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The Voluntaryist
"The Voluntaryist' was apparently a periodical. I am going to put its "Statement of Purpose" in the article. Hogeye 21:32, 10 December 2005 (UTC)
This Could Be Made Into A Great Article, But Currently Needs Some Work
If I find the time, I'll try to remember to improve this article. Voluntaryism is discussed some in Radicals for Capitalism: A Freewheeling History of the Modern American Libertarian Movement. It could be a useful source. Allixpeeke (talk) 22:45, 6 December 2007 (UTC)
- This article could truly need some work. Maybe I'll get the time to do it but don't count on it.Lord Metroid (talk) 17:36, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
- Cleanup done, expansion still needed. Lord Metroid (talk) 13:23, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
- Expansion done, although now a little clean-up may again be in order. Allixpeeke (talk) 22:05, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
- Cleanup done, expansion still needed. Lord Metroid (talk) 13:23, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
Deleting Voluntarism (Politics) Page and Redirecting to Voluntaryism BIG POV Problem
- LATER NOTE, originally repeated below, to clarify for future readers: My Apologies for Confusion!! First, because of recent changes on the disambiguation page, I got confused and thought that this WAS the original voluntarism article until was RE-named voluntaryism just a couple weeks ago.
- Carol Moore 03:43, 22 December 2007 (UTC)User:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc
I'm a libertarian which makes it particularly annoying to see people who may be some sort of libertarians obviously destroy an existing article formerly called Voluntarism (politics) which doubtless mentioned several of the broader political uses of the word "voluntarism" (use search engine for some examples):
Voluntarism disambiguation page shows relevant changes on these dates by these individuals:
- 09:08, December 14, 2007 Lordmetroid (Talk | contribs) (425 bytes) (undo)
- (cur) (last) 15:06, December 8, 2007 Allixpeeke (Talk | contribs) (430 bytes) (undo)
This NOW forwards the disambiguation ONLY to this sectarian view called "VOLUNTARYISM" as if that is the only way the word voluntarism is used in politics, which is false and misleading. I can't even find the old article and will ask for editorial assistance since don't have a lot of time to figure it out again.
If you know where the article is, please bring it back and make the Voluntarism page link to ALL THREE pages. Thanks! Carol Moore 00:59, 15 December 2007 (UTC)User:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc
- The Voluntaryism (politics) did not cover anything of substance that the older Voluntaryism article didn't already cover. Because of the great number of tags and notices and no one had taken upon himself to correct all these issues I boldy went ahead and merged the two articles which was got their material from the same source. I deemed the example section to be inappropriately essay-like and read-like advertisement which is according to wikipedia policy is not to be used so I refrained from such implementation in the merger. But there is no POV issue as far as I percieve it, could you further explain what you find inappropriate? Lord Metroid (talk) 01:49, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
- First, do you know how I can find the text of the original VOLUNTARISM (POLITICS) article? This article I can see always was called voluntaryism.
- Second, it may have been a poorly written article, but it probably reflected the fact that voluntarism is used in a number of ways that are NOT voluntaryism, and therefore should not have been merged or redirected here. Obviously having the exact original text would be helpful.
- IF such text cannot be found, I guess I can VOLUNTEER (har har) to rewrite an article so that the disambiguation will go to all three defintions.
- Carol Moore 04:18, 15 December 2007 (UTC)User:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc
- I linked all older article versions in my previous reply. What do you find is POVed? Lord Metroid (talk) 03:09, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
Sorry, didn't recognize it as link to old article since looked like a link to current article til now looked at html. Will study and comment. Carol Moore 04:18, 15 December 2007 (UTC)User:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc
- If you are a Libertarian (or "libertarian"), then you should object to libertarians being mentioned on this page AT ALL. "Voluntaryism" is NOT libertarianism. As the page itself says, voluntaryism is closely related to anarchism. However, libertarianism is NOT anarchism. They are completely different philosophies. Those two statements at the beginning of this article are directly contradictory, and "libertarian" should be removed completely. -- Jane Q. Public (talk) 18:58, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Kind of Info that belongs in separate "voluntarism" article
First this article on "voluntaryism" is describing a specific philosophy, i.e.: Voluntaryism is the philosophical belief that the only legitimate interactions in between and among people is done on a freely chosen basis through voluntary association and agreements. I have no problem with this philosophy having it's own article, just that it should NOT have replaced the "voluntarism" article which clearly did NOT reflect the various ways it is used below. Just the first page of a google search showed these different definitions and further searches probably would reveal more definitive sources.
http://www.bartleby.com/61/44/V0144400.html voluntarism: The use of or reliance on voluntary action to maintain an institution, carry out a policy, or achieve an end. 2.
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/voluntaristic vol·un·ta·rism: The use of or reliance on voluntary action to maintain an institution, carry out a policy, or achieve an end.
Volunt/ar/eer/ism: What's the Difference? By Susan J. Ellis So many people ask me whether there is a distinction between "volunteerism" and "voluntarism" that I have written up my answer. Here it is: "Voluntarism" (the older term) refers to everything voluntary. In the United States this includes, for example, religion. It certainly encompasses the entire "voluntary sector," but "voluntary" in the "voluntarism" context means not mandated by law (as government is). Many voluntary sector (nonprofit) agencies have a volunteer board because that is a legal requirement, but may not utilize volunteers in direct service in any way. There are subjects within "voluntarism" that have nothing to do with volunteers: things like UBIT legislation; proposal writing; compensation law.
Voluntarism By Susan Perkins, Graduate Student, Center on Philanthropy at Indiana University. Definition "Voluntarism is the voluntary (acting of one's own accord) participation in a certain action, or a system based on this." Webster's Dictionary. NOTE: This is a long article with lots of examples that could form a good basis for wiki article
Center for Study of Philanthropy and Voluntarism
UNITED KINGDOM:VOLUNTARISM The British system of industrial relations has frequently been described as voluntarist, by which is usually meant the abstention of the state from direct intervention in the handling of industrial relations. ETC...
TWO BOOKS: 1) Landscapes of voluntarism, New spaces of health, welfare and governance, Edited by Christine Milligan and David Conradson
2) Liberalism: Voluntarism and Individuality in Political Theory, by Richard E. Flathman - 1992 - Philosophy - 232 pages
Carol MooreUser:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc —Preceding comment was added at 17:54, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
Which Should Be New Article?
So my question is which is to be done:
- a) copy current version of voluntaryism into a NEW voluntaryism article and revert this one back to original voluntarism, which then would be changed to add this info and of course link to voluntaryism article?
- b) leave this voluntaryism as is and just start whole new voluntarism article.
I'll do the work and put a basic article together and do the disambiguation. Just need opinion on which article should be the brand new one. Thanks. Carol Moore 18:43, 15 December 2007 (UTC)User:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc
I see... There is an additional concept called voluntarism. What I think, would be best is to move this article to voluntaryism (politics) and create a voluntarism (concept) article for what you describe, reassign all inter-wiki links appropiatley and let this article redirect to voluntarism from which readers can find any kind of voluntar- article. This way the readers can easier find the particular topic they are searching for through the hub Voluntarism. Achieving a structured and easily navigated set of very similiar named articles. What do you think? Lord Metroid (talk) 03:55, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
If you look at the dictionary meanings of "voluntarism" there are two, one being any kind of voluntary action the other being the philosophical concept. I only included the political meanings above.
That fact was originally reflected correctly at the voluntarism disambiguation page below, which I think should be re-instated.
http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Voluntarism&oldid=133102390
* Voluntarism (philosophy), a term coined for various philsophical positions by different philosophers, including Duns Scotus, Schopenhauer, Tönnies and Dingler.
* Voluntarism (politics), a term used in politics and economics which emphasises voluntary cooperation and natural law.
Voluntaryism is a spin off of voluntarism which says that ONLY voluntary political/economic action of any kind is legitimate. It's fine to have it's own page and all these changes made in last couple days debated there on their own merits.
But I correct myself and it should NOT be disambiguated off of voluntarism since it is not yet a dictionary recognized spin off of voluntarism so it easily could be considered WP:Original Research. However, the fact that voluntaryism is a spin off SHOULD be reflect in the voluntarism article.
And also thinking about it, the NEW article should be voluntaryism and this should revert back to the original one and I'll immediately revise it to broader meeting reflected in articles above - and we can tweak them once there are two articles. Carol Moore 20:37, 16 December 2007 (UTC)User:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc
I do not really understand what you have in mind. You first say that Voluntaryism should have it's own article called Voluntaryism which is exactly the present case. Then you say you want this article to be reverted back, to what I do not know. I find reverting this article to be innapropiate because Voluntaryism in the political sense as shown by the referencing on this article has a relative long history. I think we can remake Voluntarism to an article about the concept voluntarism. And add a {{for}} tags at the top for both articles to redirect accidental lost readers. Lord Metroid (talk) 23:26, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
What is currently written on the voluntaryism page is correct for the specific political ideology known as voluntaryism and finding its roots in the anarchistic writings of Auberon Herbert. Ms. Moore, if you wish to write an article on the general ideal of voluntarism (concept), this is fine—I doubt anyone would object. If you want to make reference, in that article, to both voluntarism (philosophy) and to voluntaryism (politics), that is also definitely find—and again, I doubt anyone would have any objection. Finally, if you wish for all three of these to appear on the voluntarism (disambiguation) page, all the more power to you. In fact, I would say that your doing so would be a win-win for all of us. :)
Allixpeeke (talk) 23:57, 17 December 2007 (UTC)
Actually, I just went ahead and updated the disambiguation page in a manner I expect will be to everyone's liking. :) Allixpeeke (talk) 00:20, 18 December 2007 (UTC) P.S. I also added the libertarian and anarchism templates to this page for what I suspect are obvious reasons. :)
- The reasons are not obvious. Anarchism and libertarianism are not the same things. They have been inappropriately compared (or conflated) on this page. -- Jane Q. Public (talk) 19:03, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
The problem is that voluntarism is not just a concept but a form of action or practice. Defined above as: The use of or reliance on voluntary action to maintain an institution, carry out a policy, or achieve an end. It's sort of a less ideological version of voluntaryism, which is really more an ideology than politics. It's sort of like panarchy and panarchism, where the first was a word defined differently by several people and the second was a specific philosophy based on one definition.
If you look at Voluntarism By Susan Perkins, she talks about very specific historical actors: Squanto, William Penn, Cotton Mather, Benjamin Franklin, Alexis de Tocqueville, Underground Railroad, Civil War volunatarism, Dorthea Dix, Clara Barton, Jane Addams, Peace Corps, and existing networks.
I'll go ahead and write it but properly defined and then someone else, maybe an administrator at some point, can fix the appropriate page names/disambiguation. Carol Moore 01:09, 18 December 2007 (UTC)User:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc
I don't want it to seem like I'm making any impositions upon you. Do you think voluntarism (tendency) would be better than voluntarism (concept)? Or perhaps you have something better in mind? I don't believe I've ever seen a category with a parenthetical "tendency" or "practice", but then I don't know, in full, what you are planning for the new entry, so perhaps it will work. The only other concern I would have is: do we need an entry for both a concept (e.g. panarchy) and the ideology that advocates it (e.g. panarchism)? Apparently I'm not the only person who has thought this, as is evidence by the suggestion here that panarchy and panarchism be merged. But I'm flexible, and if there is enough difference between the tendency toward voluntarism and the political philosophy of voluntaryism, then it would surely be a welcome addition. Allixpeeke (talk) 03:33, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
First Wikipedia:Disambiguation is flexible, but I don't think you get the point. DICTIONARY meaning has Voluntarism as a philosophy and a mode of political action. The original disambiguation called it politics. Voluntaryism is an ideological spin off of voluntarism, which should be noted in the article.
Therefore disambiguation page should read
- Voluntarism can refer to:
- Voluntarism (philosophy), a term coined for various philsophical positions by different philosophers, including Duns Scotus, Schopenhauer, Tönnies and Dingler.
- Voluntarism (politics), the use of or reliance on voluntary action to maintain an institution, carry out a policy, or achieve an end.
- See also
- Volunteerism, the willingness of people to work on behalf of others without the expectation of pay or other tangible gain.
- Voluntaryism, a philosophical belief that the only legitimate interactions between and among people are done on a freely chosen basis through voluntary association and agreement. (NOTE: the actual definition on the page. CM)
Carol Moore 15:48, 18 December 2007 (UTC)User:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc
PS on Panarchy/Panarchism: Please read the debate on both TALK pages. I actually just removed the merge suggestion since discussion went dead a couple months ago with more opposition to moving than support. Panarchy is a word that has evolved several somewhat different meanings. The original meaning has developed into separate philosophy of panarchism. The problem with merging them is that people who do NOT like the anarchistic definition will come in and mess with or delete panarchism. See history of fights about it. So best to leave it relatively unmolested in its own article. Carol Moore 16:07, 18 December 2007 (UTC)User:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc
Whereas voluntaryism is a clearly political ideology, voluntarism sounds, honestly, rather non-political. Maintenance of institutions is not inherently political, for example. Neither is the carrying out of a policy or the achieving of an end.
Respectfully,
Alex Peak
Allixpeeke (talk) 22:16, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
- My Apologies for Confusion!! First, because of recent changes on the disambiguation page, I got confused and thought that this WAS the original voluntarism article until was RE-named voluntaryism just a couple weeks ago. (See my message above Deleting Voluntarism (Politics) Page and Redirecting to Voluntaryism BIG POV Problem.) The responders did not understand my confusion. My apologies!!
- Voluntarism broadly defined is political - as is voluntaryism - but I won't debate what to call them right now. Just put something on talk page about the debate and let's see what others who come along in the future have to say!
- User:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc —Preceding comment was added at 02:40, 19 December 2007 (UTC)
Voluntarism article is up
FYI Voluntarism. Probably will do some more work on in a few days; first draft. Carol Moore 22:35, 23 December 2007 (UTC)User:Carolmooredc User talk:Carolmooredc
- Cool, everything worked out all right and the new article looks very promising. Lord Metroid (talk) 23:35, 23 December 2007 (UTC)
Watner's New Article Up
I've placed Voluntaryist Carl Watner's new article on the main page. Minor edits are welcome, particularly the insertion of internal links.Psdillard (talk) 21:07, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
Rewrite tag placed
I stumbled across this article from the Libertarian Party, and was interested in the subject, but the article as it stands is decidedly un-Wikipedian. The rewrite cleanup tag seemed most relevant according to the cleanup rules, although significant reorganization and wikification would be sufficient. Evan Deaubl (talk) 22:21, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
Suggestions?
Evan Deaubl,
The new article is not from the Libertarian Party but by Carl Watner, a notable voluntaryist who opposes the LP and any other political organization.
Please describe what sort of reorganization and "wikification" you think the article needs. I will then direct Mr. Watner to your comments, and we can proceed from there.
Thank you for your feedback.
Psdillard (talk) 00:22, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
- I actually didn't have any suggestions offhand, and I wasn't indicating that the article was related to the LP in any way; that is just how I ended up getting to this page (I just realized my previous statement was unclear; I got here from the Libertarian Party page on Wikipedia, not from an LP site). My understanding is that putting a cleanup tag on a page "puts it on the radar" as a page that people who are interested in cleaning up Wikipedia can (and should) work on. So my main motivation for adding the tag was to get the page noticed in order to hopefully bring some more experienced Wikipedia editors into the mix. I'm nowhere near experienced enough to tackle an article of this size. :-) Evan Deaubl (talk) 02:08, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
Copyright infringement
No copyright infringement
Cambrasa is absolutely wrong on both counts. The text I copied and pasted was not taken without permission from The Voluntaryist website. Rather, it is a new article by Carl Watner that he asked me to post. Cambrasa would know that if he/she had taken the time to read and understand the discussion page.
Nor have I edited disruptively. I proposed replacing the old voluntaryist article with Mr. Watner's new one and allowed plenty of time for comments before I did so. I even e-mailed all of the previous commentators asking for their feedback. When no one objected, I went ahead and posted Watner's new article. A disruptive person subsequently reverted it to the old article, which I reverted back to the new article. When I did so, I made the mistake of first deleting the old article entirely in the hopes that the new article would then come up automatically. I have since learned that one should merge edits into the article to be edited.
I resent your accusations, Cambrasa. I see that you are responsible for restoring the old article. Shame on you for not first bringing your concerns to the discussion page and talking about them before you reverted. I'll be restoring Watner's article. Leave it alone.Psdillard (talk) 16:33, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
- Ok, cool down, it's not that big of a deal. First I saw that you had blanked the page. Then I saw that your text had some neutrality issues, which I will address below. Then I saw that it had been copied and pasted from a website. Then I briefly skimmed over the talk page, where you didn't make it very clear that you had Carl Watner's permission. So I assumed some disruptive editing was going on, which obviously wasn't the case. It's just a misunderstanding, so my apologies. --Cambrasa confab 13:56, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
I accept your apology, Cambrasa. Thank you.
I'm sorry I didn't make it clearer earlier that I had Carl Watner's position to post the article. Below is a statement from Mr. Watner that should clarify the situation.
"To Whom It May Concern:
Peter Spotswood Dillard has posted, at my request, my article on "Voluntaryism" to wikipedia. It was intended to supercede a shorter article by others, which was incomplete and in some respects misleading. He has my full support in maintaining and posting the article I have written. I believe my own article is more encompassing and answers objections which were not addressed in the prior article.
Sincerely,
Carl Watner" —Preceding unsigned comment added by Psdillard (talk • contribs) 15:14, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
New article by Carl Watner: Serious neutrality issues
Peter Dillard has replaced the old article with an essay written by Carl Watner, on his instruction. Carl Watner seems to be a notable proponent of voluntaryism, so that in itself is not a problem.
However, there are several problems with the article as it stands now:
1:A lot of it seems to be original research. Even though Carl Watner is a notable academic, this essay has only been published on his website and not in a peer-reviewed journal, so it is not a reliable source. Also, since this article is now primarily based on Carl Watner's essay, it violates point 7 on Wikipedia's policy for self-published sources. Finally, many parts of this article arrive at conclusions through synthesis rather than stating where the conclusions came from, violanting WP:SYN.
2:The article is written in a horribly biased tone. It reads more like a manifesto than an encyclopedia article. It is full of emotive vocabulary - "X is evil", instructional and presumptious language - "Do the poor have a right to alms?", hyperboles - "Voluntarism represents a means, and end, and an insight", and value judgements - "... whereupon [government] will fall of its own dead weight". All that it's missing is a "long live voluntrayism!" at the end.
The worst thing about this article is that it presents several contentious claims as if they were widely accepted facts, without citing sources - "History and theory demonstrate that a free people produce many more goods and services than their counterparts in a centrally organized economy. Thus, there is more to go around in a free society, and the poor there generally have a higher standard of living than the poor in a collectivist society". Note: This article does not say "According to voluntaryists, history and theory demostrate...". It just says "History and theory demostrate..." even though there are plenty of theorists, economists and historians more notable than Carl Watner who would contest this claim.
3:The article casts voluntaryism and voluntaryists in a very positive light. Since Carl Watner seems to be one of the key proponents of voluntaryism, this raises conflict of interest concerns.
--Cambrasa confab 16:44, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
Discussion
- I think that the article is unacceptable in its current form. Yes, it may be written by an expert, and it may contain more legitimate information than before, but this information is presented in such a biased manner that it is actually worse than the previous article. I suggest reverting it to the old version with immediate effect, and taking the current version to a sandbox, where it should go through a major re-work before being reinserted. --Cambrasa confab 15:51, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
Minor Editing? Maybe. Reverting and/or Major Editing? No.
I strongly disagree with Cambrasa that there are problems with Watner's article which justify "reverting it to the old version with immediate effect." Nor do I think Watner's article should be taken to the sandbox and subjected to a major "rework before being reinserted." The problems Cambrasa raises can be addressed without imposing such drastic measures.
I will address Cambrasa's specific criticisms:
(1) I do not see how Watner's article violates point 7 of Wikipedia's policy for self-published sources. Plenty of reliable, peer-reviewed sources are cited at the end of the article. Nor do I see how the articles arrives at its conclusions through "synthesis." On the contrary, Watner argues for his conclusions from initial premises that he makes explicit. He even addresses possible objections to voluntaryism.
- Exactly. Watner argues for his conclusions. That is the problem. Wikipedia is not a place for arguing. Wikipedia is only a compendium or arguments that have been made in reliable sources. Please read WP:SYN again. --Cambrasa confab 01:13, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
(2) Concerning the charge that the article is written in "a horribly biased tone," to the extent that there may be some bias in the article it can be removed through minor rephrasing. Cambrasa even suggests how this might be done for some cases by prefacing categorical assertions with the clause, "According to voluntaryists..." Or "Do the poor have a right to alms?" might be replaced with "Voluntaryists question whether the poor even have a right to alms." In other cases, some of the rhetoric might be toned down a bit. However, these slight changes do not require the extreme approach Cambrasa proposes.
- The problem is that this article is very long and consistently biased. When you have to make a "minor rephrasing" to every second sentence it does amount to a major re-write. This article is going to sit around in this form for God knows how long before somebody can be bothered to fix it - probably weeks or months. Psdillard has certainly expressed no desire to make the needed changes - why should he? The copied-and-pasted version serves his purposes, and creating an encyclopedia does not seem to be one of them. In the mean time thousands of people are going to read it, and by the time it's finally fixed the damage will arleady be done.--Cambrasa confab 01:13, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
(3) By Cambrasa's reasoning, a Hindu should not write an Wikipedia article on any aspect of Hinduism or provide a possible rationale for any Hindu belief because doing so creates a conflict of interest. Or an article casting the theory of special relativity in a positive light should immediately be sent to the sandbox and subjected to a major "rework" (or at least be tagged as suspiciously non-neutral) if it is written by Einstein, a leading proponent of theory. Surely such a requirement is much too stringent. Proponents should be allowed to write articles about the views they hold as long as they provide reliable sources and give explicit reasons for their assertions. Watner does both. I'm confident that he would be willing to add additional peer-reviewed sources, including a few that defend an anti-voluntaryist position, were he asked to do so. But again, that only requires minor editing, not wholesale rewriting. And as I noted earlier, Watner not only gives explicit reasons for his conclusions, he also responds to possible objections. Not every conceivable objection need be met for an article to pass Wikipedia muster.
- All the objections have been set up, and knocked down, by himself. Not exactly the best way to make an article more balanced. Watner does not cite sources where they are needed most, namely where he has written contentious assertions. Whole sections, especially in the beginning, are completely lacking in sources. If Watner can show us some stuff he has published in peer-reviewed sources, then great, but before he has done that: back to the Sandbox --Cambrasa confab 01:13, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
As I noted before, the old article was awkwardly written, and it skewed the account of voluntaryism by placing undue emphasis on the views of Auberon Herbert. Watner's new article avoids these pitfalls, provides an abundance of historical background, and gives the reader a clear idea of where the voluntaryist is coming from. The few infelicities Cambrasa perceives in the article can be easily rectified.Psdillard (talk) 22:24, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
Cambrasa, you're trying to make a mountain out of a molehill.
An encyclopedia entry can certainly present the arguments typically given for a position. How else is it going to inform the reader not only about the content of a position but also about its official rationale? If your worry is that Mr. Watner is arguing for voluntaryism, then as I said before he can easily amend his statements to the form: "Voluntaryists typically argue that..." Do you really think inserting these qualifiers requires so much work that Watner's article should be tossed into the sandbox and torn apart until it is reduced to something unrecognizable? Come on.
As for my "purposes," you don't know what you're talking about here. Let's avoid attributing personal agendas and stick to the issue of whether Watner's article needs to be subjected to a major rewrite while a plainly inferior piece is put back in its place.
And as I said before, it's easy for Watner to add a few more peer-reviewed sources, including some that criticize voluntaryism and similar anarchist views. And again, in presenting the objections he can easily tone it down by writing sentences along the lines of: "Sometimes it is objected to voluntaryism that..." and "To this objection, voluntaryists reply..." In these instances citations to articles in The Voluntaryist would be sufficient, since that's where many of the objections are considered and addressed by actual voluntaryists. Even if it is not a purely non-partisan scholarly journal, nevertheless it is a significant source for understanding the nature of the view under discussion. Some of the articles there have even been peer-reviewed, both by voluntaryists and by those opposed to voluntaryism.
I suggest that we give Mr. Watner the opportunity to make these minor edits by inserting them into the current version, not relegate his work to the sandbox and replace it with the old article (which has probably misled readers a lot more about the nature of voluntaryism). I'm not going to make the edits because it's not my article. However, I can help Watner as he makes them. If he decides that making these edits requires a substantial revision of the article, then he can let you take it to the sandbox.Psdillard (talk) 02:06, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
- You don't really seem to understand the philosophy of Wikipedia. First you upload an article that makes a mockery of two of the five pillars. Then you claim it is an "improvement", and dismiss the blatant violations of Wikipedia policy as trivial. Then you say that you're not prepared to fix those allegedly minor issues because it's "Watner's article", not yours. Well of course people are going to question your motives.
- You do realise that if you upload something to Wikipedia you agree to publish it under GFDL? I hope you have discussed this with the author. That means this is not "Watner's article" anymore. In other words, neither you nor Watner get to decide what happens to it. From now on the community decides. Of course both of you are welcome to join in, but patent policy breaches can and will be dealth with by anyone who chooses to do so. Anything that is controversial and unsourced may be deleted without warning and does not require previous consultation with the original authour.
- Oh and there is one more thing I don't understand. If Mr.Watner is prepared to write a neutral version of this article, why not do it in the sandbox? What's the rush to get it published? Can't it wait another couple of weeks? --Cambrasa confab 05:26, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
- I decided to add qualifying phrases and to change a few words to make the article more neutral. As I suspected, it wasn't difficult at all. Mr. Watner can review the revisions when he gets a chance and comment on them if he wishes. He can also add some more references where needed, including a few from works by those opposed to voluntaryism. I believe we can continue to make good progress by making additional minor edits like the ones I've mentioned. In my judgment, there is no need to send the article to the sandbox for wholesale revision.
- Cambrasa, you're being a real pain. Rather than cooperate, you snipe away with snide comments and criticisms that I've already addressed. There's no "rush" to publish Watner's article. It's merely that your reasons for gutting it don't warrant doing so. At most, they warrant the sort of minor edits I made and that others are welcome to make as well. Stop being an obstructionist and start contributing something positive. Otherwise, go away. Psdillard (talk) 05:45, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
- The additional edits Cambrasa has made are quite helpful, especially the insertion of internal links and indications of where citations are needed. Now that's more like it.Psdillard (talk) 14:49, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
Fixed the new version
Phew, I've fixed this monster now. Still needs some work, but I think in this form it finally deserves being called an "encylopedia article". I'll add a copyedit template because the references still need to be formatted. --Cambrasa confab 19:09, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
"Voluntaryism is a philosophy that holds that any form of invasion and coercion is morally objectionable and should be abandoned" - This is a poor definition. anything that is invasive and coercive? really? What about punishement of criminals? That's coercive. I doubt voluntaryists want to abandon punishment. I'll change the definition --Cambrasa confab 18:11, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
- I've cleaned up a number of typos I found in the last revision. Also in that version, the last sentence in the section entitled "The practical perspective in the case of the United States" reads like a total non sequitur. (The sentence in question was "A study by The Economist has concluded that social mobility is low in America when compared to other rich nations, especially among the bottom fifth of society, and that meritocratic competition only takes places within elites rather than 'among the full range of talents that the country has to offer'".) Its relevance to the immediately foregoing material isn't made clear. Is it supposed to be another objection? A reference to a source offering an alternative to the voluntaryist viewpoint on the plight of the poor? Hence I have deleted both it and the accompanying reference to the study from The Economist. This material should be reincorporated into the article only if its rationale for being there is made perfectly clear.Psdillard (talk) 16:31, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
Merge with mainstream article?
I don't see any difference between voluntarism and mainstream philosophy. In fact, I'd go so far as to say if Wikipedia was polled on the issue, over 80% of respondents would identify with "voluntarism". EDIT -- check that: there's a lot more extremism here than I thought. Nevermind. Tcaudilllg (talk) 19:17, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
