I'll add this now. It's a list of jobs that I think need to be worked on, with some suggestions and requests. Some are major, others are minor:
- the domestic abuse section needs a look at as it's really confusing and there is a need for clarification. Does it make sense as it is? I think the case is still ongoing, but I'm not sure of the exact details;
- I'm not sure whether the online abuse bit is in the right place - it might belong in his international career I guess?
- the records section can probably be turned into prose and/or combined with some sort of statistics overview;
- that probably means we need to look at the tables that have been added, perhaps using Adam Gilchrist, Paul Collingwood and similar articles as a starting point. There's probably a bit much table use right now, but there's a base to work from;
- Playing style section - there are lots of fantastic articles on CricInfo that have the potential to be really helpful
- the international section needs to be looked at. I think there's too much repetition in this as it stands and it doesn't really tell the story. I'm fairly convinced we need a single International career section (as used at Gilchrist and Collingwood), with sub-sections. This will allow us to say just the once, for example, that he was injured in 2015. I'm not entirely sure what the sub-sections of this will end up being, but they might be:
- early international career
- 2015 World Cup and injuries - this might be two sections
- 2019 onwards
- The naming of those isn't right, but as three or four key sections to build around they make some sense to me; it might be that there end up being more sections as it gets worked on. Spike 'em may have a view on this?
- images - if there are any worth adding;
- sources need checking for unreliable/tabloid ones. I don't know all the sources being used - perhaps Soutut and the 202 IP editor could check through all the websites and news sites being used - are any of them very tabloid in style? Or otherwise not reliable?
- alternative sources - I'm very aware that I've relied quite a lot on CricInfo. I know we have some other sources in the article, but are the more of those that are easy to find - again, Soutut, you may be in the best position to find these along with 202;
- sourcing needs details such as author added; this includes checking for duplicate refs. I'll probably try and do this one evening UK time so that I can work through all of them in one go - I might take out the cite templates when I do so that we have consistency, I'll see;
Those are the main areas to consider I think - and then the lead will, of course, need reworking a bit to reflect the article as a whole. Blue Square Thing (talk) 20:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
I think the following link is more convenient to verify the tabular data of Shami's IPL performance- https://www.iplt20.com/teams/punjab-kings/squad/94/mohammad-shami#:~:text=Mohammed%20Shami%20has%20revived%20his,tag%20of%20INR%204.8%20crore.&text=He%20had%20a%20fine%20run,19%20wickets%20from%2014%20games.
This link can be used to create the Bowling Style section- https://www.espncricinfo.com/story/aakash-chopra-how-mohammed-shami-flipped-the-switch-on-his-bowling-1172530
Also, the discussion of ESPN in the T20I section can be utilised in this context. Soutut (talk) 08:20, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
Blue Square Thing, your idea of the International section is superb, but will it not mess up with the three formats? Anyway I think it can be divided into the following sections:
1. Initial Years- This may include Shami's debut in international cricket and his performances before the 2015 World Cup. Albeit, very less amount of information is currently present inside the article regarding this.
2. 2015 World Cup- A section with this name is already created in the article.
3. Return from Injury / Rejuvenation of Cricket Career- This may include Shami's return in international cricket after his injury, his omission from the playing XI of Champions Trophy and T20 World Cup, his performances in the 2018 England tour and the most significant moment of his career- The Newzeland series.
4. 2019 World Cup and onwards- This may include Shami's performance in 2019 Cricket World Cup and the international matches he has played since then.
Along with these, Shami's performances in the World Test Championship matches- like the Australia tour, where Shami suffered an injury while batting should be included in the respective places.--Soutut (talk) 10:51, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- I think we'll need to see how the international bit goes. It might work, it might not. Thanks for the suggested sub-sections. I'm not entirely sure when I'll get to it, but I will. Blue Square Thing (talk) 14:56, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- I've removed the Injury section, this should be merged into the ongoing career section if it is to appear. I also don't agree with the merging of his career figures across formats : it does not seem to be something done by other sites (except possibly doing a statsguru search on CI). Spike 'em (talk) 11:14, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- The Records section is creeping towards a list of WP:TRIVIA. We should only list widely reported / notable achievements. Also, he took 29 matches to reach 100 Test wickets and does not appear on the cricinfo list being used as a source. Spike 'em (talk) 12:40, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- His favourite actor, colour and animal are utterly irrelevant, no matter how many non-reliable sources you can find to state them. Spike 'em (talk) 12:49, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for these Spike 'em - much appreciated and I tend to agree. Records (and stats) sections always worry me a little on principle as they tend to get a bit manufactured. We'll see how that goes I guess. Blue Square Thing (talk) 14:56, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
An unregistered user asked me to intervene on his behalf about the persistent removal of the injury sections and others. After grasping the matter, I have made an edit to this page. I think the removal of the injury section is justifiable, albeit portions of it can be restored later in other sections. However, I have restored the removal of the parts belonging to the Outside Cricket section. I think as the name of the section suggests, a little information outside cricket can be included. I shall later look out for a more reliable link. For the record section, I have restored one record and cited a different source which accurately verifies the matter. The best will be if Blue Square Thing, you interfere the matter and solve it. Gracias.Soutut (talk) 17:21, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- How on earth is his favourite colour and holiday destinaton encyclopedic content and not utter trivia?
- According to the cricinfo page that was being referenced the fastest Indian bowlers to 100 wickets are: Ashwin, Prasanna, Kumble, Gupte , Chandrasekar, Ojha, Mankad, Jadeja and Bumrah; Shami doesn't appear on the list.
- Also ahead of Shami are : Kapil Dev, Pathan, Bedi, Doshi & Harbhajan, making him at best 15th fastest to reach this milestone.
Yes, the fact is true. In reality, Shami is third fastest Indian pacer. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 202.142.67.248 (talk) 11:39, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
- Well, he's now 4th behind Bumrah in that list as well. Given his low position in the overall list, I'm of the opinion that this is just trivia rather than a meaningful record.Spike 'em (talk) 12:00, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
Where did the ip editor ask you to intervene, as I see nothing on your talk page? Are you sure you are not editting as both logged in and logged out, in which case you are in excess of the 3 revert rule? I still do not believe that this is valid content rather than mindless trivia. Spike 'em (talk) 17:41, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- Sorry, I found it
and withdraw that comment. Reinstating most of my original comment as it seems that the socking accusation was correct. Spike 'em (talk) 09:41, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
- Favourite colour / city / pet are mindless trivia, and directly contravene WP:NOTGOSSIP, which is a Wikipedia policy :
Celebrity gossip and diary. Even when an individual is notable, not all events they are involved in are. For example, news reporting about celebrities and sports figures can be very frequent and cover a lot of trivia, but using all these sources would lead to over-detailed articles that look like a diary. Not every facet of a celebrity's life, personal details, matches played, or goal scored is significant enough to be included in the biography of a person.
Spike 'em (talk) 17:55, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
'An editor has been continuously reverting my edit to this article. As I have found you to be one of the active editors of the article, I want you to intervene on my behalf. You can grasp the matter by going through the page history. Thank you in advance for helping. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 202.142.67.248 (talk) 14:11, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
Ok, let me look into the matter.Soutut (talk) 17:05, 1 November 2021 (UTC)'- this is our conversation in my talk page. All right?Soutut (talk) 17:57, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks. Why do you think that his favourite colour / animal / holiday destination, sourced to what looks like a non-WP:RS, is encyclopedic content and not in direct contravention of WP:NOTGOSSIP? Spike 'em (talk) 18:09, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
I am the unregistered user. Soutut and Spike em, please pardon me for carrying on the conversation in Soutut's talk page rather than here. I thought that some information outside cricket career of a cricketer could be included in an article. That's why, I added the stuff. Anyway, sorry again. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 202.142.67.248 (talk) 04:47, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
- notable details of his life outside cricket is fine, but what you've added is both trivial and is sources to unreliable sources. It should be removed. Spike 'em (talk) 06:29, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
I see, I will not make such edits further. I promise. Anyway, I have found Shami's performance in the Bangladesh tour to be missing in this article. It was unarguably one of the rejuvenating moments of his career. I think it should be added. Perhaps Soutut can add the stuff better. Anyway, I other editors' opinions in this matter. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 202.142.67.248 (talk) 07:07, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
- Does this mean you accept that we should remove the triva about favourite actor / animal/ colour? Spike 'em (talk) 10:26, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
Yes, the tour of Bangladesh is missing in this article. I will add it soon. Soutut (talk) 10:47, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
Spike 'em ([[User talk:Spike 'em|talk], actually I am a novice to Wikipedia. So, I think the experienced ones like you can decide the matter. I just thought that a little bit information outside cricket could have been included. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 202.142.67.248 (talk) 10:51, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
Spike 'em, I don't know whether you know the fact that India is traditionally a land of spinners. So, it's normal and natural that most of the Indian bowlers to fastest 100 test wickets are spinners. In that sense, it's not an insignificant record to be the 4th fastest Indian bowler to 100 test wickets. Also, when Shami achieved the feat, he was the 3rd fastest and that is suggested by the source. We may write that currently he is the 4th quickest fast bowler to...
While watching yesterday's World Cup match between India and Afghanistan, I noticed that the TV Channels describe Shami as right-arm fast bowler in the TV Screen. Btw, while searching Shami's education in the Google, it showed 'Mahatma Jyotiba Phule Rohilkhand University'. I don't think this fact to be trivial and I want it to be added to the article. Btw, Shami claimed his career-best T20 figures yesterday against Afghanistan, but as the tournament is currently ongoing, I think the fact should be added in the prose section of the article only after the event ends. Blue Square Thing and Spike 'em, I want your comments and opinions regarding this three matters. Also, I'd like to request BST to view the two videos, whose titles are provided in the 'Can this project be promoted to B Class?' section.
I have studied some sources about Shami's performance in the Bangladesh tour. I have found that Shami reached his career best ratings and rankings after that series. India's first pink ball test match also took place during the second match of the series and Shami was included in that match. This facts are worth-mentioning. To be honest, I am quite busy this week, but I will add the facts soon.
Thank you. --Soutut (talk) 08:41, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
- 9 Indian pace bowlers have reached 100 wickets, so being just above halfway in that cohort is hardly significant enough to mention; I'd still be be against including it if he was 4th fastest among all Indian bowlers. Not every minor piece of trivia needs to be included in the article. Spike 'em (talk) 09:57, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
Thank you for your response, please convey your opinion regarding the other matters.Soutut (talk) 13:43, 4 November 2021 (UTC)