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Your submission at Articles for creation: 1947 Sirhind Train Massacre (July 23)
This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.
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Hello, NKFJKFIFFF!
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I will make it acceptable for Wikipedia. I am new member but I am learning in guidance of seniors. Thank You to support me to make the things better. NKFJKFIFFF (talk) 17:23, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: 1947 Sirhind Train Massacre (July 23)
This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.
The comment the reviewer left was:
The last paragraph doesn't make much sense.
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Your submission at Articles for creation: 1947 Sirhind Train Massacre (July 23)
This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.
The comment the reviewer left was:
References are not liked to "1947 Sirhind Train Massacre" (eg: 1st ref), but there is a similar article 1947 Amritsar train massacre
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Your submission at Articles for creation: 1947 Sirhind Train Massacre (July 23)
This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.
The comment the reviewer left was:
Improve the references WP:RS. 1st ref does not connect with the lines.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
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Your submission at Articles for creation: 1947 Sirhind Train Massacre (July 23)
This submission is not suitable for Wikipedia. Please read 'What Wikipedia is not' for more information.
The comment the reviewer left was:
Do not submit again without improve the article. It might REJECT if you can't improve and resubmit
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Your submission at Articles for creation: 1947 Sirhind Train Massacre (July 23)
Concern regarding Draft:1947 Sirhind Train Massacre
Hello, NKFJKFIFFF. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:1947 Sirhind Train Massacre, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.
If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 08:01, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
Your draft article, Draft:1947 Sirhind Train Massacre
Hello, NKFJKFIFFF. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "1947 Sirhind Train Massacre".
In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.
Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 07:04, 24 January 2022 (UTC)