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Rembrandt engravings
Watchers of this article may want to have a look at Rembrandt engravings, which just came through AfC as a translation from fr-wiki. -- asilvering (talk) 07:38, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the tip. Of course it is a poor OKA translation of a fairly poor French wp article, but there is a gap here. So far I've renamed & rewritten the lead, but more is needed. In particular the translator (if not a AI thing) was evidently blissfully ignorant of the complicated ways that printmaking terminology doesn't map easily between French & English. Johnbod (talk) 17:07, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
- I agree that the article can use some work (what article doesn't?), not least because of some major style differences between what fr-wiki accepts as a GA/FA and en-wiki's norms. But I don't think it's particularly fair to call it a poor article, or the translator ignorant (even blissfully). This was promoted to FA on fr-wiki last year, and this particular OKA translator has been quite receptive to feedback. -- asilvering (talk) 18:43, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
- The tip of the iceberg on terminology issues is that "Rembrandt engravings" are not engravings but etchings (as the new lead says). The use of the equivalents to "engravings" as a catch-all term for prints is still ok in French, & I think German and Italian, but it stopped being so in English nearly a century ago. The bottom half of the article goes into ridiculous dissertation-style detail on varnish recipes and so on, but if there is a statement in the article of the total number of prints attributed to Rembrandt, I couldn't find it. I'll have to dig that up & add it.Johnbod (talk) 03:06, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- I agree that the article can use some work (what article doesn't?), not least because of some major style differences between what fr-wiki accepts as a GA/FA and en-wiki's norms. But I don't think it's particularly fair to call it a poor article, or the translator ignorant (even blissfully). This was promoted to FA on fr-wiki last year, and this particular OKA translator has been quite receptive to feedback. -- asilvering (talk) 18:43, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
Is Rembrandt just a Christian painter?
It's written Rembrandt's paintings is about a variety of subjects. But i think a lot of his paintings is religious. Portraits aren't applied to this. Portraits are basically photos. Most Rembrandt's paintings of creative thinking appear religious. Rembrandt didn't go to church frequently but maybe did other Christian practices. How much of Rembrandt's genre paintings is religious? Is a signifiant amount about other subjects? Rebourne Ohcs (talk) 22:16, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, R did very few if any genre paintings, though his prints include some "genre" subjects of beggars etc. Johnbod (talk) 16:20, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
GA concerns
I am concerned that this article no longer meets the good article criteria. There is uncited prose in the article, including entire paragraphs and an orange "more citations needed" orange banner at the top of "The Night Watch" section. There are also some unreliable sources used in the article, like "www.rembrandt-signature-file.com" and IMDB; with the extensive amount of literature written about him, I think it would be a good idea to replace some of these website sources with higher-quality publications, but at least remove the unreliable ones. Z1720 (talk) 00:44, 5 January 2025 (UTC)
- As one of the two main authors at the time, we both opposed the drive-by GA nom and pass back in 2007, thinking it wasn't ready. Though I did then work on GA review points. The article is certainly much better now than then. There are so many other articles on R that adding the refs they have here mostly requires little specialist knowledge. Perhaps you could assuage your concerns by doing it, User:Z1720? Pop culture elements won't be covered in most scholarly sources. Johnbod (talk) 16:15, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
- I do not have the expertise to complete this task quickly, nor do I have the time or the will. Hopefully, someone will indicate below that they want to conduct this work. If not, perhaps a GAR will find someone. Z1720 (talk) 22:01, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
- As I said, expertise is not necessary. You seem to have the "time and the will" to set up vast numbers of GARs. It would imo do you good to try fixing some of these issues yourself, rather than continually expecting others to do the work. Johnbod (talk) 01:03, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
- One editor cannot maintain 40,801 articles (the current count of good articles) themselves, nor should they attempt to. If others want these articles to remain good articles, I encourage them to upkeep the articles so that reviews are not necessary. An article does not have to have GA status. Z1720 (talk) 01:13, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
GA Reassessment
Rembrandt
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
- Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch • • GAN review not found
- Result: Kept. Hog Farm Talk 18:18, 28 February 2025 (UTC)
There is uncited prose in the article, including entire paragraphs and an orange "more citations needed" orange banner at the top of "The Night Watch" section. There are also some unreliable sources used in the article like IMDB; with the extensive amount of literature written about him, I think it would be a good idea to replace some of these website sources with higher-quality publications, but at least remove the unreliable ones. Z1720 (talk) 00:23, 22 February 2025 (UTC)
- I'll take a look when I have time, though as I said in the other section (where is that now??), the ARTICLE IS CERTAINLY far BETTER than when it passed GA. Johnbod (talk) 01:07, 22 February 2025 (UTC)
- Johnbod, that's on Talk:Rembrandt.
- Z1720, far be it from me to take over from Johnbod on a history of art topic, but something does need to be said here. The article is indeed of good quality; the letter-of-the-law approach is seen in an instance like this - a really nice article, well-constructed, well-illustrated, well-written, and almost completely cited - to be about to give the wrong answer, viz., a few refs could be added so it's not a GA, bang. That really isn't a particularly forgiving approach, or to put it another way, the (at random?) choice of this article seems especially unfortunate and inappropriate. If this gets towards a timeout, then let me know (either of you) and I'll add the needed refs. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:46, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks! I should get round to it, but by all means add to it, refs especially, if you can. Presumably the The Night Watch article has refs, which I haven't explored yet. I do have books on R though. Johnbod (talk) 11:52, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- Actually I see The Night Watch is oddly thin on the content of the painting itself, which it would be good to expand on. Johnbod (talk) 11:55, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- @Chiswick Chap and Johnbod: When reviewing articles for GA status, the article is reviewed based on its current version, not how much it has improved from before. It is also reviewed based on what the GA criteria are today. If there are concerns about how I review articles, editors can post them on the GA talk page. Z1720 (talk) 13:09, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- Yes, we may need to do that, again. The point is not what the letter of the criteria say, we can read, but what the proper interpretation should be on the balance of all the facts in a situation, which are not limited to CN tags, nor should those be considered specially important. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:12, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- @Chiswick Chap and Johnbod: When reviewing articles for GA status, the article is reviewed based on its current version, not how much it has improved from before. It is also reviewed based on what the GA criteria are today. If there are concerns about how I review articles, editors can post them on the GA talk page. Z1720 (talk) 13:09, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- Actually I see The Night Watch is oddly thin on the content of the painting itself, which it would be good to expand on. Johnbod (talk) 11:55, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks! I should get round to it, but by all means add to it, refs especially, if you can. Presumably the The Night Watch article has refs, which I haven't explored yet. I do have books on R though. Johnbod (talk) 11:52, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- By the way, Keep, for the reasons stated. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:54, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- I have added citation needed tags, and the orange banner on top of the "The Night Watch" section still needs to be resolved. Z1720 (talk) 13:09, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- That's frankly a misunderstanding: not helpful and not necessary, I can see the gaps for myself and so can Johnbod, and that section is the one place where we all agree things should be improved. What we don't agree is that such a thing demands a GAR: on that we differ fundamentally, and splashing CN tags about won't help resolve that. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:12, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- Right, I've done a little tidying, reffed all the obvious places, and a basic rewrite of The Night Watch. There was only one passing mention of IMDB (on the back of another ref, about publicity for an exhibition): I've removed it - really not worth flagging up. Johnbod can certainly do better but for the immediate purpose here that should be enough. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:49, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- That's frankly a misunderstanding: not helpful and not necessary, I can see the gaps for myself and so can Johnbod, and that section is the one place where we all agree things should be improved. What we don't agree is that such a thing demands a GAR: on that we differ fundamentally, and splashing CN tags about won't help resolve that. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:12, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
- Z1720 done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:50, 27 February 2025 (UTC)
- Keep; I removed the one unreliable source I saw since it already had another cite. charlotte 👸♥ 00:35, 28 February 2025 (UTC)
- Seems good now - but really we ought to find material for a 4th para to the lead. Probably on his style. Johnbod (talk) 01:56, 28 February 2025 (UTC)
- Keep. Concerns have been resolved. Z1720 (talk) 14:04, 28 February 2025 (UTC)
Books by Seymour Silve
There appear to be three different books by Seymour Silve that are used as references:
- Slive, Seymour: The Drawings of Rembrandt: A New Study. (London: Thames & Hudson, 2009) - Ref 110
- Silve, Seymour: The Drawings of Rembrandt. (London: Thames & Hudson, 2019) - Ref 111
- Slive, Seymour, Dutch Painting, 1600–1800, Yale UP, 1995, ISBN 0-300-07451-4 - In the 'Works cited' section
Unfortunately, when the short citation is used (e.g. Ref 14: Slive, pp. 60, 65) the year is not mentioned and so it is impossible to know which book of the three is being used. Could an editor with knowledge of the sources add the year of publication to the short citations please? Thanks 2A00:23C4:AC9B:9C01:F088:FCD7:AA8F:1722 (talk) 07:23, 5 March 2025 (UTC)
- They are all Slive (1995), now added. The drawings one are only used once (back to back); these were added later. Johnbod (talk) 14:32, 5 March 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks very much Johnbod! 2A00:23C4:AC9B:9C01:DFE:1D4C:1FFA:6733 (talk) 20:07, 5 March 2025 (UTC)
Name of Kenneth Clark book is needed
Footnotes 51, 53, and 141 cited Clark 1974, but neither "Works cited" nor "Further reading" lists a book by Clark from that year. Therefore, we don't even know whether the footnotes refer to Kenneth Clark, Maurice Magnus (talk) 14:29, 4 January 2026 (UTC)

