Talk:AMCHA Initiative
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Comment: Ok, looking over some of the refs and I'm inclined to think this should meet Notability, so the issue right now is WP:POV cleanup. My overarching concern at this juncture is that tacking on a Criticism section (which is a good call) does not automatically balance out the tone of the rest of the article. The "Areas of focus" section has a lot of pre-supposition of AMCHA's correctness; a title like Faculty misuse of resources for personal political activism of anti-Semitic nature heavily implies that indisputable misuse is occurring, as opposed to it being one side of the argument. A common reflex of new editors is to just chuck "allegedly" into every opinion, but that's kind of a copout. Just focusing on the titles for a second, here's some suggested more neutral titles:*Harassment of Jewish Students - this one is actually fine, but I'm not at all seeing why it needs to be separate from the "threats" section, as threats seem a form of harrassment*Faculty endorsement of pro-Palestine politics (Faculty misuse of resources for personal political activism of anti-Semitic nature)* Institutional endorsement of pro-Palestine events" (University departments and administrative offices that sponsor, endorse, and/or fund events with antisemitic content)These titles are shorter, and also I believe phrased in a way that all sides would agree are factual. It avoids rendering judgment in the title itself as to who is "correct" in the debate. Clearly, the section will indicate that AMCHA is alleging misuse/abuse/inappropriateness, etc. but the issue they're addressing is endorsement of pro-Palestine politics, the argument they're making is that it's being done inappropriately.Getting back to overall issues, the Areas section really feels too much like AMCHA's self-presentation of its own work, as opposed to a neutral view. The sourcing isn't helping here, as most of the sources regarding AMCHA are pretty opinionated either for or against, but regardless the goal should be to show AMCHA's argument, not endorse it. It's pretty hard to render these things neutrally if you're a member/supporter of the group, so if you want me to do a quick rinse of it to bring it into Neutrality, post on my Talk page to ask me over. (Side-note, you can't hotlink to external images, so you'll have to upload to Wikipedia itself an image of the logo under WP:Fair use, see WP:Images for how to do so, but for legal reasons it can only be done after the article publishes.)Hope this helps, advocacy groups can be hard to write about neutrally because be definition they're taking one side of a fight, and tend to get the most coverage from their supporters and from their opponents. MatthewVanitas (talk) 16:56, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
- Now it looks a lot better (and more readable). There is still plenty of opportunity for more of the same. It would be nice to get independent WP:RS for the incidents they describe. --Nbauman (talk) 17:02, 20 October 2014 (UTC)
- The issue appears not to be pro-Palestinian advocacy, but specific elements within it such as BDS, PFLP, or Hamas endorsement that this advocacy group publicly states opposition to. Titles that better explain this positioning, would help for neutrality and/or explanatory purposes in identifying and understanding the positioning of this group --Worlduse (talk) 9 October 2015 — Preceding undated comment added 17:43, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
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. Report Vandalism of User:ImTheIP - POV issues, citing information before org was even created (2011 information), seems to have a vendetta against founder of org. This is not the forum for that. Extreme language of bias throughout.
Not done: requests for increases to the page protection level should be made at Wikipedia:Requests for page protection. --TheImaCow (talk) 20:43, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
November 2020 edits
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While I am not sure I'd go as far as User:Worlduse in calling ImTheIP's edits vandalism, these edits are not neutral and use unreliable sources, even going as far as using unreliable sources to make contentious assertions on living persons. 11Fox11 (talk) 20:11, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- @11Fox11: Your editing style is aggressive and unnecessarily combative. User:Worlduse is a WP:SPA and has mostly not edited any other article than this one. And before I started reworking it, it read like a brochure from AMCHA itself. If you think my edits are "not neutral" you have to explain so rather than resorting to blanket reverts. ImTheIP (talk) 23:44, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
You entered information on a BLP based on unreliable sources, not acceptable. 11Fox11 (talk) 16:42, 1 December 2020 (UTC)- You deleted 10k of text. I wonder if you are attempting to goad me into reverting one to many times to be able to file a complaint? Because I have already asked you nicely at least three times to explain what exactly in the text you find objectionable but you have failed to do so. I now ask you again a fourth and final time. Please explain what parts of the text you find objectionable and why. ImTheIP (talk) 04:01, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
ImTheIP's edits are unacceptable. The websites of Palestinian activists are not reliable sources and the content is slanderous!--Mirk Wolf (talk) 07:30, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

