The following sentence found under the "Attack" heading and "Reaction in the United States" subheading needs edits for clarity and foundation:
Diplomatic Security Service agents/Regional Security Officers informed their headquarters in Washington about the attack just as it was beginning at about 9:40 p.m. local time (3:40 p.m. Eastern Time (ET)).[citation needed] At the time, they were informed that the attack was a "terrorist attack".[verification needed]
The first sentence needs a citation for where the information originated. Also recommend replacing "their headquarters in Washington" with more precise language. DSS agents and RSOs are members of the Department of State (DoS), so this implies they informed their DoS headquarters. This is notable, because in the next sentence "they" appears to refer to the previously mentioned DSS/RSO headquarters (i.e., DoS); however, both of the cited articles for the second sentence describe notification of the attack within the Department of Defense (DoD). The major figures mentioned in both articles were the commander of the U.S. Africa Command (AFRICOM), the Chairman of the Joint Chiefs of Staff, and the Secretary of Defense. All of these are in the DoD, so the second sentence needs edits to make it clear it refers to DoD leadership, not DoS leadership. Also, it would be best to replace the citations with more reputable sources. The conservative-leaning Fox News is less reliable for politically related topics such as this, and the liberal-leaning NY Daily News is less reliable for international topics. Alternatively, these two sentences and the following paragraph should probably be moved to the "Responsibility" subheading. In fact, the second paragraph under the "Reaction in the United States" subheading is largely duplicated by the fifth paragraph under the "Responsibility" subheading.LtDan263 (talk) 14:29, 25 September 2025 (UTC)