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a good article. I think you missed some important points but I'm not going to edit at the moment.
This grandson of Calvagh won Ulster for the English crown more than Mountjoy.
Docwra was useless without him
Niall Garbh: change article name
Niall Garbh is a much, much more common spelling of this guy's name in the English language. Google Books result (i.e. academic sources): Niall Garbh: 1500 results; Niall Garve: 433 results. Google Fight result: Niall Garbh: 1420 results; Niall Garve: 186 results. Indeed, the claim that 'Niall Garve' is the anglicisation given that the vast majority of the above results for 'Niall Garbh' appear in English language sources is a bit tenuous. Dunlavin Green (talk) 12:31, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
- Based on this reasoning, I am moving the page to "Niall Garbh O'Donnell'. Garbh is indeed the more common spelling SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 05:31, 24 September 2025 (UTC)
Hugh Boy, ancestor of the Larkfield O'Donnells
I know that the cited source, Burke's, does indeed describe Hugh Boy as a son of Niall Garve. But that is incorrect. It is a notorious fact that Hugh Boy was Niall Garve's younger brother. It's a matter of intense research.
There is no single one of the many O'Donnell pedigrees that can be considered flawless, but this is a whopper. Probably the least problematic source in the public domain would be the appendix to O'Donovan's edition of The Annals of the Four Masters. I think Frank O'Donnell's "A Hidden Legacy" is probably the best, most complete source overall, though.
JackMason1 (talk) 18:51, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Jack, are you able to cite a source to confirm this? Burke's Peerage is the only source that claims Niall had a son called Hugh Boye, so if you have a more reliable source displaying where this misunderstanding came from, that would be great.
- I think that Hugh Boye is Niall Garve's older brother though? The Encyclopedia Britannica states that Niall Garve's elder brother was "Hugh of Ramelton". Both the Annals of the Four Masters (page 2365) and Robert Dunlop state that Niall Garve had a brother named Hugh Boye. SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 03:34, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Is this (page 2385) the appendix you referred to? SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 03:41, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hugh Boy of Ramelton belonged to a very remotely related branch, on the far edge of the derbfine. He was a descendant of Hugh mac Hugh Dubh of Ramelton, whose father, Hugh Dubh, was the most recent common ancestor with this particular Niall Garve.
- I want to make a joke at the expense of the Encyclopedia Britannica because the falsity of their statement is universally recognized among students of the O'Donnell dynasty. But to be fair, the relationships among these dynasts can become very confusing, what, with all the complex marriage alliances and what not. Plus, the pool of names they drew upon was pretty small. The addition of one of a pretty small stock of agnomina doesn't always help distinguish them. Off the top of my head, I can recall at least five (5) distinct individuals within the dynasty named Niall Garve.
- To be honest, probably none of the established authorities renders a completely flawless version of the dynastic O'Donnell pedigrees. But relative to this group, McGettigan is very good. Francis Martin O'Donnell is probably better. But they're both still living, and so haven't yet acquired the same venerable level of authority as O'Donovan.
- As far as can be established, this particular Niall Garve was the eldest of the three longest-lived sons of Conn, son of Calvagh O'Donnell. His brother, Hugh Boy, ancestor of the Larkfield O'Donnells, was next. Conn Oge, their brother, ancestor of the Austrian and Spanish O'Donnells, was youngest.
- They had several other brothers, including one Donnell, who died young or whose relative seniority cannot be determined. So I am inclined to think that Donnell may have been even younger than Conn Oge. JackMason1 (talk) 08:10, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Correct document, but I would reference a different page. Page 2397 of that document sets forth the ancestry of the Larkfield O'Donnells, and their founder is correctly given as Hugh Boy, son of Con O'Donnell--Niall Garve's father.
- I don't know how you want to reference O'Donovan in the article, but for the record:
- Niall Garve was ancestor of the O'Donnells of Newcastle and the Baronets of Newport House, both of County Mayo, and both extinct as of 2024. See pages 2391 and 2396, respectively.
- His brother, Hugh Boy was ancestor of the O'Donnell families of Larkfield, Co. Leitrim, and Greyfield, Co. Roscommon. Both extinct as of 2024. Page 2397.
- Their brother, Conn Oge, was ancestor of the O'Donnell families of Castlebar and Faheens, Co. Mayo (both extinct), and Spain and Austria, the latter two still surviving as of 2024. See page 2400.
- I don't know why, but O'Donovan does NOT discuss the family at Faheens, although their descent is considered well-proven. A paper by Rupert Ó Cochláin from the 1970's vaguely references some documents in the Austrian Imperial military archives in support of a discussion of the biography of their founder, Charles, born around 1730. They were particularly closely intermarried with their O'Donnell cousins at Newcastle, so their absence from O'Donovan's notes is a bit mysterious.
- One of O'Donovan's primary informants was Charles Joseph O'Donnell of Castlebar, and so very closely related to the families of Faheens, Austria and Spain. Charles Joseph entered into a number of controversies regarding the family history in which members of each branch stretched the truth a bit in order to enhance their own perceived seniority within the dynasty. O'Donovan seems to have done a very commendable job of establishing the factual truth of their respective genealogies, but I have to wonder whether the failure to represent the Faheens branch in his work at all reflects their relative lack of ambition, or at least access to O'Donovan.
- There are families today in 2024 claiming to be surviving branches of the Larkfield and Newport House lineages, but skeptical observers might regard them as unproven. Certainly those claims were considered unproven, if not actually disproven, in O'Donovan's day.
- The question of surviving descent from the dynastic stock of O'Donnells is actually pretty controversial within the genealogical community, with the exception of the Austrian and Spanish branches, whose pedigrees are impeccable. You might want to consider avoiding it altogether. It might be flame-war fuel.
- But also just for the record, all of these families were closely intermarried up through the 18th century, so all of them are usually considered to descend from Nuala, sister of Hugh Roe, even though, as I understand it, the mother of Manus, Niall Garve's son, has never been positively identified in the contemporary record.
- Burke's may be the most popular of the many standard reference materials on aristocratic genealogy in the English Sprachraum, but its uneven quality is pretty widely recognized. I don't think anybody in the genealogy community will regard it as a scandal that they've been caught in another howler. To their credit, subsequent editions often correct errors made earlier on.
JackMason1 (talk) 06:50, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Regarding the dilemma of which authority to defer to when there is a clash between sources, I recommend deferring to the specialist over the generalist, and giving preference to established works when there is a choice between specialists. Burke's is more specialized than Encyclopedia Britannica with regard to questions of genealogy, but Darren McGettigan and Francis Martin O'Donnell are even more specialized with regard to the genealogy of the O'Donnell dynasty. O'Donovan may be somewhat less specialized than McGettigan and Francis Martin, but his authority has been established for far longer.
- Really, on this specific topic, you couldn't go wrong with any of those last three. But since O'Donovan is kind of an icon, he seems "relatively" much less prone to controversy, in my opinion.
- I don't think Wikipedia aspires to be an authority on specialized topics, but it does strive to be more accurate than most general reference materials. JackMason1 (talk) 10:14, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Jack, thanks for clarifying this. I've corrected the page using the O'Donovan source. You're right, Wikipedia should be accurate but not necesarily specialised. O'Donovan's appendix is incredibly detailed, but it's impossible to include everything!
- On another note, could you recommend any sources on the O'Donnell rulers of Tyrconnell? My goal at the moment is to complete this page (List of rulers of Tyrconnell), but I am having a hard time finding sources beyond the Annals of the Four Masters and other lengthy translations of primary sources. O'Donovan's appendix looks helpful but it is fairly overwhelming! I'd also like to get my hands on Francis Martin O'Donnell's The O'Donnells of Tyrconnell: A Hidden Legacy but I am having a hard time finding it. SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 13:57, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
- I'll keep thinking. I took a very idiosyncratic route to get this far. But off the top of my head, as loathe as I am to say this, maybe O'Hart might be useful as an introduction. O'Hart has a reputation for promoting far-fetched etymologies and being too eager to accept unfounded folk lore, but he does at least provide a legible introductory outline. Starting at page 643.
- Francis Martin O'Donnell has a website with one page devoted to charts graphically summarizing his research, which really is comprehensive. Caveat, though: It may be a little "too comprehensive", for certain purposes. He's a great promoter of the communal aspect of the clan identity, and so has included some claimed lines of descent down to the current era which might not have the sort of supporting documentation that standard reference works would normally insist on. His pre-Plantation data is excellent, maybe the best. But the scope of his work extends beyond that.
- Sorry to be so verbose and repetitive, but for the sake of emphasis: It's really only the Austrian and Spanish O'Donnells that have the type of impeccable documentation that can support a reliable claim to descent from the dynastic O'Donnells.
- Good luck! JackMason1 (talk) 15:41, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
Ramelton O'Donnells
- Sorry. Just noticed that Hugh Boy of Ramelton is still listed as Niall Garve's brother. He was not. He was not even a contemporary--he was a generation or so younger, belonging to a far removed branch. The so-called "Ramelton" O'Donnells diverged after Hugh Dubh, Sr. d. 1537. The Rameltons descended from HD's son, Hugh Dubh, Jr., whereas both Niall Garve and Hugh Roe descended from Manus d. 1564.
- As per O'Donovan et al., Niall Garve was the eldest surviving son of Conn mac Calvagh d. 1583. His brother, Hugh Boy, was not of the Ramelton branch, and was younger than Niall Garve.
- For ease of reference, these major branches of the O'Donnell clan are conventionally named for the caput of their respective estates. Hugh Dubh, Jr. was centered at Ramelton, which formed the oldest part of the O'Donnell patrimony. Hugh Roe's family are referred to as the "Donegal Castle" O'Donnells. Donegal Castle was considered as pertaining to the office of King of Tyrconnell rather than the O'Donnell clan per se, although since the time of Donnell Oge d. 1281, the Kings of Tyrconnell were drawn exclusively from the O'Donnell clan. Niall Garve's family were referred to as the "Lifford" O'Donnells from their estate located there. It was a relatively late addition to the kingdom of Tyrconnell, being acquired by conquest in the 13th century, but also being agriculturally the most valuable.
- Francis Martin O'Donnell has a separate chart on the 'lineages' page of his website accurately detailing the descent of the "Ramelton" O'Donnells. I can't recall his precise lineage off the top of my head, but I believe that the Hugh Boy of Ramelton that the Encyclopedia is confused about was actually a much younger man, active during the 1640s. JackMason1 (talk) 16:08, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, I've updated the page removing Hugh of Ramelton SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 01:34, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
O'Donnell Genealogies by Fr. Paul Walsh (1938)
Don't know how I forgot this. It's a very well researched annotated discussion of the O'Clery pedigrees. The Ramelton (aka "Rathmelton") branch is analyzed beginning on page 391, under the heading of 'Aodh son of Aodh Dubh', indexed as # 177.
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"Unrecognised King of Tyrconnell" / "Pretender to the Lordship of Tyrconnell"
Is it fair to use this description for Niall Garve? He organised his own inauguration at Kilmacrenan but his claim was never recognised at the time (nor nowadays). That being said, once Rory O'Donnell left Ireland, Niall Garve had a pretty reasonable claim for a few years until his arrest. Interestingly, Eunan O'Donnell calls Niall Garve the "last of the O’Donnells" (page 31). SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 06:34, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
- Well, Inion Dubh organized Hugh Roe's inauguration after she defeated his older half brother Donnell oge mac Hugh mac Manus. All of these inaugurations were opposed by powerful factions, and decided by somewhat irregular methods. And it has to be said that Niall Garbh retained so much support in Tyrconnell, even after the defeat of O'Doherty's Rebellion, and all the evidence of his complicity in O'Doherty's downfall, that the Crown didn't even bother to formally try him--they knew they couldn't get a conviction. I'm not sure Niall Garbh was obviously any less legitimate than Hugh Roe or Rory. JackMason1 (talk) 09:49, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
Requested move 27 September 2025
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Niall Garve O'Donnell → Niall Garbh O'Donnell – More common spelling of name SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 05:34, 24 September 2025 (UTC) This is a contested technical request (permalink). SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 12:16, 27 September 2025 (UTC) — Relisting. Jeffrey34555 (talk) 07:02, 4 October 2025 (UTC) — Relisting. Ophyrius (he/him
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GA review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Niall Garbh O'Donnell/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: SkywalkerEccleston (talk · contribs) 11:48, 26 September 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Jon698 (talk · contribs) 02:16, 8 June 2026 (UTC)
This article has been awaiting a GA review for almost a year and is currently the oldest Royalty, nobility and heraldry nomination despite how well done it looks. I will be reviewing it in due time. Jon698 (talk) 02:16, 8 June 2026 (UTC)
- Thanks. SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 02:41, 8 June 2026 (UTC)
- @SkywalkerEccleston: All of my prose comments have been answered. I did an edit to fix the midsummer eve date. I just need to review 11 more sources and then I will be able to pass the article. Jon698 (talk) 09:24, 10 June 2026 (UTC)
Prose
- 1. Could "He was inaugurated as the O'Donnell clan chief in April 1603. He turned against the Crown in 1608, following years of land rights disputes." be moved to the start of paragraph four in the lede? It feels more fitting there.
- Updated - let me know what you think
- 2. "Three of Niall's brothers died during the conflict:[7] Calvagh Oge in 1588,[25] and Manus in 1589.[9]" -> Is anything known about the third brother?
- I have added info about the third brother, Naghtan
- 3. "Despite the continual presence of freebooting government troops" -> In this context does "freebooting" mean "plundering" or "looting"? If so, could it be changed to that for the sake of the readers?
- Changed to "Despite the continued looting by government troops"
- 4. "her daughter (his first cousin once-removed) Nuala" -> Could the text in the parenthesis be moved to after Nuala
- Done
- 5. "Hugh Roe eventually escaped prison" -> Remove "eventually" as it is unnecessary
- Done
- 6. "Tyrone had bribed officials" -> Remove "had" as it is unnecessary
- Done
- 7. "He was only released when Hugh Roe received one of Niall's brothers as a pledge of good behaviour" -> Could this be expanded to explain what "received one of Niall's brothers" means for those who don't know?
- Changed to: "He was only released when he gave one of his brothers to Hugh Roe as a pledge of good behaviour."
- 8. "Rory and Niall subsequently engaged in single combat, though both men were lucky to leave the battle alive" -> This seems a bit too flowery. Could it be changed to something like "Rory and Niall subsequently engaged in single combat, though both men survived the battle." Also when it says "single combat" is it against each other? If so, then add "each other" after engaged to make it clearer to the reader.
- Done
- 9. "Hugh Roe died in Simancas of a sudden illness in August 1602" -> "Hugh Roe died of a sudden illness in Simancas in August 1602"
- Done
- 10. "known as the Four Masters who supported" -> I feel like there should be a comma between Masters and who
- Done
- 11. "He was arrested, on Mountjoy's orders" -> Change He to Niall
- Done
- 12. "He smugly refused to register his land grant" -> Remove smugly
- Done
- 13. "the extent that Rory was forced to flee to the Pale." -> Wikilink to The Pale (Ireland)
- Done
- 14. "43 quarters of land (in Glenfin and Moentacht)" -> Remove () since the text works as part of the sentence
- Done
- 15. "Niall deposed that Rory and Cuconnacht Maguire planned to seize royal garrisons" -> Is "deposed" meant to be "exposed"
- This is the phrasing of the original source: "Niall continued in dispute with Tyrconnell and in August 1606 deposed that the earl and Cuconnacht Maguire were planning to seize the northern garrisons." Let me know how you think this should be resolved.
- 16. "He clearly hoped to be awarded Inishowen in the event of a failed rebellion" -> Remove clearly
- Done
- 17. "It appears however that he maintained correspondence with O'Doherty" -> Change the start to be "However, it appears that"
- Done
- 18. "The government quickly grew suspicious." -> Suspicious of who? Add "of (insert name)" at the end
- Done
- 19. "The Attorney-General for Ireland, John Davies," -> Change to "Attorney-General for Ireland John Davies" since it is an office held by one person
- Done
- 20. "He was not brought to trial until almost a year later" -> Change He to Niall since this is the start of a new paragraph
- Done
- 21. "On Friday, midsummer-eve, Niall was put on his trial in the king's bench." -> Is there a specific date for when he was put on trial?
- I will have to do further research to find this.
- I think that it was 26 June 1609, per a reference in the State Papers, however I worry that this is original research so I have reworded this section in the article. SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 09:25, 10 June 2026 (UTC)
- 22. "had met two or three nights prior to the burning of Derry" -> Remove had
- Done
- 23. "However they feared retribution" -> Put a comma after However
- Done
- 24. "Sometime before his submission" -> Change his to Niall since this is the start of a new paragraph
- Done
- 25. "She took part in the Flight of the Earls" -> Remove wikilink to Flight of the Earls since it was already linked to above
- Done
- 26. "Due to his betrayal of both Gaelic Ireland and the Crown" -> Change his to Niall since this is the start of a new paragraph
- Done
- 27. "However he adds that Niall "was a hero in valour, and brave"." -> Add a comma after However
- Done
- 28. "Irish nationalist historians represent Niall as having betrayed Gaelic Ireland" -> Remove wikilink to Gaelic Ireland since it was already linked to above
- Done
- I have no more comments regarding the prose
Images
- There are eight images in the article and I added alts to them
- Niall Garbh O'Donnell 1601 signature clean.png is the signature for Niall. All non-Japanese signatures are already public domain and this was created well before copyright is eligible. This is used in the infobox as there are no images of Niall himself. Using the signature as the infobox portrait is common in these kind of articles.
- Hugh Roe O'Donnell, depiction in stained-glass window by Richard King (cropped).png is a depiction of Niall's main rival Hugh Roe. This image was properly uploaded to Commons under freedom of panorama allowed under Irish law.
- Derry Guildhall Tercentenary Window of The Honourable The Irish Society Detail Sir Henry Docwra landed at Culmore 16th April 1600 A.D. 2019 08 29.jpg is a depiction of Henry Docwra, another major person in Niall's life. This image was properly uploaded to Commons under freedom of panorama allowed under British law.
- Charles-Blount.jpg is a depiction of Charles Blount, who plays an important role with Niall's land titles. I don't like the source that is provided on the Commons page and I can't easily find a good one for it. I decided to just upload a new semi-contemporary portrait of him Charles Brooke Blount, 1st Earl of Devonshire.png
- Donegal Friary Cloister East Range 2009 09 23.jpg is a depiction of Donegal Abbey, a place that Niall captured. It was uploaded by a user in 2009, and I added the FOP Ireland tag.
- Rory O'Donnell, Earl of Tyrconnell.png is a depiction of Niall's cousin Rory O'Donnell, 1st Earl of Tyrconnell, who plays an important role in the post-war part of Niall's life. However, the image has no source on Commons. You will need to find one. (Edit: I have found a source authored by Francis Martin O'Donnell which supports the claim here
- Dublin Gate 1608 displaying the heads of Irish rebels Cahir O'Doherty and Felim Riabhach McDavitt.jpg depicts the aftermath of the failure of O'Doherty's rebellion. The image is improperly source as "own work". A direct source should be found. (Edit: I have fixed this issue)
- Tower of London viewed from the River Thames.jpg depicts the Tower of London, where Niall was imprisoned and died. This is a featured picture that was properly uploaded to Commons.
Sources
- The following sources are not used in the article: Annals of the Four Masters and The Flight of the Earls by John McCavitt. You should add lines 2 and 3 from User:Jon698/common.js to User:SkywalkerEccleston/common.js to help identify issues like that in the future.
- Moved to "Further reading"
- There are 153 citations. I will be doing a review of 16 of these, which accounts for slightly over 10% of the total.
- 1. Facsimiles of the Signatures of Some Irish Chieftains, and English Commanders in Ulster, Temp. Elizabeth by Herbert F. Hore [Reference 1] is used to source Niall's signature. This signature is listed among others between pages 6 and 7. Page 7 lists it as belonging to Niall Garbh O'Donnell.
- 2. The Pope's new invention': the introduction of the Gregorian calendar in Ireland, 1583-1782 by Hiram Morgan [Reference 3] is used to source the note for stating that all dates before 1752 use the Julian calendar. This is sourced by page 9.
- 3. Page 2,385 of Annals of the Kingdom of Ireland by the Four Masters from the Earliest Period to the Year 1616 by John O'Donovan [Reference 6] is used for Niall's name being Anglicized as Garv, being won over by Docwra, a quote by John O'Donovan, and O'Donovan's claim that Niall was Conn's fourth son. All of this is sourced by the third paragraph on that page.
- 4. Page 2,384 of Annals of the Kingdom of Ireland by the Four Masters from the Earliest Period to the Year 1616 by John O'Donovan [Reference 9] is used for Naghtan being Niall's brother and Naghtan's death in 1582. The last two sentences on the page list Naghtan as a son of Con O'Donnell (Niall's father) and dying a violet death in 1582.
- 5. Pages 443-444 of Dictionary of National Biography, 1885-1900 by Robert Dunlop [Reference 126] is used to source the examination and commitment of Niall and then being placed on trial. This information is indeed in the source. "On 1 July he was examined before the council and committed to the castle." and "On Friday, midsummer-eve, he was put on his trial in the king's bench;"
- 6. Page 444 of Dictionary of National Biography, 1885-1900 by Robert Dunlop [Reference 128] is used to source a quote, the activities of his son Naghtan, and the activates of Nuala and Grania. All of these figures and the quote are indeed in the source.
- 7. Pages 33 to 34 of The Nine Years War, 1593-1603: O'Neill, Mountjoy and the Military Revolution by James O'Neill [Reference 49] is used to source the Battle of Belleek and Niall's detainment. These details about the battle and Niall's detainment are all present in the source.
- 8. Page 152 of The Nine Years War, 1593-1603: O'Neill, Mountjoy and the Military Revolution by James O'Neill [Reference 69] is used to source the killings and capture of cattle done after the Newtown. All of this information is found in the first paragraph on that page.
- 9. Page 131 of The Nine Years War, 1593-1603: O'Neill, Mountjoy and the Military Revolution by James O'Neill [Reference 72] is used to source Docwra's comments on Niall's service during the war. This information is found in paragraph three on that page.
- 10. Page 186 of The Nine Years War, 1593-1603: O'Neill, Mountjoy and the Military Revolution by James O'Neill [Reference 146] is used to source Niall being the most zealous and aggressive attacker of Irish civilians. This information is found in paragraph two on that page.
- 11+12. Page 271 of Contested Island: Ireland, 1460-1630 by Sean Connolly [Reference 101] is used to source Niall's assumption that Rory would be his opponent in a power struggle, his seizure of Rory's cattle, and a possible attempt to murder Rory. The attempted murdered is source in paragraph three of that page. The remaining information is sourced by Reference 97 Terry Calvin's article on O'Donnell, Sir Niall Garvach
- 13+14. Page 298 of Contested Island: Ireland, 1460-1630 by Sean Connolly [Reference 124] is used to source the treason charges against Niall, Niall's imprisonment, and the accusations against Niall by O'Doherty's supporters. This does source the claim that O'Doherty's wife was among his accusers. The rest of the information is sourced by Reference 122 Terry Calvin's article on O'Donnell, Sir Niall Garvach
- 15. The 7th paragraph of Terry Calvin's article on O'Donnell, Sir Niall Garvach [Reference 92] is used to source Niall being knighted by Mountjoy and the discord between Niall and Docwra. All of this information is indeed sourced by paragraph seven.
- 16. The 9-10th paragraphs of Terry Calvin's article on O'Donnell, Sir Niall Garvach [Reference 148] is used to source Niall's poor ability to deal with the government and how he was a better warrior than landlord. This information, along with the quote "first and foremost a warrior", are indeed in those paragraphs.
Review
- GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, grammar, and understandability):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- All of my comments regarding the prose were answered above.
- a (prose, spelling, grammar, and understandability):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
- a (reference section):
b (inline citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- No errors detected during a search of over 10% of the references in the article.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- This article covers the early life, career, military ventures, downfall, and legacy of Niall. A section detailing his immediate family and children is also included.
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- No neutrality issues present.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- There are no edit wars and only a few edits from other users in the past few months.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- A review of the images shows that all of the images currently in the article were properly uploaded to Wikipedia. Any images with issues that could not be fixed were removed and replaced.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- I can see nothing preventing this from becoming a GA status article.
- Pass/Fail:
Did you know nomination
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. Track your hook after promotion. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Beta Beta Beta (talk) 10:40, 2 August 2026 (UTC)
- ... that Lord of Tyrconnell Niall Garbh O'Donnell stole his cousin's cattle?
- Source: Paragraph 8 of Clavin, Terry (October 2009). "O'Donnell, Sir Niall Garvach". Dictionary of Irish Biography. doi:10.3318/dib.006345.v1. Archived from the original on 3 January 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/LGBTQ history in Iceland + Template:Did you know nominations/Reine Audu
- Comment: Nominating on behalf of User:SkywalkerEccleston
Jon698 (talk) 01:25, 15 June 2026 (UTC).
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| Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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@Jon698 and SkywalkerEccleston: All looks good. Turned to GA on 10 June, submitted to DYK on 15 June. Long enough. No copyright issues (Earwig's Copyvio Detector gives 31% flagging a quote). Hook is mentioned in the main body and it is cited. Unfortunately I do not find it interesting enough. A lord steals a cattle, typical, no? May I recommend some alternatives (feel free to modify)?
- ALT1a: ... that Lord of Tyrconnell Niall Garbh O'Donnell stole his cousin's cattle and even attempted to murder him in response to his surrender to the Crown?
- ALT1b: ... that Lord of Tyrconnell Niall Garbh O'Donnell stole his cousin's cattle for surrendering to the Crown? A.Cython(talk) 04:01, 15 June 2026 (UTC)
- @A.Cython: Both of those are good hooks and I accept them. However, due to rather annoying DYK rules you can no longer be the reviewer due to your hook proposals. Jon698 (talk) 05:27, 15 June 2026 (UTC)
- @Jon698: Well I was not aware of this as from my experience DYK reviewers regularly propose alterations to the hooks.
DYK states: If you only make minor adjustments to another editor's proposed hook (no new facts requiring verification are introduced), you can still approve it. I did not proposed a new hook, but an alteration of the original to make a bit more interesting. I guess the new information is a new fact. Anyhow, from my part this is good to go. Let's wait for another one reviewer to close this. A.Cython(talk) 21:39, 15 June 2026 (UTC)
- Ref 97 ("In January 1603 O'Donnell's brother Ruaidhrí submitted to the English. Niall reacted with alarm to this development, correctly suspecting that the English would play Ruaidhrí against him in Tyrconnell. He responded by seizing Ruaidhrí's cattle and may even have tried to murder him.") confirms A1b.
Not approving ALT1a at the time since the article says the attempted murder is speculation rather than fact. @Jon698: I'm pretty sure per WP:DYKRR you can still review the hooks on your own nom since you didn't propose them and the nom article was already approved. ミラP@Miraclepine 12:49, 22 June 2026 (UTC)
- Ref 97 ("In January 1603 O'Donnell's brother Ruaidhrí submitted to the English. Niall reacted with alarm to this development, correctly suspecting that the English would play Ruaidhrí against him in Tyrconnell. He responded by seizing Ruaidhrí's cattle and may even have tried to murder him.") confirms A1b.





