn't even start this entry, someone else did, so you can see that people WANT to know specifically about the LFTR and want to be able to look for it under it's own title. DavidMIA (talk) 15:05, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- I am presently asking for help in this regard from the nuclear technical community. It is a newer subject so technical articles are being prepared by several people, but good research is not published quickly and then it takes off in a flurry of papers. I believe we are at the "take-off stage". Nevertheless, it is discussed widely among various groups from environmentalist, to space power developers, to nuclear researchers. I think the shear size of the energyfromthorium.com site is evidence of the interest and MSR may have the largest percent of documents, but I think LFTR is the primary topic (I wonder if Kirk Sorensen can tell what kind of net traffic he gets on that site?). I also disagree that LFTR is interchangeable with MSR. There are clear distinctions and maybe that should be a chart on the LFTR page. I have not read the full format manual but only look at what makes sense to someone coming to this site and looking at this subject (i.e., what do they expect to see). I am sure we can work this to everyone's satisfaction shortly and I am certain in less than a year this will not be an issue at all. —Preceding unsigned comment added by JAJAB (talk • contribs) 16:27, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- If it's a "term to use for the...Liquid Fluoride version of the MSR" that argues for the two terms pointing to the same article, regardless of which one (or both) are redirects and which is the primary article name.
- By definition molten salts are liquid, and Molten salt reactor currently has 20 mentions of "fluoride" but only 3 of "chloride", confined to one short paragraph (1% of the article volume) briefly mentioning basic theoretical considerations (fast reactor, Cl-35 activation) but no actual development work. This 1% is not sufficient justification for a separate article.
- Again, it's up to you guys to add references to substantiate whatever claims you make, whether that it's a new term for the MSR, that it's become more popular than MSR, or that it's a term with different significance. Googling myself, I'm finding references using the two as synonymous. The top two relevant hits for LFTR are from Energy from Thorium and use them as synonymous. --JWB (talk) 16:32, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- The main difference is that the MRSs are they are currently being developed (France, Gen IV-US, etc) are all *Uranium* fueled using U238 as the fertile material. So it involves a different architecture and process. Factually speaking, all LFTRs are MSRs but not all MSRs are LFTRs. The only way to get around this is by USING this term, LFTR and as a separate, albeit somewhat redundant, entry. 98.210.137.164 (talk) 01:47, 4 September 2008 (UTC) David
- OK, so you agree "LFTR" *is* the traditional MSR. The MSR article is almost entirely about this line of development starting with Weinberg, and covers it in quite a bit of volume. Only the sections "Molten-salt cooled reactors" and "Liquid salt very high temperature reactor" are about other concepts.
- Introducing the term "LFTR" is fine if you find references for it, but this is no case for duplicating most of the article content. It's hard enough maintaining the content in one place; let's try to get that accurate and well-written, which has been a problem so far, rather than creating a WP:POV fork against Wikipedia policy. Also, there's already the thorium fuel cycle article discussing many of the thorium reactor issues; this also needs work.
- Uranium fuel does not make the plumbing any different - remember the Oak Ridge MSRE ran on various fuels. The only difference in physical plant that comes to mind is that you can omit the protactinium sequestration. Only the solid-fuel reactor with molten salt cooling is really a different design, which much more closely resembles liquid metal cooled reactors. --JWB (talk) 03:28, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
We should make MSR article only about general MSR concept, since thats what its called (it warrants a big reduction in content imho) and move more specific reactor subtype stuff into LFTR article. The whole section "Molten salt fueled reactors" was almost ONLY about LFTR and thorium fuel. There should be only brief description of LFTR subtype in the MSR article, with link to LFTR article for details.
Molten salt reactor Duplication
How does this topic differ from Molten salt reactor? It was a redirect to that article until recently. I don't see anything specific to liquid fluoride here. Will Beback talk 23:24, 19 October 2011 (UTC)
- LFTR is a specific variant of MSR, combining the best features of the thorium fuel cycle and liquid fuel reactors (continuous reprocessing). It uses U-233 as the fissile material with thorium as the fertile material, both dissolved in fluoride salts. It is currently being investigated by several organizations (a change since the merge in 2008). AFAIK, only this variant is being actively pursued, hence the desire for a separate article. The aim is to move much of the LFTR-specific material out of the MSR article over time. --IanOsgood (talk) 00:33, 20 October 2011 (UTC)
- It seems redundant, but if you have a plan for it I'm sure it will be OK. Will Beback talk 02:15, 20 October 2011 (UTC)
Folks, JWB has fought the separate LFTR entry for years as the record above shows. LFTR has come onto it's own and there are now at least 3 start ups in the US, not to mention the Chinese that are developing LFTR. The "MEME" is LFTR, not MSR. As noted, LFTR is a variant of the MSR and since it's receiving literally ALL the publicity about it, it needs it's own entry. The MSR article should be cut down to size with most of the data coming here filling out the LFTR one. The meme "LFTR" is now THE MSR in development. Wiki needs to acknowledge this and that's what's happened.--David Walters — Preceding unsigned comment added by 108.81.228.221 (talk) 14:51, 25 October 2011 (UTC)
- The article is developing nicely. Good work, editors. Will Beback talk 10:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)
- Perhaps some of the bullets under Design Challenges need to be condensed. HF is mentioned in two seperate bullets. Paladindythe (talk) 01:38, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
We now have duplication between several articles - Thorium fuel cycle, Molten salt reactor, Molten-Salt Reactor Experiment, Liquid fluoride thorium reactor, and others.
Stuff that is generic to the thorium fuel cycle should be primarily covered in that article. Stuff that is generic to breeder reactors should be covered in that cycle. Stuff that is generic to molten salts in reactors should be covered in that article. LFTR would be fine as an article on the specific proposals going by that name, if there are now published references for them, but should not be the primary article for the more general stuff - it should have summary coverage and "Main article:" links to in-depth coverage.
A big problem with "new nuclear" concepts is each group of promoters talks about its design as if it is completely new and independent of others. Wikipedia can provide value by having information on all and by comparing them. --JWB (talk) 20:37, 17 December 2011 (UTC)
Design Challenges
I propose striking out the paragraph dealing with hydrogen inside the reactor. It has been pointed out that there are no hydrogen within the reactor. MegaHasher (talk) 06:59, 17 December 2011 (UTC) Just a minute. The only scary bit, to me, about FLiBe is the risk attached to the isotopic purity of the lithium, such that you really want it highly depleted of the isotope Li-6, lest the neutrons split it into tritium and helium. the tritium being hydrogen-3, and the nice chemically stable molecule (or ions) of lithium fluoride transmogrify into the ravenously acidic HF, hydrofluoric acid.DaveyHume (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 21:50, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
Disadvantages
All of the known disadvantages need to be listed (not just two) including that there are probably a large amount of disadvantages that are not even known yet, due to this technology not being mature. A lot of new research has to be completed before these things become mature enough to dot the earth with. There is a lot of potential, but still a lot of unknowns. This article is currently very biased and needs to be revised by a specialist in the needed field. This is Wikipedia people, not a cheer leading squad. Those with the knowledge, PLEASE make the needed additions/revisions. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.118.178.90 (talk) 21:51, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
- I agree on both parts. Let me quote from the latest MIT study on nuclear power which had a section on AHTR/MSRs.
- "As a new reactor concept, there have been limited studies—thus the difficulty to credibly assess this concept."
(http://www.mit.edu/~jparsons/publications/MIT%20Future_of_Nuclear_Fuel_Cycle.pdf)
- The page needs to make this explicitly clear and I have added it into the disadvantage section as well as another mentioned in the study. One could easily get the idea from the monumental list of advantages and the sheer size of the page that this isn't the case.
- Also little things like this line:
- "Unfortunately for MSR research, Weinberg was fired and the MSR program closed down in the early 1970s,[7] after which research stagnated in the United States"
- Should read something like:
- "The MSR programme was closed down in [exact date] due to reason [x]. No further research has been conducted.
- Short and to the point, crucially with no subjective language (i.e Unfortunately). The page needs a lot of work. I would as someone above did question the need for such an extensive page on a single design as opposed to one umbrella page for MSRs. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 222.152.194.33 (talk) 12:03, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, the occasional subjective language needs to be corrected into more neutral tone.ShotmanMaslo (talk) 19:40, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- I am no aware of any non-listed disadvantages of the LFTR existing. If you have a source for something new, feel free to add it. Yes, the advantages vs. disadvantages may seem biased, but thats simply the nature of the technology in question as far as I know. I was unable to find any more LFTR disadvantages or showstoppers in reliable sources. ShotmanMaslo (talk) 19:40, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
"The increased difficultly in prepossessing spent fuel from such makes a closed fuel cycle much difficult and therefore more expensive to achieve than in other designs. While this is good from a nonproliferation standpoint a closed fuel cycle does have benefits for civilian use and may be desired by some nations."
I have not found this in the citation, and it probably refers to traditional uranium solid fuel reprocessing closed fuel cycle, or solid fueled thorium reactor (AHTR) not online continual reprocessing of thorium fuel cycle as in liquid fueled LFTR. It is also a difficult to parse sentence. Should I remove it? ShotmanMaslo (talk) 19:17, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- I was unsure about adding it, here's the quote remove it if you think it's inaccurate.
- "For a closed fuel cycle there would be significant challenges relative to LWR or SFR SNF in terms of recycling the SNF. The high-temperature reactor fuel that is the basis for this concept is difficult to reprocess and thorium fuel cycles generate 232U that has a decay product with a 2.6 MeV gamma ray that makes fuel fabrication difficult. The fuel has several other characteristics that create significant technical barriers against diversion relative to other types of SNF" — Preceding unsigned comment added by 222.152.194.33 (talk) 23:51, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- indeed it refers to solid fueled thorium reactors (fuel fabrication, offline reprocessing), not LFTR. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ShotmanMaslo (talk • contribs) 06:36, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
It seems like you have added a lot of disadvantages that are not specific to the LFTR (Graphite decay,etc) . Could you be clear what you are comparing it against to generate these disadvantages. In addition you contradict the advantages in a number of areas, should you not just add a coment to the advatage rather than list it twice (Proliferation)? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 132.244.72.4 (talk) 11:03, 9 December 2014 (UTC)
- The separation into advantages and disadvantages is problematic. Many aspects (e.g. proliferation, safety, cost) are nor just clearly positive or negative but have aspects from both sides. The second problem is comparing a typical existing nuclear power plant to a class of possible new reactors - much of the LFTR design is still open: depending on the choices properties are different, and much is still unknown. Even the existing nuclear plants are rather different from each other and even there properties like safety and costs are somewhat controversial. The whole form of advantages / disadvantages is not a good idea, as the typical reader may not know a conventional reactor well, and there are other options to compete with. So it would be better to sort the properties by aspects (like safety, cost, waste, proliferation, required development).--Ulrich67 (talk) 19:27, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
External Links
There's far to many, they're all bias in favor of the technology and there's far to many blogs and news sources. I want to delete all of them except:
- Thorium Energy Alliance (without the extra bit)
- International Thorium Energy Organisation
- Weinberg Foundation website
- Flibe Energy company website
As "advocacy groups" or something.
The the most objective and informative videos (ie not ones trying to sell the technology) should stay. I haven't watched any though so I don't which fall into that category.
Media articles can go there's absolutely no need for them as can blogs -Wikipedia isn't a place to promote your personal blog.
Objections? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 222.152.194.33 (talk) 13:02, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Energyfromthorium.com should also stay, it is the largest and oldest website about LFTR technology on the internet, with discussion forum and MSRE research document repository. Not a pure blog at all. Comparable sites on other energy articles are in the external links (for example Polywell forum on Polywell confinement fusion). — Preceding unsigned comment added by ShotmanMaslo (talk • contribs) 20:02, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
Which references use the term?
Not that many of the references listed use the term "liquid-fluoride thorium reactor". Could you point out which sources do use it, and especially sources other than Kirk Sorensen's publications, blogs, and news coverage. --JWB (talk) 20:29, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Using an academic search engine for "Liquid Fluoride Thorium Reactor" there are 170 Results, 166 of which are 'other web', with only 1 journal source not actually on the topic (and a New Scientist article that Elsiver inaccurately promotes under 'journal sources' since they own the magazine)
- (http://scirus.com/srsapp/search?q=%22liquid+fluoride+thorium+reactor%22&t=all&drill=yes&sort=0&p=0&nds=nom)
- Same search engine for "Thorium Molten Salt Reactor" gives 103 results of which 32 are journal articles. "Molten Salt Thorium Reactor" gives 4 total results, no journals.
- (http://scirus.com/srsapp/search?q=%22thorium+molten+salt+reactor%22&t=all&drill=yes&sort=0&p=0&nds=jnl)
- Wouldn't this article be best as "Thorium Molten Salt Reactors" in general considering no such article exists as yet. Most if not all of the information about LFTRs would apply to TMSRs in general and it would allow for the article to spend less time promoting Kirk Sorensen and his business and more time providing information about TMSRs from journal sources rather than LFTR advocacy groups and new articles. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 222.152.194.33 (talk) 02:20, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
- I respectfully disagree with the theory that an article should be named according to the key words of academic articles. Instead, it should be titled according to common usage. LFTR is the more common usage on the net at this point. In large part that is because Kirk Sorenson began promoting it after forty years of obscurity. Ray Van De Walker 07:08, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- The WP:COMMONNAME policy calls for common English names used in WP:Reliable sources, not on the net. --JWB (talk) 18:57, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- I respectfully disagree with the theory that an article should be named according to the key words of academic articles. Instead, it should be titled according to common usage. LFTR is the more common usage on the net at this point. In large part that is because Kirk Sorenson began promoting it after forty years of obscurity. Ray Van De Walker 07:08, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Here is EPRI report: Technology Assessment of a Molten Salt Reactor Design -- The Liquid Fluoride Thorium Reactor (LFTR) Strayserpent (talk) 01:15, 1 November 2015 (UTC)
Production of Cesium 137 ocurs in all reactor types, because it is a common fission product. I think it has no relation to the LFTR's reduced production of transuranics. I intend to rephrase that part of the safety advantages. Ray Van De Walker 07:24, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
Synthesis of heavy elements
- Th-232, U-235 and U-238 are primordial nuclides, having existed in their current form for over 4.5 billion years, predating the formation of the Earth; they were forged in the cores of dying stars through the r-process and scattered across the galaxy by supernovas.[4] Their radioactive decay produces about half of the earth's internal heat.[5]
This material really has nothing to do with the topic of the article, which is about a type of nuclear reactor. It could be added to every other reactor article, and the first sentence could conceivably be added to every article touching on every heavy element. Gold jewelry, mercury amalgam fillings, lead acid batteries, platinum catalysts, etc, etc. The cited sources makes no mention of the topic, liquid fluoride thorium reactors. This kind of general background belongs ion the thorium article, if anywhere. Will Beback talk 23:15, 26 January 2012 (UTC)
- Actually no, I don't think it belongs in the thorium article because it also talks about U and Pu. It doesn't belong in articles about "every heavy element" because it's talking about fissile isotopes. It doesn't belong in every nuclear reactor article because most reactors only involve U; this describes the options that were presented in the 40's; Nuclear power and/or Nuclear fission would be appropriate, but I don't see what the harm in keeping a couple sentences regarding the origin of thorium is and how through identification and the process of and elimination we get to LFTRs. -- Limulus (talk) 20:22, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
- I agree that the origin of specifically fissile and fertile U and Th belong here, because of the belief that fission reactors are fueled with fossil fuel. This article is about an alternative to burning fossil carbon, and the fact that thorium and uranium are primordial to the earth is, I submit, relevant.DaveyHume (talk) 20:03, 10 May 2015 (UTC)
Stable version template
As you can see above, I added the stable version template. I did this because this article was just found to meet class B criteria, and should the quality ever fall for some reason (as unfortunately happens with even Featured Articles that get demoted), this will hopefully preserve the hard work that has gone into this article thus far with an easy-to-access link. If you care to, you may read more about this new template in the template documentation, linked above. If for some reason you object to this template, feel free to discuss and remove it from this talk page. I just wanted to briefly explain what this is about! Thanks, Falconusp t c 19:48, 29 January 2012 (UTC)
Merging Disadvantages and Design challenges sections
Program Cancellation
One Fluid and Two Fluid
POV issue in headings; unbounded length
References
TEAC Conference Minutes
Brayton Versus Rankine
Two Fluid Reactor Flexibility in Reactor Size
Advantages
Other Uses
References for Talk Page
Reprocessing
Easy to control
From waste to resource
Energy density
Reviewer: Grandiose (talk · contribs) 18:58, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
Comments
This article is not ready to be a Good Article, for many reasons. You may wish to peruse WP:What is a Good Article? or look through other articles at WP:GA, but I'll my best to explain what the problems are.
- Per WP:Verifiability, every controversial statement needs a reference. This is pretty much every statement, unless it is patently obvious. This means that almost all of the article requires a citation. There are far too few references provided in the article at the moment.
- Citations require details that allow others to verify the statement. Given than weblinks sometimes break, this means providing things like the page's title, date, author, work and publisher. If you use a template like {{cite web}} for web links, then the fields should provide a guide as to what it is necessary to include (not all the fields, but at least some).
- Layout. The long-list format doesn't work very well. If you look at WP:LAYOUT, then you will see that bullet points are only suitable for lists of short items, unlike in the article at current. Instead, the sections should be divided into groups and each point presented in a paragraph.
- Prose. There are some problems, such as fuel / breeding and conversion to an insoluble form such as a glass, could be desirable. There are also some non-encyclopedic parts such as An excellent detailed technical description of the 1970s development status and knowledge of the molten salt breeder reactor (MSBR) that the ORNL program was working on is available online in a single large document.. I suggest a copyedit from the Guild of Copyeditors, once you've seen to the other problems.
- Lead. Bit difficult to follow; doesn't make much mention of the advantages/disadvantages which occupy most of the article. It's the part which needs to be best explained to the lay reader.
- Following on from this there is some attempt at an accessible introduction, but it's still very hard to understand. The explanation is basic in some respects, but jargon remains difficult for the lay reader.
- Images: mostly fine, although File:Lwrvslftr2.png looks a bit suspicious. Sub-images are included, but their copyright status isn't clear.
Feel free to renominate the article once these issues have been addressed. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 18:58, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Liquid fluoride thorium reactor/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.