User talk:TychéS19
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Edmond J. Safra Foundation (October 11)
This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.
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Hello, TychéS19!
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Edmond J. Safra Foundation (April 19)
This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
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Edmond J. Safra Foundation moved to draftspace
As you have disclosed on your user page that you are a paid employee of the Edmond J. Safra Foundation, you are required to comply with WP:PE, which includes disclosing your conflict of interest on the article's talk page, and submitting this article through the articles for creation process rather than moving it to mainspace yourself. You can do so using the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Note that as written the article still comes off as promotional and will likely be rejected in its current state. You can also expedite the process of reviewing your article by identifying three examples of significant, reliable, independent secondary coverage about the Foundation on the talk page. signed, Rosguill talk 21:18, 28 September 2020 (UTC)
- Dear Rosguill, thank you for your message. I took the liberty of moving my draft after talking with two reviewers, asking their opinions on my draft and scrupulously following their guidelines on how to improve my draft. So I thought I could publish it so that it could continue to be enriched by others. I understand very clearly now that I can only go through the review process. You say that my draft will probably be declined, can you give me some ideas on how to continue to improve it? I understand the need to remove titles and honorifics that are not used on Wikipedia and to use images with a purpose(which I just did). Do you have any other suggestions? Where can I get some help?TychéS19 (talk) 08:50, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Edmond J. Safra Foundation (August 3)
Please address the comments of previous reviewers and review undisclosed paid editing as well as conflict of interest for future references.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Edmond J. Safra Foundation and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Edmond J. Safra Foundation, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
- If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Concern regarding Draft:Edmond J. Safra Foundation
Hello, TychéS19. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Edmond J. Safra Foundation, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 08:03, 3 January 2022 (UTC)